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Post by Deleted on Sept 28, 2017 13:15:20 GMT -5
wip
This will be my thoughts on each chapter, because why the heck not? Do not post spoilers for a certain chapter until I post my mini-commentary on it, please.
Prologue -- 9-27 Well, interesting. I assume the starry cats are SkyClan. Is the medicine cat seeing them Puddleshine, maybe? I can't remember his colors. And who is the kit he is has with him? Not bad for an opening prologue, though it feels the same to every other prologue.
Chapter 1 -- 9/27 Welp. Not great, but not absolute trash, either. I feel like starting the book with Dovewing's "I'm pregnant and we need to leave cri" nonsense was a bit much. I feel like they could've started off the series in a better way, rather than just tossing that in like it's nothing. But, I wonder if the city that Dovewing dreamed about is where BloodClan used to roost? Or maybe the inner city, with BC setting up camp on the outskirts of the city.
Dude, that would be cool if BloodClan - or at least a milder, maybe somewhat nicer version- was still kicking, though I highly doubt that will happen.
And to finish, I hope to see FernxIvy in this book.
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Post by Jaysnow on Sept 28, 2017 13:18:24 GMT -5
If a Warriors prologue doesn't open with StarClan cats, then something's not normal.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 28, 2017 13:21:59 GMT -5
If a Warriors prologue doesn't open with StarClan cats, then something's not normal. This is accurate.
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Post by Lightflame on Sept 28, 2017 13:38:04 GMT -5
Nice, I like liveblogs.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 28, 2017 18:13:10 GMT -5
Chapter 1 commentary posted.
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