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Post by Jackalstep on Aug 29, 2016 18:24:01 GMT -5
Jackalstep You lost 1.5 points in title and .5 points in layout. For title, we thought the fox and the pigeon were two creatures that just didn't fit together, and the title itself reminded us of the fox and the hound so there was that. It felt a little less unique than other titles. We also felt the color scheme of the banner did not match the color scheme of the layout itself and looked a little out of place. All right, thanks for the feedback! I'm wondering if it might be worthwhile to change the layout colors to coordinate with my main banner somehow, since I'm quite attached to that banner. |
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Post by ѕαcяєɗмσση on Aug 30, 2016 10:43:12 GMT -5
mintedstar/fur You got a 4/5 in both title and layout. For title, while it was good, we felt that Morality just wasn't a very strong title like some others are when you immediately read them. For you layout, the only problem we saw was that the titles were just regular font, thus would be hard to pick out if someone was looking for something specific.
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Post by ѕαcяєɗмσση on Aug 30, 2016 10:44:43 GMT -5
Maplestone360 You got a perfect score on your layout. Your title received a 3.5/5 because it was in regular font, and generally those just aren't as appealing for us to click on. However, the title itself was rather strong, but yet not as strong as some others, and lost some points there as well.
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Post by ѕαcяєɗмσση on Aug 30, 2016 10:45:09 GMT -5
Round Two will be posted on Friday.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 30, 2016 14:06:02 GMT -5
mintedstar/fur You got a 4/5 in both title and layout. For title, while it was good, we felt that Morality just wasn't a very strong title like some others are when you immediately read them. For you layout, the only problem we saw was that the titles were just regular font, thus would be hard to pick out if someone was looking for something specific. I knew the Mortality bit would get me. XD And my title is messletters, but it looks like normal font. I wanted something that was readable, but just a little fancy. I'll try and look for something with a little more...spark.  Thank you. |
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 30, 2016 14:06:39 GMT -5
Round Two will be posted on Friday. Hope I have time to get the last of Dewy's edit up! |
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Post by Maplestone360 on Aug 30, 2016 14:54:39 GMT -5
Maplestone360 You got a perfect score on your layout. Your title received a 3.5/5 because it was in regular font, and generally those just aren't as appealing for us to click on. However, the title itself was rather strong, but yet not as strong as some others, and lost some points there as well. Ok! Thanks again! |
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 30, 2016 15:21:12 GMT -5
Oh wow, thanks xD
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Post by ѕαcяєɗмσση on Aug 30, 2016 15:22:53 GMT -5
mintedstar/fur We were not talking about your actual title. But the things like "Welcome, Summary, Fans" etc. Those were just normal. Not slightly bigger, not bolded, nothing like that. That is the problem we found.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 30, 2016 15:43:08 GMT -5
Ah! That I can fix!  Thank you. |
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Post by Brownie on Aug 30, 2016 20:32:59 GMT -5
oooo can't wait!
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Post by Maplestone360 on Sept 3, 2016 10:02:22 GMT -5
*looks at results* Mmn..
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Post by Jackalstep on Sept 3, 2016 12:55:10 GMT -5
May I have feedback on my score, please?
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Sept 3, 2016 13:05:53 GMT -5
Could I have feed-back on my score please?
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Sept 4, 2016 4:03:27 GMT -5
Could I get feedback please?
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Post by Brownie on Sept 5, 2016 15:16:08 GMT -5
I'd like some breakdown too ^.^
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Post by ѕαcяєɗмσση on Jan 3, 2017 14:53:42 GMT -5
So I decided to look at this page for lolz because I'm never here anymore but honestly guys I'm sorry I actually can't give you breakdowns because this was posted four months ago and neither of us even remember why we scored you the way we did (and don't feel like essentially judging the round over again to figure out why.) Just so you know, since both of us are busy and have a hard time aligning our schedules, I'm gonna go ahead and say this won't be continued til summertime. Sorry if this disappoints any of you, but this is the last day of my break and my entire break was still consumed with social life, work, and just doing other things I wanted to do. Think of it this way, it gives you tons of time to revise or do anything you want to improve your fics before we continue! Brownie ~Sapphire~ mintedstar/fur Jackalstep Maplestone360 Skyfall phantomstar57 |
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 3, 2017 14:56:37 GMT -5
Okay, Sacred. Hope your doing good. |
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Post by phantomstar57 on Jan 3, 2017 16:22:55 GMT -5
So I decided to look at this page for lolz because I'm never here anymore but honestly guys I'm sorry I actually can't give you breakdowns because this was posted four months ago and neither of us even remember why we scored you the way we did (and don't feel like essentially judging the round over again to figure out why.) Just so you know, since both of us are busy and have a hard time aligning our schedules, I'm gonna go ahead and say this won't be continued til summertime. Sorry if this disappoints any of you, but this is the last day of my break and my entire break was still consumed with social life, work, and just doing other things I wanted to do. Think of it this way, it gives you tons of time to revise or do anything you want to improve your fics before we continue! Brownie ~Sapphire~ mintedstar/fur Jackalstep Maplestone360 Skyfall phantomstar57 |
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 3, 2017 16:25:08 GMT -5
And I finished Mortality. |
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Post by ѕαcяєɗмσση on Jan 3, 2017 17:54:49 GMT -5
I look forward to reading what you all have in store in the future then. I did see that Morality finished some time ago while lurking here, haha. mintedstar/furphantomstar57 |
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Post by Maplestone360 on Jan 3, 2017 20:11:48 GMT -5
Okay! Although, could you remind me to check back by summer in case I forget? CX I'd love to see the results.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 4, 2017 0:18:03 GMT -5
Ah, but now I have so much editing to do. XD
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Post by Jackalstep on Jan 4, 2017 0:23:06 GMT -5
I totally understand, life gets busy. Perfectly happy to wait till summer, since my break is almost over and I'll also be too busy to improve my fic very much. Hope all goes well for the rest of your school year!
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jan 4, 2017 9:58:23 GMT -5
Sure, I understand c': I'll look forward to the summer, until then good luck and look after yourself!
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Post by phantomstar57 on Feb 28, 2017 19:30:36 GMT -5
Forgot all about this. . .
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Post by Owlmoon on Mar 6, 2017 22:10:33 GMT -5
Are you doing any other contests anytime soon?
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Thank you.
Thank you.
