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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 3, 2017 16:23:02 GMT -5
dat bump
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Post by tiger beetle on May 3, 2017 20:11:57 GMT -5
I've read through chapter 10 so far and I really like it
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 3, 2017 20:20:32 GMT -5
I'm so glad you do! Thanks so much for doing this
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Post by tiger beetle on May 3, 2017 20:51:49 GMT -5
shoutout to Evil Me
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 3, 2017 20:58:36 GMT -5
Omg, I just realized XD That's the greatest thing ever, lol.
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Post by tiger beetle on May 3, 2017 21:03:03 GMT -5
Omg, I just realized XD That's the greatest thing ever, lol. there's also a character who shares a name with a prominent character in Ash to Ash which I think is funny
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 3, 2017 21:07:15 GMT -5
Who? I wouldn't consider it spoilers, so.... X3
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Post by tiger beetle on May 3, 2017 21:08:47 GMT -5
Who? I wouldn't consider it spoilers, so.... X3 Hollyheart literal Hollyleaf but since it's an au she gets a different name
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 3, 2017 21:15:35 GMT -5
Oh, nice XD Sounds fun ^.^
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 4, 2017 11:19:21 GMT -5
bump
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 4, 2017 12:20:53 GMT -5
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Post by Thornheart on May 4, 2017 15:33:43 GMT -5
Yes! Can't wait to read this! Woo!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 4, 2017 15:56:28 GMT -5
Please enjoy
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Post by Thornheart on May 4, 2017 17:14:08 GMT -5
Ohhh, mysterious! Keep up your awesome work!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 4, 2017 17:17:02 GMT -5
Thanks! I hope I can How are you feeling about Badgerfang?
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Post by Thornheart on May 4, 2017 17:33:01 GMT -5
I feel bad that his mentor was bulling him, and, well, he had to take it out on someone, right? I fell bad for the poor guy. <3 Poor Badgerfanf
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 4, 2017 18:15:29 GMT -5
Sadly, it's the case with most bullies. Badgerfang is no exception. But I really like the moment he had with Hollyheart.
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Post by Thornheart on May 4, 2017 18:25:06 GMT -5
Oh yeah! Sister-brother bonding moment! And then Badgerfang ruins it with the: "Are you crazy?" I was laughing so hard when I read that.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 4, 2017 18:46:19 GMT -5
Even if they had a moment, he's still Badgerfang XD
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 6, 2017 18:22:43 GMT -5
bump
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 7, 2017 18:51:21 GMT -5
bumpers
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 8, 2017 12:22:21 GMT -5
boop
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 8, 2017 13:56:24 GMT -5
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Post by Thornheart on May 8, 2017 14:08:03 GMT -5
Yessss! Reading now! I need to read it!!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 8, 2017 14:34:58 GMT -5
Enjoy! I think this one in particular is quite good because of what happens.
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Post by Thornheart on May 8, 2017 16:25:05 GMT -5
Ohhhh... it's gettin' real tense now!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 8, 2017 16:46:52 GMT -5
Yep, indeed it is! What do you think of it all, if I may ask? :3
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Post by Thornheart on May 8, 2017 17:04:19 GMT -5
Totally awesome! I think it's suspenseful; but in a good way. I love how you indulge with Hollyheart's emotions, and you make sure everyone knows what's going on. I can't wait to read on!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 8, 2017 17:22:42 GMT -5
Good! One of the main things I always try to do is portray exactly what's going on with Hollyheart in her mind and what she's feeling. It's also the only real reason I chose to write this all in first person POV. If you really pay attention, too, you can notice how the vocabulary and the way she speaks slowly gets to a higher level as she grows from a kit to an older cat. To know I'm doing everything well is really awesome, thanks
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Post by phantomstar57 on May 8, 2017 19:29:40 GMT -5
Hoping I have time to catch up his evening...days are flying by so fast. . . .I fear I may blink and wake up and find I'm 70. . .
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