Post by breadcat on Dec 22, 2017 21:21:24 GMT -5
“You’re going out.” Amanda stated.
“Why? I get out plenty.” X muttered as her hands typed furiously.
The keys clicked in time making a melody of words that flashed on the computer screen. X made facial expressions every now and then. Sometimes scrunching up her face in confusion, she would spin in her chair, then quickly go back to typing.
Amanda wiped the tables, back and forth.
“You’ve been working on that book forever and yet it’s still not done?” she looked up from her handy work, smiling her job was finished.
“No,” x huffed glanced up from the laptop, “You keep interrupting.” She looked back down at her work. She slammed the lid closed, “It’s not good.”
“Did you at least save that?” Amanda laughed.
X slammed her head on the table, looking back up at her friend she rolled her eyes.
The italicized line I'm not sure I like it, it just sounds weird to me. Also I didn't have a name for the X character.
“Why? I get out plenty.” X muttered as her hands typed furiously.
The keys clicked in time making a melody of words that flashed on the computer screen. X made facial expressions every now and then. Sometimes scrunching up her face in confusion, she would spin in her chair, then quickly go back to typing.
Amanda wiped the tables, back and forth.
“You’ve been working on that book forever and yet it’s still not done?” she looked up from her handy work, smiling her job was finished.
“No,” x huffed glanced up from the laptop, “You keep interrupting.” She looked back down at her work. She slammed the lid closed, “It’s not good.”
“Did you at least save that?” Amanda laughed.
X slammed her head on the table, looking back up at her friend she rolled her eyes.
The italicized line I'm not sure I like it, it just sounds weird to me. Also I didn't have a name for the X character.
