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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 6, 2018 23:45:52 GMT -5
Poor Cookie.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Oct 7, 2018 13:03:11 GMT -5
Eh, this just means I either have to kill her or make her more likable. Idk which yet, lol.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 8, 2018 16:11:40 GMT -5
Make us like her and then kill her off.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Oct 8, 2018 19:03:26 GMT -5
I may do that, too. I have many options at this point, lol.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 9, 2018 18:29:21 GMT -5
So many evil author options.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 13, 2018 14:50:12 GMT -5
Wooh! CONGRATS SEA!
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Post by phantomstar57 on Oct 13, 2018 16:04:30 GMT -5
::::cries::::: Poor Cookie and Roseflame. . . . . .
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Oct 13, 2018 18:22:15 GMT -5
phantomstar57 Please look in the spoilers. Mint, and anyone who hasn't read the chapter yet, do NOT look. What did you think of the chapter? It's definitely one of the more brutal ones. Who's death was more saddening, and what do you think of Stone and Peppermint's reactions?
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Post by phantomstar57 on Oct 13, 2018 18:32:13 GMT -5
Ok to answer the questions I thought the chapter well done, but so sad! Both of their reactions are fully understandable! I found both deaths equally sad-as poor Peppermint lost his new mate, and Cookie protected Stone. . .killing off characters is probably the most difficult to write. . . .and most heartwrenchingfor fans.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Oct 13, 2018 18:36:28 GMT -5
Glad you liked it all the same! Yeah, it was kind of hard to kill off Roseflame after she just decided to give herself a new start, but I figured it was also good because that'd make it more sad. Cookie was honestly pretty easy to kill off, as she didn't seem to be a favorite, not even to me, unfortunately. But I still tried to make her death worth something by keeping Stone alive. What do you think happened to Cleo, also?
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 14, 2018 4:05:43 GMT -5
I love how MY name was on it. XD Because you know today I'm just accidentally tempting myself to click spoiler tags, don't you. Among past occurrences. //cough
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Oct 14, 2018 11:53:58 GMT -5
I knew for a fact you'd do it unless I told you not to, lol. I had to make sure so nothing is ruined for you until you read.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Oct 14, 2018 12:55:00 GMT -5
I think Cleo is lost and Tyrant will find her or vice versa. If so I look forward to the happy reunion.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Oct 14, 2018 18:26:18 GMT -5
It would be a good thing. I'd like to have a happy reunion, but I already know what's going to happen. Might be that, lol.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 15, 2018 23:35:37 GMT -5
Sea is a wise Sea
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Post by Pyropelt on Oct 16, 2018 0:12:38 GMT -5
I liked chapter 12! There was so much to unpack! I thought it was great how Princess got a reality check from Kip, of all cats. That was nice to see, since they have the closest relationship in the story. And the developement in just a few paragraphs later is awesome! How she sticks them on the inside and leaves her back exposed shows just how much Princess is willing to do and go for others now.
Chapter 13 is cool and so filled with tension! I was so shocked that Roseflame got taken just like that! And Cookie?! Aw poor Cookie. I liked her. Ahh no Peppermint's lost another cat that he cares for. So did Stone. Aww and after that sweet scene with Cookie, Cali, and Peppermint in the beginning. Too bad. But glad Peppermint didn't just let himself die because of grief. Yeah Peppermint had a awesome idea! Reminded me of SkyClan, the way they were jumping onto trees.
I like how Fritz has enough strength to try and motivate the others to keep moving forward.
Gosh you are really good at amping up conflict and drama in your stories!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Oct 16, 2018 10:04:30 GMT -5
mintedstar/fur🦇 idk how I'm wise, but I thank you all the same, lol. Pyropelt Always glad to know you're enjoying the stories! The feedback really helps, too, any time I get some from my readers. You're probably the only one who really likes, Cookie, though. Idk why, but she isn't really a favorite to anyone, not even me. Oh well, she did some good stuff. Do you have a favorite character?
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Post by Pyropelt on Oct 18, 2018 13:31:14 GMT -5
Oh ok haha
Hmm I like Peppermint and Fritz a lot!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Oct 18, 2018 16:27:50 GMT -5
They are pretty cool. I think I like Fritz better just because he is the common sense and brains of the group. Like, he's just such a natural leader and knows what to do most of the time, even if Thor rattles him up sometimes. Peppermint is gonna change, I can tell you that much. He's a sweet, shy boy, but not so much anymore. Tell me if you have any more thoughts on them or other cats! I love to hear this sort of thing from everyone.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Oct 20, 2018 14:03:29 GMT -5
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 22, 2018 14:50:00 GMT -5
How you doing, Sea?
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Oct 22, 2018 17:30:52 GMT -5
You know, tired as ever. Working towards more exams tomorrow. Stuff like that is draining me. Plus, my college is hosting a convention soon that I have to volunteer at all day, and I will be giving out candy to kids who come to the college also soon.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 24, 2018 17:34:02 GMT -5
Sleep if you're tired, Sea. I'm working on exams too. Good luck! We're doing that candy thing too. Do you want to do it or is it just tedious?
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Oct 24, 2018 18:10:55 GMT -5
Sleep doesn't help much. I'm mentally tired. I've been doing so much homework and studying that I'm just so mentally drained. been going to bed earlier too.
I tried to get 101 candies, but it went over... The new goal is 404. If I can get that then I'm happy.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 25, 2018 17:26:25 GMT -5
Ouch. I'm sorry. Hope you get a break soon. <3
Go, Sea! Go! Get the Page Will Not Load!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Oct 25, 2018 17:46:23 GMT -5
I'll get a little break this weekend, but next weekend is gonna be SUPER busy.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 26, 2018 13:55:36 GMT -5
You got this Sea!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Oct 26, 2018 18:28:57 GMT -5
Trying my best. Thanks, Mint.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 27, 2018 2:09:33 GMT -5
*hugs* Hey, hopefully you get a bit of a break on the weekend. ^^
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