First (Or cringiest) OC?

OC made: 2009???


Name: Phoenixstar(feather) Formerly knowns as Phoenix

Clan: IceClan


Mother: Fernheart (IceClan)


Father: Jet (Kittypet)


Littermate:
Dragonfrost (Dragonfly)
(Long-legged pale gray tom with stripes, white paws, and blue eyes.)
>>Died in battle against TwilightClan/Former Deputy


Appearance: White she-cat with orange eyes, ginger tail-tip, and black claws.


Mate:
Leopardtooth:
Pale golden tom with black spots, black paws, and green eyes.
TwilightClanFormer deputy.


Kits: Nightsnow:
Pure black she-cat with blue frosty eyes.
(Medicine cat of TwilightClan)


She was my first OC, and I used to rp her on a forum called hidden secrets or something?

Her mother was an IceClan cat who ran away with a kittypet, they had two kits, and lived happily. But one day one of the kit they had together, Dragonfly was cornered by wild dogs. His father, Jet, died protecting him, leaving the mother, Fernheart, to raise Dragonfly and Phoenix alone. She eventually went back IceClan, begging for help, they took her back in, since her father, Heatherstar, was the leader at the time. Eventually, Fernheart died of sickness, one that also almost killed Phoenix. But she survived and rose from the ashes of near death. She and her brother eventually rose through the ranks.

When she was a warrior she fell in love with a cat from a different clan, Leopardtooth, the TwilightClan deputy. (The other clans were Willow, Leaf, and Rain) however, when she gave birth she chose to give her only kit to her mate before they parted ways. She had rather Nightkit live with her father over her because she had a vision from StarClan. When Nightkit became an apprentice she started her training as a medicine cat, it was her destiny to be the medicine cat of TwilightClan.

After an accident on the thunderpath, where a monster goes out of control and hits two TwilightClan cats, one of them is Leaopardtooth, who died, the other cat became paralyzed but died a few days later, Phoenixfeather, now deputy became frantic. She wanted her daughter to return home with her to IceClan and even told her the truth, but Nightsnow refused and stayed with TwilightClan, rejecting her mother. This began to eat away at Phoenix's mentality, unable to handle the rejection. She became more ambitious, and eventually became leader when her grandfather, Heatherstar, lost his final life to old age. She became Phoenixstar and made Dragonfrost her deputy.

Moons pasts and things start to shift for the worst, TwilightClan and IceClan are on edge now and then. TwilightClan's leader, Avianstar would constantly be challenged by Phoenixstar. Meanwhile, within TwilightClan, Nightsnow had become close friends with another she-cat, Peachnose, she was Avianstar's daughter, before the other had become leader. She told Peachnose she had a vision, that there will be many bloody battles ahead.

One day TwilightClan cats found IceClan cats lounging in their territory, the meadow fields, they were marking it as their own. Taking up the challenge Avianstar led a battle against Phoenixstar and her clan. Phoenixstar and one of her warriors, Brambleberry, along with Dragonfrost went after the leader and her deputy in the mist of the battle, dragging her away and trying to strike at her belly. However, some of the Twilight warriors came to her defense and drove them back, Peachnose even attacking Phoenixstar to save her mother. Dragonfrost chased after Avianstar, the two of them tussled near a cliff, he pinned her but she pushed up with her hind legs and sent the other flying over the edge. Phoenixstar raced over in horror, she climbed down the cliff side hurrying to her brother.

His last words to her were to be brave, live on. Distraught and dismayed, the leader grieved then turned and swore vengeance on Avianstar and TwilightClan for what they've done.

Time passes and Avianstar became restless, fearing Phoenix's threat, during a gathering she was the first to arrive with her clan. The other three clans showed as well, IceClan, however, came last. With her new deputy, Mapleheart, and her medicine cat Silverwind, she confronts Avianstar again. She had brought all her warriors...

Phoenixstar declared war on TwilightClan, demanding that they give her Nightsnow, her daughter, revealing the truth to everyone. Nightsnow stood up for Avian, alongside Peachnose, and stayed with her leader and Clan. Phoenixstar however didn't hold it against her, believing that her staying in TwilightClan so long has brainwashed her, poisoning her mind, and she blamed it on Avianstar. She swore to get revenge for her brother's death, while her warriors blocked the escape routes of the gathering area. However, before she could continue Sundown, the medicine cat in LeafClan, spoke up against her. Saying that her actions would anger StarClan. Phoenixstar, in a fury or raged attacked the medicine cat, holding her down and killing her as an exampel to everyone. Saying anyone who defied her will suffer the same fate, either join her or die. Silverwind, her own medicine cat yowled in agreement, telling them to bow to their new leader.

Quillstar, leader of LeafClan, Cunningstar, leader of RainClan, and Coyotestar, leader of WillowClan either had the choice to swear allegiance to IceClan, or be wiped out like how she planned to deal with TwilightClan. Quillstar caved first, joining the alliance, Cunningstar was unsure and begged for time to think it over, while Coyotestar refused. Phoenixstar spat at him angrily, saying that he will regret his decision. The moon was still in sight as Phoneixstar led her cats away, Quillstar following behind her with her own clan.

Due to the impending war on the horizon, Nightsnow traveled to the borders of IceClan a few nights later, requestion to speak with her mother. Phoenixstar came and was delighted to see her, wondering if she'd join her finally but Nightsnow refused. She pleaded with Phoneixstar to end this, and make peace with the other clans, and ask StarClan for forgiveness. Phoenixstar retorted angrily, saying that she is doing the will of StarClan. She is destined for greatness, and that the only way the Clans will survive and flourish is under her leadership. She claimed cats like Avianstar don't deserve to be leader, and vowed to rip all her lives from her body. Nightsnow, dismayed, told her mother she had gone mad with grief over Dragonfrost, to which Phoenixstar denied. She claimed this was all for the greater good, Nightsnow shook her head before running away from the border ignoring her mother's calls.

IceClan eventually launched an attack on WillowClan, Phoenixstar led her cats in the middle of the night, trying to overthrow Coyotestar. However, when she got there the camp had been abandoned, she was angry that they had escaped and unaware they were hidden in TwilightClan's camp. Meanwhile, a meeting was held with Quillstar, Mapleheart, Silverwind, and Cunningstar. The RainClan leader had agreed to join the alliance and said that he'd bring his warriors to aide Phoenixstar, pledging his loyalty to her. 

When the day finally came for the battle, Avianstar and Coyotestar stood their grounds on the moors, while Phoenixstar led her cats to face them, Cunningstar and Quillstar at her side. Phoenixstar yowled that this was their final chance, she demanded they surrender, and that their deaths will be painless. The other two leaders refused, but before anything could continue, Nightsnow moved to speak. She tried to talk Phoenixstar out of the fight, one more time. Saying it didn't have to be like this.

Phoenixstar demanded to know why she'd defend those that murdered her own kin, but Nightsnow said that what she was doing was wrong. For a moment Phoenix's expression soften and she begged her daughter to come with her once more, but Nightsnow shook her head sadly and said she couldn't. Her desinty was with TwilightClan.

Angered, Phoenix claimed that she can then die with them too. The cats suddenly launched into an attack, running across the moor, Avianstar and Coyotestar ran into battle, and they met in the middle, clashing, and fighting, blood was spilt and the smell of hostility and fear filled the air.

Peachnose tried protecting Nightsnow from any cats that leaped at them but was suddenly batted down by Pheonixstar. She exclaimed that Avianstar took her daughter and brother, so she will make her fell the same pain. She clawed viciously at Peachnose's eyes then moved to sink her fangs into her throat, trying to kill her but is pulled off by Avianstar. Avian and Phoenix began to battle it out, exchanging blow for blow in the sea of fighting cats.

Nightsnow mourns over Peachnose, thinking she had died, but the other was still alive, holding on. Nightsnow began to try and pull her friend to safety.

Coyotestar was being attacked from all sides, unable to keep up with Quillstar and her warriors. He thinks he is soon to join StarClan when Cunningstar turns on her and helps Coyotestar. Cunningstar and his cats began to fight against IceClan and LeafClan. Quillstar spat in fury, calling them traitors, they continued to fight, but the tides of war were quickly changing. Coyotestar eventually struck at Quillstar, taking her last life and leaving the LeafClan cats in shock, they began to flee, the numbers dwindling.

Phonixstar was focusing on Avianstar, having pinned the she-cat down and grinning from widely, ready to take her revenge. Suddenly she felt a pain in her neck, she fell over striking out, Nightsnow had sunk her teeth into Phoenixstar. They wrestled before Phoenix ripped her off, the larger she-cat furious at her daughter's actions. Nightsnow then moved between her and Avianstar, claiming she won't let her kill her leader, even if she is a medicine cat she would die to protect her.

Her mother gasped, the pain was burning her, she demanded to know what the other had done. Nightsnow then informs her that she took the lives that were given to her from StarClan. That they speak to her, she is no longer suited to be a leader, and therefore no longer shall have the blessing of their lives.

Phoenixstar cried out angrily, claiming she was lying, she leaped onto her who blindly struck in fear, striking her mother in the throat. Phoenixstar fell forward onto her daughter, gasping for air as she was laid down. Nightsnow watched sadly as her mother's cloudy eyes seemed clear for once. Avianstar struggled to her paws and made her way over as Phoenixstar spoke her last words. She told her that she loved her daughter and always will and now she could be with Leopardtooth. She apologized, while Nightsnow had wished things were different. The fighting had ceased, many cats had lost their lives, but now it was the time to heal.

A few moons later Maplestar is the new leader of IceClan, while LeafClan's is Tinystar. Peace had returned to the Clans, and Nightsnow had remained in TwilightClan. She tells Peachnose, who has a nest in her den that she'll be back soon, and not to give her apprentice, Mallowpaw, any problems. Peachnose is now blind, and unable to continue her warrior duties, and feels most comfortable in the medicine cat den with Nightsnow.

Nightsnow leaves to go out on her own and eventually comes to a stop in front of three graves.

Some of my old OCs are awful. No idea when I made them (definitely years ago) but I can't decide which is worse so I'll post them both:

Amberstar 1 (there's more than one because I liked the name) - A blind tortoiseshell leader. I don't even know how she became leader. She had no backstory whatsoever.

Valleystar (I think? I only remember the backstory and awful Word documents I wrote) - She left her home when she was around 3 moons old and joined a clan whose name I can't remember. Midway through her apprenticeship, she ran away and made her own clan. That's as far as I can remember and the Word documents are gone now, so I can't reference them.

I don't really remember my first OC, but I think it was based on my username. Not sure.

My cringiest though...it was intentionally cringe inducing, but it was still SO bad:

Moshpaw

Created 2011

A ThunderClan apprentice with light brown fur, a neon green mohawk, electric blue and green spots and crimson eyes. She was rude, abrasive and arrogant. She (through magical means or something) listened to the bands Sleeping with Sirens and Pierce the Veil. She was in love with her best friend Punkpaw.