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Prologue:

"You can't be serious Mousestar. An outsider as your deputy? It was a stretch to even make Jasmine a warrior. No one's going to be happy about this" A small white tom complained and pouted.

"I know she's different from us but that's probably the best thing about her. Shes fresh blood and has new ideas that will probably benefit the clan. Just relax Whitepelt." A solid grey tom purred.

"Or she'll ruin the clans. Why not make your son deputy? He seems like a good warrior and many respect him." Whitepelt mewed.

"I told Jasmine she could be leader if she made Foxpath her deputy so in a way I made sure Foxpath would become leader. Now, I have some things to get to. You may go now Whitepelt."

"Yes Mousestar..." Whitepelt said, annoyance in his voice.

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The Rule of Jasmine. Chapter 1 and prologue is up! Aug 14, 2016 15:49:36 GMT -5 via mobile

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Chapter 1-

"Foxpath! Hurry up and get patrols out. Don't waste time!" Jasmine's strange ascent was sounded all over camp. The tortoiseshell she-cat claimed she came from a place of sand where barely any trees sprang to life.

"Going as fast as I can Jasmine! I only have four paws!" Everyday was the same. Get up, get yelled at, and try not to snap at her. But when you're told to do five things at once with little time to do it all while getting yelled at, it can be irritating. I padded up to Froststream. "I need you to go hunting with Tallcloud and Turtlemist." She nodded and left with the two toms. Now onto cleaning the nursery... Great.

"Oh, hi Foxpath." Hollystep purred. "How are you today?" Hollystep always came to bug me while I was working.

"Busy busy busy." I said with a smile. "Jasmine's working me harder than a clanmate trying to fight a badger." There was no reason to be rude to her. She was a kind cat and although her crush on me was annoying, I have to admit I liked the attention.

"Right. I'll talk to you when you're not then." She started to walk away with a smile and admiration in her eyes.

"Good luck! I'm gonna be working for awhile!" I told the ginger she-cat as she pranced away.

It was crazy how much the clan was changing. Instead of one deputy, there were three. Two she-cats and me. And Jasmine treated me the worst. I had no time to myself, got yelled at while she praised the others and made me act like I was having the time of my life while I did my duties.

The truth is, I wish I wasn't her deputy.

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