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Post by ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆ on Sept 27, 2018 1:24:53 GMT -5
going along with my warriors re-write ideas!
Tigerclaw has been acting more and more violent. he then questions whitestorm (the deputy) and has fought him multiple times, resulting in whitestorm's eye scar. Bluestar is VERY close to exploding on Tigerclaw for his horrendous behavior.
The night after Bluestar warns Tigerclaw to behave and stop being needlessly violent, Fireheart catches Tigerclaw abusing Goldenflower, who just had his kits days prior. Goldenflower was just telling him she was disapointed with him for his violent behavior and that he shouldn't keep questioning Bluestar and her deputy. Tigerclaw gets mad and pushes her down, telling her to just stay in the nursery to make sure his kits are raised. Fireheart steps in to defend Goldenflower and he and Tigerclaw fight.
Graystripe and Ravenflight (my AU ravenpaw. i decided to change his name from Ravenfeather to Ravenflight due to typos) join in the fight to help out Fireheart. A mini battle breaks out as Longtail, Dustpelt, and Darkstripe join Tigerclaw's side. With Fireheart distracted, Tigerclaw goes for Bluestar herself. Fireheart gets a message from Spottedleaf's ghost and he is told to go save Bluestar.
when tigerclaw and darkstripe are banished and leave the clan , goldenflower begs bluestar to let Tigerclaw stay because she literally just had his kits. Bluestar tells Goldenflower that Tigerclaw is too savage to be a true warrior due to his needless violence and disloyalty to his leaders and the code itself. Bluestar then demands Goldenflower raise her kits to hate their father so they may never repeat his mistakes or be tricked by him or his followers.
Bluestar then makes it a rule for all the clan to make sure Tigerclaw never comes for his kits and that they grow up to go against their father's memory and everything he stood for.
how would tawny and bramble be as adults if they were raised this way?
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Post by Deleted on Sept 27, 2018 2:47:20 GMT -5
Why are Longtail and Dustpelt spared exile but not Darkstripe? All three committed the same crime by fighting on Tigerclaw's side.
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Post by ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆ on Sept 27, 2018 2:56:14 GMT -5
Why are Longtail and Dustpelt spared exile but not Darkstripe? All three committed the same crime by fighting on Tigerclaw's side. forgot to put the part in the outline where sandstorm talks dustpelt out of it and he realizes he wants to be a real warrior instead. longtail is spared because frostfur vouches for him and she kinda guilt trips him into making him rethink his life choices. longtail later makes an oath to the clan while dustpelt's decision to stay is easier to accept by the clan.
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Post by ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆ on Sept 27, 2018 10:43:20 GMT -5
my good morning bump
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Post by ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆ on Sept 27, 2018 20:09:58 GMT -5
bump
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