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Post by sylveon on Jul 12, 2018 17:48:28 GMT -5
So I'm reading TAQ again, and I've noticed an inconsistency, or at least something the authors forgot. In Firestar's quest, before he leaves, he tells Sandstorm, Graystripe and Cinderpelt why he's leaving. This means that Sandstorm and Firestar weren't the only cats who knew of SkyClan, but Cinderpelt and Graystripe as well. I wish the authors hadn't forgotten that the only living cats who knew about them were Bramble, Sand AND Gray. It might have been interesting, and helped give Graystripe a "flare" again since he's just been cast aside.
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Bravelands is too slept on.
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Post by Apricity on Jul 12, 2018 22:16:06 GMT -5
Hm, I don't remember much but I think Firestar only told Graystripe and Cinderpelt that he was leaving and didn't actually tell them why. He then told Sandstorm about SkyClan later.
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Post by sylveon on Jul 12, 2018 23:52:48 GMT -5
Hm, I don't remember much but I think Firestar only told Graystripe and Cinderpelt that he was leaving and didn't actually tell them why. He then told Sandstorm about SkyClan later. This made me double check FQ. He actually did tell him. He explained how he had met Bluestar when he visited the Moonstone, and what she had told him about SkyClan. “You mean there were once five Clans in the forest?” Sandstorm gasped. “Yes. A long time ago, before Twolegplace was built.” “But Twolegplace has always been there!” Graystripe protested. “Not according to Bluestar,” Firestar told him.
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#FF55A3
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Bravelands is too slept on.
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Post by Apricity on Jul 13, 2018 5:47:46 GMT -5
Hm, I don't remember much but I think Firestar only told Graystripe and Cinderpelt that he was leaving and didn't actually tell them why. He then told Sandstorm about SkyClan later. This made me double check FQ. He actually did tell him. He explained how he had met Bluestar when he visited the Moonstone, and what she had told him about SkyClan. “You mean there were once five Clans in the forest?” Sandstorm gasped. “Yes. A long time ago, before Twolegplace was built.” “But Twolegplace has always been there!” Graystripe protested. “Not according to Bluestar,” Firestar told him. Ok, thanks for clearing that up. I have bad memory, even when I read that book more than once. X3
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Post by *Faith* on Jul 13, 2018 16:02:18 GMT -5
Yep! And in the Battle of the Clans story that was in Graystripe's POV, his thoughts stated that he didn't know where Firestar and Sandstorm went. *Sigh*
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#FF55A3
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Bravelands is too slept on.
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Post by Apricity on Jul 14, 2018 1:59:42 GMT -5
Yep! And in the Battle of the Clans story that was in Graystripe's POV, his thoughts stated that he didn't know where Firestar and Sandstorm went. *Sigh*
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