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Post by Rushingwolf on Oct 4, 2016 15:55:38 GMT -5
♀ - - { Shallowpaw } -- { Apprentice } - -
An average sized, yet not average colored is the best way to describe Shallowpaw. This she-cat has a short, yet soft, pelt with the base color of black. Burnt, yet vibrant orange mottles together with the black along her sides and down her hind legs, and even mixes into bits of her snowy white underside. The orange also mottles into her tail, parts of her shoulders, chest, front legs, and even her face. Her nose is a pinky-orange color, and the entire rest of her nose is that burnt orange color, which extends into a splotch on top of her right eye. Every paw has some sort of orange spot on it, except for her hind right one, which is pure white. Well, all of her paws are white but that is the only plain one. Her chest is also white, along with her chin and some faded bits throughout her pelt. The tip of her left ear is missing, and her eyes are an intense pale brownish-yellow color. Shallowpaw is an interesting character. She has a short-temper, and when angered, she is a force to be reckoned with. She is very opinionated, and when another cat disagrees with her, or even if she disagrees with them, she is bound to lash out. On top of being opinionated, she is very honest, almost too honest. She has her times when she is nice and collected, but the second something doesn't go her way she's a completely different cat. She is also very gullible. She is easy to fool, and once she realizes that she has been, well, the cat that played a trick on her better be sorry.
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Oct 4, 2016 19:26:02 GMT -5
Shallowpaw's personality traits confuse me a bit.
It says she's calm and collected but then she also has anger problems? it's a bit confusing to me for her to have both traits.
Like
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just so i understand, aside not caring and being angry easy, she's normally got a cool, stoic attitude? or?
Sorry, just wanting to make sure I understand her character.
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Post by Rushingwolf on Oct 4, 2016 19:41:26 GMT -5
Maybe I worded it wrong?
I meant for it to be that she generally is calm and goes with the flow but she has a short temper and portrays herself as "not caring" when she is annoyed. I guess maybe she's a bit passive aggressive and moody? Like she's pretty cool with everything most of the time but when she disagrees with someone or someone disagrees with her and points it out she's quick to jump on them. Or if she fails at something it makes her aggravated and hostile. So basically if things are going her way she's calm and collected, but when they aren't she's quick to jump. Did that make sense?
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Oct 4, 2016 20:20:31 GMT -5
♀ - - { Shallowpaw } -- { Apprentice } - -
An average sized, yet not average colored is the best way to describe Shallowpaw. This she-cat has a short, yet soft, pelt with the base color of black. Burnt, yet vibrant orange mottles together with the black along her sides and down her hind legs, and even mixes into bits of her snowy white underside. The orange also mottles into her tail, parts of her shoulders, chest, front legs, and even her face. Her nose is a pinky-orange color, and the entire rest of her nose is that burnt orange color, which extends into a splotch on top of her right eye. Every paw has some sort of orange spot on it, except for her hind right one, which is pure white. Well, all of her paws are white but that is the only plain one. Her chest is also white, along with her chin and some faded bits throughout her pelt. The tip of her left ear is missing, and her eyes are an intense pale brownish-yellow color. Shallow paw is an interesting character. For the most part, this she-cat is calm and collected, though she is bound to fits of rage. She is angered easily, and is a force to be reckoned with when she is. On top of having a short temper and the act of not caring for many things, she is very gullible. She is the cat to get mixed up into bad things when she originally had good intentions, or plainly just didn't know what was going on.
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Post by Rushingwolf on Oct 4, 2016 20:23:10 GMT -5
Autocorrect probably^
I have a Mac and it gets annoying with stuff like this lol
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Post by Rushingwolf on Oct 4, 2016 20:58:34 GMT -5
Maybe I'm just seeing things differently. I feel like as a person one can be generally calm and easy going but still be able to lose their temper easily. Just having a short fuse perse, though they aren't always angry. Not trying to argue, just trying to clear it up which I'm obviously not doing a very good job doing. I'll fix it, though since I'm not sure how else to word it, I may just take out the entire calm part altogether. Thank you for the input^^
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Oct 4, 2016 22:26:26 GMT -5
No, I think it's totally realistic. I'm actually quite a bit like that myself.
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Oct 4, 2016 23:00:00 GMT -5
thought I'd say this here bc I didn't know which thread would be better but this seemed like the place🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 is Hummingpaw, who I'm renaming as soon as I make a decision, accepted once I do change her name or do I have to add a couple more toms first? |
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Oct 5, 2016 6:40:33 GMT -5
Rushingwolf; I think i get her personality a bit better. Calm most of the time, but angered easy..? It might be best to highlight what would make her upset though, like examples, just to get a clearer understanding. I only think it's kind of tough to be a collected type, but then next thing you know be all up in arms and angry. ^-^ That's why I'm kind of confused by her character traits a bit. Because collected can also mean composed. So instead of having in her form "she's bound by fits of rage." it might be better and clearer for everyone if you can include the possible examples of what can make her upset. And also include that she like.. isn't always angry as you said. Just so it doesn't seem like.. too random.. if that makes sense? I'm sorry if i'm not making sense myself. I think I get her character, and can sorta see it. But I feel her actual form description might be a little to vague for that.. if that make sense. Goodness me i'm so sorry. ѕρσσкуѕку; Add a couple toms/kill some of your she-cats. Remember I told you that she can't be accepted, or any other female character you make, until you have a difference by 3 between each gender? Like mentioned too, it wouldn't be in your best interest to immediately solve this issue, since uh, you'll be pretty overwhelmed, but it is still your choice. I only ask that you make characters that you know you will rp
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Post by Rushingwolf on Oct 5, 2016 7:05:02 GMT -5
Will do :3
I'll do it when I get home later^^
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Oct 5, 2016 8:46:10 GMT -5
Thank you Spook.
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Post by Rushingwolf on Oct 5, 2016 14:13:30 GMT -5
So I fixed her personality, please let me know how it is :3
I'm sorry for this whole mix-up.
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Oct 5, 2016 16:33:16 GMT -5
She looks good now |
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Post by Rushingwolf on Nov 8, 2016 15:03:12 GMT -5
wip wip neigh neigh ♀ - - { Webwhisker } -- { Warrior } - - A small solid black she-cat with piercing pale gray-green eyes. Webwhisker has a very hostile look to her, her eyes doing all of the justice for her looks. They are almond shaped and slightly slanted inward, giving her the appearance of an angry face. Her midnight black pelt is fluffy and her tail is plumy. She is smaller than most cats, giving her the appearance of being an apprentice. And while she is young, she is glad to be a warrior. Webwhisker isn't a cat to mess with. She is cynical and always serious. A grouch, if you will. She has tough outer shell that is hard to break, but her small body is home to a warm heart. It just takes the right cat and a lot of patience to make it known. Though she may seem disinterested and tired of everyone, that is not always the case. Webwhisker is a good listener and often has good advice, it's really just a matter of trying to coax it out of her. She is usually shrouded in negativity and pessimism, always expecting the worst. The majority of this comes from her kit hood. She wasn't always a cynic. In fact, Webwhisker was a happy kit. It was time that took a toll on her, not to mention the constant exclusion and belittlement from her mother and peers. This caused the she-cat to grow cold and hard. However, that ray of sunshine is still inside her somewhere, and is ready to come out. - - { Roleplayed by Rushingwolf } - - totally not my planned junipernose baby |
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Nov 8, 2016 17:36:44 GMT -5
She's so cute! ^.^ couple of things though, in line 4 there's a space between web and whisker and at the beginning of line 5 it says touch instead of tough, which I'm assuming is what you meant. 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 I hope you don't mind me making comments like this. When I read it back it sounded like I was speaking like a mod, but that wasn't my intention. I'm just really good at proofreading and like to say something if I see an error. |
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Post by Rushingwolf on Nov 8, 2016 17:58:21 GMT -5
[ Ugh
Sorry I have a Mac and it autocorrects everything. I'll go fix that. Thanks! ]
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Nov 8, 2016 18:03:23 GMT -5
Np! I get that autocorrect thing tho ugh haha |
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Nov 10, 2016 11:49:25 GMT -5
She looks good. You may rp her.
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Post by Rushingwolf on Nov 10, 2016 13:36:25 GMT -5
[ Thank you Fireh ^^ ]
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Nov 21, 2016 21:17:19 GMT -5
♂ -- { Icestep } -- { Warrior } -- Icestep is a trans white tom with gray patches on his back, gray flecks and stripes on his tail and face, and gray paws. His eyes are an icy light blue. He is completely antisocial and doesn't really understand how to communicate with other cats. On the outside, he appears completely apathetic. On the inside, he's full of emotions that he's bottled up for his entire life. He swears up and down that he never feels anything, but in reality he's just severely in denial. It's an extremely unhealthy practice and there's no doubt that one day this mask he's put up will crumble and it definitely won't be pretty. Getting close to this tom is nearly impossible, as he shuts out anyone and everyone. He doesn't have any family, either, having lost all of his littermates and both his parents throughout his life. With each loss, he closed himself off more and more. Now, he wears his mask of stoicism like armor, though he doesn't realize just how fragile this actually makes him. -- { Roleplayed by ѕρσσкуѕку } --
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Nov 23, 2016 3:28:34 GMT -5
He looks good. Although very sad lol
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Nov 23, 2016 5:09:01 GMT -5
I know hahaha I'm gonna enjoy the angst so much
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Nov 25, 2016 7:19:43 GMT -5
SO LATE BUT SAME SPOTTED
SAME
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Nov 25, 2016 8:09:32 GMT -5
This is only one of the few characters i was making... lol I'll be submitting more as time passes, since i'VE BEEN WORKING IN THE DRAFTS EVERY NOW AND THEN but here's one i found that was finished so xD My goal with her is for her to be more vocal and confident. Perhaps even cold?? so hopefully she turns out as such. ♀ - - { Brookpaw } -- { Warrior } - - A lithe and slender walnut coloured she-cat. Her fur is quite short, but its also got a glossy tint. She has darker brown ears, paws and tail as well as muzzle. However, she has a white diamond marking on her forehead and a splash of white on her throat, leaking slightly down to her chest. Brookpaw's tail tip is also white, and her nose and paw pads are dark brown. Her eyes are a very striking royal blue, with small flecks of lighter tones. Brookpaw is a delicate thing. She has a very hard time speaking up for herself, and is almost always being run into things she never had a say in. When she was younger, it was very often the other cats would force her into doing tasks they didn't like. Such as being forced to take their place for cleaning the nest, or playing the part in a game that nobody liked to play as. Besides being quite easy to manipulate, she's actually very sweet and soft. It's always been hard for anyone to see her become angry, which was a bit worrying to her parents as it seems as though she disconnects from her own wants. Even if a cat in front of her was a glutton and they still asked for her share of prey, she would give it up without an argument. It is only when she sees others she holds dear being treated wrongly that she builds up the nerve to speak seriously and carefully. Often a side not seen, yet a side that others could be envious for when it comes out. In these moments, she's very calm, collected, and cool; dishing out extremely well and careful words. Given that she's pretty introverted at times, she is generally a smart cat, and tries to think up various ways to go about doing things. She also does her best to try and see why others might think differently from her and tries to find a lesson in everything. If she were not driven away from speaking up, she would more than probably be able to debate with others very well, and provide excellent arguments and perspectives. It's a small habit of hers to be found deeply thinking when alone, which more often than not, leaves others to prod her in order to grasp her attention.- - { Roleplayed by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 } - - |
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Nov 25, 2016 16:39:39 GMT -5
Oh my gosh she's like the sweetest thing ever. I'd love to rp one of my characters with her sometime. ^.^
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Nov 25, 2016 16:52:34 GMT -5
aWE thanks Spotted ^-^ I'm glad you think she is. ]
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Nov 28, 2016 10:59:42 GMT -5
And here's another one xD ♂ - - { Duskriver } -- { Warrior } - - A solid silver tom with lean muscles and broad-shoulders. His face is splotched with white and so is his tail. Duskriver has dark gray paws and dark gray ears. He has smooth, feather-soft fur and his eyes are a striking bright blue. Little, small darker flecks trace his backside and he has relatively big paws. This tom is a kind soul. He truly believes in chivalry, and is often very honorable and respectable to everyone. At times he can be quite the dunce though, missing the point of things and sometimes saying things that shouldn't have come out the way they did. Another small quirk of his is that he often gets embarrassed and has a hard time with romance. Flirting on accident when he doesn't mean to, missing cues, not saying the right thing at the right time. It's genuinely hard for him, and because of that he is geared towards friendship instead of seeking out romantic partnership. Cats who have had interest in him at some point or another call him quite the airhead with such things, and they aren't particularly wrong. Aside his romantic failures, he still tries his best to be kind to others and offers sympathy freely wherever it may be needed. He also trusts others a bit too quick but he believes that if he offers trust first, the trust will soon be returned back.
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Post by HvghDuhh on Nov 29, 2016 18:26:27 GMT -5
♂ - - { Nettlewhisker } -- { Warrior } - - Standing at average height for a tom, Nettlewhisker has broad shoulders and long black fur. His eyes are a dark hazel green and they normally hold a gentle stare. Nettlewhisker's whiskers are long and white tinted with light grey at the ends and his front left paw has a white sock. His only flaw is that his tail had been bit off by a fox at a young age, leaving him with a stump. Learning how to adapt to his new tail, Nettlewhisker still thrives as any other cat would, with or without a tail. Nettlewhisker has a cool temperment, meaning he is laid back, gentle, and always open to listen. He tends to get snappy, but only when a cat really gets the better of him. He is easygoing and loves kits, hoping to have some of his own in time. Brother is Oakwind and sister is Maplefur. - - { HvghDuhh } - - ♂ - - { Oakwind } -- { Warrior } - - Oakwind is a Bengal, which makes him stand quite tall next to his clanmates. The base of Oakwinds coat is a light brown, while he has splotches of darker brown dotted around his coat. All of these splashes of color have a small ring of black outlining the dark brown. Along with these circles of brown, Oakwind has stripes of black on his tail, legs, and faintly on his face. Oakwind has piercing golden eyes. Oakwind is a very friendly and intelligent cat, and he loves to be around cats at almost all times. Oakwind is very playful, and even though he has never had kits of his own, he is always around the nursery, playing with the kits. He loves anything to do with water. Because of his large size, Oakwind is a skilled fighter, but he finds it hard to battle, as he deems it unfair for his opponents. You would expect him to be exceptionally good hunter, he is clumsy when he hunts, but he manages to catch prey when he is extremely focused. Brother is Nettlewhisker and sister is Maplefur. - - { HvghDuhh } - - ♀ - - { Maplefur } -- { Warrior } - - Maplefur's pelt is light brown with darker splotches and light amber eyes, like sap on a maple tree. Her four paws, have white paint like splatters on them and her fur is a silky medium length. She has longer claws than normal and they curve down like talons. Her ears have lynx like tufts and her build is small and simple. Maplefur's temperment is gentle. She has an open mind and is always willing to give a story if no other cat has one of their own to share. Her heart is always open, waiting for the right tom to make his move. She tends to be a bit shy at times but that can easily take a turn the other way. Brothers are Nettlewhisker and Oakwind. - - { HvghDuhh } - - |
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