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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Sept 11, 2017 13:50:06 GMT -5
 JOINING
Hey there, and welcome to the joining page for Ｌａ Ｆｌｅｕｒ! Please make sure you look over everything on the main page before you consider joining us. I look forward to roleplaying with you soon.
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Sept 11, 2017 13:53:40 GMT -5
 PREFIX LIST
All prefixes are allowed x2
A
Apple
B
Black
Blue
Bracken
Breeze
C
Cold
D
Dandelion
Dew
E
Elder
F
Fawn
Feather
Fog
Fox
G
Gilded
Ginger
Gobi
H
Hail
Hound
I
Ivy
J
Juniper
K
L
Lion
Loon
M
Morning
N
Night
O
P
Pine
Q
R
Rain
Raven
Rowan
Russet
S
Sage
Snow
Sorrel
Sparrow
Storm
Sweet
T
U
V
Velvet
W
Willow
Wind
Woodpecker
X
Y
Z
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Sept 11, 2017 14:09:21 GMT -5
 FLOWER LIST
All flowers are allowed x1 EXCEPT multicolored flowers (i.e roses) in which each color is x1
Taken flowers are in bold
Acacia
Secret love
Acanthus
Art
Aconite
Misanthropy
Agrimony
Thankfulness
Aloe
Grief
Almond
Promise
Amaranth (Globe)
Immortal love
Amaranth
Immortality
Amaryllis
Pride
Ambrosia
Love is reciprocated
Anemone
Forsaken, sickness (negative), anticipation, undying love
Angrec
Royalty
Anthurium
Hospitality, happiness, abundance
Apple blossom
Preference
Arborvitae
Everlasting friendship
Arbutus
You are the only one I love
Arum
faith and purity.
Asparagus foliage
Fascination
Asphodel
My regrets follow you to the grave
Aster
Symbol of love, daintiness, talisman of love, trusting
Azalea
Take care, temperance, fragile, gratitude, passion, Chinese symbols of womanhood
Baby's breath
Innocence, purity of heart
Bachelor button
Single blessedness, celibacy
Balm
Social intercourse or sympathy
Balsam
Ardent love
Balsamine
Impatience
Begonia
Beware, a fanciful nature
Bellflower
Unwavering Love
Bells of Ireland
Luck
Bird's-foot trefoil
Revenge
Bird of paradise flower
Liberty, magnificence, good perspective, faithfulness
Borage
Courage
Broom
Humility
Bumblebee Orchid
Industry
Buttercup
Riches
Camellia japonica
Unpretending excellence
Canterbury Bells
Gratitude
Carnation
general Fascination; distinction; love
red Deep romantic love, passion
green Secret symbol of the followers of Oscar Wilde
white Sweet and lovely, innocence, pure love, faithfulness
pink A woman's love, a mother's love
yellow Rejection, disdain, disappointment
purple Capriciousness, whimsical, changeable, unreliability
Mauve
Dreams of fantasy
striped Refusal
solid color Yes, affirmative
Celandine
Joys to come
Cherry blossom
A good education
Chestnut
Do me justice
China aster
Love of variety, fidelity
Chrysanthemum
red I love
yellow Precious one
Coreopsis
Always cheerful
Cowslip
Winning grace
Clove
Undying love
Clover
red Industry
white I promise
Columbine
The emblem of deceived lovers, ingratitude, faithlessness
Coriander
Zest for life; unstable
Crocus
Youthful joy; naive
Cypress
intelligence; sorrowful
Daffodil
affection; uncertainty
Dahlia
elegance; coldness
Red Dahlia grace; dishonesty/betrayal
Daisy
innocence; gullible
red humble; grief
Dandelion
strength; faces many hardships
Delphinium
levity/fun; intense attachments/obsession
Eglantine rose
helpful; sensitive
Elderflower
compassion; pompous
Fennel
ease of tongue; deceitful
Forget-me-not
pure love; short life span
Gardenia Secret love, joy, sweet love, good luck
joy; cannot keep secrecy
Geranium
determination; prone to wasted efforts
Gladiolus
honor; obsessively passionate
Gorse
unconditional love; turning a blind eye to wrongdoing
Heather purple
beautiful; solitary
white protective; misunderstood
Heliotrope
Devotion
Hibiscus
Rare and delicate beauty
Hollyhock
Ambition
Honeysuckle
Devoted affection, bonds of love
Hydrangea
Frigidness, heartlessness (negative), heartfelt gratitude for being understood
Iris
Good news
Ivy
Dependence, endurance, faithfulness
Jasmine
Unconditional and eternal love (in the Philippines)
Jonquil
Return my affection
Laurel
Ambition, success, renown
Laurestine
A token
Lavender
Devotion, distrust
Lemon blossom
Discretion
Lilac
purple First emotion of love
white Youthful innocence, memories
Lily
white Purity
scarlet High-souled aspirations
orange Desire, passion, hatred (negative)
Lily of the valley
Sweetness, humility, returning happiness, Trust
Linaria bipartita
Please notice my love/feelings for you
Lime blossom
Fornication
Lobelia
Malevolence
Lotus
Purity, chastity and eloquence; rebirth
Love lies bleeding
Hopelessness
Magnolia
Love of nature
Mallow
Consumed by love
Marigold
Pain and grief
Mayflower
Welcome
Mint
Suspicion
Moonflower
Dreaming of love
Morning glory
Love in vain
Mullein
Good-nature
Narcissus
Unrequited love, selfishness
Nasturtium
Patriotism
Nettle (stinging)
life and death, protection
Olive
Peace
Orchid
Refined beauty
Oxeye daisy
Patience
Pansy
Thoughts
Peach blossom
Long-life, generosity, and bridal hope
Pear blossom
Lasting friendship
Peony
Shame, bashfulness
Phlox
Harmony
Pitch pine blossom
Philosophy
Plum blossom
Beauty and longevity
Plumeria
Perfection, springtime, new beginnings
Primrose
Eternal love
Protea
Courage
Poppy
general Eternal sleep, oblivion, imagination
red Pleasure
white Consolation, dreams, modern, peace
yellow Wealth, success
Rainflower
I love you back, I must atone for my sins, I will never forget you
Rose
red True love
blue Mystery, attaining the impossible, love at first sight
white Silence or innocence, wistfulness, virtue, purity, secrecy, reverence and humility
black Death, hatred, farewell, rejuvenation or rebirth
yellow Friendship, jealousy, infidelity, apology, a broken heart, intense emotion, undying love
pink Grace
dark pink Gratitude
light pink Desire, passion, joy of life, youth, energy
burgundy Unconscious beauty
coral or orange Desire, passion
lavender (violet) Love at first sight
Rosemary
Remembrance
Rue
Regret, sorrow, repentance
Snowdrop
Consolation or hope
Star of Bethlehem
Atonement, reconciliation
Sunflower
Pure and lofty thoughts
Sweetbrier
Simplicity
Sweetpea
Gratitiude
Thorn-apple
Disguise
Thistle
Nobility, Warning
Thyme
Thriftiness
Tulip-tree
Fame
Tulip
red Undying love
purple Forever love
white One-sided love
yellow Hopeless love
Violet
blue Faithfulness
purple Daydreaming, Love between two women
white Modesty
Viscaria (Lychnis viscaria)
Invitation to dance
Willow (creeping)
Love forsaken
Wisteria
Welcoming
Witch-hazel
A magic spell
Jasmine
Love
Mistletoe
Used to signify a meeting place where no violence could take place
Zinnia
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Sept 11, 2017 14:11:50 GMT -5
 JOINING FORM
FORM
name 」role-player
birth gender & gender identification ● sexuality ● age ● flower
description of physicality and personality (no less than 4 sentences, no more than 6)
other (i.e history)
rank
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Sept 11, 2017 14:16:17 GMT -5
５ ❙ ＡＭ's Characters
Lionstar 」５ ❙ ＡＭ
dmab male ● pansexual ● 30 moons ● bird of paradise
This masculine of small height and compact muscle, ears big as his paws and eyes big and flaming, has a pelage of warm, molten gold with soft, darker tabby stripe decoration. White creates a pattern that that dribbles up his sides, against his chest and face, eyes bright, deep amber-shade of orange-gold. Young and spicy, he is very passionate about his work and quite self confident, lacking real arrogance, and with strict determination and focus on what he wants, intelligence as sharp as a gleaming sword. Even so, he can be ambitious, stubborn, fierce, and often cannot articulate his feelings, getting flustered or bashful. His blossoms decorate the back of his head and neck into his shoulder blades, his head topped by a crown of the orange-blue colors like a Greek wreath- or mischievous horns.
Born in Floraclan, Lionstar began life rather oddly, considering his mother was of clan and his father was not. The lone male met his kits only a few times when Loonwhisker allowed it, sneaking the kits out behind camp for the father to see his two golden children. Even as an apprentice, Lionstar was a burning flame, full of life and zeal- a little bossy at times- and a cat the younger looked up to and the older who saw him as someone with much potential. His vibrant blossoms along the back of his neck was the physical manifestation of that, and soon enough expanded to become a crown on his golden head as he climbed through the ranks to become leader of Floraclan.
leader
Gildedtongue 」５ ❙ ＡＭ
dmab male ● bisexual ● 38 moons ● gladiolus
Tall and muscled, he makes for a spectacular sight of graceful edges and lean curves, glossy fur a sultry dark cream shade that is offset by the darker brown-seal point color at his paws, tail, and a mask of his face that make his large deep blue eyes stand out all the more. Level-headed and calm with a refined grace, humble with a pleasing sprinkle of sassy humor, this masculine makes for an inspiring cat whose bravery serves his clan well. However, he can be too overprotective, far too selfless, and his wish to do well for others can leave his motives questionable as much as his willingness to try to see the good in everyone regardless of what they've done. His blossoms bloom upwards from his chest like a flower tucked into the front pocket of a suit jacket.
Born in Floraclan, Gildedtongue was raised alongside his brothers into the fabric of clan culture and community. Growing up he wasn't anything special and that suited him just fine. Endlessly supportive of his brothers, they are still the power trio of their younger days. When he became a warrior he became mates with Windblossom whom he loves with all of his heart and together had Pinepaw, Juniperpaw, and ___.
warrior
Fogdance 」５ ❙ ＡＭ
dfab male ● homosexual ● 28 moons ● morning glory
Structured delicately with hints of robust muscle beneath his velvet skin, this willowy and lean male has quite impressive athletic grace, compact and spindling and draped in pale silver fur dabbed by barely darker marbling, low-white creating whimsical patterns along his throat and stomach, his half-lidded gaze a yellow-green. Over time, Fogdance's sweetness and innocent grace has chipped away to become quiet, flirtatious, and incredibly focused on what he alone wants from life and pursuing his tasks with passion. Confident in himself at most points, he has a continual superiority complex and need to feel better than others, and he can be selfish and arrogant, moody and unfortunately aloof enough for it to be difficult to read him at some times, other times easily moved to anger or tears. His blossoms are threaded amongst the fur of his wispy tail, dripping off or curling around his flesh.
Like many others, Fogdance was born in Floraclan with his siblings. His exotic grace and demure sweetness drew many to him as he aged, attracting much romantic attention from males and females alike. His first love was Stagleap- who left for his childhood sweetheart. His second love was Knotwing- who died of mysterious illness. His third love was Mousescurry- who left when he grew bored. His fourth love was Applewhisker- who when he looked at Fogdance no longer saw the cat he'd fallen in love with. His fifth love was Flamecurl- who was not the leaving but the left, for Fogdance could no longer look into the mirror of a puddle and see a cat others wanted for anything more than his pretty face, and what was left of his heart let sweet Flamecurl go and live a life better than the silver male thought himself capable of giving.
rank
Woodpeckerpaw 」５ ❙ ＡＭ
dmab male ● asexual panromantic ● 6 moons ● white lilac
An average little thing, his physique doesn't stand out much from the regular life of a warrior, lean and lightly muscled, his big ears and button nose making his round face appear mouse-like, amber-brown eyes rather large. His fur is of a muted brown shade like that of wood bark, patterned by classic spotted tabby markings, a dab of white blaze from the top of his nose to his chin offsetting the landscape. Awkward with his uncoordinated movements and words, shy and submissive and easily jumping to nerves, he is a sweet boy despite being fairly self-conscious and entirely without bravery. Still, his determination is legendary, and he is friendly, helpful, and ready to serve. His blossoms are a delicate sleeve on his left foreleg, poking up between his toes like the vines wish to hold hands with him.
The youngest sibling of five, he is seen as the sweet little brother in the eyes of his sisters and brothers who dote upon him endlessly despite his weak embarrassment for being unable to stand up for himself like his siblings can. Trailing after his siblings, he never really had many goals, things he wanted to accomplish in life. Just to live the average life and move on- a simplistic view for a simple cat.
apprentice
Houndsnarl 」５ ❙ ＡＭ
dmab male ● pansexual ● 37 moons ● thorn apple
words
more words
warrior
Hickorybriar 」５ ❙ ＡＭ
dmab male ● homosexual ● 50 moons ● honeysuckle
words
more words
warrior
Blackbird」５ ❙ ＡＭ
dfab female ● heterosexual ● 24 moons ● red rose
Sleek and robust, this feminine is all liquid muscle and elegant curves, covered in smokey midnight black fur, slightly darker spotted tabby barely visible in the darkness of her pelage, her gaze one of delicate emerald green, Soft and spicy, she takes care of everyone with care and affection, detail-oriented and observant with a matured elegance about her. She is quite independent and can have a sharp tongue of sarcasm when provoked and she thrives on praise and nothing but the best for herself, in a sense a little dramatic. Her blossoms begin from between her front legs and travel down the middle of her stomach, blooming spread across her lower stomach.
From the very beginning, she was the leader of her own life, an independent little cat who cared deeply for others and for her own future. She built strong connections to the clan community, pampered by them as much as she pampered them. She was the little sweetheart of her family. That was, when one day, she moved her nest from the warrior's to the nursery. She offered no explanation other than the obvious- until her due date drew closer. Since then, she has let story slip that the father of her kits is not from Floraclan.
queen
Juniperpaw 」５ ❙ ＡＭ
dfab female ● pansexual ● 8 moons ● plum blossom
Languid is the word to describe this muscled, broad-faced, long-bodied creature with large, sweetly drooping pale blue eyes. Her color is of soft, pale light cream, offset only gently by the delicate blue-ink stains of her forelegs, tail, and mask of her face. Only a small smudge of white upon her chest changes the illusion of her into something real and graspable. A little too easygoing and laid-back, her calmness keeps her complexity hidden from others, her dry humor spicing things up a bit at times when she gets the energy- she just wants to float in water forever, hakuna matata. Her blossoms curl delicately from beneath her right jawline up behind her ear, petals bright like a tourist at the beach.
She was born in Floraclan to Windblossom and Gildedtongue alongside her siblings Pinepaw and ___
apprentice
Morningskies 」５ ❙ ＡＭ
dfab agender ● pansexual polyamorous ● 30 moons ● baby's breath
A cat of graceful arches and curves, a deep chest with muscled legs and flanks, big ears and high cheekbones. The pelage covering this nimble figure is of a pale golden cream color, darkening slightly with ticked tabby points, and decorated with low-white against the side of their face and cheek, brightening the pale yellow eyes. Quiet and languid, they move fluidly with their words and physicality, here for a good time rather than a long time. Even so, they can be selfish and deceitful, mischievous and flippant regarding the feelings of others, although there are a few who see the born sensitive and vulnerable side of them. Baby's breath have found their hold on this cat's brow ridges, their sprays falling over the eyes like a veil, hiding them from usual view.
Born in Floraclan alongside their much brighter sibling Lionstar, they made their own name for themselves. Side-by-side with their brother, Morningskies and Lionstar were quite the pair, with brother blazing the way and sibling sliding through the aftermath like a snake made of fog and mist, always together. Just as much of a flame as their brother, just as superior to others, they serve as the indirect deputy of the clan because of their closeness to their brother.
warrior
Loonwhisker 」５ ❙ ＡＭ
dfab female ● heteroflexible ● 50 moons ● amaryllis
She walks like a warrior queen, body athletic and limbs long, head held high to brandish sharp jade eyes. Her pelt is a proud dilute white color, a large patch covers her head and wobbles down her body to eventually thin and disappear, a husky pale brown gradient, furthermore offset by blacker patches alongside it. Smart as a whip, keen, and self-assured, her gait speaks power. Time has made her sensitive and emotionally tired and her sometimes bossy attitude pairs with her feelings of time slipping through her toes, making her become more domineering and paranoid of failure. Her blossoms blanket her right shoulder like a pad of armor.
Born in Floraclan, Loonwhisker was the only kit of her parents, and she gave them much grief with her conceited nature and arrogant ways. Feeling herself confined by camp walls, she frequented the outside, and came into contact with a cat who lacked any flowers at all. Bewildered and annoyed, she bickered at him while he simply smiled and laughed and teased. They grew closer and closer still until eventually, Loonwhisker was forced into moving into the nursery instead, where she had her two children: Lionstar and Morningskies. She allowed them to meet their father when they were very young, but the meetings eventually stopped, and the warrior queen has yet to divulge why, although her eyes always garner a sad look to them when asked.
warrior
Other prefixes: Ivystep, Dandelion, Hail, Velvet, Elder
Other flowers: Sunflower, Forget-Me-Not
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Sept 11, 2017 14:20:50 GMT -5
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Non-binary
exceed
yo i like cats
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Post by exceed on Sept 11, 2017 16:43:34 GMT -5
ᶤᶰᵏ ᵃᶰᵈ ᵇᵒᶰᵉ's Characters
Nightfinch 」ᶤᶰᵏ ᵃᶰᵈ ᵇᵒᶰᵉ
dfab female ● homosexual ● 54 moons ● mint
A large pitch black molly with startling golden eyes. An intimidating individual to most cats in FloraClan, Nightfinch is a strict cat that follows her moral code strictly. She is to-the-point and brisk, either on the move or still and in the shadows like a predator. If anyone wishes to advance their combat knowledge, she is the cat to go to- however harsh her methods, she isn't the most skilled fighter in the clan for nothing despite the Clan's relaxed attitude. She will speak to anyone if spoken to, but prefers to not initiate conversation herself. Her flowers start from her front left paw and storm upwards, almost like they try to devour her leg whole.
She was a brutally honest cat back when she was young, just like she is now. Age and loss have made her sharper- from her sister Nettleheart falling sick and dying to her parents off and leaving when she and her sister were just apprentices. Many pity her, but she has no use for pity- her whole life is now in the service of FloraClan.
warrior
Sagewhisker 」ᶤᶰᵏ ᵃᶰᵈ ᵇᵒᶰᵉ
dfab male ● bisexual ● 37 moons ● rue
A dark grey dappled cat with pale green eyes. He's almost like a walking contradiction- quiet but like a raging fire, mature as an elder but naive as a kit occasionally, playful even as he retreats into his shell. He's not quite bipolar, but Sagewhisker has trouble with how he presents himself, trying to still find himself even as apprentices are doing the same. The appearance he puts on for the most time would be one of a polite and helpful cat- one that most approve of, even if not many are close to him. Sagewhisker, while he's polite and friendly, fears to care for more than his close family. His flowers are small and almost nonexistent, lavender and proper, only a few tiny ones clustered behind his left ear.
Born into FloraClan, Sagewhisker was an unnoticeable cat unless his sibling was concerned. Always a background character, most don't care to do anything other than pass their eyes over him- his sister was the beauty, the ideal cat, the amazing hunter, but he never held it against her. His status is one he does, in fact, like, even though there's not much in the way of conversation. He cares for his sister Windblossom deeply as well as his nieces and nephews- Pinepaw, Juniperpaw, and _.
warrior
Windblossom 」ᶤᶰᵏ ᵃᶰᵈ ᵇᵒᶰᵉ
dfab female ● heterosexual ● 37 moons ● broom
A light grey dappled molly with pale green eyes. By any cat, she'd be considered a beauty- the shine to her fur, the elegant way she walks, the way she looks any cat over. A bright cat, Windblossom is a chatty one with connections and friendships all over the clan, easily upbeat and loved by many. She's quite selfish, though- at least with her family and what makes her happy- and not too modest, assured in her abilities and what she can do. Pressing the importance of doing well and becoming great warriors to her kits, it's just a bit too much with her expectations of greatness placed onto their shoulders. Her flowers bloom brightly from her chest, almost covering it in startling yellow little blooms.
Born into FloraClan, Windblossom was the star of the show compared to her brother. The best at hunting, talking, socializing- but they were two sides of a coin, and they both liked the paw they'd been dealt. She still loves him fiercely, despite any rough patches in their life. Windblossom loves Gildedtongue dearly, a crush from her apprentice days blossoming into something more, and her kits, Pinepaw, Juniperpaw, and ___paw, are her pride and joy.
warrior
Pinepaw 」ᶤᶰᵏ ᵃᶰᵈ ᵇᵒᶰᵉ
dmab male ● homosexual ● 9 moons ● pear blossom
A cream cat with a dark brown seal point and pale green eyes. Somewhat high-strung and easily nervous, Pinepaw is easily one of the biggest worriers in the Clan. It's a struggle to get him to not worry about something- there's always a chance that something's wrong, that his siblings have been hurt, that his mother is feeling off or is disappointed in him, or, to say the least, it falls to his siblings to calm him and reassure him that everything's alright. When he's not a worrywart he's quite adorable, cautiously optimistic at the best times and always willing to share kind words around. He's a decent hunter, but shies away from conflict. His flowers bloom on the back of his neck, cautious but beautiful.
He was born to Windblossom and Gildedtongue along with his siblings Juniperpaw and ___paw, the closest cats he's ever known. Windblossom's expectations of them put him under the most pressure of them all, his nature making him put importance on that and his rare optimism faltering.
apprentice
Name 」ᶤᶰᵏ ᵃᶰᵈ ᵇᵒᶰᵉ
dmab male ● bisexual ● ? moons ● n/a
A blank cat with blank eyes. (no less than 4 sentences, no more than 6)
relations
loner
Breezedream 」ᶤᶰᵏ ᵃᶰᵈ ᵇᵒᶰᵉ
dfab female ● bisexual ● 14 moons ● phlox
A light grey dappled she-cat with slightly darker grey paws, ears, and tailtip along with a slightly lighter colored belly and blue eyes. She's like a woodland spirit, lighthearted and a bit odd, separated from the crowd with her soft and inane comments that most scoff at. Optimistic and cheerful despite many not taking well to her nature, easily distracted and rash, Breezedream is considered as someone only Lionstar can truly handle. She can see inside others, almost, much more perceptive than her impressions suggest. Her flowers bloom all over the left side of her face, covering her ear, cheek, and around her eye.
She was born and immediately had no parents- her mother dying during her birth and her father dying from sickness before she was born. With pity, another queen raised her with her own litter, even as she felt separate from the queen that mothered her throughout her life. The only cats she's close to are her former mentor, Lionstar, and his family. She knows of their aims and supports them fully, even if she doesn't do too much to help. Strangely enough, they're her family of choice, as odd as it is.
warrior
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Post by . on Sept 11, 2017 19:10:33 GMT -5
Ariat's characters
Gingerpaw 」Ariat
female ● heterosexual ● 8 moons ● lily
Gingerpaw is a small ginger she-cat with a splash of white on her chest and a white tail tip. Gingerpaw is a very sensitive cat. She doesn't do well with criticism and occasionally throws a fit if she's insulted or punished. She does, however, take a great interest in helping others and always has put others ahead of herself.
Gingerpaw knew at a young age that she wasn't a warrior. She spent the majority of her time in the medicine den. She was sick much more often than the other kits, but she also enjoyed it. She had planned to be a medicine cat since a young age.
medicine cat apprentice
Stormstrike 」Ariat
male ● heterosexual ● 30 moons ● hollyhock
Stormstrike is a large and muscular gray tom with a white chest and paws. Stormstrike is often seen as a party pooper. He's serious, intelligent, and takes his job as a warrior very seriously. He cares about others and is extremely protective of those he loves, but he isn't he most fun to have around.
His brother is Foxclaw.
Warrior
Foxclaw 」Ariat
male ● heterosexual ● 30 moons ● hibiscus
Foxclaw is smaller than his brother and is an orange tabby. Foxclaw is also the more fun of the two. He's a bit of a troublemaker and is more than willing to drag others into his shenanigans. He isn't serious often enough, which gets him in to trouble. Despite this, Foxclaw can be a deadly fighter.
His brother is Stormstrike
warrior
Fawnpaw 」Ariat
female ● heterosexual ● 8 moons ● moonflower
Fawnpaw is a tiny light brown cat with brown eyes. Though much smaller than her siblings, Fawnpaw has a large personality. Fawnpaw is almost always optimistic and full of energy, but very sensitive. The small she-cat is reckless and troublesome, often causing others to groan at her antics. While she has her flaws, she's very loyal and would die to her protect her family and friends.
born in floraclan to Windblossom and Gildedtongue. Siblings are Pinepaw and Juniperpaw
apprentice
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Post by Lotus on Sept 14, 2017 1:14:30 GMT -5
Snowblossom | Lotus
Female ● Heterosexual ● 18 Moons ● Lotus
Long haired white cat with light grey stripes, paws and tail rings extending only until the middle of her feather plume tail. She has long legs that make her skilled in hunting although her stark white fur issues a challenge for her against the lush green of the forest. One of her eyes is a pale green the other is a bright blue. She is sure-footed and graceful with a kind heart and an empathetic nature towards all creatures she meets. Although sweet in nature she has a nasty temper when provoked and isn't afraid to speak up for what she believes in. She is a Clanborn cat with a terrible fear of lightening. Her flower, the Lotus, blossoms from the right side of her neck with only two flowers being apparent at this time. Her flowers normally vary in color but seem to be mostly be a bright pink at the base fading into a softer lighter pink at the tips of the petals.
Warrior
Sorrelpaw 」Lotus
Female ● heterosexual ● 7 Moons ● Peony
A small fluffy calico with white "socks" on her back legs and "mittens" on her front legs. Her eyes are a moss green in color with flecks of yellow towards the iris of her eye.
She is a fluffy ball of energy. Usually found snooping and putting her nose where most tell her it "doesn't belong." She's quite the adventurer, normally finding her own things to do instead of patiently awaiting orders from her elders. Her flower is the peony. Her blossom is coral in color and grows right above her tail on her back.
She is Clanborn.
Brackenpaw 」Lotus
Male ● Heterosexual ● 8 Moons ● Mistletoe
A sleek furred dark brown tom with darker 'chocolate' stripes. His mouth down to the middle of his chest is white as are his paws and tail tip. His eyes are an icy blue color.
He can only be described as brooding. Always looking like he's just having the worst day possible and normally not saying much when someone asks him what's wrong. He likes to keep to himself and isn't very open and trusting with just anyone. Once you get to know him he's a very loving and fiercely loyal cat who's just afraid of getting hurt. His flower, Mistletoe, begins its growth right at the tip of his tail extending down towards his back.
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Rowanstripe」Lotus
Male ● Heterosexual ● 21 Moons ● Red Dahlia
Muscular dark ginger tom with one black left front paw and one black right ear. His eyes are a stunning amber color, nearly looking gold in some light.
He is prideful and narcissistic, always striving for praise and attention from those above him and constantly trying to find ways to impress his peers. He is plagued by worry about what others think of him, so he's constantly trying to do good and outstanding things that set him apart and earn him the love from his clan he so desperately wants. His flower is the red dahlia. It begins on his back right thigh growing in whichever way it pleases.
His Clanborn. His father Nightclaw died right before he became a warrior and is the reason he feels the need to go above and beyond with everything he does. Nighclaw criticized him anytime Rowanstripe did anything that didnt meet his expectations.
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Post by Mama Gretta on Sept 14, 2017 9:51:33 GMT -5
Applepaw」LittleBittyHibiscus
Dfab female ● unknown due to age ● 7 moons ● Apple Blossom
Appearance ● an American shorthand with orange fur, and one white paw. Her eyes are a bold emerald, and tend to sparkle with a high level of innocence. Her flower, the Apple blossom, adorns her right shoulder, and she tends to have a hop in her step.
Personality ● She's a happy-go-lucky type of cat, always looking to see the positives in everything and tending to overlook a negative situation unless the situation is dire. She can pretty quickly get into trouble, but she always seems to get OUT of it quickly; however, that doesn't mean she has her bad days, and when she has them, she crashes HARD. On bad days she's despondent and unresponsive, only focusing on a task at hand or an order given to her, if she can even get up;
these periods don't last long though.
other- born into the clan.
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Willowfeather」LittleBittyHibiscus
Dfab female ● pansexual ● 24 moons ● Begonia
Appearance ● A pure white shorthaired cat with lavender tinted eyes. The begonias along her neck, almost as if it was a necklace, easily stand out amongst her fur.
Personality ● Somewhat vain. She acts mysterious, but she's not that hard to figure out if you're close enough to her. She has a tremendous soft spot for kits, going so far to go without food a day or two herself if kits are hungry and able to eat solid food, and defending them with her life.
She was born into the clan.
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Sept 14, 2017 12:49:21 GMT -5
Applepaw」LittleBittyHibiscus Dfab female ● unknown due to age ● 7 moons ● Apple Blossom Appearance ● an American shorthand with orange fur, and one white paw. Her eyes are a bold emerald, and tend to sparkle with a high level of innocence. Her flower, the Apple blossom, adorns her right shoulder. She tends to have a hop in her step. Personality ● She's a happy-go-lucky type of cat, always looking to see the positives in everything and tending to overlook a negative situation unless the situation is dire. She can pretty quickly get into trouble, but she always seems to get OUT of it quickly. However, that doesn't mean she has her bad days, and when she has them, she crashes HARD. On bad days she's despondent and unresponsive, only focusing on a task at hand or an order given to her, if she can even get up. These periods don't last too long, however. other- born into the clan. Apprentice Willowfeather」LittleBittyHibiscus Dfab female ● pansexual ● 24 moons ● Begonia Appearance ● A pure white shorthaired cat with lavender tinted eyes. The begonias along her neck, almost as if it was a necklace, easily stand out amongst her fur. The fur can easily get dirty, which she dislikes.. Her tail is long, and one of her favored qualities on her. Personality ● Somewhat vain. She doesn't like getting dirty a whole lot, but she suffers through for the sake of the clan. She acts mysterious, but she's not that hard to figure out if you're close enough to her. She has a tremendous soft spot for kits, going so far to go without food a day or two herself if kits are hungry and able to eat solid food, and defending them with her life. She was born into the clan. Warrior |
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Post by Mama Gretta on Sept 14, 2017 15:50:06 GMT -5
Applepaw」LittleBittyHibiscus Dfab female ● unknown due to age ● 7 moons ● Apple Blossom Appearance ● an American shorthand with orange fur, and one white paw. Her eyes are a bold emerald, and tend to sparkle with a high level of innocence. Her flower, the Apple blossom, adorns her right shoulder. She tends to have a hop in her step. Personality ● She's a happy-go-lucky type of cat, always looking to see the positives in everything and tending to overlook a negative situation unless the situation is dire. She can pretty quickly get into trouble, but she always seems to get OUT of it quickly. However, that doesn't mean she has her bad days, and when she has them, she crashes HARD. On bad days she's despondent and unresponsive, only focusing on a task at hand or an order given to her, if she can even get up. These periods don't last too long, however. other- born into the clan. Apprentice Willowfeather」LittleBittyHibiscus Dfab female ● pansexual ● 24 moons ● Begonia Appearance ● A pure white shorthaired cat with lavender tinted eyes. The begonias along her neck, almost as if it was a necklace, easily stand out amongst her fur. The fur can easily get dirty, which she dislikes.. Her tail is long, and one of her favored qualities on her. Personality ● Somewhat vain. She doesn't like getting dirty a whole lot, but she suffers through for the sake of the clan. She acts mysterious, but she's not that hard to figure out if you're close enough to her. She has a tremendous soft spot for kits, going so far to go without food a day or two herself if kits are hungry and able to eat solid food, and defending them with her life. She was born into the clan. Warrior I edited and shortened the appearance and personality descriptions, I hope they're short enough now! If they arent, can you let me know? |
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Sept 14, 2017 17:56:04 GMT -5
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Youre all set! I'll add your characters when I'm free today.
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Post by Gold on Sept 14, 2017 18:09:45 GMT -5
Russetear 」Gold
Male ● Heterosexual ● 30 moons ● Lime Blossom
Russetear is a short-haired tom with a predominantly white coat, broken only by a brownish spot at the base of his left ear that provides his namesake. He seems to exude regality, like by the way he puffs his chest out to display the flower growing beneath his throat, or the deliberate grace with which he walks.
Russetfur feels a strong sense of responsibility towards the health of those around him, though it might not show easily. This is mostly due to his tendency to be really snarky; Russetear typically uses it to jest, but it can be hard to tell sometimes. Russetear may also come off as single-minded or clueless -- this obliviousness is the single largest contributing factor to his medicine cat celibacy.
Russetear was born into FloraClan, haughty and critical from a young age.
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Sept 14, 2017 20:00:09 GMT -5
Russetear 」Gold Male ● Heterosexual ● 30 moons ● Mistletoe Russetear is a short-haired tom with a predominantly white coat, broken only by a brownish spot at the base of his left ear that provides his namesake. He seems to exude regality, like by the way he puffs his chest out to display the mistletoe beneath his throat, or the deliberate grace with which he walks. Russetfur feels a strong sense of responsibility towards the health of those around him, though it might not show easily. This is mostly due to his tendency to be really snarky; Russetear typically uses it to jest, but it can be hard to tell sometimes. Russetear may also come off as single-minded or clueless -- this obliviousness is the single largest contributing factor to his medicine cat celibacy. Russetear was born into FloraClan, haughty and critical from a young age. Medicine Cat WORDS
The mistletoe flower is already taken- please choose a new one for your character. Once you have done that, you are accepted!
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Sept 14, 2017 20:02:27 GMT -5
Snowblossom | Lotus
Female ● Heterosexual ● 18 Moons ● Lotus
Long haired white cat with light grey stripes, paws and tail rings extending only until the middle of her feather plume tail. She has long legs that make her skilled in hunting although her stark white fur issues a challenge for her against the lush green of the forest. One of her eyes is a pale green the other is a bright blue. She is sure-footed and graceful with a kind heart and an empathetic nature towards all creatures she meets. Although sweet in nature she has a nasty temper when provoked and isn't afraid to speak up for what she believes in. She is a Clanborn cat with a terrible fear of lightening. Her flower, the Lotus, blossoms from the right side of her neck with only two flowers being apparent at this time. Her flowers normally vary in color but seem to be mostly be a bright pink at the base fading into a softer lighter pink at the tips of the petals.
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Sorrelpaw 」Lotus
Female ● heterosexual ● 7 Moons ● Peony
A small fluffy calico with white "socks" on her back legs and "mittens" on her front legs. Her eyes are a moss green in color with flecks of yellow towards the iris of her eye.
She is a fluffy ball of energy. Usually found snooping and putting her nose where most tell her it "doesn't belong." She's quite the adventurer, normally finding her own things to do instead of patiently awaiting orders from her elders. Her flower is the peony. Her blossom is coral in color and grows right above her tail on her back.
She is Clanborn.
Brackenpaw 」Lotus
Male ● Heterosexual ● 8 Moons ● Mistletoe
A sleek furred dark brown tom with darker 'chocolate' stripes. His mouth down to the middle of his chest is white as are his paws and tail tip. His eyes are an icy blue color.
He can only be described as brooding. Always looking like he's just having the worst day possible and normally not saying much when someone asks him what's wrong. He likes to keep to himself and isn't very open and trusting with just anyone. You want his friendship you have to earn it, which isn't easy due to his guarded nature and not wanting to let anyone in. Once you get to know him he's a very loving and fiercely loyal cat who's just afraid of getting hurt. His flower, Mistletoe, begins its growth right at the tip of his tail extending down towards his back.
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Rowanstripe」Lotus
Male ● Heterosexual ● 21 Moons ● Red Dahlia
Muscular dark ginger tom with one black left front paw and one black right ear. His eyes are a stunning amber color, nearly looking gold in some light.
He is prideful and narcissistic, always striving for praise and attention from those above him and constantly trying to find ways to impress his peers. He is plagued by worry about what others think of him, so he's constantly trying to do good and outstanding things that set him apart and earn him the love from his clan he so desperately wants. His flower is the red dahlia. It begins on his back right thigh growing in whichever way it pleases.
His Clanborn. His father Nightclaw died right before he became a warrior and is the reason he feels the need to go above and beyond with everything he does. Nighclaw criticized him anytime Rowanstripe did anything that didnt meet his expectations.
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Your characters are accepted aside from Brackenpaw- please shorten his description to being 4-6 sentences long. Thank you!
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Post by Lotus on Sept 14, 2017 20:18:01 GMT -5
( I deleted a sentence! Hope that's better! )
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Post by Gold on Sept 14, 2017 20:33:31 GMT -5
Brackenpaaaaaaaaaaaw!  Kek, it's fine. I just edited the form with another flower that caught my whimsy. |
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Sept 14, 2017 20:36:06 GMT -5
( I deleted a sentence! Hope that's better! ) WORDS
It's still a sentence or two over but I'll still take it. Thank you! Your character will be added.
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Sept 14, 2017 20:36:31 GMT -5
Brackenpaaaaaaaaaaaw! Kek, it's fine. I just edited the form with another flower that caught my whimsy. WORDS
Thank you! Your character will be added.
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Post by dαιѕy on Sept 14, 2017 21:36:33 GMT -5
Coldnose 」» ᴄᴀʀᴛᴇʀ
dmab male ● bisexual ● 15 moons ● geranium
Coldnose's pelt is primarily white, decorated with thick and thin gray colored stripes, hanging jaggedly down his spine, tail, and wrapping around every one his legs. Each one of his large paws are the same ash color as his tabby coat and his eyes are a deep blue, making him look almost identical to his brother. The three positive traits that dominate this tomcat would have to be his unwavering loyalty, sharp mind, and passionate heart. Even if one of his clanmates is wrong in an argument, this tom will be there to back up every word they say. In addition to his loyalty, Coldnose has an extremely intelligent mind. Coldnose's flower bloom begins on his left shoulder and blooms downward.
Coldnose was born and raised in FloraClan with his brother, Stormchaser, to their parents Sootwhisker and Featherwing who are both deceased.
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Stormchaser 」» ᴄᴀʀᴛᴇʀ
dmab male ● heterosexual ● 15 moons ● white heather
Stormchaser is an extremely handsome, well-muscled tomcat with a sleek pelt the color of faint silver decorated with dark, gray tabby stripes and deep, dark blue eyes. Intelligent would be the first word to describe this tomcat; he is extremely clever and sharp when it comes to making swift decisions. He relies on his quick wit and stealthiness to make moves when in battle. He is not afraid to speak his mind, but does his best not to offend his clanmates. Stormchaser's flower blooms upward from his right, front paw.
Stormchaser was born and raised in FloraClan with his brother, Coldnose. to their parents Sootwhisker and Featherwing, who are both deceased.
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Ravenpaw 」» ᴄᴀʀᴛᴇʀ
dfab female ● heterosexual ● 8 moons ● white rose
Ravenpaw is a tall, sleek she-cat with a pure black pelt, a white chest, underbelly, tail tip and a splash of white around her left eye. Her irises are an emerald green color and she has long, black whiskers. Ravenpaw is a rather awkward she-cat in the sense that she never really knows what to do. Despite being an exceptional hunter, Ravenpaw doesn't do much without permission or approval from cats who are higher up than her. She is very sweet and kind but does not bend the rules whatsoever. Ravenpaw's flower begins on her spine and speckles down her sides.
Ravenpaw was born and raised in FloraClan, though her mother died while Ravenpaw was still a kit and her father was never revealed to the clan. Practically raised by the clan, this apprentice has lived quite a lonely life without any true family.
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Sept 15, 2017 8:21:39 GMT -5
Coldnose 」» ᴄᴀʀᴛᴇʀ
dmab male ● bisexual ● 15 moons ● geranium
Coldnose's pelt is primarily white, decorated with thick and thin gray colored stripes, hanging jaggedly down his spine, tail, and wrapping around every one his legs. Each one of his large paws are the same ash color as his tabby coat and his eyes are a deep blue, making him look almost identical to his brother. The three positive traits that dominate this tomcat would have to be his unwavering loyalty, sharp mind, and passionate heart. Even if one of his clanmates is wrong in an argument, this tom will be there to back up every word they say. In addition to his loyalty, Coldnose has an extremely intelligent mind. Coldnose's flower bloom begins on his left shoulder and blooms downward.
Coldnose was born and raised in FloraClan with his brother, Stormchaser, to their parents Sootwhisker and Featherwing who are both deceased.
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Stormchaser 」» ᴄᴀʀᴛᴇʀ
dmab male ● heterosexual ● 15 moons ● white heather
Stormchaser is an extremely handsome, well-muscled tomcat with a sleek pelt the color of faint silver decorated with dark, gray tabby stripes and deep, dark blue eyes. Intelligent would be the first word to describe this tomcat; he is extremely clever and sharp when it comes to making swift decisions. He relies on his quick wit and stealthiness to make moves when in battle. He is not afraid to speak his mind, but does his best not to offend his clanmates. Stormchaser's flower blooms upward from his right, front paw.
Stormchaser was born and raised in FloraClan with his brother, Coldnose. to their parents Sootwhisker and Featherwing, who are both deceased.
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Ravenpaw 」» ᴄᴀʀᴛᴇʀ
dfab female ● heterosexual ● 8 moons ● white rose
Ravenpaw is a tall, sleek she-cat with a pure black pelt, a white chest, underbelly, tail tip and a splash of white around her left eye. Her irises are an emerald green color and she has long, black whiskers. Ravenpaw is a rather awkward she-cat in the sense that she never really knows what to do. Despite being an exceptional hunter, Ravenpaw doesn't do much without permission or approval from cats who are higher up than her. She is very sweet and kind but does not bend the rules whatsoever. Ravenpaw's flower begins on her spine and speckles down her sides.
Ravenpaw was born and raised in FloraClan, though her mother died while Ravenpaw was still a kit and her father was never revealed to the clan. Practically raised by the clan, this apprentice has lived quite a lonely life without any true family.
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Post by kiwi cheesecake on Sept 15, 2017 17:06:20 GMT -5
Featherpaw 」 kiwi cheesecake Female ● Heterosexual ● 7 moons ● Laurel Featherpaw is a small, cream cat with rose points and deep, dark blue eyes. In relation to other members of the clan, Featherpaw is rather short, although she swears that she's still waiting for her growth spurt to hit. Her flowers bunch and form a small but noticeable cluster right over her heart. Always the optimist and extremely bubbly, Featherpaw constantly feels the need to cheer up and encourage her friends. She exudes a sort of innocent aura, and can be rather naive at times. However, Featherpaw's most notable trait is that she lies all the time, even if she doesn't have to- either as a joke, an excuse, a way to make someone feel better, or even a way to get back at someone for a wrong they've done her. No real mishaps have ever come of Featherpaw’s lying, but she's been doing this since she was a kit, so older members of the clan tend to know what to expect when talking to her. She's FloraClan born and raised. Apprentice Gobituft 」 kiwi cheesecake Male ● Heterosexual ● 21 moons ● Zinnia Gobituft is a pale, dusty brown tabby with white paws and long legs. He only has one working brown eye- the other was born malformed, and his flower’s main blossom covers the useless socket. Gobituft is bright and peppy, but also can be hot-headed and impulsive. He has a constant burning energy inside, and it always needs to escape, be it by social interaction or swift runs throughout the territory. If this energy isn't worked off, he'll become increasingly restless, and begin to ignore even good advice from friends. He can work herself up into quite an ugly mood, but as soon as he's able to work it off, he's back to his normal, sunny self. Gobituft has been living in FloraClan since birth, and has vague ambitions of someday becoming leader. Warrior |
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Sept 15, 2017 18:11:06 GMT -5
Featherpaw 」 kiwi cheesecake Female ● Heterosexual ● 7 moons ● Laurel Featherpaw is a small, cream cat with rose points and deep, dark blue eyes. In relation to other members of the clan, Featherpaw is rather short, although she swears that she's still waiting for her growth spurt to hit. Her flowers bunch and form a small but noticeable cluster right over her heart. Always the optimist and extremely bubbly, Featherpaw constantly feels the need to cheer up and encourage her friends. She exudes a sort of innocent aura, and can be rather naive at times. However, Featherpaw's most notable trait is that she lies all the time, even if she doesn't have to- either as a joke, an excuse, a way to make someone feel better, or even a way to get back at someone for a wrong they've done her. No real mishaps have ever come of Featherpaw’s lying, but she's been doing this since she was a kit, so older members of the clan tend to know what to expect when talking to her. She's FloraClan born and raised. Apprentice Gobituft 」 kiwi cheesecake Male ● Heterosexual ● 21 moons ● Zinnia Gobituft is a pale, dusty brown tabby with white paws and long legs. He only has one working brown eye- the other was born malformed, and his flower’s main blossom covers the useless socket. Gobituft is bright and peppy, but also can be hot-headed and impulsive. He has a constant burning energy inside, and it always needs to escape, be it by social interaction or swift runs throughout the territory. If this energy isn't worked off, he'll become increasingly restless, and begin to ignore even good advice from friends. He can work herself up into quite an ugly mood, but as soon as he's able to work it off, he's back to his normal, sunny self. Gobituft has been living in FloraClan since birth, and has vague ambitions of someday becoming leader. Warrior WORDS
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Post by ivythorn on Sept 16, 2017 12:08:37 GMT -5
(Hi, can I join?) ibb.co/c0uFdkLarkspurtail 」 ivythorndfab female● lesbian● 20 moons● Nasturtium A blue, sleek female cat with amber eyes, Larkspurtail was born to a loving mother, and has one sibling, her brother Yellowpaw. Yellowpaw died when he was an apprentice, in a badger attack. Larkspurtail, despite being quite mischievous, likes hanging out with other cats, and if very social. She acts like a kit half the time, and just wants to have fun. She can be rather blunt, and likes cats who are not offended easily. Larkspurtail likes fighting more than hunting, and is energetic and wily. ibb.co/hZ6dykDuskpetal 」 ivythorndfab female● strait● 24 moons● Azalia A dark grey tabby she cat with amber eyes, Duskpetal was born in the clan, and has never liked fighting or hunting. She is pregnant right now, and is ready to go in the nursery, though she is still a warrior. The father of her unborn kits isn't revealed yet (PM me if you want your cat to be the father!) Duskpetal is a reserved, quite she cat, that loves long walks and nightime. She doesn't like lots of attention. Duskpetal isn't the most skilled cat, but is a good hunter, and when she gets angry she will shed your ears off. |
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Sept 16, 2017 13:12:58 GMT -5
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Please use the joining form that is shown on this page, thank you c:
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Post by ivythorn on Sept 16, 2017 13:45:11 GMT -5
(changed it. Sorry I was in a rush and posted the bios quickly, without using the actual format.)
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Sept 16, 2017 14:32:42 GMT -5
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Thank you for changing the joining form!
Unfortunately, your forms have grammar and spelling mistakes in them overall and in concept, so I am wary of accepting your characters at this time. However! If you would still like to join us at a later date, you are welcome to. From what I can see you do not have a high post count here yet, so when you get experience here you are welcome to come back and try to join again. Thank you for the consideration, we really appreciate it. Hope to see you soon c:
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Post by ivythorn on Sept 16, 2017 15:10:02 GMT -5
(Oh my god I'm so sorry I didn't mean to bother anyone. I just joined yesterday, and have never roleplayed before, though I like writing! If its not to much trouble, would you mind pointing out the grammar and concept mistakes in my form? I don't want to rejoin or anything, or argue with your decision, but I'm just curious about what I did wrong so I can do better on other forms and roleplays here! Thank you, and have fun with this group!)
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Sept 16, 2017 15:52:35 GMT -5
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That's quite alright, dear! It's okay to rush- and you're no bother at all. My goal is help you build upon the wonderful foundation you already have! I tend to manage more advance-level roleplays for people who have been in roleplay for a long period of time hence Im a little picky with who I accept. However, you have a done a very good job in your forms and in the roleplay sample I saw!
Overall there are mostly spelling mistakes (using if instead of is) and grammar mistakes that I've found in your forms and roleplay snip. Make sure before you post a roleplay post that you check it over and ensure your spelling is correct! Im a little lax on grammar simply because I know my grammar is frequently improper when I'm writing, it's just in my creative style. In general, it should be readable and have no spelling mistakes, as google is a helpful hand in ensuring whatever you're typing is not misspelled. After a while of roleplaying in these forums, you will eventually get the hang of what language the roleplays are looking for just based on their front pages, the words of their characters, etc. The forms were a little out of order regarding where history goes, etc., but from what I've seen multiple people have had issues with it. As a general note, we don't typically put "notes" in joining forms, at least the ones I've known. Your mention of the pregnancy would go outside of the joining form for the character as an aside notation, just not a part of the actual form, as that form is going to be copied-and-pasted to the main page. Mostly mine are nit-picky things in your actual roleplay, but over time through practice you'll be fine and those will be weeded out problems.
In general I've seen some people make the same mistakes you've made, so I am willing to let you still join but with no more characters than you have now, if you still would like to join right now. We'll see how you do through that. I apologize if I've caused any stress, it wasn't my intention- and you are no bother at all, Im only here to assist and help writing abilities!
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