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Apricity
Bravelands is too slept on.
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Post by Apricity on Nov 1, 2017 15:36:26 GMT -5
For some reason, I got the feeling that Storm thought Gray Wing was cute and had a bit of a crush on him before she met Clear Sky. Due to this part.
"Storm drew closer, her sweet scent washing over him. 'I'm so sorry, Gray Wing," she murmured. 'I wish things were different, but...' Taking a pace back, she added, 'We'll still see each other. The forest isn't that big!'" (Near the end of chapter 21 because I used a pdf and page numbers are different on those.)
She said she wished things were different, as in, she wished she had loved Gray Wing instead.
I feel like the Erins were building up Jagged Peak and Rainswept Flower to be mates with how she was always trying to help and defend him after his accident. But then they were like, nope, change my mind. Just kill Rainswept Flower and pretend Jagged Peak didn't have feelings for her at all by giving him Holly. I'm sad because that couple had so much potential to be adorable.
The same happened with Fox and Falling Feather. Just axed down Fox before the couple could go any further. It even states in the bonus scene of the The Sun Trail that "He seemed smitten with Falling Feather." and another quote says that "Fox was gazing at Falling Feather with the same intensity, as if he couldn't tear his glance away."
And I can't help but believe that Petal loved Clear Sky. She was just so incredibly loyal and devoted to him.
Wow. I'm just so obsessed with cats liking each other. That's all I ever think about with non canon stuff. Anyway, do you agree with any of this stuff or naw?
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Post by Lady of the Emblem on Nov 1, 2017 15:46:42 GMT -5
I hate Clear Sky so much, that words cannot describe in great detail on how much hatred I have inside.......
Clear x Storm is dumb, just like Clear x Star. All of Clear's relationships suck except for Bright Stream.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 1, 2017 15:54:36 GMT -5
I wish that Petal and Clear Sky had ended up together. They had a lot of chemistry together in my opinion, and it makes a whole lot more sense than Clear Sky and Star Flower. Star Flower should have been mates with Thunder. Despite their history, they could have worked past it and built a good relationship. And once again, it makes more sense than Thunder and Violet Dawn. I would have preferred Thunder ending up with a character who actually has personality and has been built up a bit than some random cat who was shoved in at the last moment just because.
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#FF55A3
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Apricity
Bravelands is too slept on.
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Post by Apricity on Nov 1, 2017 16:06:23 GMT -5
I wish that Petal and Clear Sky had ended up together. They had a lot of chemistry together in my opinion, and it makes a whole lot more sense than Clear Sky and Star Flower. Star Flower should have been mates with Thunder. Despite their history, they could have worked past it and built a good relationship. And once again, it makes more sense than Thunder and Violet Dawn. I would have preferred Thunder ending up with a character who actually has personality and has been built up a bit than some random cat who was shoved in at the last moment just because. Saaame. And please no hate, anyone reading this, but I believe Star Flower didn't love Clear Sky and just wanted to have him as her mate because he was a leader. And the same could be said for Slate except she's better than Violet Dawn with more personality but I think I can put them both in the same category of just being there to be mates for the main characters. But I actually wouldn't have wanted Thunder with Star Flower either because I just think she would want him because of him being leader which he wasn't at the time. I feel like Violet Dawn and Thunder could have been better if he didn't love her on sight and maybe she did more. |
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Post by Lady of the Emblem on Nov 1, 2017 16:33:39 GMT -5
I wish that Petal and Clear Sky had ended up together. They had a lot of chemistry together in my opinion, and it makes a whole lot more sense than Clear Sky and Star Flower. Star Flower should have been mates with Thunder. Despite their history, they could have worked past it and built a good relationship. And once again, it makes more sense than Thunder and Violet Dawn. I would have preferred Thunder ending up with a character who actually has personality and has been built up a bit than some random cat who was shoved in at the last moment just because. Saaame. And please no hate, anyone reading this, but I believe Star Flower didn't love Clear Sky and just wanted to have him as her mate because he was a leader. And the same could be said for Slate except she's better than Violet Dawn with more personality but I think I can put them both in the same category of just being there to be mates for the main characters. But I actually wouldn't have wanted Thunder with Star Flower either because I just think she would want him because of him being leader which he wasn't at the time. I feel like Violet Dawn and Thunder could have been better if he didn't love her on sight and maybe she did more. I agree with you on the Star Flower thing...But I think Slate genuinely cared for Gray Wing and he for her. Star Flower and Clear Sky are both horrible and no amount of forced "redemption" will change that. Star Flower's "redemption" was SO fake and came off as forced. |
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#FF55A3
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Apricity
Bravelands is too slept on.
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Post by Apricity on Nov 1, 2017 16:40:36 GMT -5
Saaame. And please no hate, anyone reading this, but I believe Star Flower didn't love Clear Sky and just wanted to have him as her mate because he was a leader. And the same could be said for Slate except she's better than Violet Dawn with more personality but I think I can put them both in the same category of just being there to be mates for the main characters. But I actually wouldn't have wanted Thunder with Star Flower either because I just think she would want him because of him being leader which he wasn't at the time. I feel like Violet Dawn and Thunder could have been better if he didn't love her on sight and maybe she did more. I agree with you on the Star Flower thing...But I think Slate genuinely cared for Gray Wing and he for her. Star Flower and Clear Sky are both horrible and no amount of forced "redemption" will change that. Star Flower's "redemption" was SO fake and came off as forced. The Slate and Gray Wing thing I find cute but I so prefer him with Turtle Tail. And I really want to know what went down when Slate died and went to StarClan and Gray Wing is with Turtle Tail there though. I do think Star Flower was bad but I love her because of how unique she is. She just acts all innocent and pretty the whole time and I'm like "Ooh, you shneaky, manipulative kitty you." |
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Post by Lady of the Emblem on Nov 1, 2017 16:44:11 GMT -5
I agree with you on the Star Flower thing...But I think Slate genuinely cared for Gray Wing and he for her. Star Flower and Clear Sky are both horrible and no amount of forced "redemption" will change that. Star Flower's "redemption" was SO fake and came off as forced. The Slate and Gray Wing thing I find cute but I so prefer him with Turtle Tail. And I really want to know what went down when Slate died and went to StarClan and Gray Wing is with Turtle Tail there though. I do think Star Flower was bad but I love her because of how unique she is. She just acts all innocent and pretty the whole time and I'm like "Ooh, you shneaky, manipulative kitty you." I hate Star Flower FOR being a manipulative and lying snake xD |
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#FF55A3
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Apricity
Bravelands is too slept on.
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Post by Apricity on Nov 1, 2017 17:36:00 GMT -5
The Slate and Gray Wing thing I find cute but I so prefer him with Turtle Tail. And I really want to know what went down when Slate died and went to StarClan and Gray Wing is with Turtle Tail there though. I do think Star Flower was bad but I love her because of how unique she is. She just acts all innocent and pretty the whole time and I'm like "Ooh, you shneaky, manipulative kitty you." I hate Star Flower FOR being a manipulative and lying snake xD And it seems her act is so well that even the readers believe she is a good guy. I'm not saying other peoples' opinion of her is wrong. It's just a joke. XD |
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Post by Jaysnow on Nov 1, 2017 17:41:28 GMT -5
I'm pretty sure she liked Gray Wing before she met Clear Sky as well. You don't just say that without romantic feelings.
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#FF55A3
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Apricity
Bravelands is too slept on.
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Post by Apricity on Nov 13, 2017 15:08:16 GMT -5
Bump.
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Post by โ
Maplefrostโ
on Nov 13, 2017 15:52:02 GMT -5
Imo, the only cat Clear Sky had actual real chemistry with wasn't even a cat that was his mate before, which was Petal.
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Post by Tas on Nov 13, 2017 16:07:09 GMT -5
I'm pretty sure she liked Gray Wing before she met Clear Sky as well. You don't just say that without romantic feelings. |
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Wolfdusk
"Can you move your seat up?" "No."
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Post by Wolfdusk on Nov 13, 2017 22:24:11 GMT -5
Tbh I just wish Star Flower had actually been a villain, I agree that her redemption seemed forced and that's exactly why quite a few people theorized, including me, that Star Flower was a traitor after all by the end of A Forest Divided before Path of Stars came out. Her relationship with Clear Sky felt so underdeveloped just like his other ones (although I thought Clear x Bright was okay) and it would have been so much more interesting if Star Flower actually lied to them again and had just been using Clear Sky the whole time. Instead it all just felt really fake to me, even now, and it just increases my dislike for her and Clear Sky. I was also a major Clear x Petal supporter so I was really upset when she died, great potential couple wasted. :/ Same for Jagged x Rainswept.
So basically, if I could have changed anything, Clear x Storm and Thunder x Violet would have had more development, Rainswept Flower and Petal would have lived and become mates with Jagged Peak and Clear Sky respectively, Petal would have been SkyClan's first deputy, and Star Flower would have been single and a villain like One Eye. As for Gray Wing, I actually really liked both Gray x Turtle and Gray x Slate so I wouldn't have changed those.
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Post by Jaysnow on Nov 13, 2017 22:30:48 GMT -5
gray wing and tall shadow would have made a nice ship. dotc had a lot of glanced at but never lived up to full potential ships. Yes please |
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#FF55A3
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Apricity
Bravelands is too slept on.
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Post by Apricity on Nov 14, 2017 23:27:53 GMT -5
Bump.
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Frost
The shortest distance between two points is a straight line in the opposite direction
Pronouns: They/them/he/her
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Post by Frost on Nov 15, 2017 2:22:20 GMT -5
Despite all of this, I fell in love with the Dawn of the Clans series, and upon finishing it, I have not touched another books since. I have read the original series, The New Prophecy, I skipped The Power of Three because I could not find the first book anywhere, and it's too late now, I pretty much HATED Omen of the Stars, and after reading a lot of Super Editions, I happened upon DotC. Upon finishing it, I feel oddly satisfied somehow. I am not hating on A Vision of Shadows at all, but I feel as if it is... unnecessary? Idk.  |
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Post by Maplestone360 on Nov 15, 2017 14:12:51 GMT -5
I hate Clear Sky so much, that words cannot describe in great detail on how much hatred I have inside....... Clear x Storm is dumb, just like Clear x Star. All of Clear's relationships suck except for Bright Stream. |
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