ϟ The Flying Pancake ϟ
Steaming to freedom and the next great bottle of maple syrup since sometime in the early 2000's!
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Post by ϟ The Flying Pancake ϟ on Apr 26, 2018 15:43:46 GMT -5
Because seeing the creativity of others makes me happy. I'll rate them, then give reason for rating.
Just give name, age, Clan, and a general description of personality, backstory, what they look like, ect. ect. Go wild!
Important: There's a pretty low chance that I'm gonna be negative so if you're looking for someone to roast your OCs and lower your general self esteem, you've come to the wrong thread
Soo let's get goinggggg
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ϟ The Flying Pancake ϟ
Steaming to freedom and the next great bottle of maple syrup since sometime in the early 2000's!
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Post by ϟ The Flying Pancake ϟ on Apr 26, 2018 15:47:04 GMT -5
Also, your OC can be as realistic or imaginative as possible. I don't care if your OC has a purple tail and is Scourge's brother. Just go wild and I'll give my thoughts :3
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Post by Pixie on Apr 26, 2018 16:05:40 GMT -5
Newtpaw - sleek, black-and-ginger she-cat with dark eyes
Newtpaw is a loyal, yet slightly rebellious cat only because of her curious nature. She's socially awkward, finding it hard to look cats in the eye. She gets very nervous when battling and for the most part, she's pacifistic. However, she is very kind and only wants the best for everyone and will do what, in her eyes, is right. She hopes to gain confidence one day.
Clan: ShadowClan
Fun fact: She loves eating lizards!
Potential warrior names: Newtwhisker, Newtheart, Newtfur
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Post by anxi0us on Apr 26, 2018 16:14:08 GMT -5
Alright, first time i'm describing my OC....
Name: Whisperbreeze
Clan: (I wasn't sure if you meant an already existing clan or a made up one so...) Silverclan
Appearance: Light gray tabby she-cat with dark grey ear tips and blue eyes.
Personality: A shy but bold cat who helps in any way possible
Backstory: Whisperbreeze had the name Silverkit as a kit but as her shyness developed she had been called Whisperkit. Whisperkit had two littermates; Cloudkit(tuft) and Windkit(tail). Whisperbreeze had a pretty normal life, except for falling in love with a caring jet-black rogue named Crow. She had his kits; Stonekit(ear), Mousekit(paw) and Littlekit(pounce, the only she-cat in the litter) She had told her clanmates that Ravenpelt (A smoky gray tom with green eyes) was the father although Cloudtuft knew about Crow. A while after her kits were made apprentices, she was put on a border patrol with Cloudtuft, Windtail, and Snowpaw. They encountered Crow at the end of their border, she defended him and told all the cats about her meetings with the rogue. Snowpaw, being the biggest gosspip in Silverclan told everyone and she was confined to keep and was also to take care of the elders. Then, in a battle against a gang of rogues (not including Crow) Mousepaw had been killed. Whisperbreeze had fallen into depression and wouldn't eat or go on any patrols. Meanwhile, Whisperbreeze's mother (Who was still actually young) caught greencough, she revovered but was still really weak so was recruited as the medicine cat and was also forced to give up her mate, Molenose.
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Post by Chocolate-Fawn on Apr 26, 2018 16:42:37 GMT -5
Name-Rosebloom
Gender-female
Description-fluffy brown she-cat with white ear tips, tail tip, and white paws. She has blind blue eyes.
Mate-Stonefang (deceased)
Father-Pantherleap (deceased)
Brother-Sparroweye
Sister-Snowheart
Son-Dewfoot
Adopted daughter-Featherpool
Fun fact-she was once possessed by a demon like Dark Forest cat called Nerium (I'm writing a story about that)
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ϟ The Flying Pancake ϟ
Steaming to freedom and the next great bottle of maple syrup since sometime in the early 2000's!
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Post by ϟ The Flying Pancake ϟ on Apr 26, 2018 17:30:33 GMT -5
Newtpaw - sleek, black-and-ginger she-cat with dark eyes Newtpaw is a loyal, yet slightly rebellious cat only because of her curious nature. She's socially awkward, finding it hard to look cats in the eye. She gets very nervous when battling and for the most part, she's pacifistic. However, she is very kind and only wants the best for everyone and will do what, in her eyes, is right. She hopes to gain confidence one day. Clan: ShadowClan Fun fact: She loves eating lizards! Potential warrior names: Newtwhisker, Newtheart, Newtfur 9/10! Very well rounded, love it  |
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ϟ The Flying Pancake ϟ
Steaming to freedom and the next great bottle of maple syrup since sometime in the early 2000's!
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Post by ϟ The Flying Pancake ϟ on Apr 26, 2018 17:32:49 GMT -5
Alright, first time i'm describing my OC.... Name: Whisperbreeze Clan: (I wasn't sure if you meant an already existing clan or a made up one so...) Silverclan Appearance: Light gray tabby she-cat with dark grey ear tips and blue eyes. Personality: A shy but bold cat who helps in any way possible Backstory: Whisperbreeze had the name Silverkit as a kit but as her shyness developed she had been called Whisperkit. Whisperkit had two littermates; Cloudkit(tuft) and Windkit(tail). Whisperbreeze had a pretty normal life, except for falling in love with a caring jet-black rogue named Crow. She had his kits; Stonekit(ear), Mousekit(paw) and Littlekit(pounce, the only she-cat in the litter) She had told her clanmates that Ravenpelt (A smoky gray tom with green eyes) was the father although Cloudtuft knew about Crow. A while after her kits were made apprentices, she was put on a border patrol with Cloudtuft, Windtail, and Snowpaw. They encountered Crow at the end of their border, she defended him and told all the cats about her meetings with the rogue. Snowpaw, being the biggest gosspip in Silverclan told everyone and she was confined to keep and was also to take care of the elders. Then, in a battle against a gang of rogues (not including Crow) Mousepaw had been killed. Whisperbreeze had fallen into depression and wouldn't eat or go on any patrols. Meanwhile, Whisperbreeze's mother (Who was still actually young) caught greencough, she revovered but was still really weak so was recruited as the medicine cat and was also forced to give up her mate, Molenose. 8.5/10! Love her name |
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ϟ The Flying Pancake ϟ
Steaming to freedom and the next great bottle of maple syrup since sometime in the early 2000's!
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Post by ϟ The Flying Pancake ϟ on Apr 26, 2018 17:33:55 GMT -5
Name-Rosebloom Gender-female Description-fluffy brown she-cat with white ear tips, tail tip, and white paws. She has blind blue eyes. Mate-Stonefang (deceased) Father-Pantherleap (deceased) Brother-Sparroweye Sister-Snowheart Son-Dewfoot Adopted daughter-Featherpool Fun fact-she was once possessed by a demon like Dark Forest cat called Nerium (I'm writing a story about that) 8.5/10! Very creative |
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Post by ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆ on Apr 26, 2018 17:39:59 GMT -5
Snakeflower: calico she-cat with green eyes
Foxshadow: dark ginger tabby tom with amber eyes
these 2 r in different clans and its a forbidden romance story. the tom's clan has very little cats do to disease and natural disasters. they want the kits.
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Post by Smokyyy on Apr 26, 2018 18:24:13 GMT -5
Stormpaw
Clan: Shadowclan
Age:10 moons
Description: A Brown tom with gray blue splotches and darker brown splotches. He has a blue gray mask around his face and has yellow eyes.
Stormpaw is an ambitious, young apprentice who is slightly rebellious. He is the one to speak his mind and was not afraid to challenge others. (He's not Tigerstar 1.0 don't worry) He was the clan leader's apprentice due to his skills. The leader trained with him in the dark forest and he found the forest interesting and mysterious. He found no shame training with the ruthless cats if it made him live up to his mentor's standards. He ended up being shocked when he found out that one of his kin was killed by his mentor, and ended up killing him (some plot of my fanfiction that I'm not going to post.) Just read my fanfic, "Soots and Cinders, Owls in Flight"
Possible warrior names: Stormtuft/blizzard
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Post by suicunetobigaara on Apr 26, 2018 23:24:01 GMT -5
Name: Silverpaw. (Future warrior names could be Silverbreeze, Silvercloud, or Silverflower).
Clan: Shadowclan.
Gender: Male.
Age: 7 moons old.
Rank: Apprentice.
Mentor: Skyshade.
Description: A silver tabby with a white muzzle, paws and underbelly, and hazel eyes.
Personality: Silverpaw is often quiet and non confrontational, and unless in a situation where he feels confident or if in potential danger he isn't the type to speak his mind, but rather keep to himself. He is friendly to others, but wary of cats he thinks have an attitude, and often doesn't see past this until he really gets to know the cat. Occasionally (only when he thinks he is right) he can he witty and have an attitude, but this disappears into embarrassment upon being proven wrong. Other cats see him as boring or cowardly due to the fact that he tries to be a goody two shoes. While he doesn't seem like the type at a glance, Silverpaw is the type to hold grudges.
History: Silverpaw showed an interest in the Medicine Cat role ever since he was a kit, although his father tried to dissuade Silverpaw from the role. This goes too far however, as Silverpaw's father died from an untreated infection - as Silverpaw's father thought the cut he received to be nothing and didn't wish to encourage Silverpaw's interest. After the Medicine Cat (she has her own fault of being heavily reliant on Starclan) was told not to take an apprentice, Silverpaw was made into a Warrior Apprentice, much to his disappointment. Currently he is adapting to being a Warrior Apprentice, and slowly finding interest in his new role.
Family:
Father - Hailpelt [Warrior] - A sleek silver tabby tom with hazel eyes. (Deceased)
Mother - Snailheart [Queen] - A silver tabby she-cat, with a white muzzle and under belly, and green eyes.
Littermate - Pebblepaw [Apprentice] - A silver tabby she-cat with hazel eyes.
Grandmother - Flintfoot [Elder] - An old dark tabby she-cat with a smoky silver chest, paws and underbelly, and milky eyes, blind from age.
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Post by Wolfyy- on Apr 27, 2018 11:37:15 GMT -5
Bio -
Name: Hauntedfire
Clan: Murkyclan (Non-Canon; it's a swamp)
Gender: Female
Age: 17 moons
Rank: Warrior
Mentor: Mothstar (deceased)
Apprentice: Cottonpaw
Appearance: A tall, charcoal Bengal she-cat with a long tail and one pale yellow eye. There is severe scarring on the left side of her face, and she is missing her left eye and most of her left ear.
Personality: Hauntedfire is very quiet and typically grumpy. She's often seen as unfriendly, due to her bad socialization habits and constant sarcasm. She's quite the opposite of her littermate, who is very open and cheerful, making friends easily. Hauntedfire doesn't have a ton of friends, and puts walls up to protect herself. Her most prominent fear is losing those she loves. So to prevent it from happening, she pushes everyone away. The only cat who understands her is her sister. She's got a tough exterior and doesn't take crap from anyone. She's thoughtful, and learns new battle moves very quickly, often spending time practicing by herself. She's formidable in combat, and very stubborn.
History: Hauntedkit and her sister Stellarkit were born to Leafdapple and Duskfall. Throughout most of her kithood, Hauntedkit was more reserved and mysterious, not making friends as easily as her sister. Because of this, many kits their own age perceived her as cold and unfriendly. She became an apprentice, with the clan leader, Mothstar, as her mentor. After training for a while, she became a warrior. One day, an enemy clan attacked. During the battle, an alligator attacked a clanmate. She defended the other cat, but at the cost of her eye and most of her ear, along with terrible scarring. She fought during the battle, even though her wounds from the alligator attack were bleeding terribly. Eventually, she collapsed and fell into a coma. She ended up recovering and became a mentor to Cottonpaw. She became close with Halfmask, another clanmate, and her only friend, and they will become mates sometime soon.
Family -
Mother: Leafdapple [deputy, deceased; long-furred tortoiseshell she-cat with amber eyes]
Father: Duskfall [warrior, deceased; dark brown tabby tom with hazel eyes]
Sister: Stellarshine [queen, alive; snow Bengal she-cat (white, cream, and gray) with sea-green eyes]
Future Mate: Halfmask (briefly) [warrior, alive; spotted gray tabby tom with hazel eyes]
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Post by mothsnap on Apr 27, 2018 12:27:35 GMT -5
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