How would the original series have gone if it were like this
Sept 23, 2018 22:05:37 GMT -5
Sundance and finland like this
Post by ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆ on Sept 23, 2018 22:05:37 GMT -5
I am working on re-writing/making an AU of
the original series and I have made a fixed up allegiances for Thunderclan:
THUNDERCLAN
Leader: Bluestar—blue-gray she-cat, tinged with silver around her muzzle, and blue eyes
Deputy: Whitestorm—big white tom with yellow eyes
Apprentice, Graypaw
Medicine cat(s): Spottedleaf— very dark tortoiseshell she-cat with a distinctive dappled coat and blazing honey-golden eyes
Warriors:
Lionheart—large golden tabby tom with thick fur like a lion's mane, and pale amber eyes
Apprentice, Ravenpaw
Tigerclaw—big dark brown tabby tom with unusually long front claws, and blazing amber eyes
Apprentice, Firepaw
Darkstripe—sleek black-and-gray tabby tom with yellow eyes
Apprentice, Dustpaw
Longtail—pale yellow tabby tom with darker stripes and amber eyes
Runningwind— light brown tabby tom with green eyes
Apprentice, Sandpaw
Willowpelt—very pale gray tabby she-cat with unusual dark blue eyes.
Mousefur—small dusky brown she-cat with yellow eyes
Apprentices:
Dustpaw—dark brown tabby tom with green eyes
Graypaw—long-haired solid gray tom with light yellow-amber eyes
Ravenpaw—small, skinny black tom with a tiny white dash on his chest, and white-tipped tail, with yellow eyes
Sandpaw—pale ginger-brown tabby she-cat with pale, light green eyes
Firepaw— bright and fiery ginger-red tabby tom with brilliant, deep green eyes
Queens:
Frostfur— sleek furred white she-cat with blue eyes.
Brindleface— dusky, grayish-brown tabby she-cat with blue eyes.
Goldenflower—pale calico spotted she-cat with green eyes
Speckletail—pale, light brown tabby she-cat with green eyes, and the oldest nursery queen.
Elders:
Halftail—big dark brown tabby tom with yellow eyes, with part of his tail missing.
Smallear—gray tom with very small ears and green eyes. The oldest tom in ThunderClan.
Patchpelt—small black-and-white spotted tom with amber eyes
One-eye—pale gray she-cat with blue eyes, the oldest cat in ThunderClan. Virtually blind and deaf.
Dappletail—pale tortoiseshell she-cat with a dappled coat and blue eyes
Now, I have changed the apprentices and mentors for a few reasons. 1) Firepaw's mentor being Tigerclaw has to do with Bluestar having told the whole clan about the Fire prophecy, and that she chose Tigerclaw because he would be able to turn Firepaw into a good fighter for the future since he would need to be the savior due to the prophecy. 2) I always saw Graystripe's mentor as Whitestorm more so than Lionheart, so why not? 3) Ravenpaw's mentor being Lionheart has to do with Ravenpaw being cowardly and Lionheart being courageous and outgoing. Bluestar chose Lionheart and not Tigerclaw in this AU/rewrite because Lionheart in my AU is way more outgoing and cheerful. try to picture all might training deku in my hero academia. 4) Dustpaw's mentor being Darkstripe will bring conflict later when Tigerclaw begins going sour and Darkstripe sides with him. Dustpaw will have a moment of choosing his mentor or choosing the rest of his clan. Dustpaw/pelt will chose thunderclan over his mentor. 5) Sandpaw's mentor being Runningwing was just an excuse for me to give Runningwind a personality and big role.
Also notice, Redtail isn't included. in my re-write, Redtail is part of the general group that Bluestar mentions "died in battle moons ago." And Sandpaw's rudeness toward Rusty/Firepaw are due to her losing her father before she was apprenticed.
As I mentioned, Bluestar is more open about prophecies, so she had Spottedleaf tell the whole clan about the prophecy: Darkness will engulf the forest, but fire alone can save the clans.
This means that Fireheart is destined to save ALL the clans, and not just Thunderclan. Think about it, Tigerclaw may have started his plans of treachery in Thunderclan, but his actions affected all the clans towards the end. Bloodclan in my re-write is introduced little by little until it is revealed who they are by name. These loners who trouble the clans are not named as Bloodclan until the fateful reveal where Tigerstar is killed by Scourge.
the original series and I have made a fixed up allegiances for Thunderclan:
THUNDERCLAN
Leader: Bluestar—blue-gray she-cat, tinged with silver around her muzzle, and blue eyes
Deputy: Whitestorm—big white tom with yellow eyes
Apprentice, Graypaw
Medicine cat(s): Spottedleaf— very dark tortoiseshell she-cat with a distinctive dappled coat and blazing honey-golden eyes
Warriors:
Lionheart—large golden tabby tom with thick fur like a lion's mane, and pale amber eyes
Apprentice, Ravenpaw
Tigerclaw—big dark brown tabby tom with unusually long front claws, and blazing amber eyes
Apprentice, Firepaw
Darkstripe—sleek black-and-gray tabby tom with yellow eyes
Apprentice, Dustpaw
Longtail—pale yellow tabby tom with darker stripes and amber eyes
Runningwind— light brown tabby tom with green eyes
Apprentice, Sandpaw
Willowpelt—very pale gray tabby she-cat with unusual dark blue eyes.
Mousefur—small dusky brown she-cat with yellow eyes
Apprentices:
Dustpaw—dark brown tabby tom with green eyes
Graypaw—long-haired solid gray tom with light yellow-amber eyes
Ravenpaw—small, skinny black tom with a tiny white dash on his chest, and white-tipped tail, with yellow eyes
Sandpaw—pale ginger-brown tabby she-cat with pale, light green eyes
Firepaw— bright and fiery ginger-red tabby tom with brilliant, deep green eyes
Queens:
Frostfur— sleek furred white she-cat with blue eyes.
Brindleface— dusky, grayish-brown tabby she-cat with blue eyes.
Goldenflower—pale calico spotted she-cat with green eyes
Speckletail—pale, light brown tabby she-cat with green eyes, and the oldest nursery queen.
Elders:
Halftail—big dark brown tabby tom with yellow eyes, with part of his tail missing.
Smallear—gray tom with very small ears and green eyes. The oldest tom in ThunderClan.
Patchpelt—small black-and-white spotted tom with amber eyes
One-eye—pale gray she-cat with blue eyes, the oldest cat in ThunderClan. Virtually blind and deaf.
Dappletail—pale tortoiseshell she-cat with a dappled coat and blue eyes
Now, I have changed the apprentices and mentors for a few reasons. 1) Firepaw's mentor being Tigerclaw has to do with Bluestar having told the whole clan about the Fire prophecy, and that she chose Tigerclaw because he would be able to turn Firepaw into a good fighter for the future since he would need to be the savior due to the prophecy. 2) I always saw Graystripe's mentor as Whitestorm more so than Lionheart, so why not? 3) Ravenpaw's mentor being Lionheart has to do with Ravenpaw being cowardly and Lionheart being courageous and outgoing. Bluestar chose Lionheart and not Tigerclaw in this AU/rewrite because Lionheart in my AU is way more outgoing and cheerful. try to picture all might training deku in my hero academia. 4) Dustpaw's mentor being Darkstripe will bring conflict later when Tigerclaw begins going sour and Darkstripe sides with him. Dustpaw will have a moment of choosing his mentor or choosing the rest of his clan. Dustpaw/pelt will chose thunderclan over his mentor. 5) Sandpaw's mentor being Runningwing was just an excuse for me to give Runningwind a personality and big role.
Also notice, Redtail isn't included. in my re-write, Redtail is part of the general group that Bluestar mentions "died in battle moons ago." And Sandpaw's rudeness toward Rusty/Firepaw are due to her losing her father before she was apprenticed.
As I mentioned, Bluestar is more open about prophecies, so she had Spottedleaf tell the whole clan about the prophecy: Darkness will engulf the forest, but fire alone can save the clans.
This means that Fireheart is destined to save ALL the clans, and not just Thunderclan. Think about it, Tigerclaw may have started his plans of treachery in Thunderclan, but his actions affected all the clans towards the end. Bloodclan in my re-write is introduced little by little until it is revealed who they are by name. These loners who trouble the clans are not named as Bloodclan until the fateful reveal where Tigerstar is killed by Scourge.