Post by FirecloudWind on Aug 11, 2016 17:36:50 GMT -5
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You guys want to see my fine writing in the making?
TeamTDM members who read this story, don't come after me for my choices for the story. It is my first attempt at writing a DanTDM adventure.
Who wants to see Chapter 1? It's short,muddled, and I think it is bad, but as the chapters go on, the story smooths out, so don't bail out on me. Give me until Chapter 5. That's when the story started to get smoothly going.
And in one of the chapters, I changed Tuna the Skeleton Cat's name to Reaper. Get it? Cause Dan's dog Grim? And Reaper? Huh?
*chirp chirp. Chirp chirp*
Forget it. I'll go get Chapter 1....
Chapter 1:Meeting Her
One day in the Lab, DanTDM, Dr. Trayaurus, and Grim the Skeleton Dog were waiting for the arrival of the newest member of TeamTDM, who would be living with them from now on.
"Ugh, when will they be here?" Trayaurus asked in his Villager Voice.
"Trayaurus, be patient, it could be a long travel for them." Dan said. He then turned to Grim, "And Grim, when she gets here, you be nice to her cat and dog. "
"Hey Trayaurus? Did I tell you that her cat is just like Grim?" he asked.
"No."
"Well she has a cat, and one day, when she was going to name it, it accidentally activated one of her machines. She invents stuff like you, although she should have cat-proofed it. It exploded and the cat turned into a pile of bones. She started working on a revival machine with her pet Border Collie (modded), Sidekick (name of my Border Collie that passed away a few years back Waaaah! ) and it revived her cat into a skeleton cat. She then named her cat Tuna because she loves tuna sandwiches." Dan explained.
"Did someone say tuna sandwiches?" A voice said after opening the door.
"Kaida!" Dan said giving the newcomer a high five. "Trayaurus, I'd like you to meet KaidaTDM."
"Dr. Trayaurus! It is very nice to meet a fellow inventor." She said very brightly.
"TDM?" he asked.
"TheDiamondMineCat." she explained.
"Minecart?"
"No, MineCat, no 'r'"
Dan's stomach growled. "Sorry," he said. "I guess I'm kinda hungry."
"You like tuna?" Kaida asked. A skeleton cat meowed at her foot. " No, sweetie, not you, the fish." she giggled.
"Awww....she's so cute! She's just like grim," Dan said. "Trayaurus, what do you think?"
" I think now we have two Grims. Both really cute Grims." he said. Kaida and Dan started laughing. Barking came from behind Dan.
"Oh, is this grim?" she asked. Dan nodded. "Hi Grim! Would you like to meet my dog?"
Bark! Grim said. "Yes is what he said." Dan explained.
Kaida whistled and a Border Collie ran to her. "Grim meet Sidekick. Sidekick, meet Grim."
Both dogs started running in a circle, Sidekick chasing Grim's tail and Grim chasing Sidekick's.
"They like each other!" Dan said. "Tuna sandwiches, anyone?"
Dan got the sandwiches ready, and noticed his tuna looked a little different. But he thought it was a different species. Everyone ate, and Dan showed Kaida where she would sleep, and got two pet beds ready for Tuna and Sidekick.
"Thanks Dan." Kaida said, adjusting her DanTDM goggles Dan gave her a while back. "See you in the morning!"
"Good Night, Kaida."
Everyone went to bed, not knowing that someone had eaten a tuna carrying a minecraft illness known as Pixel Pox. Tomorrow will tell.
See? I told you it's cringey at start, and Kaida isn't actually the girl's name. (WHAT?!) HERE'S ANOTHER ONE...
Chapter 2: Tour Ends in Trouble
"Kaida!" a villager spoke, waking the said person up.
"Oh, good morning, Trayaurus." she said. "What's up?"
"Dan's still asleep," he said, "so I thought I'd give you a tour of the treasure room, and you could meet my mom."
"That'd be great!"
So they went to the secret treasure room. Trayaurus showed her everything, but Kaida paused on the way to Trayaurus' Mum's house. She stood in front of the 'DanTDM gets sick' room. "Hey, do you think Dan could get sick again?"
"could."
"Let's just hope it won't be Pixel Pox." she said.
"Pixel Pox?" Trayaurus asked.
"It's a Minecraft sickness where you get red squares all over your body and fevers past 107, and involuntary movement." Kaida explained. "But the sickness is rare and has a cure that WON'T TURN YOU INTO A MUTANT! "
"oops."
"So far, the known recent illnesses have been me, cured, and Denton, not cured!" Kaida said.
"Serves him right for kidnapping my son!" Trayaurus' mom said."You must be Kaida Dan's told me about you."
"Really? Was it true you got turned into a witch?"
"Yes, but Dan cured me. "
"But she ad a free apple and making my nose turn-" Trayaurus said, being cut off a by a scream.
"Green." he finished.
"That sounded like Dan!"
When all three got to the surface, they saw a figure wrapped in a blanket, shivering.
"Dan?" Kaida asked, reaching for the blanket.
"NO!" he said, backing away. " I don't want to get you sick, too!"
"Sick? Dan, what are you talking about?"
He brought the blanket off his face, showing that his face was covered in red squares. His face was flushed, and sweat ran down his forehead.
"Pixel Pox!" Kaida gasped.
Dan had a small bout of coughing. "What?!" he choked, breaking off with more coughing. He sank down onto his knees. Kaida got down on her knees, and brought her hands to his face. "I don't know how you got it, but once again, the great DanTDM has gotten sick." she said.
Dan's eyes closed, and he passed out. Kaida took him and cradled him in her arms. "How could you have gotten Pixel Pox?" She whispered, tears streaming down her face. Suddenly it dawned on her. "This is all my fault." she cried. She lifted Dan up, and laid him in his bed. "This is all my fault!" she sobbed.
Chapter 3: Dealing With Pixel Pox and Kaida's Revealed
"How is it your fault?" Tray's Mum asked.
"Because, well, uh-" Kaida stuttered.
"Exactly. Pixel Pox is usually caught from eating something with miscolored pixels." She said "It can't be your fault."
"The tuna..." Dan moaned.
"Dan!" Kaida rushed to his side. "What about the tuna?"
"The pixels...messed up...thought it was...different...species..." He moaned.
"You didn't think to ask me, did you?" She huffed.
"No...I...did...not."
"Just our luck...because one of the ingredients has died off for the year and isn't in stock in any stores." Kaida said.
"Can't Mumm use her magic?"
"Pixel Pox cannot be cured through magic." she said.
"So, he's stuck like this?" Trayaurus asked.
"No, he will have to fight off the sickness for now until I can find something to soothe him." Kaida said running her hand through Dan's hair.
"Blaze..." he moaned. "Blazing Star..."
"Hush...don't talk." Kaida cooed. "Get some rest...you'll feel better."
"I hope."
"I heard that. " Trayaurus said."
That's night everyone barely slept. Dan kept coughing and throwing up and calling for his friends because he felt so bad. At one point he felt so sick he was afraid to sleep.
In the morning everyone was exaughsted , except for Dan, he was in a fitful sleep. Kaida was giving him stuff she made herself for his cough, the same thing every time, coltsfoot, catmint, tansy, and some petals of a flower called the Blazing Star. It seemed to help, but still, Dan gradually grew worse and worse, his fever kept rising, and he had so many nightmares, so Kaida never left his side.
He looked like he was halfdead. His face was as pale as could be, apart from his bright red cheeks. His hair was all over the place, except for the smoothed down place where his goggles had been, since Kaida removed them.
He let out a soft moan and opened his eyes, they were glazed with pain but bright with fever. "Katie..." he groaned. "Is that you?"
Kaida her real name be spoken and looked down at her sick friend. "Yes, it is." she murmured, placing a cold wet cloth on his head. "You had a dream didn't you?"
"Yes...Denton killed one of your sisters, her..." he drew in a shaky breath. "...her name was Kaida, if you hadn't tossed me the Inferno, I... could have been killed and you as well."
"We drove him out, and I told you I was Kaida." she said. "You probably can figure out the rest."
"And...in one of my dreams, I found a second cure for the Pixel Pox...it's real." He moaned.
"What is it?"
He said it so softly, Katie could just make out what he said.
"The Blazing Star."
(warning you guys now, there's a song in this chapter right at the beginning. And we get some Point-of-Views!)
Dan's POV
The moment I spoke the second cure, I closed my eyes so I could sleep. I was brought to the familiar place of my dreams. The brightly lit lush green enclousure, surrounded by a sheer rock wall covered with plants. The waterfall cascaded down into the calm, wide pool, but when I wanted it to be night, it was so calm and serene when the moon reflected the water. A light bit of the fever had followed me in ever since I became ill, but when I slept peacefully, I swam in the waters of the Moonpool, because when the moon reflected it, I always felt like I wasn't alone.
When I sat on the edge of the water, I sang a song I made when I felt happy and relaxed.
When I am here,
I feel no fear,
I don't cry,
Because I'll fly,
I'll fly,
I'll fly to the end of the sky,
Even if I can't, I'll try,
I'll try to fly,
and there,
is always life
when they came in my world
and made the stars align.
The colors,
they are so bright,
when I spead my wings
to take off and fly,
I'll fly,
I'll fly to the end of the sky
Even if I can't I'll try,
I'll try to fly.
I'll try to fly
I
Will
Try
To
Fly!
Clapping came from behind me. I turned to see Katie, who was surrounded by an aura.
"How did you get in my dream?" I said.
"You forget, I was raised in SilverBlood, the Clan of Dream Guardians." she replied.
"I remember that, and our training lessons."
Her face lit up. "I was hoping you'd say that!" She tossed me Inferno, my fire sword.
We trained until it was time to wake up, and Katie needed to wake up.
Because I had gotten worse.
Much worse.
I woke up in a feverish state, much worse. Pain had wracked my body, and I was swimming in sweat.
Panic flooded my thoughts. I barely had the strength to move. Grim whimpered at the foot of my bed and nudged his bony head beneath my hand. Trayaurus was standing over me, not sure what to do to help me. His mother had to do the work instead.
Then, a scream split the pain-thick air.
"DENTON! DENTON NO!"
At the mention of the traitorous Denton, I found the strength to get up and bolt (well, 'limp quickly' best fits) to the Testing Chamber.
I saw the glass windows were shattered and Tuna licking a lifeless-looking red-and-yellow-haired girl, with Katie missing and a ransom note on the floor. The sight made me feel dizzy.
" Katie..." I moaned "Denton's got KatieTDM!"
(SummerTDM POV)In thoughts...
I remember when Denton attacked the base, I saw how great and powerful he was after he killed Kaida, she was the strongest of us all. After DanTDM got rid of him, my bratty sister Katie had us add TDM to our names. What an idiot she was. But that night,I left a note saying I would join with Denton and they can't stop me. When I found Denton, he agreed to take me in, because I had worked for Trayaurus's mother in the past.
One day, we decided when my sister came to Dan's lab to move in, we'd grab her and lure Dan into our trap, but the plan was even better now! Since Dan had the Pixel Pox, the more time Dan spent up and about, the weaker he'd become. Denton made the hideout far enough to the point where Dan would probably collapse on arrival. This gave us the opportunity we wanted. We had my family captured and waiting back at Denton's. We only had one problem...
Aly and Mega. They were still out there, they could ruin everything! This could go wrong! Once I woke up, I'd take TeamTDM straight to Denton. When Dan was sick, he usually gave in quicker. Easy as ever.
(Present Day, same POV)
As I woke up, Dan helped me up,but I pretended to look scared. Tray's Mom was here too! Perfect! She'd believe me!
"Summer? Denton had you?" She asked.
I nodded. "He's got Katie! I can lead you to his hideout, but there's not much time left! He plans to use mind control on her to enslave her!" That's the only truth I know so far.
"You know this girl?" Dan asked the witch with a weak voice.
Weaker than I thought.
"Yes, she does, Summer worked for her until she left to care for her baby sister." Trayaurus said.
Forgot about you Trayaurus, you were barely there half the time!
"Baby sister?" Dan breathed.
"KatieTDM. She was no older than 3 when Maria died. When Kaida died, she was 10..." I said.
"Kaida died?" The two villagers asked. Still using her name, I see.
"Katie took her name, as Kaida didn't have much freedom." Dan explained. "She was sick. Like Jemma." (Reference to Jemma's Chrohn's Disease)
"Wait! 10? THAT WAS THREE YEARS AGO! SHE'S ONLY A TEENAGER! SHE'S GOT MENTAL ISSUES! THIS...is...bad..." Dan panicked.
"Katie's ADHD is going to give Denton a hard time." I giggled
"Oh yeah..." Dan laughed weakly.
BACK AT DENTON'S LAB...
"Shut up!" Denton screamed.
"NO!" Katie yelled back.
"Quit talking, you're driving me crazy."
"NO!"
"STOP SAYING NO!"
"NO!"
"*sigh*please?"
"OK"
"Good."
"You look like a narwhal." (Ross from SkyDoesMinecraft reference)
"SHUT UP!" Denton screamed.
"NO!"
BACK TO SUMMER'S POV
"Come on, I'll lead you to Denton's hideout." I said, walking out through the broken window.
"Let's go!" Dan said, stumbling after us.
I noticed Sidekick was coming too. That dog and I were enemies. Just don't attack me, and you won't die, mutt.
No one noticed the evil grin that spread across my face, my eyes flashed blood red briefly, and my face was concealed in shadow by my hair.
Just you wait and see, Daniel Middleton, I thought. wait and see
