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Post by mintedstar/fur on Apr 6, 2018 0:03:16 GMT -5
Ooo! I'll have to read tomorrow!  |
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 6, 2018 17:59:45 GMT -5
bumpers
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Post by Pyropelt on Apr 7, 2018 12:46:39 GMT -5
Ooh what a great chapter!!
One thing I was confused about: how come Ravenpaw didn't rush back to get the other 2 kits? Did she not have time? or was that when Lizardblight called her?
I like the names she gave the kits! Hopefully they will grow up fine.
Maybe Lizardblight's happy to raise them with Ravenpaw. I wonder who she'll end up with. If she picks Lightpaw, I would feel sad for Lizardblight because he'd be crushed.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Apr 7, 2018 13:12:32 GMT -5
How are you, Sea?
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Apr 7, 2018 13:13:25 GMT -5
Ah, but do I vote no if I just don't want Ravenpaw in a relationship at all? o3o
Edit: At least as things stand now.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 7, 2018 13:34:05 GMT -5
Pyropelt Lizardblight called to her as she was across the road, thus she did not have time to go back for the other two kits and get them across too, without being caught. Sorry, that was a bit confusing. mintedstar/fur I am alright, just doing college stuff. And, I suppose that would be a 'no' on the poll, lol.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 7, 2018 16:23:24 GMT -5
Pyropelt Lizardblight called to her as she was across the road, thus she did not have time to go back for the other two kits and get them across too, without being caught. Sorry, that was a bit confusing. mintedstar/fur I am alright, just doing college stuff. And, I suppose that would be a 'no' on the poll, lol. |
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Apr 7, 2018 17:55:16 GMT -5
I caught up! And it was almost worth getting hopelessly behind because I got to binge read it all today  I went with no on the poll since I agree with Mint - Ravenpaw has way more pressing things to worry about than romance lol. But maybe if they got more scenes I'd reconsider. |
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 7, 2018 18:03:37 GMT -5
Binging is always fun! Ravenpaw does have a lot of things going on of more importance, but that doesn't mean she can't dream :3
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Apr 8, 2018 7:00:54 GMT -5
True :3 Maybe once it's all over...
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 8, 2018 20:23:34 GMT -5
We shall see...hehehe
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Apr 9, 2018 1:29:31 GMT -5
No hehehe. Every time you go hehehe I get paranoid.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 9, 2018 14:05:16 GMT -5
That's the point XD it builds the tension for the story's next chapter and beyond!
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Apr 11, 2018 10:37:20 GMT -5
Well, that was a plot twist o.o
I really hope Lizardblight doesn't pass on what Ravenskull told him!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 11, 2018 14:52:20 GMT -5
So much really happened int hat chapter. Everybody learned some secrets, but what they choose to do with those secrets is to be seen later...
What did you think of the chapter overall?
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 11, 2018 15:38:01 GMT -5
This adds intrigue with Ravenskull finding out Lizardblight was the one who killdher mom.And it appears he is horrified. Wonder how this will turn out.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 11, 2018 15:54:58 GMT -5
So much really happened int hat chapter. Everybody learned some secrets, but what they choose to do with those secrets is to be seen later... What did you think of the chapter overall? |
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 11, 2018 21:02:35 GMT -5
Glad you enjoyed it so much! Things are definitely getting more interesting between the pair. Any favorite parts? besides the secret of Raven's mom?
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Apr 12, 2018 10:48:24 GMT -5
Eep. I haven't read this chapter yet get me out of school, drat it! But oh my oh my am I excited to now! O.O
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 12, 2018 12:01:26 GMT -5
Glad you enjoyed it so much! Things are definitely getting more interesting between the pair. Any favorite parts? besides the secret of Raven's mom? :-) |
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 12, 2018 13:11:34 GMT -5
I thought we could use an action-filled opening for once. Glad you enjoyed it! Always makes me happy.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 13, 2018 12:31:22 GMT -5
bump
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Apr 13, 2018 12:59:22 GMT -5
So much really happened int hat chapter. Everybody learned some secrets, but what they choose to do with those secrets is to be seen later... What did you think of the chapter overall? Really good! I was wondering when it would all come out. Also, that 'elder ceremony' was chilling. If I needed any more reason to hope that Thornstar meets a horrible fate really, really soon... |
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 13, 2018 15:33:54 GMT -5
I wanted it to be chilling but not too dark at the same time. I wanted to portray Thornstar and Coyotescar thinking it was honorable to go that way, but it still be truly horrific, or normal, to just about everyone else.
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Post by Pyropelt on Apr 13, 2018 18:52:39 GMT -5
Woah such a great chapter! Each chapter I dislike Thornstar more and more. Cool she had her warrior name. I like that she was a bit glad to have her name still!
Aw poor Lizardblight! First he gets rejected again, and then remembers he killed Ravenskull's mother! Hopefully she'll forgive him, or at least try and be civil with him after some time.
Man, what a blow for Ravenskull!
Too bad there's an apprentice like Thornstar. Wonder if the others will turn out like him? Hopefully Ravenskull can intervine before they get very bloodlusty.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 13, 2018 21:24:30 GMT -5
Ravenskull is definitely having it rough. Not sure if they'll be able to recover, her and Lizardblight...but we shall see. I'm glad you're really enjoying everything, and I always love to read what you guys have to say about each chapter. Sometimes I realize we're already on chapter 18 and such, but there's still so much to write and have done! This one is going to be like the one before it, What is the Sound of Peace, which was 40+ chapters, lol.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 17, 2018 16:28:44 GMT -5
bump
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Apr 18, 2018 13:22:17 GMT -5
How are you doing these days, Sea?
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 18, 2018 13:44:50 GMT -5
Not so good. It's the end of the semester these next couple weeks, so lots of exams.
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