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Would someone be willing to look over my outline? Jun 29, 2018 0:56:22 GMT -5 via mobile

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Post by Deleted on Jun 29, 2018 0:56:22 GMT -5

I feel like ALL of my posts in the fan fiction forum are asking for help with various things... writers block, coding, planning, etc. I’m sorry.

However, I have yet another question.

I was wondering if someone would be willing to look over a story outline/plot and related characters over pm and offer me advice or critique. I’m seriously struggling with writing it because of block/inadequacy feelings. Pacing, how to word things, introducing concepts/characters, etc. I hate my writing so it’s coming out badly and I keep deleting everything.

I’m not asking you to like, write it for me or anything. Sorry if it seems that way. I just need a guide of sorts to get me off the ground. I’d be happy to offer some artwork of your warrior fanfic characters in return if you’d like!

Pansexual Sparkly Unofficial Forum President, and the unofficial patrol saint of black cats with blue eyes. Pronouns: They/Them	Would someone be willing to look over my outline? Jun 29, 2018 8:38:57 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sparkly on Jun 29, 2018 8:38:57 GMT -5 I'd be willing!

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Would someone be willing to look over my outline? Jun 30, 2018 17:29:20 GMT -5 via mobile

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Jun 29, 2018 8:38:57 GMT -5 Sparkly said:

I'd be willing!

Thank you! I’ll finish writing it up and send it to you! Beware, it may be long! D:

Also, you should post a ref or description of one of your cat characters and I’ll draw it for you in exchange for your advice and critique!

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Would someone be willing to look over my outline? Jul 1, 2018 4:38:51 GMT -5

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Post by Sparkly on Jul 1, 2018 4:38:51 GMT -5

Okay! And here's a description for one of my favourite characters.

Name: Pebbletail
Gender: Male
Age: 24 moons
Appearance: Pebbletail is a pale grey tom, dappled with darker grey spots and speckles. He is short-furred, and has a sleek, slender build. He has bright, shamrock-green eyes, and a lemonade-pink nose.

Pansexual Sparkly Unofficial Forum President, and the unofficial patrol saint of black cats with blue eyes. Pronouns: They/Them	Would someone be willing to look over my outline? Jul 12, 2018 10:14:36 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sparkly on Jul 12, 2018 10:14:36 GMT -5 Hey?

~Absol~Wolf~Scribe~ memes, dreams, and ice cream machines	Would someone be willing to look over my outline? Jul 14, 2018 16:06:27 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ~Absol~Wolf~Scribe~ on Jul 14, 2018 16:06:27 GMT -5 If you need a second pair of eyes, I'd be willing to look it over too!

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Would someone be willing to look over my outline?

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