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Post by Deleted on Feb 20, 2018 18:12:26 GMT -5
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Feb 20, 2018 18:24:02 GMT -5
{ Holy StarClan I misses a lot! }
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Bisexual
beefsmoothie
inactive. find me on da. [ dA: microwavabie ]
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Post by beefsmoothie on Feb 20, 2018 22:23:29 GMT -5
Ravenpaw, Male, 11 moons, Apprentice
physical description; Ravenpaw is a black cat with a white chest, muzzle, tail tip, and underbelly. His figure is lithe and his fur is sleek and well-groomed. He's no different from the average cat, with no special attributes except for a large scar on his shoulder. Ravenpaw gained this scar from a hunting accident that he doesn't want to talk about, since he's quite obsessed with having his appearance look as nice as possible. His eyes are a bright amber that he appreciates because of its similarity to lava.
personality description; Ravenpaw is a confident and independent tom who is capable of managing just fine by himself. However, that doesn't mean he wants to. He often struggles with making friends because he's quite awkward around others. His sensitivity doesn't help him either, since he's very prone to being offended by little things.
one line description for the front page (think similarly to the books): A thin black tom with a white underbelly and bright amber eyes.
Relationships: Nothing really, but I'm okay with having him be related to anyone.
Other: This isn't really related to Ravenpaw, but I might not be extremely active because I'm still trying to get back into roleplay.
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Feb 20, 2018 22:32:37 GMT -5
Lionkit, Tom, Newborn
Kit
Physical description: Soft-furred kit, though many kits are when they are born, his fur promises to be soft later on in his life. His ginger fur is constantly catching sunlight and attention. He has a strange habit of blinking his eyes more than usual, though it's not a big deal and most cats don't notice it. He has a big frame and big paws too, and a white patch around his eye.
Personality description: Lionkit has always been attached to his parents and his siblings. He has a fierce, protective, and ultimately caring to no limit personality. If any of his siblings or clanmates were harmed he would stand up for them and be strong in place of them. He will do anything to fix problems and defend his clan when he becomes an apprentice, and then a warrior. Many cats say he has a strong heart, and it's true.
Ginger tom with thin ginger and bright amber eyes. He has underbelly and a circle around her eye that are both white. He has a habit of repeatedly blinking.
Relationships: Clanborn, mother is Burntpetal
Other: Edit: Warrior name Lionroar
{ By the way, Lionkit is not based off Lionkit/blaze from The Power Of Three in any way }
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Post by Deleted on Feb 20, 2018 22:58:19 GMT -5
@ beef: ur form's gucci i'll add
@ dew: i didnt see it lol. his only flaw seems to be that he "cares too much" which isnt a real flaw.
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Feb 20, 2018 23:04:07 GMT -5
@ beef: ur form's gucci i'll add @ dew: i didnt see it lol. his only flaw seems to be that he "cares too much" which isnt a real flaw. |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 20, 2018 23:13:01 GMT -5
then i guess you don't get to have him ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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Post by L’Éᴛʀᴀɴɢᴇʀ on Feb 21, 2018 0:33:10 GMT -5
@ beef: ur form's gucci i'll add @ dew: i didnt see it lol. his only flaw seems to be that he "cares too much" which isnt a real flaw.
First of all: can you not talk in bold. I literally can't read that without zooming in or squinting. Also, if you don't alter the character then you cannot roleplay them. Just saying.
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Post by ♥𝒵𝒪𝑀𝐵𝐼𝐸𝒢𝑅𝑅𝐿♥ on Feb 21, 2018 1:00:50 GMT -5
Mistkit, She-cat, 0 moons
Kit
Silvery grey She-cat with slightly darker tabby markings, and eerily pale blue eyes. Mistkit is kind and out going, though she has trouble listening to what others tell her to do, as she tends to be quite hard-headed. Mistkit adores her siblings with everything she has, and very much seeks the approval of her older sister, Scarletnight.
Silvery grey She-cat with slightly darker tabby markings and eerily pale blue eyes.
Relationships: Burntpetal is her mother. Sandkit, Fogkit, Lionkit, and Scarletnight are her siblings.
Warriorname: Mistbriar
((Is this okay? It’s hard doing a form for a kit lol ))
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Post by Deleted on Feb 21, 2018 2:46:04 GMT -5
yeah it's fine
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Post by Deleted on Feb 21, 2018 17:06:03 GMT -5
Oatblossom, she-cat, 34 moons
Warrior
physical description; A light golden brown she-cat with yellow eyes. She has a splotches of white on her fur, white paws, and a white-tipped tail. She is also small-framed compared to most cats, and has a more of skinnier, slender build to her.
personality description; Oatblossom is outgoing, friendly, and lighthearted. She doesn't take much seriously and likes to joke around with everyone. She has a sarcastic sense of humor and has a sarcastic comment for about everything. Despite her lightheartedness, Oatblossom can lose her temper easily and does not much patience for younger cats.
Small, golden brown-and-white she-cat with yellow eyes
Relationships: Honeyrose (sister)
Other:
Honeyrose, she-cat, 34 moons
Warrior
physical description; dark ginger she-cat with yellow eyes. She has one white paw and a white tipped-tail. She's bigger than her sister
and has a more broad, muscular build.
personality description; Honeyrose is friendly towards cats in her own Clan but she is more weary to outsiders. She will not trust them easily and will question their every move. She will be polite at first, but if someone rubs her the wrong way - she will let them know right then and there. Honeyrose has a sharp tongue and has little control over her temper once she loses it.
Large ginger-and-white she-cat with yellow eyes.
Relationships: Oatblossom (sister)
Other:
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Feb 21, 2018 21:31:09 GMT -5
Honestly, it could be. I guess. Honestly, I'm not in the mood to change it again, so if it's not good then I guess it's just gonna stay like that. :(
First of all: can you not talk in bold. I literally can't read that without zooming in or squinting. Also, if you don't alter the character then you cannot roleplay them. Just saying.
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Feb 21, 2018 21:40:40 GMT -5
Lionkit, Tom, Newborn
Kit
Physical description: Soft-furred kit, though many kits are when they are born, his fur promises to be soft later on in his life. His ginger fur is constantly catching sunlight and attention. He has a strange habit of blinking his eyes more than usual, though it's not a big deal and most cats don't notice it. He has a big frame and big paws too, and a white patch around his eye.
Personality description: Lionkit has always been attached to his parents and his siblings. He has a fierce, protective, and ultimately caring to no limit personality. If any of his siblings or clanmates were harmed he would stand up for them and be strong in place of them. He will do anything to fix problems and defend his clan when he becomes an apprentice, and then a warrior. Many cats say he has a strong heart, and it's true.
Ginger tom with thin ginger and bright amber eyes. He has underbelly and a circle around her eye that are both white. He has a habit of repeatedly blinking.
Relationships: Clanborn, mother is Burntpetal
Other: Edit: Warrior name Lionroar
{ By the way, Lionkit is not based off Lionkit/blaze from The Power Of Three in any way }
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Post by L’Éᴛʀᴀɴɢᴇʀ on Feb 21, 2018 22:37:57 GMT -5
𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 I stand corrected. Impact is much, much less easy on the eyes than bold. I should have been more specific. That said, I cannot read your posts without having to zoom in. That makes your posts unaccessible to me and I am requesting that you refrain from using it here.
In addition to that, I stated specifically that if you don't alter the character you can't roleplay them. I said nothing regarding when you had to fix the form. And just so you know, I read the form. In addition to your fix having no noticeable impacts in making him a flawed character, this line of description is also superfluous. "His ginger fur is constantly catching sunlight and attention." Its unnecessary to the form imho and reads as filler.
Please give him a noticeable flaw before we can accept him. And there's no need for you to quote me and tag me. One is enough. |
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Feb 21, 2018 22:44:59 GMT -5
𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 I stand corrected. The impact is much, much less easy on the eyes than bold. I should have been more specific. That said, I cannot read your posts without having to zoom in. That makes your posts inaccessible to me and I am requesting that you refrain from using it here.
In addition to that, I stated specifically that if you don't alter the character you can't roleplay them. I said nothing regarding when you had to fix the form. And just so you know, I read the form. In addition to your fix having no noticeable impacts in making him a flawed character, this line of description is also superfluous. "His ginger fur is constantly catching sunlight and attention." Its unnecessary to the form imho and reads as filler.
Please give him a noticeable flaw before we can accept him. And there's no need for you to quote me and tag me. One is enough. |
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Post by L’Éᴛʀᴀɴɢᴇʀ on Feb 21, 2018 22:55:27 GMT -5
𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 I was not offended, merely stating a fact. Thank you for changing your font. There's also nothing wrong with describing your character but when its a description like that, its quite clear to me that this character - a kit demands attention with his presence alone because of his pelt that doubles as the worst case of natural selection ever. If the sun caused it to glisten the way you described I'm sure the predators will locate him quite easily.
Also, yes. By we I mean suikura the creator of this roleplay and me. |
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Post by ♥𝒵𝒪𝑀𝐵𝐼𝐸𝒢𝑅𝑅𝐿♥ on Feb 21, 2018 22:55:49 GMT -5
Dewy, qinglong is our mod. ))
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Post by L’Éᴛʀᴀɴɢᴇʀ on Feb 21, 2018 23:01:35 GMT -5
b4 battery runs out, Sweetened your cats look good. they're accepted uvu
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Post by Deleted on Feb 21, 2018 23:07:57 GMT -5
awesome - thank you  |
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Feb 22, 2018 10:01:03 GMT -5
𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 I was not offended, merely stating a fact. Thank you for changing your font. There's also nothing wrong with describing your character but when its a description like that, its quite clear to me that this character - a kit demands attention with his presence alone because of his pelt that doubles as the worst case of natural selection ever. If the sun caused it to glisten the way you described I'm sure the predators will locate him quite easily.
Also, yes. By we I mean suikura the creator of this roleplay and me. |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 22, 2018 12:02:37 GMT -5
it doesn't need to be perfect - you need to learn how to follow rules. you should also work on your passive-aggressiveness. just saying.
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Post by L’Éᴛʀᴀɴɢᴇʀ on Feb 22, 2018 15:02:27 GMT -5
Perfection is kind of the problem atm, on the contrary, we're asking you to make an imperfect character.
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Post by dawn on Feb 22, 2018 16:39:32 GMT -5
𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 Hey Dewy, a good flaw for Lionkit could be he's naive because he's so caring that he is overly trusting. He could also be overprotective of his siblings, which gets on their nerves. Another flaw could be he's a perfectionist, and if he doesn't get everything perfect, he ends up getting really upset and takes his anger out on other cats.
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Feb 22, 2018 18:35:08 GMT -5
𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 Hey Dewy, a good flaw for Lionkit could be he's naive because he's so caring that he is overly trusting. He could also be overprotective of his siblings, which gets on their nerves. Another flaw could be he's a perfectionist, and if he doesn't get everything perfect, he ends up getting really upset and takes his anger out on other cats. |
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Feb 22, 2018 20:16:16 GMT -5
Windfur, she-cat, 42 moons Warrior A slender she-cat with bright amber eyes, Windfur is built for speed. She has tabby tan fur, and a light forehead marking, and small paws. She was almost named Tallkit, but her mother decided to name her Windfur after considering her speed.
Windfur is kind-hearted she-cat, but she mostly keeps to herself. Many cats note that she is built to be a leader, but she doubts that the next leader will choose her to be deputy anytime soon. Slender, tan tabby she-cat with amber eyes, smalls paws, and a light forehead marking. Relationships: None Other: None  Gorseheart, tom, 32 moons Warrior Long-furred, medium grey tabby tom with green eyes and a light pink nose. He has a normal sized-frame, and he is a similar size to most toms. He has a couple scars from fighting off foxes and large paws.
and has a more broad, muscular build.
Many cats say that Gorseheart is a soft cat, and they're right. Gorseheart is a sweet, softy, and overly trusting cat. He never had an apprentice and is trying to convince Ashstar to get him one. He is constantly trying to protect others, and that annoys most cats. Relationships: None Other: None  |
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beefsmoothie
inactive. find me on da. [ dA: microwavabie ]
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Post by beefsmoothie on Feb 26, 2018 22:13:48 GMT -5
slight Ravenpaw adjustments (i bolded the changes just so you wouldn't have to read everything again) + a new character!
Ravenpaw, Male, 11 moons, Apprentice
physical description; Ravenpaw is a black cat with a white chest, muzzle, tail tip, paws, and underbelly. His figure is lithe and his fur is sleek and well-groomed. He's no different from the average cat, with no special attributes except for a large scar on his shoulder. Ravenpaw gained this scar from a hunting accident that he doesn't want to talk about, since he's quite obsessed with having his appearance look as nice as possible. His eyes are a bright amber that he appreciates because of its similarity to lava.
personality description; Ravenpaw is a confident and independent tom who is capable of managing just fine by himself. However, that doesn't mean he wants to. He often struggles with making friends because he's quite awkward at first with new cats. Soon after, he becomes annoying with his constant chatter and endless questions. He is a curious cat, but sometimes his curiosity can lead him to dangerous situations.
(warrior name: ravensky? :0)
Mousethistle, Female, 24 moons
Warrior
physical description; Mousethistle is a short-haired tortoise-shell cat with bright blue eyes mimicking a day's clear sky. Her pelt is mostly shades of brown with patches of orange and white. There's nothing to be said about her figure except for the fact that she is built smaller than the average cat. She doesn't like it when her size is pointed out.
personality description; Mousethistle is vulgar and rude. She can be offended very easily and will fight back with several insults. However, the moment someone fights back or goes too far with their words, Mousethistle will get very weak and her fragile side will be exposed. She is an unlikable she-cat who's redeemable qualities can only be shown to those who really take the time to befriend her. If someone did somehow become her friend, she would try her best to protect them.
one line description for the front page (think similarly to the books): A small tortoise-shell cat with blue eyes.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 27, 2018 23:58:43 GMT -5
sorry for getting to this so late, beef!! raven's changes are good (and i like ravensky as a warrior name!) an your new character looks good ^^
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Post by Deleted on Feb 28, 2018 1:14:38 GMT -5
no longer wips
Owlpaw, tom, 6 moons
Apprentice
This tom's fur is of a soft brown shade, and he's rather small compared to many others. His short fur is thicker and fluffier towards his hindquarters and at his long, skinny tail - he has a pointed muzzle and wide amber eyes that are often likened to the very bird he's named after. Each of Owlpaw's tiny paws are white in colour in varying degrees; his left front paw is white to the middle of his leg, his right front paw is only tipped in white at his toes, his left back paw is white only on the paw, and his right back paw is entirely white with the white continuing a fair way up his leg. His white markings continue from there; his muzzle is white as is his throat and chest, and his underbelly is white as are the insides of his legs. The same white is on the bridge of his nose in a blaze, flicking up just past his eyes.
loud, boisterous, over-confident.
A small brown tom with white markings and wide amber eyes.
Relationships: Younger half-brother of Cinderpaw.
Other: N/A
Cinderpaw, tom, 15 moons
Apprentice
There is no doubt that Cinderpaw is a graceful tom. With long, sturdy legs and a slender body, he's certainly something to behold. His markings and colourings are rather intense, too; a rich grey colour with darker black-grey spotted tabby markings, with a fairly dark nose. He has white lining his eyes and interrupting some of the darkness around his muzzle, though it's very little and blends fairly well into the grey. He has tall ears and a pointed muzzle, and as mentioned before, he's rather graceful - primarily in his movements. His eyes are a light green, though the left eye is brown on the lower half, thus giving him partial heterochromia.
problem-solver, over-thinker, anxious
A dark grey spotted tabby tom with mostly light green eyes, one is partly brown.
Relationships: Older half-brother of Owlpaw.
Other: He has failed the Trial of Lava twice so far. Based from the closest cat to the camera in this picture.
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Post by ♥𝒵𝒪𝑀𝐵𝐼𝐸𝒢𝑅𝑅𝐿♥ on Feb 28, 2018 2:44:42 GMT -5
Dawnlily, she-cat, 42 moons Medicine-cat Dawnlily is a sleek, cinnamon-colored she-cat with chocolate colored lynx points and a white patch on her chest. Dawnlily has bright blue, calculating eyes and typically has a sharp tone of voice... whether she means too or not. Though the she-cat can come off as cold and standoff-ish she's rather warm-hearted and caring. Dawnlily became medicine-cat solely because she felt she wouldn't be able to provide or protect the clan she loved so much. Dawnlily has no remaining kin in her clan and often becomes jealous of she-cats as they fall in love and start a family, though she'd never admit to it. Sleek, cinnamon-colored she-cat with chocolate colored lynx points and a white patch on her chest; Pale blue eyes. based on this image  )) |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 28, 2018 2:48:13 GMT -5
dusk prefix is already taken by a kit
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