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Post by Deleted on Aug 17, 2016 15:36:59 GMT -5
What plots should i change? should i change the ships or just work with the canon and make them better/more developed? also, does anyone know if its allowed to post re-writes of official books onto wattpad? because im re-writing another published work and dont know what to do with it lol
So basically, i would develop gray x silver more if u think i should keep it the same and just make it more bearable. and i would get rid of firexspotted, etc.
maybe make everything darker and more angsty. make firestar not so perfect
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Post by kinkajou on Aug 17, 2016 16:48:30 GMT -5
Can Firestar not have a petty grudge against Bramblekit pleeease
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Post by Deleted on Aug 17, 2016 16:51:40 GMT -5
Spottedleaf being a supportive StarClan member instead of a love life for Firestar
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Post by Deleted on Aug 17, 2016 16:52:43 GMT -5
PLEASE HAVE SILVERSTREAM BE MORE FEISTY / SARCASTIC OR AT LEAST MORE INTERESTING AND DEVELOPED
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Post by Deleted on Aug 17, 2016 16:55:50 GMT -5
PLEASE HAVE SILVERSTREAM BE MORE FEISTY / SARCASTIC OR AT LEAST MORE INTERESTING AND DEVELOPED as much as i hate silverstream, i'll give her my bella swan treatment and make her more lively and aggressive. |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 17, 2016 16:56:23 GMT -5
Spottedleaf being a supportive StarClan member instead of a love life for Firestar supportive is good. platonic firexspotted |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 17, 2016 17:11:26 GMT -5
Hmm I think you should make Firestar still as naive/innocent/good but maybe a lot more . . . nervous? Unsure of himself? Needing to be goaded into things by Graystripe?
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Post by Stormheart on Aug 17, 2016 17:20:13 GMT -5
I think that you should make Cinder x Fire a thing instead of Sand x Fire. Maybe have her paw get better like Cinderheart's did? And they could become mates. I think that Redtail should also have become leader after Bluestar or something like that. Then he could die in the Darkest Hour or maybe later?
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Post by Deleted on Aug 17, 2016 17:22:18 GMT -5
I think that you should make Cinder x Fire a thing instead of Sand x Fire. Maybe have her paw get better like Cinderheart's did? And they could become mates. I think that Redtail should also have become leader after Bluestar or something like that. Then he could die in the Darkest Hour or maybe later? i love firexsand...Idk if i could do cinder x fire. |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 17, 2016 17:22:39 GMT -5
I'm working on the fixed allegiances right now.
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#a3c5e6
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𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵
Warrior Fanatic
All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 17, 2016 17:25:11 GMT -5
Cool! I was actually thinking of doing something like this too. Good luck on the project!
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Post by Stormheart on Aug 17, 2016 17:25:14 GMT -5
I think that you should make Cinder x Fire a thing instead of Sand x Fire. Maybe have her paw get better like Cinderheart's did? And they could become mates. I think that Redtail should also have become leader after Bluestar or something like that. Then he could die in the Darkest Hour or maybe later? i love firexsand...Idk if i could do cinder x fire. Oh. That's okay. I personally hate Sand x Fire. She went from hating to loving him in a heartbeat. That's just my opinion though. Do want you want, it's your book 
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Post by Stormheart on Aug 17, 2016 17:26:08 GMT -5
Oh my StarClan! Another Wings of Fire fan! Hi Mothflight! |
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All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 17, 2016 17:27:10 GMT -5
Oh my StarClan! Another Wings of Fire fan! Hi Mothflight! Hi! |
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Post by Stormheart on Aug 17, 2016 17:29:51 GMT -5
I've only read the first book so far, but I already love the series! What's your favorite tribe? Mine's the NightWIngs |
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Nightambush
Returning because I miss the vibe and rping! <3
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Post by Nightambush on Aug 17, 2016 17:33:56 GMT -5
Maybe you can include more Princess and Ravenpaw times?
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Post by sphagnosidum on Aug 17, 2016 17:36:22 GMT -5
Hmm I think you should make Firestar still as naive/innocent/good but maybe a lot more . . . nervous? Unsure of himself? Needing to be goaded into things by Graystripe? Agreed. Firestar was a kittypet after all after. All of these character traits make sense. |
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All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 17, 2016 17:38:07 GMT -5
I've only read the first book so far, but I already love the series! What's your favorite tribe? Mine's the NightWIngs RainWings. But if you want to keep on discussing the series, then just send me a PM. |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 17, 2016 17:48:06 GMT -5
i love firexsand...Idk if i could do cinder x fire. Oh. That's okay. I personally hate Sand x Fire. She went from hating to loving him in a heartbeat. That's just my opinion though. Do want you want, it's your book
I think FirexSand is the most developed couple in the entire series. Sandstorm didnt change in an instant. she learned to respect him over time. |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 17, 2016 17:48:52 GMT -5
Maybe you can include more Princess and Ravenpaw times? :^) i'll see how it goes. i'm still working on the first book. |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 17, 2016 17:51:25 GMT -5
This won't be fun
Maybe it will
Some people are going to be disappointed
No words describe how much I hate CinderxFire
So who is going to be Sandstorm's father?
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Warrior Fanatic
All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 17, 2016 17:54:42 GMT -5
How about giving Spottedleaf more development instead of having her die early on? And is Cinderpelt still going to be a medicine cat in this?
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Post by Stormheart on Aug 17, 2016 18:04:23 GMT -5
I've only read the first book so far, but I already love the series! What's your favorite tribe? Mine's the NightWIngs RainWings. But if you want to keep on discussing the series, then just send me a PM. Okay |
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Post by sphagnosidum on Aug 17, 2016 18:11:03 GMT -5
Will you post them here too? Or just wattpad?
Also some Yellowfang and Spottedleaf interactions would be very cool. Maybe include Runningnose in the coup of ShadowClan.
Edit: AND please clarify who are Frostfur's kits.
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Post by Pupachu on Aug 17, 2016 19:26:03 GMT -5
You should include more cats from the other clans, even if you're just mentioning them. I think even the other cats from Thunder could have been more developed, too. I want to read it when you're done! |
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Post by Frozen on Aug 17, 2016 21:13:25 GMT -5
I would recommend POVs from the other Clans. Maybe have the ShadowClan POV be Littlecloud, RiverClan be Silverstream, WindClan be Onewhisker, and ThunderClan obviously Fireheart?
More background character development.
More platonic relationships.
Wishing you luck, this seems like a big project. If you post it here let me know because I'll definitely be interested in reading it!
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Post by nem on Aug 17, 2016 22:01:42 GMT -5
I would recommend POVs from the other Clans. Maybe have the ShadowClan POV be Littlecloud, RiverClan be Silverstream, WindClan be Onewhisker, and ThunderClan obviously Fireheart? More background character development. More platonic relationships.Wishing you luck, this seems like a big project. If you post it here let me know because I'll definitely be interested in reading it! I think you should do the above. I'm currently writing a Power of Three AU and I'm trying to it. |
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Post by Winterstorm on Aug 18, 2016 2:23:46 GMT -5
Make Cinderpelt and Fireheart a Platonic relationship. Kinda like a siblings relationship.
Try and make Tigerstar's death not so out nowhere.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 18, 2016 2:58:46 GMT -5
Make Cinderpelt and Fireheart a Platonic relationship. Kinda like a siblings relationship. Try and make Tigerstar's death not so out nowhere. It is a huge project, but i think i'll be ok. just gotta take stuff from the wiki and from memory. |
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