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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Apr 10, 2018 6:49:28 GMT -5
As the title says. And if so, could one of you maybe post pics of it? I'm curious to know who it's about.
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Post by Pixie on Apr 10, 2018 6:54:10 GMT -5
I can't post it.
However, I do know it's in the pov of Willowshine who gets a vision of fire.
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Post by suicunetobigaara on Apr 10, 2018 7:08:32 GMT -5
No offense, but the editors suck! Jayclaw seemed to turn into Heronwing half way through the chapter, and if the editors can't catch that then I fear for the series.
I do like how they addressed Mothwing still mot believing in Starclan after The Last Hope. I feel like rather than her being stupid (that too I guess) it's that she was so hurt and her faith was broken after Hawkfrost's reveal that he sent the sign. I also like the morality issue of whether they should give Mosspelt the last of the watermint. It's rare we see that side of medicine cats, a side that doesn't instantly try to heal someone, and while I think it was wrong to think that you can sort of see where Mothwing was coming from.
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Post by Moonblazer on Apr 10, 2018 7:45:51 GMT -5
God I love Willowshine
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#a3c5e6
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All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Apr 10, 2018 9:24:28 GMT -5
Oooh, a RiverClan bonus scene! Yes! I'm also glad we got to see more of Willowshine, and how much she cares for her mother and Clan as a whole.
I also like how this bonus scene brings up some things about RiverClan, like addressing Mothwing's lack of belief in StarClan and also gives an explanation for it. RiverClan's lack of involvement in the series also makes sense (besides them not bordering ThunderClan anymore) if they're usually a peaceful Clan, especially under Mistystar's reign. I'm also glad it goes into more depth on the consequences of Mistystar closing the borders. The morality issue was also really interesting to read about, even if it was brief.
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Post by Jaysnow on Apr 10, 2018 10:22:47 GMT -5
Oooh, a RiverClan bonus scene! Yes! I'm Also glad we got to see more of Willowshine, and how much she cares for her mother and Clan as a whole. I also like how this bonus scene brings up some things about RiverClan, like addressing Mothwing's lack of belief in StarClan and also gives an explanation for it. RiverClan's lack of involvement in the series also makes sense (besides them not bordering ThunderClan anymore) if they're usually a peaceful Clan, especially under Mistystar's reign. I'm also glad it goes into more depth on the consequences of Mistystar closing the borders. The morality issue was also really interesting to read about, even if it was brief. Liked post at "Oooh, a RiverClan bonus scene! Yes!" Because mood. |
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Post by *Faith* on Apr 10, 2018 14:38:19 GMT -5
Yay, a RC POV. And Willowshine getting it is great. I'm honestly surprised that Mosspelt was remembered as Willowshine's mother though, given these editors track record.
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Apr 10, 2018 15:10:41 GMT -5
Oh nice! Thank you so much <3 |
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