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Post by ChewyLoon on Nov 21, 2017 21:04:35 GMT -5
Twistedtail || ChewyLoon|| 23 Moons || Warrior, Guard, Vigilant - A massive, long-furred gray tabby tom with gleaming amber eyes and a long tail. He has a dark grey pelt with lighter grey tabby stripes and a white tail tip. He has a nick in his right ear and a three-clawed scar on his neck.
Warrior Name or Apprentice Requests?: Would like an apprentice. Personality: Twistedtail was born a joyous kitten, but this quickly depleted due to the way his mother treated him. He was still a good cat at heart as he grew and took care of his sister almost constantly. As he grew, however, he exhibited a rather strong sense of hot-headed aggression, often provoked easily during training and will lash out and confront almost any cat that is not a clanmate. He is fiercely loyal to his clanmates and is known for being rather paranoid as if he has something to hide. Despite that, he is a caring cat at heart but is very misguided due to the events of his life. He is rather secretly hateful towards StarClan for the hard life they've given him. Mate/Crush: None Kits, if any: None Relationships: Nettleheart (Mother, deceased), Thames (Father), Twilightpaw (Sister, deceased) History: Twistedtail was born to a gray she-cat named Nettleheart, who had an unknown relationship was a rogue tom named Thames. He was an abusive tom who majorly used her to try to plan an attack on PineClan, but he disappeared and never went through with it. Nettleheart ended up getting pregnant with his kits unplanned, and she gave birth to Twistedkit and Twilightkit. She never liked her kits from the start, as well as her entire clan. She longed to follow Thames into a life of a rogue, believing he loved her. She majorly neglected her kittens and hardly spoke or interacted with them, often belittling them when she could. Twilightpaw was mostly cared for by Twistedtail, who was an apprentice at the time and loved his sister very much. However, before her warrior ceremony, she was mercilessly killed by an unknown rogue while she was hunting on her own. Twistedtail, now a warrior, became absolutely devastated and rather bitter towards his life and StarClan, believing they've hated him by giving him this life. As his bitterness grew, his rage grew to unprecedented levels at his mother, who expressed bitter contentment with Twiightpaw's death. One day, she tried to sneak out of camp and escape to pursue Thames as a rogue. However, she was caught by her son at the border. The next morning, she was found dead at that very border. Twistedtail pretended to mourn. He made a pact with himself to let no rogue that dares to cross him keep their lives and to become a fierce warrior that would not be toyed with anymore. Other:Fishy. Twistedtail is a murderer, as he did kill his mother out of rage, and I hope for this to be a future planned plot if that's okay. He's not necessarily supposed to be an evil cat and doesn't strike against PineClan, likewise very dedicated to it; but he has a lot of hate in his heart that causes him dire problems. If you ever quit or fall inactive and have an important role, do you want this cat... ? (select one): Option 1, I will kill him off myself if I ever decide to quit. (Let me know if anything needs to be changed. Thank you!)
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Post by Deleted on Nov 22, 2017 2:39:52 GMT -5
ChewyLoon Salutations and welcome to PineClan.  I'm not sure how I feel about his history lol, a murder cat within the clan, regardless of intent, is pretty big, but I'll let it be for now, the only issue is there's a lot of rogues-against-PineClan right now- so I feel as if Thames should have been from the same group, which forms the TimberClan allies? There are no other hostile rogue group than those. Perhaps he was acting as a spy for them? It's up to you. I'll add your cat soon, your free to rp.
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Post by ChewyLoon on Nov 22, 2017 3:37:45 GMT -5
Thank you so much for the welcome! I really appreciate you allowing me to keep Twistedtail's history, but please let me know if it too much or it needs to be modified. I honestly don't mind at all! And yes, that actually sounds like a very good idea! Thames will be a spy for those rogues. Thank you so much, again! |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 23, 2017 22:36:32 GMT -5
Bump.
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Post by 𝑀𝒾𝓃𝓃𝑜𝓌𝓈𝓅𝓁𝒶𝓈𝒽 on Jan 13, 2018 14:43:52 GMT -5
Minnowsplash || Minnowsplash/Tora || 23 Moons || Warrior
○A petite, well muscled she-cat with a beautiful light brown fur with dark grey tabby stripes on her face, and grey splodges dotted on her well groomed fluff. A white muzzle and a white underbelly. She has a dark grey tail tip and mesmerizing turquoise eyes.
Warrior Name or Apprentice Requests?: Would like an apprentice.
Personality: Minnowsplash can sometimes be sarcastic, but most of the time she is quiet, Minnowsplash doesnt really have friends, so she keeps to herself most of the time. She is shy, but once you get to know her, she is loud, outgoing, supportive and will confide in you no matter what. It's probably best not to get on Minnowsplash bad side, because she can be a bitch. If she is sad or angry, she will straight up tell you to go away, but sometimes she won't feel like talking, so she will either ignore you or walk off. If you are doing something Minnowsplash does not like, then she will confront you.
Mate/Crush: None
Kits, if any: None
Relationships: Amberfrost (Deceased), Pantherclaw (Deceased)
History: Minnowsplash was born in an abandoned two leg town, the only creatures that lived there were rats, her mother, Amberfrost had died while giving birth to Minnowsplash and her unknown siblings, and her siblings had passed away shortly after. Minnowsplash and her father had run to a forest, where they met other cats. But these cats were not nice cats, they were coldblooded and bloodthirsty. Pantherclaw had gotten into a lot of fights with these cats. Eventually, her father had died, so Minnowsplash was a loner.
As she grew older, she got taken into a lot of clans, she joined bloodythirsty clans, to being a kitty pet, to normal clans.
Other:
Minnowsplash is a hopeless romantic.
If you ever quit or fall inactive and have an important role, do you want this cat... ? (select one): Option 1, I will kill her if i ever decide to quit.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 13, 2018 15:51:39 GMT -5
𝑀𝒾𝓃𝓃𝑜𝓌𝓈𝓅𝓁𝒶𝓈𝒽 Hello, welcome to PineClan. Please use the provided formatting with code. If you cannot use the code please tell me so I know. I can format it myself, it's just much easier if it's filled out. Also, please remove the curse word from your form- there's one showing up starred out, and curses are not allowed in rp or on the sight. There are also no other known clans in the territory besides PineClan, TimberClan, CedarClan and OakClan right now, so please specify if she'd been from rogue groups formerly or actual clans. The former is preferred. Finally, your missing one thing you can find in the rules. Once these are fixed tell me and I'll look it over to accept your form.
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Post by 🔻Puppydawg🔻 on Jan 25, 2018 20:29:50 GMT -5
Darkclaw || wolffiecat12 || 37 || Elder warrior & hunter - A sweet Tom with a blackberry pelt and has a white eye and a crystal blue eye. He has a white stripe on his face and back. One eye is blind the other has 20/20.
Warrior Name or Apprentice Requests?: (IF a kit/apprentice/loner who'll join, what is your suggestion for warrior name! Or you want it to be a surprise? IF a warrior, delegate, deputy, or leader, you can also request a to mentor apprentice without a mentor, the warrior should be at/around 19-20 moons or more to have an apprentice. I shall assign the apprentice, so just put "would like an apprentice." and I'll assign them one! If nothing, just say n/a or leave blank.) Personality: He is sweet and kind. Willing to yell At a apprentice and young warriors to stay quiet during a meeting, afrad of a war, hawks, death. He loves to see Icestorm alot (she will be added!)
-His Greatness is hunting birds and fast food, and his weaknesses are to fast, eats a lot, his blindness in his one eye. (required) Mate/Crush: Icestorm (can leave blank) Kits, if any: (can leave blank) Relationships: (family, friends, extra) History: (please at least state of clan born, etc) As a kit her mother was killed and so was her father but then she found Pineclan where she lives to day and on )her way there she had been attacked and one eye became blind. Other: FishyIf you ever quit or fall inactive and have an important role, do you want this cat... ? (select one):Option 3, to Allow someone else to rp them by default, with understanding if you rejoin you'll have them back, but also knowing the new rper can kill them off before then if they choose. (User will not be allowed to use the cat outside this rp as it is still your character, unless you say otherwise.) A NOTE: If the character had not had a big role yet, such as a high rank, active rping, a mate rped by someone else, ect, the cat will be deleted without any in rp death as if not there. Read more: wcrpforums.com/thread/41898/pineclan-joining-page-dnp?page=1#ixzz55FVcvpV7
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Post by Deleted on Jan 25, 2018 20:36:39 GMT -5
🔻Puppydawg🔻 Welcome to PineClan. The deputy spot is already chosen and is not available, pleased change your rank. In future deputies will not be allowed to join, they'll be elected in rp almost always. Your missing something from the rules, please add it. Finally please select the option you want on the last part of the form, don't list all three. Also, your need more details for the personality, at least two sentences is preferred. When your done tell me and I'll look it over again.
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Post by 🔻Puppydawg🔻 on Jan 25, 2018 20:47:14 GMT -5
Ok
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Post by 🔻Puppydawg🔻 on Jan 25, 2018 20:56:25 GMT -5
I think it’s good))
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Post by Deleted on Jan 25, 2018 21:01:51 GMT -5
🔻Puppydawg🔻 Please add more to history if you can and read the rules, your still missing things.
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Post by 🔻Puppydawg🔻 on Jan 25, 2018 21:23:53 GMT -5
I read the rules but I don’t know what your looking for?
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Post by FoxKit on Jan 29, 2018 7:46:43 GMT -5
Foxpaw || ♥️Foxkit♥️|| 9 Moons || main rank: apprentice sub rank: Fighter - fox paw is a redish color he is a polydactyl (meaning extra claws) though he is a hunter he is a good fighter. Foxpaw has a scar on his eye from kit hood.
Warrior Name: Foxleaf or Apprentice Requests?: (IF a kit/apprentice/loner who'll join, what is your suggestion for warrior name! Or you want it to be a surprise? IF a warrior, delegate, deputy, or leader, you can also request a to mentor apprentice without a mentor, the warrior should be at/around 19-20 moons or more to have an apprentice. I shall assign the apprentice, so just put "would like an apprentice." and I'll assign them one! If nothing, just say n/a or leave blank.) Personality: (required): he is a very good fighter he will fight every cat, his flaws: he is nervous around the leader and deputy and if he is called he Thinks he is in trouble. Fox paw is adventurous and sweet. Loves to be around his mentor(name) and his mother’s grave (in free time) lastly he is easily scared and maybe cry at a death to the clan Mate/Crush: (can leave blank) Kits, if any: (can leave blank) Relationships: (family, friends, etc) his family died when he was a kit History: (please at least state of clan born, etc) born to the two greatest cats, he was a pure fighter his parent s were hunters the we’re mean but he still lover his parents♥️ Other:If you ever quit or fall inactive and have an important role, do you want this cat... ? (select one):Option 1, to be Deleted and Killed off in RP, either off screen/during a timeskip or temporarily rped by another user or you before quitting. A NOTE: If the character had not had a big role yet, such as a high rank, active rping, a mate rped by someone else, ect, the cat will be deleted without any in rp death as if not there. l raincloud33
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Post by Deleted on Jan 29, 2018 9:08:50 GMT -5
FoxKit Hello, welcome to PineClan. Firstly, cats are not forced into positions. The cat is raised on what role they'll get after two moons of training, so thus he'd probably be a fighter. Sometimes parents will influence tehir kit's role but it has to be pre-trained (aka, they raise them up in a way that favors a role they think is best)- it's not ultimately up to them, but the leader and the cats that oversaw their first two moons of training. Please provide more for personality two, as the traits listed are almost all skill related and not personality related. Next, please read the rules on the main page as your missing something. Once corrected you can tag me in a new post or just post so and I'll look it over again.
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Post by FoxKit on Jan 29, 2018 19:53:37 GMT -5
FoxKit Hello, welcome to PineClan. Firstly, cats are not forced into positions. The cat is raised on what role they'll get after two moons of training, so thus he'd probably be a fighter. Sometimes parents will influence tehir kit's role but it has to be pre-trained (aka, they raise them up in a way that favors a role they think is best)- it's not ultimately up to them, but the leader and the cats that oversaw their first two moons of training. Please provide more for personality two, as the traits listed are almost all skill related and not personality related. Next, please read the rules on the main page as your missing something. Once corrected you can tag me in a new post or just post so and I'll look it over again. Sorry but all re-edit |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 30, 2018 4:28:03 GMT -5
FoxKit Your still missing something from the rules. Also remove my user form your form, and since these are in my participated list just post and I'll respond back.
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Post by 🔻Puppydawg🔻 on Jan 31, 2018 19:28:24 GMT -5
FoxKit Your still missing something from the rules. Also remove my user form your form, and since these are in my participated list just post and I'll respond back. I edited the post |
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Post by 🔻Puppydawg🔻 on Jan 31, 2018 19:28:59 GMT -5
🔻Puppydawg🔻 Welcome to PineClan. The deputy spot is already chosen and is not available, pleased change your rank. In future deputies will not be allowed to join, they'll be elected in rp almost always. Your missing something from the rules, please add it. Finally please select the option you want on the last part of the form, don't list all three. Also, your need more details for the personality, at least two sentences is preferred. When your done tell me and I'll look it over again. i re-edited the post |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 1, 2018 22:39:49 GMT -5
🔻Puppydawg🔻Could you specify what color you mean by crystal eye, is it grey, or white or blue? cx It isn't really important but I'd like to know. Also a correction, please add a bit more to both physical description and personality, personality more so. Because of recent thread update the formatting simply looks nicer with a bit extra info, and as for personality you mainly listed strengths and weaknesses which aren't a cat's full character. However Your technically accepted and can rp as everything else seems fine. c:
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Post by 🔻Puppydawg🔻 on Feb 2, 2018 18:36:41 GMT -5
🔻Puppydawg🔻Could you specify what color you mean by crystal eye, is it grey, or white or blue? cx It isn't really important but I'd like to know. Also a correction, please add a bit more to both physical description and personality, personality more so. Because of recent thread update the formatting simply looks nicer with a bit extra info, and as for personality you mainly listed strengths and weaknesses which aren't a cat's full character. However Your technically accepted and can rp as everything else seems fine. c: As in blue |
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Post by 🔻Puppydawg🔻 on Feb 2, 2018 18:58:37 GMT -5
Icestorm ||🦄💎Thornhawk💎🦄 || 37 moons || main rank:Warrior sub rank: hunter - A snowy white shecat with a black stripe, down the back. She Has a scar on her eye
Warrior Name or Apprentice Requests?: (IF a kit/apprentice/loner who'll join, what is your suggestion for warrior name! Or you want it to be a surprise? IF a warrior, delegate, deputy, or leader, you can also request a to mentor apprentice without a mentor, the warrior should be at/around 19-20 moons or more to have an apprentice. I shall assign the apprentice, so just put "would like an apprentice." and I'll assign them one! If nothing, just say n/a or leave blank.) Personality: She is a young a Sweet and smart, she cat She is very willing to fight any clan no matter what even if she dies trying. Flaws she is esily startlied, agressive at monents. (required) Mate/Crush: Darkclaw (can leave blank) Kits, if any: (can leave blank) Relationships: (family, friends, ect)
History: Clan born (please at least state of clan born, ect)
Other: Fishy
If you ever quit or fall inactive and have an important role, do you want this cat... ? (select one):
Option 1, to be Deleted and Killed off in RP, either off screen/during a timeskip or temporarily rped by another user or you before quitting.
Read more: wcrpforums.com/thread/41898/pineclan-joining-page-open?page=1#ixzz55zvjqhQZ
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Post by Deleted on Feb 3, 2018 12:06:02 GMT -5
🔻Puppydawg🔻 Your missing age on Icestorm's form. Also, I'm sorry to say I already have some plans for potential crushes for Batstar, and his mate only just died, so I'd rather that is left out.
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Post by 🔻Puppydawg🔻 on Feb 3, 2018 19:39:08 GMT -5
🔻Puppydawg🔻 Your missing age on Icestorm's form. Also, I'm sorry to say I already have some plans for potential crushes for Batstar, and his mate only just died, so I'd rather that is left out. I fixed it |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 3, 2018 19:58:55 GMT -5
🔻Puppydawg🔻 I thought they were siblings?
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Post by 🔻Puppydawg🔻 on Feb 3, 2018 20:12:32 GMT -5
Yah I change it so they are crushing on each other
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Post by Deleted on Feb 3, 2018 20:17:01 GMT -5
Ok, can you edit out she's his sister on his form then. Icestorm also required a more detailed personality, please try at least a paragraph for both.
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Post by 🔻Puppydawg🔻 on Feb 4, 2018 6:52:28 GMT -5
Ok 👍
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Bisexual
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relieved bc undergrad is finally done
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Post by мαρℓєиσѕє on Feb 7, 2018 18:24:45 GMT -5
Burntfoot || мαρlєησsє || 30 Moons || Warrior/Guard - Burntfoot is a dark gray she-cat with blue eyes and semi-long fur. All four of her pads are scarred beyond feeling from a fire when she was apprentice-age. Her left cheek is noticeably scarred as well.
Warrior Name or Apprentice Requests?: n/a Personality: Burntfoot is very loyal to her Clan, despite not being clanborn. She is determined to do her best, and used to dream of being leader when she first joined the Clan. She is also very sensitive, though, and is easily hurt if those close to her betray her trust. Because of this, it takes her quite a while to trust others completely. Mate/Crush: n/a Kits, if any: n/a Relationships: family is unknown, but assumed dead History: Burntfoot is not clanborn, but was found on the edge of the territory unconscious from smoke inhalation Other: n/a If you ever quit or fall inactive and have an important role, do you want this cat... ? (select one):Option 3, to Allow someone else to rp them by default, with understanding if you rejoin you'll have them back, but also knowing the new rper can kill them off before then if they choose. (User will not be allowed to use the cat outside this rp as it is still your character, unless you say otherwise.)
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Post by Deleted on Feb 7, 2018 18:58:13 GMT -5
мαρℓєиσѕє Accepted! c: About how long was it since she joined the clan?
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