Post by Hyenafang on Dec 22, 2018 2:02:28 GMT -5
This fan-fiction doesn't yet have a name and I may still tinker with the prologue, but for now I hope you like it.
It is a mix between the movie and the series. The characters Campion, Moss and Vervain are the same as the series, and Woundwort is more like the movie version.
Hemlock – Large black and brown rabbit with white paws.
A scar mars the right side of his face where no fur grows. Raged, torn right ear. Three scars across his back.
Riversun – Cream coloured rabbit with white chest and paws. Hemlock's sister.
Parsley – Brown rabbit with white belly. Three scars across his chest. One half of his right paw is missing.
Foxtrot – Reddish male rabbit with black paws and tail. One eye is missing a scar runs across his left eye.
Effrafan Rabbits
General Woundwort – Dark brown rabbit with lighter underbelly. Blind in one eye
Captain Campion – Brown buck rabbit with light brown underbelly
Captain Vervain – Black, buck rabbit with grey underbelly
Captain Moss – Grey rabbit with a cream underbelly and a mask like marking around his eyes
Captain Bramble - Brown rabbit with scar over his right eye
Prologue
Claws raked down Hemlock’s side, tearing fur and flesh “Say it!” Captain Bramble snarled “swear you loyalty to Effrafa, bow down to General Woundwort”
Hemlock lifted his scarred head, his face was so swollen he could hardly see his tormentor “never!” he spat “General Woundwort will never be my chief, I will never swear anything to him”
Captain Bramble growled and clawed at Hemlock’s shredded right ear “say it!”
Hemlock rolled himself onto his feet, his starved belly moaning in protest. He crouched back on his hind legs and faced the captain “never!” he snarled. He leapt forwards, lunging for the captain’s throat. Caught by surprise the captain fell back.
Hemlock bit deep into the captain’s throat. Bramble struggled for a few seconds and then went limp, Hemlock spat the body onto the ground.
“I’ll make you pay for killing my sister” he snarled “I’ll make you all pay”
It is a mix between the movie and the series. The characters Campion, Moss and Vervain are the same as the series, and Woundwort is more like the movie version.
Characters
Hemlock – Large black and brown rabbit with white paws.
A scar mars the right side of his face where no fur grows. Raged, torn right ear. Three scars across his back.
Riversun – Cream coloured rabbit with white chest and paws. Hemlock's sister.
Parsley – Brown rabbit with white belly. Three scars across his chest. One half of his right paw is missing.
Foxtrot – Reddish male rabbit with black paws and tail. One eye is missing a scar runs across his left eye.
Effrafan Rabbits
General Woundwort – Dark brown rabbit with lighter underbelly. Blind in one eye
Captain Campion – Brown buck rabbit with light brown underbelly
Captain Vervain – Black, buck rabbit with grey underbelly
Captain Moss – Grey rabbit with a cream underbelly and a mask like marking around his eyes
Captain Bramble - Brown rabbit with scar over his right eye
Prologue
Claws raked down Hemlock’s side, tearing fur and flesh “Say it!” Captain Bramble snarled “swear you loyalty to Effrafa, bow down to General Woundwort”
Hemlock lifted his scarred head, his face was so swollen he could hardly see his tormentor “never!” he spat “General Woundwort will never be my chief, I will never swear anything to him”
Captain Bramble growled and clawed at Hemlock’s shredded right ear “say it!”
Hemlock rolled himself onto his feet, his starved belly moaning in protest. He crouched back on his hind legs and faced the captain “never!” he snarled. He leapt forwards, lunging for the captain’s throat. Caught by surprise the captain fell back.
Hemlock bit deep into the captain’s throat. Bramble struggled for a few seconds and then went limp, Hemlock spat the body onto the ground.
“I’ll make you pay for killing my sister” he snarled “I’ll make you all pay”
