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Post by -darkmoon- on Dec 21, 2017 9:07:39 GMT -5
(Some backstory: There's a girl I like, and had a previous relationship with. Not too long ago she was kinda leading me on, being flirty, etc. And now she seems completely disinterested in me. It's kinda over simplifying it, but whatever. Point is, its a problem I have, and I like to write poems about my personal issues, so yeah. Anyway, feel free to say whatever about it)
I feel like a distraction for the emptiness you feel Am I yours to use until your heart’s all healed? Just to go find someone else? Don’t you know that puts me through h*ll? I constantly force myself to change And I know it may seem strange But I did it for you So please, I implore you Put a little effort towards me I’m sick of watching you ignore me What’s the point of trying if you don’t even care? Should I bother saying “Hi,” or would it be a waste of air? You never missed me If it was me and someone else, you wouldn’t pick me Despite all this, I still go after you Even if this one ends in disaster too You offer no help, and I keep hurting myself over you I just wish you’d notice the struggle too Told me you don’t like how I’m always depressed and negative I don’t know about you, but that just sounds insensitive If you talked to me, you might know why I’m like that If you talked to me, you might understand why I fight that If I understood I would quit asking questions I ask you a question and you go off in different directions How do you expect to get anywhere without telling the truth? How will I understand if you don’t show the proof? I don’t know about you, but this needs end And I don’t mean to offend But you’re far from being a friend...
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brokendusk
^ This Kitty right here is my baby... I'll love you forever Fluff N' Stuff.
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Post by brokendusk on Dec 22, 2017 15:23:00 GMT -5
Wow, that's really good. Normally I don't like stuff or reply; I'm just one of those people who keep scrolling, but I'm a writer and, I don't know about you, I like it when someone acknowledges my work. Even of it's just to give constructive criticism. I genuinely do like it, though. You're good.
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Post by -darkmoon- on Dec 27, 2017 11:50:42 GMT -5
Wow, that's really good. Normally I don't like stuff or reply; I'm just one of those people who keep scrolling, but I'm a writer and, I don't know about you, I like it when someone acknowledges my work. Even of it's just to give constructive criticism. I genuinely do like it, though. You're good. Thank you, that honestly means a lot. I wasn't expecting anyone to actually look at this, much less reply
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