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Post by cricketleap81 on May 31, 2018 23:24:22 GMT -5
Mintpaw || cricketleap81 || 8 moons || Guard - Luminous, white she-cat with orange tipped ears and deep blue, intelligent eyes. Is quite fluffy and takes after her mother.
Warrior Name or Apprentice Requests?: Open to suggestions on warrior name and on a mentor. Personality: She can be on the quiet side but is very chatty when you get to know her. She is a decent strategist and can easily imagine a plan for any given situation, but doesn't think she will be taken seriously, as she is still young and looks fragile because of her small size and fluffy fur. She can get self-conscious and is sensitive to comments, even when they are said in a joking manner. As much as she loves her sister, Cricketpaw, she often just wants to be alone, either with her own friends or just by herself. She can get claustrophobic and often needs time alone to take a breather, which is why she loves to go solo hunting or take short walks in between duties. She also dreams of having a mate someday but tries not to think about it too much, as she can get carried away in her thoughts. Mate/Crush: can hardly wait for one Kits, if any: (can leave blank) Relationships: Mother Sunheart and sister Cricketpaw. History: Mother was loner before joining Pine Clan and then had Mintpaw and Cricketpaw. Other: Fishy. If you ever quit or fall inactive and have an important role, do you want this cat...? (select one): Option 3 Read more: wcrpforums.com/thread/41898/pineclan-joining-page-dnp#ixzz5H8i1vEOI
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Post by Deleted on May 31, 2018 23:51:31 GMT -5
cricketleap81 Hello, please read the rules as your missing something. Also, there is already a cat named Ivypaw and the medicine cat is named Swanfeather, to prevent confusion please change the names.
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Post by cricketleap81 on May 31, 2018 23:53:26 GMT -5
Sunheart || cricketleap81 || 36 moons || Vigilant - Small, white, fluffy she-cat with calm blue eyes, and long, luscious tail. She has a small nick in her ear and a thin pink scar from a skirmish as a loner.
Warrior Name or Apprentice Requests?: N/A Personality: Is quite shy and quiet and doesn't speak up much, being very reserved. She doesn't like to talk about her past as a loner much, as it pains her to relive the hardships of her past. She loves her daughters as fiercely as the sun and would give up her life to protect them and her adopted clan. As much as she loves to hunt, the loner inside of her still wants to explore so she often takes time to survey the area around the current territory. Unlike most of the other cats in the clan, she enjoys traveling to different places and seeing new things. Mate/Crush: unknown Kits, if any: Cricketpaw and Mintpaw Relationships: Cricketpaw and Mintpaw are her only family, but she wishes to get to know more of her clanmates better History: She was a loner all her life until she got caught in a bad storm and was injured. She had heard of a group of cats in the pines and searched to find them, still fatally wounded and weak. She eventually found Pine Clan and joined them on their journey. Along the way, she had her kits, Cricketpaw and Ivypaw, who are now apprentices. Other: Fishy If you ever quit or fall inactive and have an important role, do you want this cat...? (select one): Option 3 Read more: wcrpforums.com/thread/41898/pineclan-joining-page-open?page=13#ixzz5H91FKn1A
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Post by cricketleap81 on Jun 1, 2018 0:03:07 GMT -5
Did I fix everything? I am kind of new at this and I'm not quite sure what I missed before. Sorry about the name confusion, I honestly had no idea there were other characters with those names (probably should have checked before I sent XD)
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Post by Deleted on Jun 1, 2018 0:22:01 GMT -5
cricketleap81 It's alright. cx You'll get it. You still need to read the rules though, as your missing something on your form that's crucial for acceptance. Otherwise looks good, though gatherer should be replaced by collector as gatherer isn't a term used in PineClan.
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Post by cricketleap81 on Jun 1, 2018 11:11:10 GMT -5
I looked at the rules again, and I am still not sure whats missing . Am I just not reading the right page of rules? Am I not supposed to add the personality info yet?
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Post by Deleted on Jun 1, 2018 22:17:57 GMT -5
Sorry, the main page had a glitch which was linking the main page link to the image url instead. Fixed now. See the big link under the banner? That is the rp thread and also has rules and clan information which is mandatory to read first, and the rules have what your missing.
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Post by cricketleap81 on Jun 2, 2018 0:36:40 GMT -5
@raincloud33 I changed some things, let me know if I got it right this time. (crossing my fingers)
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Post by Deleted on Jun 2, 2018 19:20:05 GMT -5
Sorry to say it's still missing, it's a code word within the rules, please read the rules carefully.
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Post by cricketleap81 on Jun 3, 2018 0:42:08 GMT -5
@raincloud33 I have now read the rules twice over and I haven't found much. Only four typos and a couple fixes for my characters sub-ranks. I am becoming a little disheartened.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 3, 2018 2:46:14 GMT -5
It is between rule 1 and 7 and is literally just a password as proof for reading the rules. It'd be unfair to accept you as it's been a requirement for everyone to this point, so try and look again, I'm sure you'll get it. c: It is not to correct characters, it is a password as I said.
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Post by cricketleap81 on Jun 3, 2018 17:38:35 GMT -5
Oh wow, I just noticed it. I can not believe after looking the rules over so many times I never noticed. XD Sorry for all the hastle
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Post by Deleted on Jun 3, 2018 20:21:56 GMT -5
It's fine. cx Your accepted. You want a run down on events?
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Post by cricketleap81 on Jun 3, 2018 22:15:58 GMT -5
Yes, please! Thank you!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 3, 2018 22:47:14 GMT -5
cricketleap81 Here's a recap. Most of the timeline is here and pretty complete, up to a point. Then the rest is summarized relatively well here. Currently PineClan is mostly asleep or waking up, sun is rising, they are on the outskirts of farmland.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 15, 2018 20:08:47 GMT -5
Blossomkit || @raincloud33 || 5 Moons || Kit, N/a - Two sentences or more of description, only of pelt and eye color, gender, and any scars or defects if any.
Warrior Name or Apprentice Requests?: (IF a kit/apprentice/loner who'll join, what is your suggestion for warrior name! Or you want it to be a surprise? IF a warrior, delegate, deputy, or leader, you can also request a to mentor apprentice without a mentor, the warrior should be at/around 19-20 moons or more to have an apprentice. I shall assign the apprentice, so just put "would like an apprentice." and I'll assign them one! If nothing, just say n/a or leave blank.) Personality: (required) Mate/Crush: (can leave blank) Kits, if any: (can leave blank) Relationships: (family, friends, ect) History: (please at least state of clan born, ect) Other:
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Post by cosmo on Jul 19, 2018 0:33:31 GMT -5
Stonetail || cosmo || 17 moons || Hunter, Collector- A dark grey tabby with a cream-ish white underbelly, deep green eyes, and a white sock on their hind right paw. Short-furred, yet has a thick pelt which is well-insulated against cold or otherwise wet weather. Stonetail is large and broad-shouldered with a long, fluffy tail.
Warrior Name or Apprentice Requests?: n/a Personality: stonetail is a cat of few words, and prefers to let actions speak for themselves. while stonetail does not dislike other cats, the young warriors does not seek out their company as many their age might. instead, the somber tabby prefer to pace pineclan's territory, searching for prey or useful mosses or feathers to be brought back to camp. stonetail tends to be rather calm and even-tempered, though they are unafraid to speak their mind and disagree when the moment calls for it. Mate/Crush: n/a Kits, if any: n/a Relationships: none yet! History: stonetail was born into pineclan and aside from being a bit asocial, never stood out too much from any average apprentice you might find in the apprentice's den. Other: i type with proper capitalization when roleplaying! i will only be this casual in ooc situations. edit: whoops! fishy =-) If you ever quit or fall inactive and have an important role, do you want this cat... ? (select one): i would prefer option 2, similar to greystripe's disappearance in between the clans moving to the lake. i understand that they would not keep that role, but i would still like to be able to return to the character should i choose to!
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Post by Deleted on Jul 19, 2018 1:21:21 GMT -5
cosmo Accepted. c: If you need a rp recap let me know.
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Post by Stealthfire on Jul 21, 2018 22:54:09 GMT -5
(I'm doing two apprentices and two warriors, the warriors can be someone's siblings! If they are, I'm totally okay changing their ages to that of their siblings then) Bearpaw ||Stealthstar|| 7 moons || Apprentice, no subrank yet - Bearpaw is a dark brown tom with yellow eyes. He has a solid build and a thick coat, making him appear massive.
Warrior Name or Apprentice Requests?: n/a Personality: Bearpaw is eager and bright, but unusually clumsy. Despite this, he is a large powerful tom and so is able to fight quite well. Bearpaw is extremely loyal to his clanmates, but has been known to be a troublemaker. Mate/Crush: Kits, if any: Relationships: Bearpaw's sister is Swiftpaw. History: Bearpaw and Swiftpaw's mother Owlsky died recently of greencough. Other: fishyIf you ever quit or fall inactive and have an important role, do you want this cat... ? (select one): Option 1 or 3!
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Post by Stealthfire on Jul 21, 2018 23:03:12 GMT -5
Swiftpaw ||Stealthstar|| 7 moons || Apprentice, no subrank yet - Swiftpaw is a black and white she-cat with yellow eyes. She is long and lanky, with ears almost bigger than her head.
Warrior Name or Apprentice Requests?: n/a Personality: Swiftpaw is gentle and kind, and above all values fairness to all cats no matter the clan. She is thoughtful and thorough, and takes her time in everything she does. Swiftpaw is often overshadowed in decision making by her mischievous brother Bearpaw. Mate/Crush: Kits, if any: Relationships: Swiftpaw's brother is Bearpaw. History: Swiftpaw and Bearpaw's mother Owlsky died recently of greencough. Other: fishyIf you ever quit or fall inactive and have an important role, do you want this cat... ? (select one): Option 1 or 3!
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Post by Stealthfire on Jul 21, 2018 23:32:24 GMT -5
Oaktooth || Stealthstar || 33 moons || Vigilant - Oaktooth is a small tom with a solid brown pelt and green eyes. What he lacks in size and strength he makes up for in speed and ferocity.
Warrior Name or Apprentice Requests?: would like an apprentice Personality: Oaktooth is level headed, however the small tom is sullen and stern in nature. He is picky about which cats to be friendly to, and often has his own plans and motives. Although Oaktooth tries to put up a nice front, he is anything but trustworthy as a fellow warrior, with the exception being to his sisters, to whom he has always been true. Mate/Crush: Kits, if any: Relationships: Sisters are Cedarfire, Pollentail, and Tansytail History: Clan born Other: fishy If you ever quit or fall inactive and have an important role, do you want this cat... ? (select one): Option 1 or 3!
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Post by Stealthfire on Jul 21, 2018 23:48:52 GMT -5
Cedarfire || Stealthstar || 33 moons || Hunter, Fisher - Cedarfire is a light brown she-cat with black tinged fur and amber eyes. Her face and chest are dotted with scars from a fight with a loner when she was an apprentice.
Warrior Name or Apprentice Requests?: would like an apprentice Personality: Cedarfire rarely sits still. She is extremely quick to be friendly, and just as quick to be fiery as well. Cedarfire prefers to be anything but quiet, her sharp tongue often getting her in just as much trouble as it does fun. Although Cedarfire has trouble getting along with her brother Oaktooth sometimes, she can see right through him and has always tried to keep him on the right path. Mate/Crush: Kits, if any: Relationships: Brother is Oaktooth, sisters are Tansytail and Pollentail History: Clan born Other: fishy If you ever quit or fall inactive and have an important role, do you want this cat... ? (select one): Option 1 or 3!
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Post by Deleted on Jul 22, 2018 0:59:36 GMT -5
Stealthfire All accepted! Welcome aboard ss pineclan. brambleflight had some cats looking for siblings? Hope you don't mind me tagging you Bramble, do you still want siblings?
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Post by Stealthfire on Jul 22, 2018 11:15:02 GMT -5
brambleflight That sounds great! They can be 33 moons like Pollentail and Tansytail then!
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Post by Deleted on Jul 22, 2018 14:15:26 GMT -5
Note to self: make forms for kits and add everyone lol.
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Post by Rio on Jul 23, 2018 21:01:00 GMT -5
Blackberry || Laputani || 23 moons || Kittypet, Toril's Group - Blackberry is a well kept, black and dark brown tom with soft, silky fur and a plumy tail. He has greenish yellow eyes.
Warrior Name or Apprentice Requests?: Personality: Blackberry is boastful and egocentric, often viewing himself very highly. He is incredibly proud of the fact that he is a member of Toril's group and often brags about it, despite leading a comfortable life as kittypet. Blackberry doesn't like to get dirty would much rather throw insults than physically fight. He finds it hard to sympathise for the Pineclan cats. Mate/Crush: Kits, if any: n/a Relationships: n/a History: Blackberry was born and raised as a kittypet but was drawn into Toril's group with my promise of respect and kinship. Other: Fishy If you ever quit or fall inactive and have an important role, do you want this cat... ? (select one):Option 1, to be Deleted and Killed off in RP, either off screen/during a timeskip or temporarily rped by another user or you before quitting. Hope this is okay!
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