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Post by embertuft on Feb 15, 2019 18:11:24 GMT -5
Since we’re on the topic of pet peeves in Warriors fanfics, let’s discuss the worst fanfics.
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Post by Viperstrike on Feb 15, 2019 18:31:26 GMT -5
all of mine lmao
But anyways, there was this one fic I read (I don't remember what it was called) where everyone was super ooc. At one point, Thornclaw ***** three apprentices and got them all pregnant. And then Crowfeather and Millie became mates. And then Bramblestar turned evil and exiled Squirrelflight and then she was almost ***** twice by WindClan and RiverClan
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Post by embertuft on Feb 15, 2019 18:32:12 GMT -5
all of mine lmao But anyways, there was this one fic I read (I don't remember what it was called) where everyone was super ooc. At one point, Thornclaw ***** three apprentices and got them all pregnant. And then Crowfeather and Millie became mates. And then Bramblestar turned evil and exiled Squirrelflight and then she was almost ***** twice by WindClan and RiverClan Yup I’ve read that before. Bramblestar I’m pretty sure got together with Jessy? Like that fanfic I was actually disgusted at. Especially how they portrayed Thornclaw. The apprentices were Cinderheart’s and Lionblaze’s kits so technically that’s incest.
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Post by なんで私 on Feb 15, 2019 18:33:41 GMT -5
My first Warriors fanfic I ever wrote, which was back in 4th grade. No one has ever read and I deleted the original so I barely remember anything.
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Post by embertuft on Feb 15, 2019 18:36:05 GMT -5
Worst one I ever did was about my OC Ashdrop.
Heres the first part (or part that I salvaged from my files): beware cringe
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𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵
Warrior Fanatic
All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Feb 15, 2019 18:39:34 GMT -5
I'm gonna have to go with The Better Choice on this one.
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Post by embertuft on Feb 15, 2019 18:40:29 GMT -5
I'm gonna have to go with The Better Choice on this one. Agreed.
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Post by scint on Feb 15, 2019 18:48:56 GMT -5
Honestly The Better Choice. I also remember one that was basically turning everyone in Warriors out of character just for the sake of killing Dovewing. And I remember that her family hated her the most in that fanfic, if I'm not mistaken. The author backed their claim because "Dovewing deserved it". There may or may not be more I'm forgetting, but those two were horrible.
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𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵
Warrior Fanatic
All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Feb 15, 2019 18:50:34 GMT -5
all of mine lmao But anyways, there was this one fic I read (I don't remember what it was called) where everyone was super ooc. At one point, Thornclaw ***** three apprentices and got them all pregnant. And then Crowfeather and Millie became mates. And then Bramblestar turned evil and exiled Squirrelflight and then she was almost ***** twice by WindClan and RiverClan Yup I’ve read that before. Bramblestar I’m pretty sure got together with Jessy? Like that fanfic I was actually disgusted at. Especially how they portrayed Thornclaw. The apprentices were Cinderheart’s and Lionblaze’s kits so technically that’s incest.To be fair, almost everyone in ThunderClan is related to each other anyway. Incest is unavoidable when the first code forbids mating with outsiders, but anyway, that's besides the point. The fanfic you're both referring to was horrible in every way. At least most of the other cats were just jerks, but I was disgusted with what was done to Squirrelflight and especially Thornclaw. I know it's an AU fic, but the least that could've been done is to at least keep the cats in character. Then again, the author apparently hates Squirrelflight, so that explains why she's potrayed the way she is in the fanfic, but then what about everyone else? It and the sequel are apparently supposed to be slight troll fics, so I guess that's relieving, but there are some lines you just do not cross!
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Post by Amber on Feb 15, 2019 18:52:01 GMT -5
Have to agree with The Better Choice. Just too many lines were crossed and everyone was OOC. It wasn't very good. Other than that, I can't really think of any ithers.
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𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵
Warrior Fanatic
All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Feb 15, 2019 19:03:22 GMT -5
There's also this other fanfic I read that was bad, but it was almost kind of funny due to how random and weird it was. I think it was called Hidden Prophecies.
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Post by embertuft on Feb 15, 2019 19:06:24 GMT -5
There's also this other fanfic I read that was bad, but it was almost kind of funny due to how random and weird it was. I think it was called Hidden Prophecies. Seen it before all the worst fanfics seem to be the oldest
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Post by scint on Feb 15, 2019 20:23:53 GMT -5
Scratch what I said earlier about not remembering any more, I remembered one where Brackenfur and Graystripe were fighting over Frostfur. I actually have the link to it still.
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Post by embertuft on Feb 15, 2019 20:25:29 GMT -5
Scratch what I said earlier about not remembering any more, I remembered one where Brackenfur and Graystripe were fighting over Frostfur. I actually have the link to it still. Pls post the link I want to see what monstrous thing exist
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Post by scint on Feb 15, 2019 20:26:46 GMT -5
Scratch what I said earlier about not remembering any more, I remembered one where Brackenfur and Graystripe were fighting over Frostfur. I actually have the link to it still. Pls post the link I want to see what monstrous thing existWelp, here it is: www.fanfiction.net/s/2712640/1/FrostFur-and-life
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Post by embertuft on Feb 15, 2019 20:28:45 GMT -5
B-bbut Br-a-acken-f-fur is her s-s-son
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신성하지 않은 모든 것의 어머니
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Post by なんで私 on Feb 15, 2019 20:39:42 GMT -5
B-bbut Br-a-acken-f-fur is her s-s-son Oh God help me!!!!! I haven't seen anything this disturbing since Twilight (we all know which book)
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𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵
Warrior Fanatic
All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Feb 15, 2019 21:02:20 GMT -5
B-bbut Br-a-acken-f-fur is her s-s-son I'm guessing the author must've forgotten if Brackenfur is said to have been a warrior soon after Frostfur and at least it isn't too long, either.
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Post by Thunderheart57 on Feb 16, 2019 10:06:20 GMT -5
Starkit’s Prophecy, the equivalent to the Holy Grail of bad fan fiction. Even if it was intentionally terribly written, it’s one of the hilarious ones out there. Who can’t forget classic lines like, “I have an announcer!”, Hollyleaf shapeshifting into a bear, Firestar, Graystripe, Blackstar, Ashfur, and other cats going after Starkit to mate with her, StarStar, and the insertion of the Ten Commandments. I remember doing an assignment for one of my English courses, which was teaching a lesson on spelling, grammar, or punctuation. I took it one step further and used the fan fic as an example of what not to do when writing a story, and correcting it for spelling, punctuation, and grammmar mistakes below the original, unedited text. My professor and the class were stunned when I told them it gets worse after what I read to them, and got a good mark on it.
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loves squirrelflight way too much
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Post by foxstep on Feb 16, 2019 11:50:57 GMT -5
The Better Choice is hands down the WORST. It even beat Starkit's Prophecy. Bramblestar forcing Graystripe to get his mate pregnant, Millie having CROWFEATHER'S kits, Bramblestar suffocating Lionblaze and telling the latter's kits that Lionblaze died because he was scared of Bramblestar, and so on.....
On another note, has anyone read Warriors High by Dutchess Frost? This is easily the best Warriors fanfic I've read. It's the POT and OOTS cats as a squad with great plot and amazing plot twists and cliffhangers. It's kind of a typical teenage high school story, but it's worth the read!
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Post by VIXENCLAW on Feb 16, 2019 12:15:23 GMT -5
Hmm, I think I remember A Better Choice. I’m going to see if I can read it again.
I loved Warrior High, it was super well written.
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