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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Sept 28, 2016 4:01:45 GMT -5
Here are my new characters. Four new toms and 3 DF cats that can be used for any future plots involving evilness. ♂ - - { Edwin } -- { Loner } - - Edwin is a very large Maine Coon tom with a silky dark blue-gray pelt of long fur. His sweeping tail and tufted ears are clear indicators of his breed, his broad face and large ears also adding to the tom's Maine Coon appearance. His eyes are a clear, soft blue that's about the color of the sky at dusk. They hold a kind sort of wisdom, and a knowledge of how terrifying the world can really be. Edwin's story is certainly a complicated one. This tom was born in AetherClan as Stormkit alongside three siblings, a brother and two sisters, just days before his mother and father were exiled for plotting to overthrow the Clan's leader at the time. The whole family left the Clan and tried to survive a harsh leaf-bare on their own. Along the way they met a kittypet named Edwin, a gray tabby tom, who helped them find shelter. Stormkit's name was changed to Edwin by his mother in honor of the tom who had helped them, but also to forsake the Clan life that she wanted to forget. Two of young Edwin's siblings died before the snow had melted, and the other of starvation shortly after. His father had long been gone at that point, being fed up with his mate's constant complaining and criticism. Edwin was raised mainly by his mother, just the two of them surviving against all odds. She died of old age a little while ago, and he now wanders around trying to find a purpose for his lonely life. - - { Roleplayed by ѕρσσкуѕку } - -
- - { Berryfawn } -- { Warrior } - -
Berryfawn was born a tom, but never identified with being one. Nor did they identify as a she-cat. Instead, they prefer to be neither. Their pelt is a light cream base color with white points and faint tabby markings on their legs and tail. Their eyes are a constantly inquisitive clear blue and they have a bright pink nose. They are kind and caring, but only once you get to know them. To strangers, they are cautious and guarded. Even toward Clanmates who are more like acquaintances than friends, their walls are up. They constantly face a fear of rejection, as their mother didn't accept their gender identity and disowned them. Their three siblings, two sisters and a brother, always loved and accepted them. Unfortunately, all three siblings were lost in a battle and Berryfawn found themself alone. Now more than ever, their walls are nearly impenetrable unless purposefully let down, so getting to know this cat will be even more difficult than before. - - { Roleplayed by ѕρσσкуѕку } - -
♂ - - { Thrushpaw } -- { Apprentice } - - Thrushpaw is a light brown tom with very faint, barely visible darker brown dapples throughout his soft pelt and light green eyes. He is of average stature, but his pelt makes him look a little chubbier than he actually is because it's a bit on the fluffy side. He has large paws with little tufts of fur sticking out between each toe and a long, thick tail. He's constantly curious, always wanting to explore and learn about the world. Unfortunately, he's not really the brightest tom and has trouble learning and remembering things, so you may have to tell him the same story several times over before it sticks and actually makes sense to him. If you can get past his low intellect, he is possibly the sweetest and most generous cat you'll ever meet. He's always willing to lend a paw and really just wants to make the world a better place. He tries to be a great friend, but he can't keep a secret and often forgets if someone tries to make plans with him. He doesn't have a planner's mind, so he lives each moment to the fullest and is always smiling. - - { Roleplayed by ѕρσσкуѕку } - -
♂ - - { Blacksquirrel } -- { Warrior } - - Blacksquirrel is a quiet and reserved black tom with fiery orange socks and a dark brown tail-tip. His eyes are bright amber. He is a large tom, but has a lean figure. His orange paws are large and make him an excellent swimmer. His claws are long and sharp as well, which allows for fast climbing. He rarely speaks to anyone unless spoke to, and is a fairly mysterious tom. All anyone knows about his past is that he was found as a rogue kit, having lost his parents and siblings to a fox. He is secretly very sweet and gentle, and has a huge soft spot for kits. He is an old-fashioned romantic and believes in wooing a cat before anything else. - - { Roleplayed by ѕρσσкуѕку } - -
♀ - - { Viperthorn } -- { Dark Forest } - - Viperthorn is a fairly dark brown tabby she-cat with jet black stripes and startling bright yellow eyes. Black fur spans halfway up her legs and there is a thin black stripe running from her nose to the tip of her tail. A small scar above her left eye and a nick in her right ear show this cat to have fought in many battles and come out on top each time. Her personality fits her name perfectly - she's basically a viper in a cat's body. With loyalty to none but her brother, Wolftalon, she could turn on anyone in a second. She's also incredibly violent, prone to angry outbursts followed by an eerie cold calm in her calculating eyes. She is practically brilliant, and has a solution to nearly every problem she faces. Ruthless, uncaring, manipulative, and highly intelligent, Viperthorn is a formidable opponent to face. She's about as close to being a psychopath as a cat can be. Unsurprisingly, upon her untimely death she found herself in the Dark Forest instead of StarClan. Most cats would be terrified by the prospect of eternal darkness, but when Viperthorn arrived all she could do was smile. - - { Roleplayed by ѕρσσкуѕку } - -
♂ - - { Wolftalon } -- { Dark Forest } - - Wolftalon is a mottled dark brown and dark gray tom with black tabby stripes and vibrant yellow-green eyes. He has a long scar on his left shoulder and one on his tail. Nearly as ruthless as his sister, Viperthorn, this tom is incredibly intimidating. He isn't of noticeably large stature, but he is an experienced fighter and incredibly vicious in battle. He isn't quite as smart or calculating as his sister, and is definitely the less dominant of the two. However, he is just as terrifying to face especially since he never goes anywhere without his sister, the only cat he has ever been loyal to. He and his sister died at almost exactly the same time and ended up in the Dark Forest together. - - { Roleplayed by ѕρσσкуѕку } - -
♀ - - { Shadepaw } -- { Dark Forest } - - Shadepaw is a small charcoal gray she-cat with cold dark blue eyes. The cat equivalent of a sociopath, she has no concept of proper social customs. She's rude and arrogant, calculating and relentless, along with fostering a hate for everyone and everything but herself. She's unpredictable and always angry, and cares for no cat in the world but herself. She has no real allegiance or loyalty at the moment, but she secretly craves belonging and purpose in her miserable existence. She is a perfect target for cult-like mentalities, being easily susceptible to peer pressure and manipulation. This young she-cat would probably perform any task asked of her by someone she respects, no matter how grisly or potentially dangerous. This makes her a dangerous weapon for anyone who can take advantage of her insecurities. She died slowly, attacked by an eagle by herself on a night walk and bled out as she struggled to make it home. When she awoke in the Dark Forest, she was initially terrified. But as time went on, she realized that this Place of No Stars was the only place where she could find cats like her, cats whom she could respect and serve. - - { Roleplayed by ѕρσσкуѕку } - -
Edwin has a bit of a weird background, and I wanted to make sure that it was okay with you? Also I wanted to confirm that vipers are found in mountains. I still have a little to make up for, but this closes the gap between the genders to 4. ...Actually if you count Skypetal as a StarClan cat now the gap is 3. So yay!
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Sept 28, 2016 5:01:27 GMT -5
I'm off to bed but i feel the need to quickly mention that DF characters don't count in the gender count. I can't count your gender-character gap right now but I thought I would let you know they don't count. Either way, thank you for making them I'm sure if I don't check over them in a timely manner that Ðᴏʟᴄᴇ will.
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Post by Ðᴏʟᴄᴇ on Sept 28, 2016 11:13:22 GMT -5
Just got a chance to look at your new characters Spotted! Ofc Fireh, you have the final say in any changes you might want her to make. ^^
My only suggestion is - For Edwin, if in his life he has only lived as a clan cat then loner, idk if the name Edwin makes sense since it's kind of a twoleg-ish name? If he had been a kittypet in his life I would say differently but, yeah. xD
Just going to do a bit of math here, so if I made any mistakes someone please tell me. So you have 16 she-cats and 5 toms. That's a difference of 11. Since Skypetal is dead, that brings the difference down to 10 with 15 she-cats and 5 toms. With the new cats you just signed up, you now have 15 she-cats and 8 toms. That's still a difference of 7. Iirc, you said you had planned deaths for 2 of your toms and 3 of your she-cats (Grayfern, Foxflight, Bluepaw, Sundance, and Sparrowmoon). When that happens, then you'll have 12 she-cats and 6 toms. If I did my arithmetic right, then with your new characters + the deaths you had planned, your gender difference would be 6. Again, anyone is free to double-check with me on that.
Anyways, other than that your new characters all look good to go!
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Sept 28, 2016 14:26:20 GMT -5
Just got a chance to look at your new characters Spotted! Ofc Fireh, you have the final say in any changes you might want her to make. ^^
My only suggestion is - For Edwin, if in his life he has only lived as a clan cat then loner, idk if the name Edwin makes sense since it's kind of a twoleg-ish name? If he had been a kittypet in his life I would say differently but, yeah. xD
Just going to do a bit of math here, so if I made any mistakes someone please tell me. So you have 16 she-cats and 5 toms. That's a difference of 11. Since Skypetal is dead, that brings the difference down to 10 with 15 she-cats and 5 toms. With the new cats you just signed up, you now have 15 she-cats and 8 toms. That's still a difference of 7. Iirc, you said you had planned deaths for 2 of your toms and 3 of your she-cats (Grayfern, Foxflight, Bluepaw, Sundance, and Sparrowmoon). When that happens, then you'll have 12 she-cats and 6 toms. If I did my arithmetic right, then with your new characters + the deaths you had planned, your gender difference would be 6. Again, anyone is free to double-check with me on that.
Anyways, other than that your new characters all look good to go! His name would've been Stormkit when they left the Clan. Would it be better if I included a backstory for the name, such as they were helped out by an ex-kittypet named Edwin and the parents decided to call him that? Also...hmm. I'm not doubting your arithmetic, but I got a different count. For she-cats I have: Spotted, Falling, Sorrel, Raven, Fire, Sun, Song, Blossom, Sparrow, Olive, Blue, Freckle, Cherry, (JADEPAW OOPS I FORGOT ABOUT JADE okay so I was one off) For toms I have: Crow, Foxflight, Grayfern, Dustfall, and Raintree, and now Edwin, Thrushpaw, and Blacksquirrel. And then Berryfawn. Also I'm not counting Fernkit and Sootkit yet as they haven't been born, but there's one of each there so it doesn't affect the difference. The count rn is 14 she-cats and 8 toms. I think I initially counted Berry as a tom because they were born as one, but then I remembered that we have an agender section now. I definitely know that DF cats don't count in the gender ratio, but I must've been so tired that I counted Wolf anyway. In my calculations from last night, I forgot Jadepaw which would've put the she-cat count at 13, then I also counted Wolftalon which would've put the count at 9 toms. That's still four though??? I must have been really tired. Oh, that's right, I also counted Berryfawn. So that would've made it 13:10 in my mind. Okay that makes more sense.Either way, the calculation I got just now is 14:8 which means I have a difference of 6 still. Wow I was way off. I do actually have a set of three brothers and a kittypet kit written up so when I've gotten a chance to rp these guys a bit I'll sign them up too. I'm planning on killing Raven, Sun, Fox, Gray, Dust, Sparrow, Blue, and Rain. So that would take the count to 10:4 which is still the same difference of 6. So whilst I think your first count may have been off by one or two, we both arrived at the same conclusion.
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Sept 28, 2016 19:25:38 GMT -5
ѕρσσкуѕку; Maybe his back story could be that because they were finished with the clan, he was renamed to Edwin? I do think it would be a cheesy thing for the poor lad if he would still respond to Stormkit, or Stormpaw i'm totally not thinking up angst for character bg tho imagine if he thought up a warrior name for himself
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Sept 29, 2016 1:40:57 GMT -5
I added this to my form: "Along the way they met a kittypet named Edwin, a gray tabby tom, who helped them find shelter. Stormkit's name was changed to Edwin by his mother in honor of the tom who had helped them, but also to forsake the Clan life that she wanted to forget." I actually quite like this little addition to his story, so Ðᴏʟᴄᴇ thanks for prompting me to think of it! I actually have so many characters made still that I haven't posted here? It's like I have an addiction to making them. I've got two sets of siblings (one male one female each), a kittypet tom-kit, a young female rogue, a warrior, three warrior brothers, and several others that I'm not remembering rn. WHY AM I LIKE THIS
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Sept 29, 2016 1:43:12 GMT -5
You may want to slow down first to at least rp your characters you have right now, Spotted. but I'm glad you're excited about them.
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Sept 29, 2016 1:49:33 GMT -5
Oh yeah no definitely. I don't want to overload myself too much. Like honestly I know I could handle and balance them all but I'd have to add them gradually or I'd be like "AHHHHSKJLH WHAT AM I DOING" so yeah, I'm definitely going to wait a while.
Am I good to rp those guys though? (the ones I signed up, that is)
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Post by Ðᴏʟᴄᴇ on Sept 29, 2016 2:01:39 GMT -5
Yeah your cats are good to go for rping! And thank you, but it was your idea so the credit should all go to you. I personally think the idea is a nice touch too, haha.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 29, 2016 2:12:17 GMT -5
{ spotted, maybe edwin and saorise have some history together ?? i don't know }
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Sept 29, 2016 3:03:47 GMT -5
What dolce said haha. I think your new characters are a bit interesting and different from your other ones. I though I should mention that c:
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Oct 4, 2016 13:56:27 GMT -5
AND HERE IS MY EVIL LIL CHICKIE lol she could probably use minor tweaking, but this is how she is right now, and i just. i love the type of female characters that are pretty but pure evil beyond any standard. I do think there is the hope of her changing, but at the moment she's pretty obsessed with damaging others physically and mentally. A very sly and sadistic thing. I hope she'll fit well into some plots/character development things :3
♀ - - { Shadowwing } -- { Dark Forest } - -
Dark and mysterious, are the right words to describe this beautiful she-cat. Her fur is a beautiful silver-cream colour and it's very silky, with dark, little marble tabby markings on her legs, chest and face. These markings only add to her grace as they seem to fade in certain spots, making her look elegant and unique. Her structure is a slender, but lithe form and her legs are long. Her eyes are a striking maroon-red that seem to penetrate into the soul of any cat they come across. Shadowwing is a suave she-cat. She's well with her words and comes off as a formal, easily trustworthy she-cat thanks to her excellence with speaking. Knowing how to persuade any cat into her fell plans. At first, the dark things she delved into were.. mere accidents she had only been on the side to witness. But after time after time, this she-cat soon began to enjoy seeing others pain. The mere thought of having another cat bend to her will is truly a feeling she can't seem to let go off. It would be wrong to say she's in the Dark Forest because she hates AetherClan, or StarClan. No, this alluring yet heinous she-cat just can't seem to calm her obsession with causing misfortune. There is simply no other driving force for her actions besides seeing the defeated, sorrowful look that she is able to inflict on others. Sure, at one point this wicked she-cat had been a loyal serving warrior. Always helping where she could, being so kind to others and yet so innocent. It had taken only one time for her to realize that being the goody-two shoes she was, wasn't the life she truly wanted to lead. After she witnessed these two other warriors scheme and cause the death of their leader, motivated by pure ambition, it left this she-cat wanting more. As the time she lived in, was a time of true peace and tranquility. To see the agony of her clan mates faces again at the loss of their leader was more than enough for her to delve in what she did, as it was something so different yet oddly invigorating. And following that, it wasn't long until she too was the one pulling the strings instead of watching. Willing others to fall. To give up. She had even begun to see the truth in her appearance, and soon after knowing ways to use the cats who fell for her just by her looks. This nefarious cat only died by pure accident when she had eaten a foul piece of prey. Perhaps it was nature doing StarClan's work, as her actions had never been found out by anyone, always finding ways to pin the blame on other poor souls. Needless to say, this villainous beauty found her way to the Dark Forest in a matter of moments upon her death. Only she wasn't afraid like many other residents when they arrived, oh no, she welcomed her new home wholeheartedly.
- - { Roleplayed by Fireh } - -
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Oct 4, 2016 14:13:35 GMT -5
Quick note, you said "But after time after time". Was that just supposed to be "But after time"? Also I love her
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Oct 4, 2016 14:17:01 GMT -5
I could word it that way, but i kinda liked the way it sounded with but after time after time xD Mostly because i read this description out a few times to see how it would sound. I'm glad you love her :')
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Oct 4, 2016 14:18:14 GMT -5
Quick add on, it's also because i feel it like.. gives emphasis on the 'time and time again' sort of saying. I hope i'm making sense here. ;v;
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Oct 4, 2016 14:21:30 GMT -5
Yeah no I got it, I just wanted to make sure it wasn't an accidental repeat or something.
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Oct 4, 2016 14:23:15 GMT -5
Awwe, thanks for being my checker then!
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Post by Rushingwolf on Oct 4, 2016 14:31:41 GMT -5
Crying because she's perfect
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Oct 4, 2016 14:39:57 GMT -5
im glad she's perfect :'3 no forreal, thank you!
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Post by Salt on Oct 4, 2016 14:45:22 GMT -5
"I'm John Laurens in the place to be!" OOC~
Here, I have one more. Next up, my calico elder!
[ ✣ ] { Female Form }
♀ - - { Swallowsong} -- { Warrior } - -
Swallowsong has pale blue fur and two darker paws. Her chest has a small patch of white on it. Swallowsong isn't fat, skinny, plump, husky, or lanky. She's just tiny. Her fur splits on her back, revealing soft, silky silver fur. She has a bobtail as well as each toe is dipped in a snow white colour. Her muzzle is a light grey and she has soft, feathery white whiskers. Swallowsong has green eyes. Swallowsong may be a Warrior, but she is very wise and playful. She loves to hunt and is talkative. Swallowsong has alwyas had a fear of cliffs and heights- and there's a good reason. When she was a kit, her mother let her and her brothers, Leopardpaw and Sharpkit, play outside the camp. Sharpkit fell off a cliff and she and Leopardpaw lived though he died moons later of a stomach bug.
- - { Roleplayed by Salt} - -
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Oct 4, 2016 15:08:42 GMT -5
AVERSA-CAT IS FINALLY FINISHED? CONGRATS FIREH :') <3 <3 SHE LOOKS GLORIOUS But as a mod... I have to do it. NOT ACCEPTED!
i regret nothing YOU CAN NEVER GO AGAINST YOUR ULTIMATE OVERLORDlol jk why bby :'( why u do disShe is finished though! haha, i have a feeling that if she were to ever change, she'd probably end up just as hopeless as Aversa in her own paralogue lost and confused and wondering why she still live tho :'(
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Oct 4, 2016 15:10:52 GMT -5
Hmm, Swallow looks good! Although it might be better to take her sexuality out. :3 You can always say in chat that she's straight. Her fear of heights is gonna be so weird considering where camp is, but at the same time i love the weakness she has. AND HER BOBTAIL BOBTAILS ARE CUTE
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Post by Salt on Oct 4, 2016 15:33:18 GMT -5
"I'm John Laurens in the place to be!" OOC~
Alright, let me remove that. That was just in so I didn't fudge up when I was making her. 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Oct 4, 2016 15:34:25 GMT -5
Okay! Thanks Bracken ^^
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Oct 4, 2016 15:41:18 GMT -5
Thank you! Shoot though, sorry but; I should probably ask you to just change the last sentence in her form a bit. It could be a bit confusing to read as it is to say "He died ..-insert why-" Instead, you should probably just flat out say something like "Though Leopardpaw did die moons later from a stomach bug." Just so it doesn't seem too... random in a form for a cat like Swallowsong. I hope i'm making sense. ^-^;
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Oct 4, 2016 15:52:13 GMT -5
There, she looks good now! You may rp her, she seems like such a cute little thing.
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