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Post by Deleted on Aug 11, 2017 16:31:29 GMT -5
but it's so basic and not unique
but I love the idea
basically, there's this girl, the child of two mothers. One of these mothers is a werewolf, and in this universe, there is a prophecy about a girl, half werewolf, who will recreate the civilization of lycanthropes, which fell to pieces when... actually idk how it fell, I only came up with this idea today, not everything is worked out yet. Turns out our lovely protagonist is the hero of the prophecy... but GUESS WHAT! Humans are afraid that lycanthropes creating another civilization for themselves will disrupt their world and how it works, even though the lycanthropes aren't harming them at all! The protagonist feels torn, because her mothers want her to recreate the lycanthrope civilization, but the humans (AKA literally everyone she knows, other then her one friend who's a werecat and her werewolf mother) want to prevent lycanthropes from being able to be free to be themselves, because they're afraid of them. Protagonist decides to run away from her newly developed emotional problems, (relatable) but not after visiting the graveyard to ask for the spirits' blessing. The whole graveyard lights up, and a necklace appears! Out of thin air! When protagonist puts on the necklace, it drags her far, far away from her village, and after a few days out in the wild without supplies, while protagonist is literally on the verge of dying, she uncovers a group of runaway supernaturals, such as vampires, nymphs, sirens, (not mermaids, sirens, they are different) fae, and, of course, lycanthropes. (among others) While the group of runaways are suspicious of her at first, they notice the necklace she has on and let her into the group. The runaways decide to start a village, far, far away from any people. Then, BOOM, timeskip. Protagonist is settling in nicely, and starts to believe that this is the society she was supposed to create. Then a human finds them and everything goes to hell. The human government captures everyone, and the protagonist learns that OOPSIE! by running away, she got her werewolf mother killed and her human mother wound up in jail. Protagonist, now with even bigger emotional issues, cries about it, but is now overwhelmed with determination to keep her newfound friends from getting executed.
and that's all I have atm
Tagging wadevvilson cause they seem to like my crappy stories
I know this sounds like a stupid teen fantasy book, but I really wanted to share this with y'all, I thought it would be nice to get some contrastive criticism on my little idea
also yes, the was inspired by the song Wolf by First Aid Kit. You can listen to it here
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Post by tiger beetle on Aug 11, 2017 16:44:31 GMT -5
it at least sounds like it could be entertaining; I'd probably read it
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Post by Deleted on Aug 11, 2017 16:46:31 GMT -5
it at least sounds like it could be entertaining; I'd probably read it thank you! I'm kinda ashamed of it because I don't really like it (I feel like it's clichéd) but I'm glad you like it!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 11, 2017 17:10:38 GMT -5
This sounds like a story idea I had but vampires instead of lycans. Except my idea was less fluffy and more violent, and the vampires DID actually want to murder and enslave the human race, so... >_>
But keep in mind I never write anything that I willingly share with anyone but myself so don't feel bad that we have similar ideas.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 11, 2017 17:12:14 GMT -5
This sounds like a story idea I had but vampires instead of lycans. Except my idea was less fluffy and more violent, and the vampires DID actually want to murder and enslave the human race, so... >_> But keep in mind I never write anything that I willingly share with anyone but myself so don't feel bad that we have similar ideas. tbh my idea wasn't as fluffy as it came off as, there's gonna be a lot more messed up crap, I just talked about the bare bones of the plot
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Post by Sησω on Aug 11, 2017 17:32:33 GMT -5
This is a pretty neat idea. I'd most likely read it if you made it.
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Post by tiger beetle on Aug 12, 2017 2:04:33 GMT -5
it at least sounds like it could be entertaining; I'd probably read it thank you! I'm kinda ashamed of it because I don't really like it (I feel like it's clichéd) but I'm glad you like it! there are clichés for sure, but entertainment value is there as well and the social commentary...I feel it in the air...I can touch it (unless it is coincidental but I still feel it)
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Post by wadevvilson on Aug 12, 2017 5:17:04 GMT -5
Werewolves? I'm in.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 12, 2017 6:16:58 GMT -5
Just sayin' Wolf by First Aid Kit is like my favourite song/I'd definitely read this if you wrote it
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Post by Alpha on Aug 12, 2017 9:21:18 GMT -5
was it the human or the werewolf that got impregnated.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 12, 2017 9:52:08 GMT -5
thank you! I'm kinda ashamed of it because I don't really like it (I feel like it's clichéd) but I'm glad you like it! there are clichés for sure, but entertainment value is there as well and the social commentary...I feel it in the air...I can touch it (unless it is coincidental but I still feel it) Ye, there's a bit of social commentary hidden in there This is a pretty neat idea. I'd most likely read it if you made it. Thanks! I kinda wanna work on it more, but I've found some other songs that might inspire me to finish my dumb story, ha I didn't know you liked werewolves! Just sayin' Wolf by First Aid Kit is like my favourite song/I'd definitely read this if you wrote it Yeah, I just got into listening from that song/Thank you! I didn't expect such a positive response! was it the human or the werewolf that got impregnated. The human, werewolf mom is trans and came out after Protagonist was born
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Post by wadevvilson on Aug 14, 2017 4:50:51 GMT -5
I didn't know you liked werewolves! I always thought they were pretty cool.
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