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𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵
Warrior Fanatic
All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Apr 22, 2018 17:44:39 GMT -5
Which book or arc would you rewrite and how?
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Post by Smokyyy on Apr 22, 2018 18:05:31 GMT -5
I'd rewrite YS and take out the abusive crappy tedious nonsense that is YellowRagged.
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Post by Chocolate-Fawn on Apr 22, 2018 18:31:33 GMT -5
I would rewrite PoT and on
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Post by ratsstar on Apr 22, 2018 18:35:20 GMT -5
I’d like to rewrite the Original Arc, cleaning up the inconsistencies and odd voice changes that happen with each different writer taking the lead. I’m sure there’s a universal errata list not to mention wish list of corrections and tweaks to the original arc, as well as a proper epilogue (with no influence from what came afterwards in the sequels).
While I’m on a rant, Ideally, I’d love for it to be a reboot of the series so that instead of Blood clan and scourge showing up and killing tigerstar, he lives on as a threat with Shadow Clan. The series timeline can be stretched out and given more time for character development as well as in-depth stories without introducing the cast of War and Peace and the gods of Olympus. No new prophecies, no Firestar quest, no dark forest no sense, no cats version of A Sixth Sense, no sacrificing characters for lazy plot. I try to get into the new books but they are like peanut brittle. Tasty at first but eventually your jaw starts to hurt, your teeth are glued together, and you never want to look at the stuff again.
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Post by Amberfoot on Apr 23, 2018 10:03:59 GMT -5
I would delete Omen of the Stars lol and make Holly the third. Also would remove a (somewhat useless) generation of cats that didn't need to really exist.
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Post by ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆ on Apr 23, 2018 11:52:34 GMT -5
Re-writing The New Prophecy sounds hard, but i have lots of AU ideas concerning this one. If I could fix this arc, then the arcs to follow would definitely be better..(*cough*powerofthreebeingwastedbecauseofruininghollyleaftoreplaceher*cough*)
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Post by mothsnap on Apr 23, 2018 12:10:00 GMT -5
AVOS. There are so many plot holes. I never felt so enraged at a book before
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Post by Deleted on Apr 23, 2018 15:24:06 GMT -5
I would rewrite TPOT by getting rid of all of the supernatural elements (powers but leave Jayfeather's intact, Place of No Stars/Dark Forest). There's a lot of other things I would do that are too long to list, but I would definitely do that.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 23, 2018 15:27:17 GMT -5
AVOS. There are so many plot holes. I never felt so enraged at a book before It may be entertaining enough, but don't forget how rushed the books are in this series. Also how some characters are used, only to be tossed aside. Oh, and the bias... And the forced choices for some characters.. Smh some of these characters are treated terribly by the editors.
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Post by Jaysnow on Apr 23, 2018 15:41:10 GMT -5
I would delete Omen of the Stars lol and make Holly the third. Also would remove a (somewhat useless) generation of cats that didn't need to really exist.
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Post by mothsnap on Apr 23, 2018 16:45:14 GMT -5
@scarletshade
for me it's 70% darktail and needletail. neither of them make much sense as characters. darktail is a weak villain and needletail is a strawman.
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