Post by Mistybreeze on Apr 22, 2018 3:02:32 GMT -5
Heh, Hamilton jokes.
As the title implies, how would you change AVS? (spoilers obviously)
TAQ
- Squirrelflight only has Alderkit and Sparkkit. I think it was simply too cruel to kill off half her litter when she had waited so long for kits.
- The mentors will be switched. Alder will have Cherryfall and Spark will have Molewhisker. Alderpaw still becomes a medicine cat though. I think the contrasting personality pairings will help both apprentices to grow better.
- Sandstorm doesn't go on the journey. She won't last forever, but I would rather have her interact with Alder and have her act as an advisor for a few books. Purdy is already dead at the start of the book.
- Speaking of death, Briarlight and Dewnose die during the same greencough epidemic that took Spiderleg prior to AVS.
TAS
- Puddlepaw is already Littlecloud's apprentice.
- Sparkpaw's warrior name is Sparkstorm. I loved how Alderheart's name symbolized his similarities to Firestar. I was so disappointed they didn't do that with Sparkpelt too.
- Pinenose dies of yellowcough instead of Wasptail. Beenose survives it as well.
SS
- Darktail isn't Onestar's son. This was just too out of the blue for me. Instead he'll be the son of Jumper or Hoot (Barley's brothers). His group isn't BloodClan 2.0, but it'll be inspired by it. He'll still be raised to hate the Clans and will still be exacting revenge, in this case for his father's Clan being beaten by LionClan. He'll really have it out for ThunderClan and will take one of Bramblestar's lives.
- WindClan will still retreat, but after Onestar dies. Harestar will cooperate with the other Clans for the second attack.
- ThunderClan suffers heavy losses in the first battle. (Thornclaw, Berrynose, Cherryfall, and Sorrelstripe)
- Cinderheart doesn't have a second litter. Shellkit is stillborn, which is even more sad since Blossomfall just lost her mate. Snowbird doesn't have her third litter either.
- Lioneye isn't killed by Darktail and instead has kits with Strikestone. (Marshkit and Stormkit) Also, Beenose leaves with the rogues
- Bellaleaf is having Harrybrook's kits instead of Tinycloud having a second litter. (I really want this pairing to happen)
- Needletail has Rain's kits. Instead of being imprisoned with the RiverClan cats, Darktail kills one of her kits for punishment. She has three total. They are weaned prior to the start of the book.
DN
- Twigpaw goes on the journey. She doesn't get quite as close to Finpaw as a result, but will later on. Her relationship with Sandynose is a lot better too.
- Fringepaw dies prior to them reaching the gorge. Birdwing is also there.
- We see Pebbleshine in StarClan. (I hate how this isn't clear yet)
- SkyClan's territory is made up of both ThunderClan and ShadowClan land. The two Clans extend their borders into the unknown territory. This way the three Clans have equal stretches of shoreline.
- Sandstorm dies in her sleep.
- Twigpaw and Finpaw stay in SkyClan. Her warrior name is Twigfall. Violet's warrior name is Violetshade.
- Violetshine becomes the foster mother to Needletail's kits.
ROF
- Sleekwhisker and Beenose return. Beenose is pregnant, but she ends up giving birth too early and the kits die.
- A ton of cats die from the belly sickness (Whitewing, Cinderheart, Brackenfur, Leafpool, Jayfeather, Hollytuft, and Graystripe) SkyClan also gets it and loses some cats (Rabbitleap and Sparrowpelt)
- We see a lot more of Cherrytail and Cloudmist. They interact with Twig and Violet quite a bit.
- The storm does lasting damage to the ThunderClan camp. The nursery isn't repaired for several days afterwards.
- The fire in the Twolegplace doesn't happen.
- TreexViolet doesn't happen, though he does join the Clan as a warrior. He doesn't become an official mediator, but he does still intervene.
- Ivypool's kits are named Mistkit (Bristlekit), Duskkit (Thriftkit), and Thrushkit (Flipkit). Dovewing's kits are named Pebblekit (Pouncekit), Rowankit (Shadowkit), and Oakkit (Lightkit).