|
Post by Redstorm on Mar 1, 2019 21:10:49 GMT -5
If you could rewrite Tigerstar, how would you do it or would it be similar? When I was a kid, I thought it was so cool that Tigerstar became leader of ShadowClan as it was the "evil" clan. Looking back, I'm not as big of a fan.
Would you handle it differently or would you let it stay the same? For me, I would have Tigerstar become leader after Bluestar dies (of ShadowClan battle wounds). He then finishes the war against ShadowClan and persecutes a defeated ShadowClan for Brokenstar's crimes (in my version Brokenstar would've done more damage like kill Goldenflower) and RiverClan for being complacent in allowing Brokenstar to run wild.
And Tigerstar would be a war hero but have a hatred of evil cats and cowardly ones that enable them. He even brings back WindClan who treat him like a hero. Eventually he goes too far and there's some rebellion and some huge war emerges with Firestar in it.
But yeah, how would you do Tigerstar?
|
|
|
Post by ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆ on Mar 1, 2019 22:35:26 GMT -5
im not sure how i'd do it, or what the specific details would be, but i would try to make tigerstar become thunderclan leader, then the heroes would have to rid of him without getting caught.
|
|
|
Post by vectoring34 on Mar 1, 2019 22:41:36 GMT -5
I'm fine with the way he was done for the most part. Brokenstar was a bit of a disappointment but he's a different topic in my mind. But there are some changes I'd prefer. I'd prefer if he was known for a fact that he was off and creepy but Bluestar was too blind/afraid of stirring the pot(this requires Bluestar to be a bit more gray), so that his ridiculously obvious evil behavior isn't treated as some shock as in the novels. Either that, or else he actually does do a good job of pretending to be good and is smarter and more manipulative so that it is legitimately a mystery as to what he's planning. Maybe he does something like take care of Cinderpelt after her accident and act legitimately concerned in order to both cover his tracks and make a loyal medicine cat in the future out of her.
Another idea I was sort of tossing around was the idea of just compositing Brokenstar and Tigerstar. The Shadowclan leader never appears at Gatherings, is represented only by Blackfoot, and seemingly flees the camp without a trace when it's invaded. Later it's revealed that it was Tigerclaw in charge the whole time and had been pretending to be the slain Brokenstar, having conspired with the Shadowclan elite in order to manipulate everyone. If a Warriors movie does happen, then this would work perfectly to both cut down on time and streamline the story and I would be all for it.
|
|
|
Post by scint on Mar 2, 2019 10:55:01 GMT -5
I'm fine with Tigerstar I for the most part. Now Brokenstar? He's a major disappointment and I'd rewrite that.
|
|
|
Post by halogen on Mar 2, 2019 16:52:44 GMT -5
I'm fine with the way he was done for the most part. Brokenstar was a bit of a disappointment but he's a different topic in my mind. But there are some changes I'd prefer. I'd prefer if he was known for a fact that he was off and creepy but Bluestar was too blind/afraid of stirring the pot(this requires Bluestar to be a bit more gray), so that his ridiculously obvious evil behavior isn't treated as some shock as in the novels. Either that, or else he actually does do a good job of pretending to be good and is smarter and more manipulative so that it is legitimately a mystery as to what he's planning. Maybe he does something like take care of Cinderpelt after her accident and act legitimately concerned in order to both cover his tracks and make a loyal medicine cat in the future out of her. Yeah, TIgerstar is basically a case of telling and not showing - we are told that he is an admirable warrior who is powerful and feared but also respected, like he's a tougher/scarier Lionheart or something, someone who it really would be a shock to be betrayed by, who really is so indispensable that ThunderClan would struggle without him, but someone who is as terrifying an enemy as he was an invaluable friend. But what we're shown is just a cliche, obvious villain with no subtlety or attempt to hide what he's doing.
|
|