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Post by Deleted on Feb 21, 2018 13:26:01 GMT -5
some say love is a complex thing that its your family who share your suffering
some call it an evil lie poison in disguise that withers til you die
a present perhaps? complex emotions some hide under wraps
but i believe love is dependant on you and on the people who care about you
you cannot ask i wingless bird to fly as you cannot ask liars to part ways with a lie
for love this is also true you cannot expect ones who love to part ways with you.
so if this happens- and it will you feel a cold grip one you cannot kill
do not feel as though you did wrong it was a trick you followed- a fiscade.
but true love will never waver and love from old betrayels will be there forever
others will sense the love so dont throw it away because new people will love it and never go away
so be proud- because though they left you after so long that pain in you is love- still burning strong
love and be loved
-xavier 2018
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Post by Snowswan on Feb 21, 2018 15:02:24 GMT -5
I love the concept, and your style is very unique. I like to play around with different styles of poetry, so its refreshing to see a unique style
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Post by kateterry on Apr 4, 2018 5:00:25 GMT -5
Hey really not bad, if you find or create good melody for this words, it looks like a nice music. Good job do it again, don't stop.
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Post by Hawkeyes258 on Apr 22, 2018 20:25:00 GMT -5
*snaps fingers*
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