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Post by ѕρσттεdѕнιммεя on Oct 11, 2017 22:05:19 GMT -5
[ good night! ]
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Post by 𝚌𝚊𝚛'𝚊'𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚗 on Oct 11, 2017 22:07:09 GMT -5
feel free to ask me anything your curious about, and ill answer to the best of my ability : 00 but nothings been disrespectful at all, so its all good! ill let you know if something is particularly incorrect or smth !
and yeah, shota is just a shorthand- if you google, wikipedia even redirects to shotacon, which i didnt know it did tb.hh...
and im gonna start reading the starter now!! znyoom
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Post by gingercut on Oct 11, 2017 22:10:18 GMT -5
Goodnight~! ![:D](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/Zk1a5XUEHw6Q8FG1L5Qy.gif) Hope to see you tomorrow fam ![:)](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/lNtnPuxeCzkaKMNYVXVv.gif) And yoooo, bad quality??? You went above and beyond with the starter!!!! I think I'll try to do my chars' pov during the opening, but I'm sorry if it sucks in comparison to yours D;)
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Post by 𝚌𝚊𝚛'𝚊'𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚗 on Oct 11, 2017 22:11:09 GMT -5
^^^ that was a solid starter! heres to hoping my fried brain salad can vomit something worth while to read, aha
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gingercut
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Post by gingercut on Oct 11, 2017 22:21:48 GMT -5
Actually jk. I'll update that post later, but right now my brain just can't seem to come up with anything good for the life of me, so I'll just continue off of yours!)
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Post by ѕρσттεdѕнιммεя on Oct 11, 2017 22:24:08 GMT -5
[ your starters do not have to be like that in the least, so don't push yourselves too hard! i'm happy that you both approved of it. ]
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Post by 𝚌𝚊𝚛'𝚊'𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚗 on Oct 11, 2017 22:29:53 GMT -5
haha okeoke ill try to get it posted asap! : O
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gingercut
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Post by gingercut on Oct 11, 2017 22:36:23 GMT -5
Cold. That's the first thing Guo Daiyu Felt when the sensation of goosebumps prickled any exposed flesh. She was somewhere very dark, and very cold, and it was extra uncomfortable.
After a few heartbeats of consciousness and idly wondering where she was, the second sensation immediately hit Daiyu hard when a red hot pain exploded across her face. "Uhhnnn ..." she let out a soft groan, her voice muffled from landing face-down on what she quickly registered as wooden flooring.
The pain almost immediately dimmed down to a rhythmic throbbing from between her eyes however when her brain creaked and whirred into mostion. She realized she must have fallen, and managed to obtain an injured nose.
Her hands slid across the rough wood, and she pushed herself to her knees with a grunt. She could make out little black drops hitting the floor in the darkness, and immediately knew her nose was bleeding. Gritting her teeth, she placed her fingers to the tender spot with a wince, though the lack of crookedness proved it most likely wasn't broken. 'Just bruised ...' she thought with a relaxed sigh.
However, as Daiyu's hands lowered back down into her lap, the hairs on the back of her neck raised. Her muscles tensed as she took in her surroundings, her brain immediately getting to work on figuring out where she was and why she was here.
She sat in what appeared to be a classroom, although it was run-down and extremely messy. She could not only smell the rotting wood and decaying furniture, but she could see it as well. And yet, everything looked frozen, as if stuck in time ...
The very atmosphere seemed to shift, when the memories of what happened exploded behind Daiyu's eyes with a 'BANG!'
She sucked in an involuntary gasp, the sound sharp as she hugged herself. She and her friends had taken part in a charm with the idea of being linked together forever. Everything seemed alright, then everything seemed all wrong. The very floor had rippled beneath her feet, while the school itself seemed to crumble. One-by-one the planks of wood beneath their feet had been ripped away by a sudden vortex, a rip in their reality as it sucked them into the one she was in now.
The screams. The confusion. The FEAR ...
A flicker of movement in the corner of Daiyu's eye pulled her back to the present, and her attention shifted to the two beings coinhabiting the room with her. She barely registered the shaking in her hands as she clung to the hope that her friends were okay. She immediately squinted her eyes, quickly identifying one as one of the Kishimura twins, and the other as Nakamura Keiko. Although the latter seemed to be unconscious ...
Still, she shifted closer to the two. Judging by the fact that this twin seemed fairly concerned about his classmate, she figured it would be safe to assume that this was Satoshi. "A-Ah, Kishimura-kun, are you alright ..?" She asked once she was within arms-length of the two.
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Post by 𝚌𝚊𝚛'𝚊'𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚗 on Oct 11, 2017 22:48:43 GMT -5
I THINK I LOST ALL MY WORK HHHH
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Post by 𝚌𝚊𝚛'𝚊'𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚗 on Oct 11, 2017 22:49:05 GMT -5
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by 𝚌𝚊𝚛'𝚊'𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚗 on Oct 11, 2017 22:49:52 GMT -5
this is it. this is how i die
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Post by ѕρσттεdѕнιммεя on Oct 11, 2017 22:50:19 GMT -5
[ oh no! i'm sorry to hear that. i have had that happen to me quite a bit and that's why i'm so paranoid that i tend to copy all my work before i post or after ten minutes of working into it. ]
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gingercut
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Post by gingercut on Oct 11, 2017 22:50:49 GMT -5
WHHHAAAAATTT DOO YOU MEEEAANNNNNN!?!! *panics at your panic*)
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Post by 𝚌𝚊𝚛'𝚊'𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚗 on Oct 11, 2017 22:50:51 GMT -5
i am so. so sad because it was genuinely Beautiful and i was So Ready. Damnit
i will rewrite.. sadly
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Post by 𝚌𝚊𝚛'𝚊'𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚗 on Oct 11, 2017 22:51:17 GMT -5
a weird Drop your files? thing came over my screen and i panic refreshed and. He is in woe. He is me.
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gingercut
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Post by gingercut on Oct 11, 2017 22:52:36 GMT -5
OH dang I am so sorry!! And yeah, I do the same because of way too much experience with fan fiction. I once wrote a 9,000+ word chapter and straight up lost everything because of bad wifi.)
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Post by 𝚌𝚊𝚛'𝚊'𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚗 on Oct 11, 2017 22:52:59 GMT -5
I LOST LITERALLY ALL OF IT MY COPY DELETED ITSELF TOO
i cant belIEve THiS
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gingercut
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Post by gingercut on Oct 11, 2017 22:55:28 GMT -5
DDDDD::
Let us take a moment of silence for the lost post.
.....
Rip)
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Post by 𝚌𝚊𝚛'𝚊'𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚗 on Oct 11, 2017 22:56:44 GMT -5
it was super long and i seriously don't feel like rewriting it and i am So Sorry. so prepare for dramatically shorter post that i am about to write up out of sorrow, grief and depression
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gingercut
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Post by gingercut on Oct 11, 2017 22:58:49 GMT -5
No it's fine!!! That 9,000 word chapter became like 1,500 after I lost it so I feel you. Besides, people liked it anyway so no worries ![:)](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/lNtnPuxeCzkaKMNYVXVv.gif) )
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Post by 𝚌𝚊𝚛'𝚊'𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚗 on Oct 11, 2017 23:27:23 GMT -5
Yuki's consciousness came to him in dark shapes.
Circles, triangles and squares spun and danced about his vision, and he blinked slowly in an attempt to clear the haze from his eyes. The shapes continued to float around, bouncing off the edges of his field of vision and making their way across his sight. Yuki was then acutely aware, suddenly, of something cold under him, a burning feeling in his shoulder, and the smell of something damp and rotting in spades.
The unexpected assault on his senses caused his brain to jump-start, and he pushed himself off the floor with great effort. Pain thrummed through his head and shoulder in a hearty pinch, and a parched groan escaped Yuki's lips.
The previous happenings came to him in quick snapshots; the charm, the hungering abyss beneath his feet, and the screams of his friends around him like hell's own personal choir.
The memories caused goosebumps to form along his arms, and Yuki felt a swirl of emotions begin to pit in his stomach as he began to recollect his conscious fully. Was everyone okay? Hurt? Dead? He remembered the twins being first to fall- he had attempted to reach out for the hand gripping the floorboard despite the paralysis in his own legs.
Of course, he wasn't able to pull them up in time. That was obvious, given the situation at hand.
Yuki had never been good with the occult, as he was one easily terrified by mere ghost stories. He had felt a chill of doubt about the charm itself, but it was supposed to be a bonding activity. Something to keep them friends forever, even if one of them was going away. It was supposed to be among the warm memories he had of the small room and of the love that he held for his friends.
It didn't turn out that way.
A nearby groan alerted Yuki, and he finally surveyed his surroundings. He found himself in a dark, dank classroom. There were broken desks and chairs littered around him, and holes in the floor similar to the one that had opened up in 2-11's floor. However, these were much smaller, and much less of a threat. Yuki lifted his hand to his shoulder as he gazed around, checking for broken bones or bleeding, and feeling relief at the sign of neither.
Movement caught his eye, and he turned his head slightly to inspect what it was. Yuki could faintly make out the shape of a body sprawled out on the floor uncomfortably. They were smaller in statue, but he couldn't help but tense regardless. He was in a foreign place, with a putrid smell in the air that reminded him of something dead. For all he knew, it could even be the dead thing in the room.
Or, it could be one of his friends.
That thought alone was enough to get him to muster up his courage and make his way towards the hopefully just unconscious person. Yuki's legs still felt heavy and useless, so he opted to crawl slowly towards them instead. "Hey, are you okay? Can you hear me?" His throat was more parched then he had expected, and his voice came out strained and weak. Yuki's brain quickly racked itself of the names of people he knew who were physically smaller, and he dryly swallowed. "Guo-san? Tachibana-san?" Yuki paused to swallow again, his throat beginning to itch uncomfortably from the lack of water. "Shiratori-san?"
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Post by 𝚌𝚊𝚛'𝚊'𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚗 on Oct 11, 2017 23:28:19 GMT -5
silly yuki, he had just noticed a moan/moving, and hes still like "oh hyikes what if its a DED BODY??????"
sorry if the quality is lacking ;;; i rushed so i could go lay in bed after my whole other post killed itself
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gingercut
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Post by gingercut on Oct 11, 2017 23:34:26 GMT -5
Why do you guys keep apologizing for bad quality??? This is awesome and priceless!!!! Geez mine SUCKED ugh I'm probably gonna add more later to boost my self esteem 😓😓😓😓😓
Anyways, he is adorable lol. Even in creepy situations. Now I shall replyyyy)
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Post by ѕρσттεdѕнιммεя on Oct 11, 2017 23:37:48 GMT -5
[ rip yuki, poor guy. ]
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Post by 𝚌𝚊𝚛'𝚊'𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚗 on Oct 11, 2017 23:59:27 GMT -5
he is a concerned bun
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Post by gingercut on Oct 12, 2017 0:25:14 GMT -5
The first thing that came to Shiratori Hiro's mind when he awoke was 'It's dark.'
But before he could wonder why, a sharp ringing broke through the silence of his subconscious as his senses began to wake. As the shrill noise pierced his brain, it began to warble and split into several different wavelengths until it turned into the human word known as "sound".
Unfortunately, the other functions of his brain seemed to take this as their cue to hastily follow along. Somewhere in the rush, the sensations tripped and fell. They seemed to crash into each other until they landed in a sloppy heap within his skull.
The first to arrive was after sound was touch, and along with it the pain that brought on a headache which rocked throughout his cranium. He could feel the cold hardwood flooring beneath his body, and the ache in his joints from laying in an unnatural position for far too long. Goosebumps from the cold seemed broke out across his body, the sensation prickling his skin in steady ripples.
As soon as he registered these facts, the pain seemed to flare up, along with the second sense called taste. The gross flavor of a dry mouth coated his tongue as a groan escaped his lips, although he didn't quite have the strength to move just yet. He grimaced when his ability to smell followed quickly after, the scent of mildew and decay hitting his sinuses head-on and mixing in with the flavor of the stale air that filled his lungs.
Still, in his struggle for consciousness, he hadn't noticed the presence of another person in the room with him until they called out to him.
"Shiratori-san?"
And as if a switch had been flipped, Hiro's eyes slowly began to open at the sound of Yuki's voice. 'Oh, so that's why it had been so dark.' He thought to himself as his vision finally returned. Upon seeing the darkened surroundings of what appeared to be a twisted version of their school, he didn't hesitate in struggling to a sitting position.
As he regained his bearings, the memories of what had happened filled his mind. The thrill of taking part in a mysterious charm. Feeling joy at the idea of being linked to his friends forever. The satisfaction of completing the ritual with success.
Then failure.
Thunder. Lightning. Darkness of a power outage. The chaos of crashing furniture and the heavy tremors that rippled the floor as the school seemed to be retching. The screams of those he held dearly when they were vomited into a pitch black vortex that ripped open beneath their feet ...
A jolt went down his spine as he realized the dire situation he and his friends were in. Was everyone else okay?
He peered around the darkness until he caught sight of whoever had called out to him. He quickly paired the silhouette with the voice and immediately gasped. "Nanase-kun, are you okay?" His voice came out shakier than he would have liked though, so he immediately continued talking. "How many times do I have to tell you; just call me Hiro."
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Post by gingercut on Oct 12, 2017 0:28:23 GMT -5
Omg this took so long but I am sO PROUD YESS ![:D](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/Zk1a5XUEHw6Q8FG1L5Qy.gif) I'm also definitely editing Daiyu's opening because geez I need to fix that ene)
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Post by ѕρσттεdѕнιммεя on Oct 12, 2017 0:50:10 GMT -5
[ ah, if you wish! ]
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Post by gingercut on Oct 12, 2017 1:15:06 GMT -5
WHOO! I fixed it, and it's SO much better now!!!)
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Post by ѕρσттεdѕнιммεя on Oct 12, 2017 1:41:35 GMT -5
[ i will admit, it is of a better quality than last time. would you like me to reply now or wait? ]
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