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Post by dawn on Feb 14, 2018 15:38:34 GMT -5
(I was wondering if you would be okay with me adding a queen with no mate. Id love for her to have a mate, but I don't know if anyone would want to take that spot)
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Post by Deleted on Feb 14, 2018 15:40:45 GMT -5
there's a limit of 2 and none are taken, so of course ^^ |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 14, 2018 15:41:49 GMT -5
Maplesnow, she-cat, 18 moons
New Warrior
There is no doubt that Maplesnow is a massive cat, with long legs and a broad-shouldered build. Though her fur is generally short, her chest, cheeks, and tail are all fluffier and more feathery than the rest of her, and her ears are lynx-tipped. She's a primarily white she-cat, often kept well-groomed and very rarely appearing anything but put together. She has a tortoiseshell patch at the base of her tail, and she has a tortoiseshell patch on her forehead, too. Other than that - there's nothing. The lynx tips to her ears seem to fade to a black colour, but it's barely noticeable. Her eyes are a keen amber-gold colour, and, overall, she's surprisingly noble to look at. Her paws are large and her claws, despite the pale of her fur, seem to be black rather than clear; an interesting detail to note, for sure. She's quite intimidating, to be honest.
dependable, quick-thinking, impulsive.
A massive white she-cat with tortoiseshell patches and keen amber eyes.
Relationships: No living kin, no crush/mate nor kits.
Other: Her mother was the recently deceased Sagestar.
Vixenpaw, she-cat, 10 moons
Apprentice
Slender and lithe, Vixenpaw is an elegant, dainty little she-cat with long legs made for running. Her fur is a dark ginger in colour with black ticking over her coat, and she has a white muzzle, throat, chest, underbelly, and toes. Her tail-tip is white, too. She has rather tall ears and a pointed, slender face, and her tail is rather long. She has a 'v' shape cut into her left ear, and another notch in the right. Her canines, a little too large for her mouth, poke out either side and often give her the appearance of constantly grinning - which is rather fitting, considering how she is. Her eyes are a bright green and are very observant, constantly watching her Clanmates and what goes around her. She has black dusting the bridge of her nose, though this is not often noticed upon the first glance.
ambitious, talkative, sly.
A slender dark ginger she-cat with bright green eyes.
Relationships: No kin inside the Clan, no crush/mate nor kits.
Other: She has the uncanny ability to speak fox; it's rumoured that she, herself, was raised as a fox cub before she was brought to the Clan, but she dismissed this as they are "unruly ferals who need to learn how to speak properly."
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Post by 𝖘𝖎𝖑𝖛𝖊𝖗𝖘𝖎𝖑𝖐 on Feb 14, 2018 17:23:32 GMT -5
Steampaw, male, 8 moons
Apprentice
Light gray tabby tom with a darker gray swirl/tabby pattern, white chin and dull amber eyes. He has a long, whispy tail. Steampaw's fur is medium length, and he has darker gray fur tufts of his ears. White patch of fur beginning at toes, up until his ankle-region, and has a body built for a more muscular appearance. Less swift, but a little more than averagely strong.
Steampaw is a flirtatious tom. He isn't the most clever, and tends to have a short temper. However, he is protective and kind to his clanmates.
light gray tabby tom with white paws and amber eyes.
Steampaw's older sister is Whistle (working on her page), however he does not know they are related.
Favorite prey is mountain goat, but rarely tastes it. He once came across a fox that harmlessly ignored him, so he has grown to think they are friendly, despite his clanmates telling him what horrid creatures they are.
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Post by 𝖘𝖎𝖑𝖛𝖊𝖗𝖘𝖎𝖑𝖐 on Feb 14, 2018 17:36:33 GMT -5
Whistle, female, 10 moons
Rogue
dark gray she-cat with darker gray swirl/tabby pattern, regular gray undercoat and white tailtip. Bright yellow eyes, much sleeker build than her brother (like that of a siamese or cornish rex) and short fur. Her pelt helps her blend in somewhat dark areas, but she is vulnerable when it comes to strength. Like Steampaw, she also has fur tufts on her ears.
aggressive, won't easily back down. However, she is protective of her dignity. Whistle is also clever and sly.
dark gray tabby she-cat with a gray undercoat, yellow eyes
Steampaw's older sister, however, the two do not know this.
Roams alone, usually fleeing when it comes to a fight. Sometimes she will not back down, and loves to fight with words. Will play dirty if needed.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 14, 2018 17:43:25 GMT -5
accepted; if you're planning on having whistle in the clan at any point, please wait until there are more warriors |
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Post by 𝖘𝖎𝖑𝖛𝖊𝖗𝖘𝖎𝖑𝖐 on Feb 14, 2018 17:54:17 GMT -5
Alright. Thank you!
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Post by dawn on Feb 14, 2018 18:35:30 GMT -5
Burntpetal, She-cat, 40 moons
Queen
physical description; When you look at Burntpetal, you see a delicate, incredibly small (apprentice-sized at most) she-cat with a small amount of white on her. She is usually incredibly thin, but she is pregnant at the moment, so she looks fairly large. She is a light orange color, close to cream-colored, with slightly darker orange/cream-colored patches on her back. She has white socks, a white muzzle, and a white tail-tip. She is very pretty, despite her small size, and she tries to take good care of herself. She likes staying clean because it makes her feel better after a hard day.
personality description; Lazy, protective, and stubborn
Very tiny light orange - almost cream-colored - she-cat with darker orange patches on her back and white muzzle, paws, and tail-tip, green eyes
Relationships: Daughter from her first litter is Scarletnight, mate is dead, open to a new mate
Other: She has not had her kits yet, but they are coming any day now (I was thinking maybe two or three kits if anyone wants to RP one!)
Scarletnight, She-cat, 16 moons
New warrior
physical description; Scarletnight was named for her dark red pelt, very similar to the color of rust. She is definitely an eye-catcher, mostly because of her interesting appearance. She is a lithe she-cat, by no means scrawny, with dark red fur. She has big black splotches all over her pelt, and her tail is ringed with black. Her chest, underbelly, and most of her face are also black. The only part of her face that is red is her forehead, making it appear like she is wearing a mask.
personality description; Secretive, usually unfriendly, sneaky
Dark red she-cat with big black splotches covering her pelt and a masked face, green eyes
Relationships: Mother is Burntpetal, open to romance
Other: Has a bad relationship with her mother
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Post by Deleted on Feb 14, 2018 19:02:01 GMT -5
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Post by ♥𝒵𝒪𝑀𝐵𝐼𝐸𝒢𝑅𝑅𝐿♥ on Feb 14, 2018 19:25:05 GMT -5
Crowstrike, Tom, 46 moons
Senior Warrior
Crowstrike, named for the color of his pelt and ability in battle, is a kind hearted fellow. He's a dark grey tabby tom of substantial size, covered in various scars along his face, flank, and legs, though without these scars one could tell that he'd be a rather good-looking tom, with his piercing amber colored eyes. Crowstrike is the older sibling of Riverwillow, though they share no true kinship, he claims her as his family. Crowstrike is friendly towards all members of Moltenclan, though he has a specific respect for the Elders and will go out of his way to accommodate them. He's headstrong, loyal to a fault, and puts everyone else's needs before his own.
Dark grey tabby tom of substantial size, covered in various scars along his muzzle, flank, and legs; Amber eyes
Relationships: Older sibling of Riverwillow
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Feb 14, 2018 21:04:58 GMT -5
Redwish, She-cat, 43 moons Queen Redwish is a daring, rebellious cat, but with a sense of caring for her clanmates, kin, and mate. She used to have a mate name Robinfeather, but he was killed by a fox along with the leader. She still grieves for him but refuses to return to her warrior duties. Her grief, she says, has turned her into a stronger, less vulnerable cat. She is proud of her scars from her early fighting days. Red-furred she-cat with white paws, underbelly, tail tip, and light green eyes. She has kept her feather from her mate and refuses to remove it. Relationships: Mother of Emberpaw, no kin or mate. Lynxfur, Tom, 34 moons Warrior Lynxfur is a snippy, self-protective tom, with a tendency to snap at people who make comments or treat him differently because of his appearance. Though mainly it's rare, the rude or disrespectful comments normally come from the apprentices, and mostly Emberpaw. He's been through a lot, emotionally and physically, and bullying just makes him more bitter. Dark tan tom with one blue eye and one yellow, and three legs. He was born with the multicolored eyes, but when he was running from a fox as an apprentice, he lost his leg in an accident. Relationships: Younger sibling of Redwish |
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Post by ♥𝒵𝒪𝑀𝐵𝐼𝐸𝒢𝑅𝑅𝐿♥ on Feb 14, 2018 21:51:15 GMT -5
Riverwillow, She-Cat, 23 moons
Warrior
Riverwillow, is a lithe blue-grey she-cat with darker grey colorations, and bright green eyes. She's quick and quiet, making her an outstanding hunter, though in battle she is not quite as adept. She's kind, but bull-headed, and not quick to trust outsiders. Riverwilllow is not clan-born, in fact, it's believed her mother and father were rogues, who are now long gone from the territory. Crowstrike found and took her in shortly after he became a warrior, adopting her as his sibling. Riverwillow is naturally curious, and finds joy in learning new things, because of this she's quite fond of the elders and spends a majority of her time with them, a habit she learned from her elder brother.
Lithe blue grey she-cat with darker grey colorations, and bright green eyes.
Relationships: Crowstrike is her brother
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Post by Deleted on Feb 14, 2018 22:20:22 GMT -5
dewfrost: you haven't put their full physical descriptions in the form.
also, there's no reason why
a) lynxfur was renamed for being blind
and b) he's being treated differently.
feathersong is blind and he's not treated differently; lynxfur could even be a warrior, as long as he used his other senses instead of thinking about how he was using his sight. all in all, your form for lynxfur makes no sense with how the clan functions
zombie: take your time, hmu when they're done |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 15, 2018 2:20:31 GMT -5
Mossthorn, Tom, 24 moonsWarrior
A scrawny, short-furred, thin smokey black tom with a long feathery tail and lighter tips. His wide-set eyes are tired and warm amber while the flesh on his nose and paw pads pink with black freckles. Fangs poke out from under his lips from an overbite. Mossthorn is a better runner and climber than a fighter, using unconventional ways to get a grip on surfaces, though despite this he still failed his apprentice assessment the first time around.
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Mossthorn is to put it, a very grumpy and opinionated cat, with a harsh tongue and criticism. At first glance he isn't very likeable, but he gets along well with patient and quiet cats who don't mind being dragged around with him. He'll easily get angry for others and isn't afraid to run into things without any plan or much knowledge, or stick up for what he believes is right.
A small, short-furred smokey black tom with amber eyes and an overbite.
Relationships: n/a, open for family and 'romantic' interest
Other: homosexual
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Curlpelt, She-cat, 19 moons
Warrior
Curlpelt is an average sized, muscular warm brown she-cat with a splotch of cream under her chin and unusual soft, ''curly" fur that makes her look like she's ragged. The flesh on her nose and paw pads is pink and her eyes are wide and grass green. She is a peaceful cat but a good fighter, missing one of her claws after it was snagged off in an intense scuffle.
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Curlpelt is a quiet, shy and grounded cat, who will always try to look for a peaceful resolution and compromise. Sometimes she is too soft and trusting, making her easy to manipulate by the not so good intentioned, and her hesitance to fight has caused problems in the past.
A warm brown she-cat with a splotch of cream under her chin, green eyes and soft curly fur.
Relationships: n/a open
Other: curled fur genetic mutation
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Post by Deleted on Feb 15, 2018 11:19:31 GMT -5
zombie & forgetmenot, i'll add you both ^^ |
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Post by flamerune on Feb 15, 2018 12:33:16 GMT -5
Flamepelt, Tom, 38 moons Warrior (or Deputy) Flamepelt is a relatively long-legged tom with a thin body. His fur is a fiery ginger color, with darker ginger stripes spread randomly across his body. His fur is neither short nor long, and it is incredibly soft. His eyes are a bright emerald green color, and a long scar runs from the top of his left eye down to his cheek.
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Flamepelt is a very kind feline. He is calm, collected, and loyal to a fault. Always willing to die for his clanmates, Flamepelt often finds himself injured in battle. However, he is relatively shy, and can easily become a push-over at times. Also, if his past is brought up, he tends to freeze up and zone out. He also has frequent flashbacks.
Thin, fiery ginger tom with bright emerald green eyes. Relationships: None, as of yet. Other: bisexual |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 15, 2018 12:41:55 GMT -5
he'll be a warrior, but i'll keep his name in mind d:
looking good, i'll add now - you're free to roleplay |
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Feb 15, 2018 18:27:26 GMT -5
dewfrost: you haven't put their full physical descriptions in the form.
also, there's no reason why
a) lynxfur was renamed for being blind
and  he's being treated differently.
feathersong is blind and he's not treated differently; lynxfur could even be a warrior, as long as he used his other senses instead of thinking about how he was using his sight. all in all, your form for lynxfur makes no sense with how the clan functions
zombie: take your time, hmu when they're done What about Scarletmoon? Is she okay? Edit: Also, geez. How the heck would I know? |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 15, 2018 18:33:10 GMT -5
they need their full physical descriptions put into the form
because you've been in the clan and you've rped with feathersong? you don't need to snap at me; i'm pointing out something that is fairly obvious within the roleplay. |
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Feb 15, 2018 18:35:55 GMT -5
Okay -
1) I actually didn't know Feathersong was blind, you kept giving hints but never really stated it, just as the Erins did in Power Of Three with Jayfeather - And I didn't completely look at the descriptions of all the cats
2) I didn't mean to snap or be rude and any matter
3) I don't find it fairly obvious
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Post by Deleted on Feb 15, 2018 18:49:37 GMT -5
unfortunately, i did state it - in a very early post
"But these were thoughts he'd been thinking since he'd been blinded, and he found that he no longer cared about the opinion of others on his lack of sight."
also, if i don't reply immediately - i have other things to do. sometimes people give me things to translate so it takes me a few minutes to do that before i check the forums.
look; sorry if it wasn't obvious, but i did state that feathersong was blind, and that isn't quite the point. the point is that i cannot accept these forms yet. |
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Feb 15, 2018 18:52:41 GMT -5
{ Yeah, I know, I'm just not the cat/person to read the whole previous roleplay, I guess, and look, it's fine, okay? I'm just wondering what you mean about the "full" physical description }
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Post by Deleted on Feb 15, 2018 18:56:51 GMT -5
it's alright, it's alright -
i understand glancing over posts, especially since i tend to be a little detailed when i'm into something d:
oh, the uh - para physical description, it's more than a few lines because it goes a little more into what they look like.
the one-liner is for the front page to ensure there's no clutter, but it's nice to have a general idea; e.g: a russet she-cat with white markings being the one-liner, but detailing where the white markings are and if there are any tabby markings + her sort of build in the main description. |
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Feb 15, 2018 19:01:20 GMT -5
{ Okay, makes sense, I'll fix it when I can, kay? }
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Post by Deleted on Feb 15, 2018 19:08:01 GMT -5
yee take your time no rush
this is my bad more than yours - i should've stated it in my first post, but you actually can't use the prefix scarlet (as it's already in use) and i did ask on the front of this page not to use the suffix -moon. |
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Post by 🔻Puppydawg🔻 on Feb 15, 2018 22:37:44 GMT -5
Frostfeather , Shecat , 36
Warrior
physical description; a leapared like pelt with hits cought, a black fur on paws. She has blue eyes.
personality description; she is smart, sweet, and easily angered.
one line description for the front page: a leperad pelted cat with black paws and blue eyes.
Relationships: None known to clan
Other:
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Post by Deleted on Feb 15, 2018 22:47:26 GMT -5
i'm sorry, thornhawk, but the physical description is not enough and i can't ignore the amount of typos; this is a semi-advanced clan. also, she has black paws but no other colours - the main physical description needs a lot more than that. i can't accept. |
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Post by aether on Feb 17, 2018 5:40:17 GMT -5
Sorrelwing, She-cat , 46 moons
Senior Warrior
A slender she-cat with short and sleek fur. In colour, her pelt is mostly white (when it isn't dusted in dirt or ash), but she has patches of black on her face, back and sides, and tail. She has round and bright yellow eyes. She is quite small in size, with dainty paws and a short tail (not a stumpy tail - just one that's shorter than usual). Her right ear has two holes in it but doesn't have a feather. This is because her mate died shortly after she had her kits, and she removed the feathers from the holes. Sorrelwing can be a tough cat to really get to know, because she does tend to keep her walls up, which has only seemed to heightened after losing her mate, and losing most of her litter. She has a soft spot for her one son, but can even seem like a stranger to him. She is an efficient hunter and finds, more and more, she prefers the serenity of going on a hunt and being alone in silence. This isn't to say she's a nasty cat - that's not the case at all, she's just a little lost. As she gets older, she feels more lonely. She will still approach her clanmates and talk, she's just... distant. Almost like a shell of herself.
A small, sleek white she-cat with black patches and yellow eyes/
Relationships: Her former mate, Kestrelclaw, passed. She has her first litter as an older warrior (not quite a senior though) and lost three of her four kits due to problems in birth. Coalpaw is her son.
Other: is she ok? c:
Coalpaw, Tom, 7 moons
Apprentice
Coalpaw is a small tom, like his mother. He has a deep grey pelt that is short but not sleek like his mothers, instead, it is soft. He has bright green eyes, often filled with determination. He is thin (his pelt tends to fill him out a bit though) and lithe, despite his small size, he is quite quick and agile. Coalpaw is a determined tom. He is determined to prove he is a worthy warrior, determined to prove to his mother how skilled he is, and determined to prove that he is strong and brave despite his size. He often feels like he has to prove himself to his mother, so when she turns him away, he can become defeated. He has the tendency to get hot-headed when he can't accomplish something, and is stubborn. He does like to make jokes with the other apprentices, of course, and he is friendly to others. But sometimes he feels a little lonely when he thinks about his siblings who've passed, his dead father, and his shell of a mother.
A small tom who short, soft, deep grey fur and green eyes.
Relationships: Mother is Sorrelwing, father and siblings deceased.
Other: c:
Spiderstep, She-cat, 30 moons
Warrior
Spiderstep is a tabby she-cat, with black stripes and markings swirling throughout her pelt with no particular pattern. In colour, her coat is brown - a light brown, with golden flecks tinted around. She has almond shaped, dark yellow eyes. Spiderstep has, if you hadn't guessed, long limbs - giving her a long gait and making her quite speedy. As a kit and apprentice, it made her clumsy, but she has certainly grown into herself. She is a warm she-cat, quite approachable to others, and is happy to help in any situation. She's an optimistic, trying her best to see the best in any and all situations. She can get flustered and emotional if something happens to her though, and might need help straightening her thoughts.
A long-limbed, brown tabby she-cat with green eyes.
Relationships: Litter mate is Hawkgaze.
Other:
Hawkgaze, Tom, 30 moons
Warrior
Hawkgaze has a big head, and a muscular body, though he isn't particularly large for a tom. Like his sister, he is covered in swirly, black tabby markings, but his pelt is more golden-brown. Especially his stomach, the soft fur is a dark gold colour. He has almond shaped green eyes. Hawkgaze can be an intense tom, liking to have order to his life. He considers himself a realist, but can be harsh about reality rather than 'realistic'. While some might think he is a bit gloomy, he isn't all that bad after he warms up. He has dreams of some day becoming deputy, then becoming leader. He is a determined tom and will do everything in his power to get what he wants.
A brown tabby tom with a golden hue and green eyes.
Relationships: Litter mate is Spiderstep
Other:
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Post by Deleted on Feb 17, 2018 8:30:05 GMT -5
you are accepted, and i'll add you now
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Feb 17, 2018 9:51:53 GMT -5
yee take your time no rush
this is my bad more than yours - i should've stated it in my first post, but you actually can't use the prefix scarlet (as it's already in use) and i did ask on the front of this page not to use the suffix -moon. xD It's okay, I didn't actually like her name that much in the first place - and I'm such an idiot for not reading the whole front page { facepalm } |
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he's being treated differently. 
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