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Post by Cedarleaf on Apr 4, 2017 17:54:30 GMT -5
No, he's just paranoid haha. Kind of like Goosefeather from Bluestar's prophecy. Wouldn't make a cat so OP like that no problem.
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Post by Cedarleaf on Apr 4, 2017 18:24:52 GMT -5
Thank you so much! I hope there's nothing wrong with him, but if there is I will fix it up ASAP.
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Apr 4, 2017 19:30:52 GMT -5
I DON'T FORGIVE YOU FIREH.
Jk obviously it's fine haha we all have lives that keep us occupied and such. ^.^
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Post by VIXENCLAW on Apr 13, 2017 14:30:15 GMT -5
♀ - - { Aspenshade } -- { Warrior } - - Aspenshade is a short-furred, pure white she-cat, with multiple gray splashes smudging her fur. She's a bit shorter then your average cat, and her eyes are a solid shade of dark green, much like the leaves of a tree in green-leaf. She can be quite a sarcastic cat at times, and is always willing to have a bit of fun. She is quite protective to anyone who is close to her, and only really acts sweet and loving to the ones she loves. She loves being in control of things, but can be quite bossy if she IS put in control, making her not a very good cat to be put as a patrol leader, or anything else that includes power. - - { VIXENCLAW } - - |
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Apr 13, 2017 14:53:14 GMT -5
Lol she's funny. I can just imagine her being like  even though it's just a patrol  |
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Apr 13, 2017 15:17:37 GMT -5
She's good!!!
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Post by smashclaw on Apr 16, 2017 15:16:57 GMT -5
Uh well I'm looking to get back into rp well here's my form
character name Smashclaw
position Deputy if that's cool if not Warrior
Description Massive dark grey Tom with a long black tail and three black legs one grey he has overlarge paws one of which has been crushed forcing his claws on that paw to always be extended the claws on his other three paws are longer than average the claw tips pottuding slightly he is extremely muscular strong and fast his eyes are a bright piercing blue and he has a patch of white fur on his nose his scruff is thick and fluffy causing it to stay raised sort of like a mane of grey fur his voice is very deep and soothing to most unless he is upset then it is a deep intimidating growl
history Raised in the clan smashclaw quickly learned his warrior duties and has loyalty protected his clan and territory he is hoping to be deputy some day but isn't too ambitious he is loyal to his leader and to his clanmates
username of creator Smashclaw
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there will always be those who dare to brave the lightning's glow.
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Post by Ðᴏʟᴄᴇ on Apr 16, 2017 16:18:11 GMT -5
Hi smashclaw! Welcome to the forums! There are just a few things to mention on your form -
I'm not sure if Fireh is okay with the prefix Smash-, we'll have to wait for her opinion on that.
Could you use our form instead? It can be found on the front page - don't worry about the coding, Fireh can fix that when she adds Smashclaw into the Allegiances, but it makes it easier on her if you fill it out.
We already have a deputy (Cinderspark). Not a big problem, I just thought you should know!
Also, could you elaborate a bit more on Smashclaw's weaknesses? From your form, it sounds like he is a great warrior and hunter, but we don't want him to be overpowered!
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Post by smashclaw on Apr 16, 2017 19:23:21 GMT -5
♂ - - { Bigclaw } -- { Warrior}
{Description Massive dark grey Tom with a long black tail and three black legs one grey he has overlarge paws one of which has been crushed forcing his claws on that paw to always be extended the claws on his other three paws are longer than average the claw tips protruding slightly he is extremely muscular strong and fast his eyes are a bright piercing blue and he has a patch of white fur on his nose his scruff is thick and fluffy causing it to stay raised sort of like a mane of grey fur his voice is very deep and soothing to most unless he is upset then it is a deep intimidating growl
history Raised in the clan Bigclaw quickly learned his warrior duties and has loyalty protected his clan and territory he is hoping to be deputy some day but isn't too ambitious he is loyal to his leader and to his clanmates
He is a weak hunter he is better at fighting and patrolling than he is at hunting and would have difficulty fending for himself if he was alone he is gruff and can have trouble getting along with others he is abrasive and quick to anger but loyal through and through}
- - { Roleplayed by Smashclaw} - -
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Apr 17, 2017 16:45:45 GMT -5
smashclaw Would you mind if I added punctuation to your form? It just makes it much easier to read cause I was having a tough time figuring out what you were trying to say. <3
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Post by smashclaw on Apr 17, 2017 17:34:06 GMT -5
Lol no problem
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Apr 17, 2017 21:18:32 GMT -5
♂ - - { Bigclaw } -- { Warrior} Massive dark grey Tom with a long black tail and three black legs, one grey. He has overlarge paws, one of which has been crushed forcing his claws on that paw to always be extended. The claws on his other three paws are longer than average, the claw tips protruding slightly. He is extremely muscular, strong, and fast. His eyes are a bright piercing blue and he has a patch of white fur on his nose. His scruff is thick and fluffy causing it to stay raised, sort of like a mane of grey fur. His voice is very deep and soothing to most unless he is upset. Then it is a deep intimidating growl. Raised in the clan, Bigclaw quickly learned his warrior duties and has loyalty protected his clan and territory. He is hoping to be deputy some day but isn't too ambitious. He is loyal to his leader and to his clanmates. He is a weak hunter. He is better at fighting and patrolling than he is at hunting and would have difficulty fending for himself if he was alone. He is gruff and can have trouble getting along with others. He is abrasive and quick to anger but loyal through and through. - - { Roleplayed by smashclaw} - - Sorry if I offended you at all--that truly wasn't my intention. I didn't change any of the words (except for the "description, history, etc." headliners), just added some periods and commas. |
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Post by smashclaw on Apr 17, 2017 21:38:51 GMT -5
♂ - - { Bigclaw } -- { Warrior} Massive dark grey Tom with a long black tail and three black legs, one grey. He has overlarge paws, one of which has been crushed forcing his claws on that paw to always be extended. The claws on his other three paws are longer than average, the claw tips protruding slightly. He is extremely muscular, strong, and fast. His eyes are a bright piercing blue and he has a patch of white fur on his nose. His scruff is thick and fluffy causing it to stay raised, sort of like a mane of grey fur. His voice is very deep and soothing to most unless he is upset. Then it is a deep intimidating growl. Raised in the clan, Bigclaw quickly learned his warrior duties and has loyalty protected his clan and territory. He is hoping to be deputy some day but isn't too ambitious. He is loyal to his leader and to his clanmates. He is a weak hunter. He is better at fighting and patrolling than he is at hunting and would have difficulty fending for himself if he was alone. He is gruff and can have trouble getting along with others. He is abrasive and quick to anger but loyal through and through. - - { Roleplayed by smashclaw} - - Sorry if I offended you at all--that truly wasn't my intention. I didn't change any of the words (except for the "description, history, etc." headliners), just added some periods and commas. That's completely ok with me don't worry I won't get offended. |
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Post by smashclaw on Apr 17, 2017 21:42:12 GMT -5
Does this mean I can rp? ѕρσσкуѕку |
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Post by Ðᴏʟᴄᴇ on Apr 17, 2017 23:25:52 GMT -5
Sorry for the lateness smashclaw, I'm pretty busy during the school week so I didn't have time to thoroughly look at your form again.
First of all, thank you ѕρσσкуѕку for revising smash's form! I would say that normally, it is the responsibility of the person signing up the character to make sure their form is readable, but I don't mind and it's already done anyways.
That said, Spotted's revised version of your form looks fine. Fireh hasn't been on lately but once she sees this, she will point out if anything else is wrong with your form. For now, you can go ahead and rp!
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Post by ☁︎煙Smokeful Skies空☁︎ on Apr 26, 2017 12:21:04 GMT -5
♂ - - { Smokekit } -- { Kit } - -
Smokekit is a young tom with large black ears and grey freckles all over him. His underbelly is black, and so is the rest of his fur, except there can be grey spots all over him, and his tail fades to grey. His eyes are a sky blue color, with black medium sized round pupils. He is long-furred, and can give off a shabby appearance, especially his tail, which is long and fluffy. Smokekit's paws also fade to a grey color. He is slim and tall, and is hard to spot in the night. His front paws are quite strong, so he uses that as defense if attacked by another cat. Since he has large ears too, Smokekit can hear well. But even with these two abilities, he can sometimes be a introvert and not that social. Sometimes he can be very curious, but can pay attention if that would lead him to danger or trouble. If he and a stranger was in danger, he would either play coward or only worry for himself. His mother used to be a cat of Aetherclan, however she disappeared mysteriously for a unknown reason. His favorite prey is the Blue Mountain bird, which he enjoys very much. Smokekit wants to be a Medicine cat apprentice too, as he has started examining herbs and has become very fond of them. His sister is Clearkit, who instead wants to become a warrior. He loves her very much, and would despise cats who wouldn't care about her.
- - { Roleplayed by @ Kat4Life } - -
(I hope thats better now! I realized there were many spelling errors and I kept using the word "Also" alot. I changed his backstory, and now here is Clearkit's.)
♀ - - { Clearkit } -- { Kit } - -
Clearkit is a she-cat kit with completely white fur. She has thick and short fur, which prevents her from getting cold easily, and has navy blue eyes with small black elipse-shaped pupils. Her tail is long and slim, which gives her excellent balance, tho can be difficult to maintain. Her ears are large and pointy, which isn't much. Clearkit has a pointy snout, and can catch the scent of prey and other cats nearby well. She is smaller then her brother, which she dislikes, and has broad shoulders and her underbelly is very fluffy. Clearkit also has very long whiskers, which she must have gotten from her mother. She has many fears however, such as fish for some reason, and she hates its taste and smell, and badgers, bears, wolves, mountain lions, anything else that is very hostile. Clearkit likes to be energetic and confident, and tries her best to be honest. She enjoys teasing and insulting others-in a friendly way of course, and wants to encourage other cats. If one of her loved ones are in danger, she can become serious and unfriendly, even more if the clan does not do anything. Sometimes she remembers her mother, where the thing is, she has bad memory. She only remembers her face, and says that when she becomes a warrior she might go out and find her mother, even if she is dead. Clearkit wants to become a warrior very much, and be loyal to the clan.
- - { Roleplayed by @ Kat4Life } - -
I decided to do a Family Tree and name their mother Morninglight.
- - { Family Tree } - -
♀ ♂
{ Morninglight }-----ღ-----{ Silentwater }
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{ ??? }---ღ---{ Smokekit }---⌘---{ Clearkit }---ღ---{ ??? }
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Post by ☁︎煙Smokeful Skies空☁︎ on Apr 26, 2017 14:06:42 GMT -5
Thanks for telling me!
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Apr 26, 2017 23:27:19 GMT -5
His mother used to be a cat of Aetherclan, however she disappeared mysteriously for a unknown reason. I just gotta say I love this line bc it's so interesting?? Like I feel like there could be a future plot there if you decide to come up with the circumstances that led her to disappearing. |
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Post by ☁︎煙Smokeful Skies空☁︎ on Apr 27, 2017 1:31:41 GMT -5
Thanks! 😅 If I am allowed into Aetherclan, I might also make a form for Silentlight so maybe I could roleplay her. She might be a Starclan cat or a loner/rouge. Maybe even make a name and form for their unknown father?
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Apr 27, 2017 10:44:39 GMT -5
Actually I just noticed something. On Clearkit's form it says she has "diamond-like pupils"? What does that mean? ☁︎煙Smokeful Skies空☁︎ |
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Post by ☁︎煙Smokeful Skies空☁︎ on Apr 27, 2017 16:04:09 GMT -5
Actually I just noticed something. On Clearkit's form it says she has "diamond-like pupils"? What does that mean? ☁︎煙Smokeful Skies空☁︎ I mean her pupils are like the shape of a Elipse. Guess I should change that part to avoid confusion. |
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Post by ☁︎煙Smokeful Skies空☁︎ on Apr 27, 2017 16:17:53 GMT -5
Okay, just got a chance to look through your forms! A few things of note:
- I agree with Spotted on Silentlight. Very interesting; I hope you plan to bring that back as a potential plot later on haha.
- If you could get rid of the "Its actually real!" part from the form, that'd be great - I prefer not to have anything that needs OOC clarification from the rper in a form, just to keep things neat.
- We already have 2 medicine cat apprentices so he probably can't actually be one when he turns 6 moons old - but it's fine if you keep that as a character trait for him. I just thought I should clarify! Admittedly both of the medicine cat apprentices are pretty inactive though (and I play one of them... yes, I just threw shade at myself.)
Otherwise the changes look fine for Smokekit, and Clearkit looks fine as well!
Also, you can use the name Morninglight if you want. If a name is crossed out on the front page, then you can't use it - but Morning- has only been used once (to my knowledge) so it can be used one more time before Fireh will cross it out.
Last thing - you don't need to make a family tree, but we won't stop you if you want to lol. Okay, thank you! I will fix that. |
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Apr 27, 2017 17:03:42 GMT -5
Hmm now the only thing i see that needs fixing is implementation.. but that's hard with the way the characters are set up. I think just this ONCE i will allow you to break this rule. I have been lenient on it before but I've been wanting to stick to rules more ever since we've had a few problems with my leniency. Either way, thank you guys for checking the forms. And thank you for being so compliant, Smoke.  |
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Post by ☁︎煙Smokeful Skies空☁︎ on Apr 27, 2017 20:25:52 GMT -5
And thank you for being so compliant, Smoke. No problem! Just want to make sure everything is done right. Is my form alright? If so, am I allowed to be part of Aetherclan now? |
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Post by ☁︎煙Smokeful Skies空☁︎ on Apr 27, 2017 21:09:50 GMT -5
Yes, your forms are good to go now. Feel free to head on over to the main page and rp! Okay, thanks again! But before that, I have a question. Can I roleplay whenever I want? Or are there specific times? |
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