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Post by *ᴿᵃᶤᶰᶜᵃˡˡᵉʳ* on Jun 3, 2018 22:19:09 GMT -5
A Pathetic StorySynopsis
In a world of super powers, it was no wonder that there would be heroes as well. To make sure that the young powered children did not risk their lives, academies opened to teach the children to use their powers for good, along with make sure they were never alone.
One school stood out from all others. This school is Central Valley Academy, the most prestigious and well known hero academy in America. It is funded by the most successful companies and has produced the most capable heroes. Now, this school is housing new heroes that will one day become legends. They are known as the A-Team, a group of young but talented teenagers with amazing abilities.
But this is not their story. This is the story of a different team of young aspiring heroes. A team that, unlike the A-Team, are not talented or powerful.
They are The Pathetics.
Meet the Characters
Floyd Frelich - The Electric Lightning [Sparky] - Leader of The Pathetics - Power; Ability to shock other and control the strength of the zap.
Samuel Mcveigh - Mastermind [Secretary] - Secretary of The Pathetics - Power; Can create text wherever his hand is hovering.
Aldon Siegel - Moonshadow [Moom] - Official Mom Friend of The Pathetics - Power; Insight.
Allyce Siegel - Nightbolt [N-Bolt] - Official Dad Friend of The Pathetics - Power; Hindsight.
Xexelia Munin - The Blind Memoir [Memory] - The Only Useful One in The Pathetics - Power; Able to see all the memories of anyone she touches.
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Post by *ᴿᵃᶤᶰᶜᵃˡˡᵉʳ* on Jun 3, 2018 22:19:46 GMT -5
A Pathetic StoryChapter 1
(Part 1)
This story starts off with Central Valley Academy, a school known for it's great heroes, many that are known to the world. This story follows one that is said to be the greatest of all the heroes that has come from the school. His name is-
Dude, seriously?
What?
Professor Sklar told us to write a true story about our recent adventures. Not some fantasy that you want to be true.
As your team leader-
I am not getting a bad grade just for your own ego.
I'm with him.
When aren't you with him?
Guys! You do realize I'm copying this entire conversation, right? I'm going to start putting names in so that anyone reading this could tell who's speaking.
Why not just use colors?
How about the first letter of our names?
First names are fine.
Samuel; Thank you, Xexelia.
Floyd; Come on, initials work!
Samuel; The only reason you're saying that is because you don't want people knowing your real name is Floyd. Plus, Allyce and Aldon have the same initials.
Aldon; Yeah.
Floyd; At least change mine to my hero name.
Samuel; Fine.
Sparky; Thank you.
Sparky; Wait.
Sparky; Dude!
Aldon; Ignoring him, we should get back on track. I'll tell the real story at least.
Aldon; So it all starts with the great school of heroes, Central Valley Academy. Anyone with powers was to go here to learn to use their powers for everyday life. Many of the students wished to become heroes.
Sparky; The way you tell the story is boring.
Aldon; You shush.
Aldon; As I was saying, many students wanted to become heroes. And of them, many succeeded, becoming the greatest heroes of all time. This story begins with students attending this school to learn to use their gifts. Learn to become heroes.
Aldon; But this story is not about the gifted students that succeed in life, that never lose, that always save the day and win in the end. This story is about the ones that don't. The failures. The losers. The ones with gifts that are not gifts. This story is about us.
Aldon; We are The Pathetics.
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Post by *ᴿᵃᶤᶰᶜᵃˡˡᵉʳ* on Jun 3, 2018 22:19:59 GMT -5
save
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Post by *ᴿᵃᶤᶰᶜᵃˡˡᵉʳ* on Jun 3, 2018 22:22:43 GMT -5
save 2
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Post by *ᴿᵃᶤᶰᶜᵃˡˡᵉʳ* on Jun 3, 2018 22:22:57 GMT -5
save 3
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Post by *ᴿᵃᶤᶰᶜᵃˡˡᵉʳ* on Jun 3, 2018 22:24:16 GMT -5
save 4
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Post by *ᴿᵃᶤᶰᶜᵃˡˡᵉʳ* on Jun 3, 2018 22:24:31 GMT -5
save 5
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Post by prophet on Jun 14, 2018 1:33:23 GMT -5
Huh, didn't see that coming. I like it so far. The colors are a little hard on my eyes though. Maybe switch the white and pink, so the pink is behind the black text? Just a suggestion ;3 Let me know if you want me to delete this comment!
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Post by *ᴿᵃᶤᶰᶜᵃˡˡᵉʳ* on Jun 14, 2018 4:20:18 GMT -5
Thank you! Of course, I'll try it and see how it looks. I would like for the story to be easy to read.
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