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Post by foxfox12 on Mar 1, 2019 11:41:01 GMT -5
I feel like SkyClan in the recent books is all messed up. There were so many wasted potentials. I'm thinking about rewriting SkyClan, here are some of my ideas.
- Bellaleaf and Rileypool won't exist. I mean what was the point of them existing in the first place? - Hawkwing and his littermates (or replacements for them) will be born earlier. - Egg will stay with the clan and grow into a strong and capable warrior. I mean I hate his name but it was suggested that he would stay as a warrior. - Mintfur and Harveymoon will become mates and have kits. Their romance hinted in SkyClan and the Stranger was adorable and I'd love to see it develop. - Honeytail will replace Mintfur as Nettlespalash's mate. As they were together in the group that was stealing kitty pet food in the manga. - Shrewtooth and Ebonyclaw can be mates as well! I thought it was sweet and thoughtful of Ebonyclaw to tell Leafstar about him feeling left out and stuff in SkyClan's Destiny. - More daylight warriors should join the clan. I mean in Hawkwing's Journey they still only had the original four (three if you don't count Billystorm).
What are your opinions? Do you have any other ideas?
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Post by Haze on Mar 1, 2019 11:59:32 GMT -5
I think that Bellaleaf and her brother have to be there, they are the main reason for Ravenpaw to go for a clan territory and have his history reach a conclusion.
The rest is fine.
But my main idea for Skyclan is... for them not leave the gorge, now they are just Thunderclan 2.0 instead of something unique with their own culture.
Edit: Like serious the lake didn't had space for them and dont even have nothing that made use of their special ability of jumping. The lake was clear, Pine tree for Shadowclan, Oaks for Thunderclan, Moors for Windclan and trashcan for Riverclan.
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Mar 1, 2019 12:02:04 GMT -5
With the exception of the timeline and maybe giving Bellaleaf and Rileypool slightly bigger roles, I feel like SkyClan is fine as it is. Although, in some of my own rewrites, ancient SkyClan is treated as a cautionary tale for the Clans rather than being forgotten.
And as someone who likes the daylight warriors, I personally feel like there being more is unnecessary; the entire reason it became a thing in the first place was because Leafstar wanted another way to increase SkyClan's numbers, which didn't take long to grow. At the very least, I always thought there should've been a deadline for them; six moons to a year at most seems reasonable.
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Post by kinkajou on Mar 1, 2019 15:38:01 GMT -5
SkyClan should have stayed at the gorge!!! I would also have Shortwhisker stay a warrior Bellaleaf and Rileypool would still exist I see no reason for them not to Egg and Shrewtooth and all other cats missing from the allegiances would still be there
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Post by scint on Mar 1, 2019 18:25:55 GMT -5
Honestly, I prefer SkyClan at the lake instead of the gorge. Any of the missing cats from the allegiances would be there. Shrewtooth and Ebonyclaw as mates is cute.
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Post by *Faith* on Mar 2, 2019 17:56:19 GMT -5
I like SkyClan just the way it is.
On a side note, Cherrytail was pregnant in SkyClan and the Stranger which takes place in The New Prophecy. So Hawkwing and his littermates becoming warriors after OOTS is a mistake since they should already be warriors. Unless they are Cherrytail's second litter and her first litter was the SATS kits she was pregnant with. Which means they would most likely be dead... Now I'm just sad.
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Post by kells on Mar 3, 2019 13:59:45 GMT -5
Completely tear down and rebuild the Clan and its involvement entirely.
Instead being the homeless kicked-out Clan of years' past and being a mind-boggler for all of the "There was always four Clans" mantras and the fourtrees, or in other words, having no prior mention at all in the series, they can be a completely different Clan that was never involved in the Clan in the first place.
They can be cats who hunt near rocky shores, and live in recesses in the cliff face or something. They would eat shore food things and have more "alien" names that refer to the many things only found in their habitat (Gullpaw, Ternwind.. etc, etc.) It would be less like ThunderClan but still similar enough to the original concept to say it's still SkyClan. Of course, they would live at "sun-drown place", but further down shore so we don't quite know of their existence just yet. Since they never interfered with the other Clans, Firestar and Sandstorm would never have been sent to them at all.
We would get some foreshadowing when Brambleclaw and co. first find the lake territory. ThunderClan would have more slopes and rocks and overall just be mountainous-y. ThunderClan camp would stay the same, but they would find a camp somewhere else or whatever
SkyClan, like the original Clan, would eventually be driven out by twolegs or Darktail like in Hawkwing's journey. They would set out to find a new territory, led by the StarClan they would coincidentally belief in because I can't think of anything better at the moment. Along the way their numbers decline alarmingly like in Hawkwing's Journey and blahblahblah you know the drill.
Meanwhile the events in AVoS happen and we have Alderfart and Kneedletale find Stick and Flower and all that, drama things do stuff and ThunderClan pretty switches territories with SkyClan (TC lives between SC and SkC instead of WC and SkC).
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