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Post by ☁︎煙Smokeful Skies空☁︎ on Apr 28, 2017 15:11:17 GMT -5
Decided to submit two more forms!
♀ - - { Morninglight } -- { Starclan } - -
Morninglight is a grey long-furred she-cat, with soft, gentle fur. Her ears and head are round, her ears black at the tip. Her whiskers are very long, and her eyes are yellow, the black pupils circular. She is the size of a average she-cat, with just a bit more height. She is also the breed of a maine coon and bombay. The ends of her fur are black, and same with her short fluffy tail and four legs. Her fur is covered in multiple splashes of white too. Morninglight enjoys peace and quiet, however makes bad mistakes. She is patient too, and as she grows older she prefers not to talk much. For half of her life, she has mostly been a loner. She then met Silentwater, and became friends with him, now mates. Before Smokekit and Clearkit were born, one day Silentwater decides to go hunt some prey for Morninglight, but doesn't show up. She stumbles into Aetherclan territory, being found and then taken to the camp to be treated. She then has Smokekit and Clearkit, however she disappears when she thinks Silentwater's figure nearby, getting lured outside of Aetherclan territory, but instead is killed by a deceiving badger. Morninglight then goes to Starclan, and hopes to interact with cats who come to Starry Cavern.
- - { Roleplayed by @ Kat4Life } - -
♂ - - { Silentwater } -- { Rogue } - -
A black muscular tom that is short-furred. He has pointy ears and a snout, with short whiskers. His eyes are green and have black pupils shaped like a slit. He has a white fluffy underbelly and his fur is dense and thick. He has long sharp claws, which he uses as a advantage when fighting. He has a long tail with the tip of it dipped in white, the same with his paws. Silentwater is very fast too, and likes confusing his opponents with his abilities. He is a bit cowardly and ambitious, and cares mostly for himself. He can get grumpy and bold sometimes, but manages to control it. When a kit, Silentwater was actually a kittypet, but then left behind, becoming a loner. He then meets Morninglight who teaches him about the clans. They become friends, and now mates. However, one day Silentwater goes hunting for Morninglight, but doesn't return. He hadn't known that she might have kits, and after that he abandons her, becoming a Rogue.
- - { Roleplayed by @ Kat4Life } - -
Alright. I changed some things, but,
I haven't really seen other people having cats who are Rogues. Is that wrong?
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Post by ☁︎煙Smokeful Skies空☁︎ on Apr 28, 2017 16:59:08 GMT -5
Yes, you can roleplay whenever you want!
Of course, we'd prefer if you didn't rp by yourself for a whole page because that doesn't help in including other people. Furthermore, most of us are very busy irl so we can't reply as fast as you might want if you're rping with us. But otherwise, there are really no limitations on when you can rp. ^^ Oh, alright. |
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there will always be those who dare to brave the lightning's glow.
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Post by Ðᴏʟᴄᴇ on Apr 28, 2017 17:20:14 GMT -5
Just looked over your new characters!
A few things of note:
- "her fur is covered in multiple splashes of white too, and has good night vision" I think you can see why someone might find this sentence confusing? The subject of the sentence is fur so it can't have good night vision. I assume you meant something like 'is easy to spot, even at night' or something to that effect.
- I am a bit confused on Morninglight. In her form, it says she fell into a deep sleep. Does that mean she is in some sort of comatose state? I don't think that would make sense which is why I'm asking. If she's not comatose, you can ignore this.
- I am unsure about Silentwater. I don't think it would make sense for a cat to be sent to the Dark Forest by mistake. I'd prefer to have 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 's confirmation that she is okay with this.
Once the first two changes are made, and after Fireh looks at Silentwater, you can rp these two! For now, you can rp the two characters already accepted.
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Post by ☁︎煙Smokeful Skies空☁︎ on Apr 29, 2017 12:32:21 GMT -5
Just looked over your new characters!
A few things of note:
- "her fur is covered in multiple splashes of white too, and has good night vision" I think you can see why someone might find this sentence confusing? The subject of the sentence is fur so it can't have good night vision. I assume you meant something like 'is easy to spot, even at night' or something to that effect.
- I am a bit confused on Morninglight. In her form, it says she fell into a deep sleep. Does that mean she is in some sort of comatose state? I don't think that would make sense which is why I'm asking. If she's not comatose, you can ignore this.
- I am unsure about Silentwater. I don't think it would make sense for a cat to be sent to the Dark Forest by mistake. I'd prefer to have 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 's confirmation that she is okay with this.
Once the first two changes are made, and after Fireh looks at Silentwater, you can rp these two! For now, you can rp the two characters already accepted. Okay! I edited the forms and changed some things. Morninglight instead is killed by a badger, becoming a Starclan cat, and Silentwater abandons her and becomes a Rogue, but I haven't seen other people having cats who are Rogues. Is that bad? |
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Post by ☁︎煙Smokeful Skies空☁︎ on Apr 30, 2017 11:51:13 GMT -5
Alright, thank you for telling me!
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Bisexual
#e0a8ff
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🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Apr 30, 2017 15:40:46 GMT -5
Thank you for everything Dolce!
What my buddy here said was right and everything. Feel free to rp now!!
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Post by Billystorm on May 2, 2017 19:48:14 GMT -5
Tree . Rogue
Male ginger and white tom. Optimistic, cheerful, has a tendency to miss the bigger picture, and gets easily distracted. Was taken by Twolegs and driven to near Aetherclan territory in a monster, but he was able to escape. Now he's wandering around in Aetherclan territory.
RPed by Billystorm
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Bisexual
#e0a8ff
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🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃
THIS IS THE THRILLLLLLLLLLERRRRRRR, THRILLLERRRRR NIIIIIGHHHHTTTT 🎃
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on May 2, 2017 19:59:42 GMT -5
There is a form you need to use. ^^
Also. We do not allow any histories that have to do with clans outside of AetherClan and AstraClan so please do not mention SkyClan.
On that same note, while I'm okay with you trying to rp an official character in here, please change his name, as we have no affiliation with the original series and Billystorm as a name would not be allowed.
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Post by Billystorm on May 3, 2017 14:57:39 GMT -5
Edited.
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on May 3, 2017 17:30:36 GMT -5
{ I'm not a mod so I can't approve or deny your form, but there's a template on the first page that you're supposed to use to join. I've pasted it here for ya 
♂ - - { Cat Name } -- { Rank } - -
Description, personality, history, other.
- - { Roleplayed by @ your username here } - -
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Post by вєвє on May 4, 2017 19:27:30 GMT -5
[ ✣ ] { Female Form } ♀ - - { Dusty } -- { Kittypet } - - Shes a tall shecat with sandy colored fur with black spots like a leopard, around her pink nose the fur is darker while her eyes have light gold fur surrounding her pale green eyes. As a kittypet she has a teal green collar, her garden sits outside the clan's territory beyond its forrest. She outgoing and kind willing to talk to anyone; she wants to learn everything and anything she can being extremely curious. She curious and quick to anger. Her towels were nice but her dreams are filled with hunting and running through the trees, she remembers the stories her mother would tell of wild cats that live free of twolegs sharing prey and fighting for their clan, and since then she wanted to become a warrior but it wasn't until her twolegs moved to this new area that she could escape their nest. She lives way out by the forest beyond the clans territory, but her curiosity can sometimes get her in trouble. - - { вєвє You guys can call me Koi. } - - [ ✣ ] { Male Form } ♂ - - { Stormpelt } -- { Warrior } - - A rather large tom with long, muscular legs. He has short blue-gray fur with these random white markings throughout his fur. His tail is long and fluffier than the rest of his body. The white markings that are lurking throughout his fur vary in different sizes. His chest is fluffier, about as fluffy as his tail. His eyes are a blazing amber color with little blue flecks. Stormpelt is an out-going tom cat who enjoys being around others. He's a very talkative tom cat who tends to always have something to say. Then again, he's known as a flirt to. He usually flirts with most she-cats his age or around his age. However, he can be a very sweet and caring tom. He enjoys being around kits and elders for various reasons. Elders because he likes to hear stories, and kits because they usually make him laugh. He has issues with cats outside the clan and is ambitious, and he's stubborn as a badger. - - { вєвє } - - |
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on May 4, 2017 22:49:34 GMT -5
I noticed that in one spot on your form it says Stormpaw instead of Stormpelt. They're both quite cute though. If/when you're accepted I'd love to rp with Storm. ^.^
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Post by вєвє on May 4, 2017 23:23:54 GMT -5
I have his apprentice paragraph saved in my docs thanks for pointing it out to me!)
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<-•Ryse•->
She needed a hero, so that's what she became.
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Post by <-•Ryse•-> on May 5, 2017 10:19:14 GMT -5
Hey вєвє! Your cats look wonderful, there are just a few things I wanted to note before they are accepted: First of all, if you could put "Kittypet" in Dusty's form where rank is supposed to be listed, that would be awesome. Secondly, I'm not 100% sure we have kittypet's who could possibly live near Aetherclan, as I believe the closest twoleg nest is abandoned. So I'm not entirely sure if Dusty could live as close to the clan as you specified, I would wait for 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 to approve Dusty being a kittypet before rping her. Third, Stormpelt absolutely needs a flaw, as I did not see any in his form, so if you could go ahead and add a flaw or two to him, then he should be all set unless 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 or Ðᴏʟᴄᴇ have anymore comments |
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Post by вєвє on May 5, 2017 21:25:15 GMT -5
Thanks Ryse! I appreciate it!)
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on May 6, 2017 0:28:24 GMT -5
Another thing I noticed is that in the "rped by" section it only says your name. Is that okay with you, mods?
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Post by Billystorm on May 6, 2017 9:46:25 GMT -5
♂ - - { Tree } -- { Rogue } - - Ginger and white tom with powerful hind legs. He is great at jumping, and has very hard pads for walking on rocks. He's optimistic, easily distracted, jumpy, and has a tendency to miss the bigger picture. He was born in a gorge many mountain-lengths away from Aetherclan territory, but was taken by Twolegs and driven in a monster away from the gorge. He was able to escape the monster while it was on a thunder path near Aetherclan territory. He is now wandering around in Aetherclan territory. - - { Roleplayed by Billystorm } - - |
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on May 6, 2017 13:29:06 GMT -5
So I'm not a mod but I'm pretty sure we don't allow ages in moons to be included in the descriptions simply bc it's too hard to update. ^.^ Also 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 if you're not cool with me making these types of comments pls let me know cause I know I've been doing it a lot. |
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there will always be those who dare to brave the lightning's glow.
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Post by Ðᴏʟᴄᴇ on May 6, 2017 13:57:27 GMT -5
Thanks for using the correct format but Fireh mentioned once before that we don't want moons in our forms. It's fine for you to have headcanon ages for your characters but we will not keep track of their ages for you. This goes for both of you Billystorm and вєвє
вєвє your forms look fine other than the moons thing. What Spotted said is true, but I'll accept Stormpelt for now. If you could edit that eventually, that would be great because it makes it easier for Fireh to update the front page.
I won't accept Dusty yet because, as Ryse said, there might be an issue with signing up a kittypet for the clan and we both want 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃's thoughts on that first.
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Post by Billystorm on May 6, 2017 14:11:22 GMT -5
So Tree's accepted?
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Ðᴏʟᴄᴇ
there will always be those who dare to brave the lightning's glow.
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Post by Ðᴏʟᴄᴇ on May 6, 2017 14:16:34 GMT -5
Oh shoot I totally forgot about that lol
Billystorm please remove the moons and the parentheses comments, then Tree should be fine!
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Post by Billystorm on May 6, 2017 14:20:39 GMT -5
There.
Tree's accepted now?
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Post by вєвє on May 9, 2017 21:40:38 GMT -5
Ok thanks I understand I'll have to add another clan cat later this week if she's not accepted I don't like leaving my character uneven.)
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Bisexual
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🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃
THIS IS THE THRILLLLLLLLLLERRRRRRR, THRILLLERRRRR NIIIIIGHHHHTTTT 🎃
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on May 10, 2017 0:14:13 GMT -5
Hmm, it's about to be spring. You could introduce her when that time comes, as the twolegs will be there during the spring and thus would make her more acceptable to have given her personality and the like. it would be alright for you to submit another character in the mean time..! |
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Post by вєвє on May 10, 2017 9:32:27 GMT -5
Ok thank you Noodle!
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Post by lucifer on May 21, 2017 12:02:09 GMT -5
 ♂ - - { Snowleap } -- { Warrior } - -›› is he asleep in the snow? Snowleap is a very tall cat with white fur and bright red, almost fuchsia eyes. His long legs allow him to be one of the fastest cats in the clan. His voice is somewhat high, and the tom lives off of being obnoxious and sassy. He is, however, deeply loyal to his clanmates, and bears a prominent scar on his throat from when he battled an eagle to save his brother, Emberheart.
and does he feel free? ‹‹  ♂ - - { Emberheart } -- { Warrior } - -›› im shaken, im reelin' Emberheart is a calico trans tom with purple-tinted eyes. He feels emotions very deeply, and is often likened to being the softer, lovelier kit of him and Snowleap. He tries to keep his brother in check, and stop him from martyring himself, but Snowleap is so stubborn that nothing ever seems to stick. Emberheart is thin and lanky, like his brother, but has a bit more muscle to him than Snowleap does. my god i keep bleedin' ‹‹ |
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there will always be those who dare to brave the lightning's glow.
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Post by Ðᴏʟᴄᴇ on May 21, 2017 15:19:48 GMT -5
Ahh your post format looks so pretty lucifer! Both your characters look fine to me. ^^ Of course if any of the other mods see anything they want to point out, they will do so once they read your forms, but for now you can go to the main page to rp!
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