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Post by darkfeather88 on Aug 9, 2017 15:26:34 GMT -5
PrismClan Joining PageThis is the Joining Page for the PrismClan. Please go to the main page to learn more about this clan. If you have read the page, put your favorite color and favorite element on the code line. Main PageJoining Form SN: Cat’s Name: Gender: Eye color: Pelt Color: Rank: Primary Element: Secondary Element: Power: Mark: What was lost: How they got to the clan: Feelings towards the Legendary Clans: Personality: Crushes: Other: Code:
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Post by Sparrow on Sept 4, 2017 17:40:30 GMT -5
SN: sparrow Cat’s Name: Deadthroat, Boulder (Darkthroat) Gender: tom Eye color: goldenrod Pelt Color: muscular large build with long thick grey fur and a large scar on his throat and smaller thin scars crisscrossing his face and nicking his ears Rank: Deputy Primary Element: spirit Secondary Element: water Power: can turn into iron (he can still move n hear while iron, but he can't eat or mark borders and his voice is super grating and echo-y) Mark: paw pads turned a silver-grey color What was lost: If he chips/breaks or rusts while iron, those translate into injuries when he changes back into a normal cat How they got to the clan: Was a loner, until he accidentally wandered into Prismclan territory. He was big, but untrained and easily captured. He observed the clan for a while as a prisoner, until an apprentice tried to kill him as part of their assessment. He managed to kill the apprentice instead and requested to join the clan. Feelings towards the Legendary Clans: They are the enemy. He doesn't have anything personal against them, but wouldn't hesitate to destroy them if ordered. Personality: Deadthroat is incredibly quiet, partially because his throat injury makes lots of talking straining, but mainly because he doesn't feel like wasting his breath. He believes in action, and rarely shares his thoughts vocally, preferring to just get things done. He is extremely loyal to Forestsilver, but doesn't feel very close to any other clanmates. He doesn't pay any attention to kits or elders, considering them too close to death to be considered real yet. He hates complainers and cats that won't carry their own weight. He has a high pain tolerance and great willpower. He's a pragmatic strategist, and prefers to plow through problems rather than think up a creative and complicated plan to solve a problem. He doesn't put any stock into gossip, insults, or others' opinions. Crushes: he's got a soft spot for Quietsong, but its not exactly a crush Other: Code: blue lightning
SN: sparrow Cat’s Name: Honeytalon, Honey Gender: she-cat Eye color: green Pelt Color: short and skinny smooth golden tabby with white paws and long claws Rank: Sentinel Primary Element: sky Secondary Element: fire Power: none Mark: n/a What was lost: n/a How they got to the clan: She and her sister, Wasp, were part of a travelling group of rogues, but got kicked out. Shortly after, they came across Prismclan and joined voluntarily as apprentices. Feelings towards the Legendary Clans: she feels superior to them Personality: A talker, often rude and complains a lot. She's obedient to superiors and loyal to her clan. Usually backs down from fights with cats in a higher rank than her, but will gladly jump into squabbles with other sentinels and cats lower than her. Very bitter over failing her first assessment and its a sore subject for her. Holds a grudge like no other and wouldn't think twice before throwing a clanmate under the metaphorical bus. Perceptive and has great aim and reflexes, which help make up for her light weight build. Crushes: none Other: Sister to Waspfrost. Has a tense relationship with her sister due to: their difference in rank, the fact that her sister doesn't recall half the time they've spent together, that her sister got them kicked out of the first group, and that her sister inherited a power from their mother and Honeytalon didn't. She bitter. Code: blue lightning
SN: sparrow Cat’s Name: Duskpaw Gender: tom Eye color: amber Pelt Color: dark brown and tan marbled tabby Rank: apprentice Primary Element: earth Secondary Element: life Power: can turn intangible Mark: A white shark jaws shape on his throat (like two curves that don't quite made a circle and have spikes on the inside) What was lost: water actually screws with his power, and is the one thing that he can't travel through, attempting to do so forces him to become tangible How they got to the clan: clanborn Feelings towards the Legendary Clans: doesn't really know what to think. He usually just believes whatever his clanmates say about them, but he hasn't formed a solid opinion yet. They sound simultaneously weak and idyllic Personality: Competitive and borderline foolish brave, he likes to jump into action. He likes to battle and loves adrenaline. Eager to fit in, he feels out of place despite not having any reason to, so he can be a bit of a suckup. Feels sorry for cats that aren't strong or skilled enough to be fighters. Likes having his ego fed, acts self confident, but is always seeking validation. Other: Code: blue lightning
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Sept 4, 2017 21:01:47 GMT -5
Post by darkfeather88 on Sept 4, 2017 21:01:47 GMT -5
(Accepted sparrow)
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Sept 8, 2017 20:21:38 GMT -5
Post by frostshade on Sept 8, 2017 20:21:38 GMT -5
Character Name; Update
(( Hello! I would like to join this clan, but I have a question before I do. Is it alright if I have siblings of two different primary elements, or should I keep it in the same category because of genetics? ))
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Sept 8, 2017 20:32:18 GMT -5
Post by darkfeather88 on Sept 8, 2017 20:32:18 GMT -5
(Elements are not genetic so you are okay. I would like it better if they did have different elements as they more reflect the cat's personality... Go ahead!
However, having powers is genetic, so remember that if you want to make a powered character.)
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Sept 8, 2017 22:01:59 GMT -5
Post by frostshade on Sept 8, 2017 22:01:59 GMT -5
(( Awesome, thank you! )) =-+-+-=
SN: Frostshade Cat’s Name: Silverstorm Gender: Female Eye color: Pale blue. Pelt Color: Silver. Rank:Wraith. Primary Element: Water. Secondary Element: Sky Power: None. Mark: None. What was lost: None. How they got to the clan: Rowanflame and Silverstorm's parents were rouges that joined the clan after already being mates. By the time they were in the clan, Rowankit and Silverkit were born. Their heritage had never experienced any sort of experimenting in it. They were both born into the clans as siblings, but their parents died many moons ago. Feelings towards the Legendary Clans: She doesn't care for them, however she is in the firm belief that cats should not be judged solely on what clan they are in, because every cat is different and unique in their own way. Personality: Silverstorm is a very gentle and patient cat. She doesn't trust very well at first, but once she "officially" has befriended a cat, she's extremely loyal to that cat in specific. She's quiet at first, and it's harder to get her attention. She likes to think things through before she acts, although that's not always good for her. She doesn't act well in very stressful situations, and will snap at a cat if she's in one and angered. She has a little bit of a sassy side to her once someone gets to really know her, and can generally come up with comebacks quickly after something was said. She's self-conscious about herself. Because of this, she usually keeps herself in a professional manner and her tongue in check. She can't do anything about her physical appearance, so doesn't make any effort to hide or flaunt that. Crushes: None at the moment. Other: She's gay. Code: Blue-grey and Water.
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SN: Frostshade Cat’s Name: Rowanflame Gender: Male Eye color: Light Blue Pelt Color: Dark Grey Rank: Fighter Primary Element: Fire Secondary Element: Spirit Power: None. Mark: None. What was lost: Nothing. How they got to the clan: Rowanflame and Silverstorm's parents were rouges that joined the clan after already being mates. By the time they were in the clan, Rowankit and Silverkit were born. Their heritage had never experienced any sort of experimenting in it. They were both born into the clans as siblings, but their parents died many moons ago. Feelings towards the Legendary Clans: They are not to be trusted. They are the enemy, and he has no problem taking them out. Personality: Rowanflame is a cat that acts without thinking all the time. He does things impulsively, and that can either turn out very well or not good at all. He's energetic for the most part, and would never back down from a challenge. That can go for or against him. He's extremely loyal to his clan and to his sister, whom he would protect with his life if needed, without hesitation. He's playful and lively, not to mention a little bit of a flirt with the she-cats. He may not seem like a fighter, but once he's in the heat of battle, he's ruthless and vicious with no mercy to be seen. His sister often had to restrain him as a kit when they were play-fighting so he wouldn't hurt her accidentally. His competitiveness will get ahead of him, and mixed with his power and thirst to fight, it can result in something bad. Crushes: None at the moment. Other: None. Code: Blue-grey and water.
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Sept 8, 2017 22:30:59 GMT -5
Post by darkfeather88 on Sept 8, 2017 22:30:59 GMT -5
(Okay, there is just one problem... That is Softcloud's name. The Wraiths are the healers of this clan, but they are better as using poisons... It's a high rank so the name would follow the Fighter's way... Which is that their names are fierce and powerful. Softcloud is not a fearful nor strong name...
In this clan, that is a Hunter's name.
Is there any way that you could change her name? You can keep the Soft- part.)
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Sept 8, 2017 23:47:01 GMT -5
Post by frostshade on Sept 8, 2017 23:47:01 GMT -5
Character Name; Update
(( Of course, I can! Although I might not keep the prefix, if that's alright. Does Silverstorm work? ))
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Sept 9, 2017 7:33:31 GMT -5
Post by darkfeather88 on Sept 9, 2017 7:33:31 GMT -5
(Better, Both are accepted.)
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Sept 9, 2017 7:46:56 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Sept 9, 2017 7:46:56 GMT -5
Joining Form
SN:Goldie Cat’s Name: Embercloud Gender:Female Eye color:Her eyes are a deep, dark blue, like the burning of the hottest flame. Pelt Color: Embercloud is a lithe dark ginger she-cat with a creamy white chest and stomach and darker russet tabby swirls. Rank:Fighter Primary Element:Fire Secondary Element:Sky Power:Creating and withstanding fire Mark: A flame-shaped scar on her shoulder What was lost:If water touches her, even for just a moment, she will be unable to produce fire for at least 2 hours. How they got to the clan: Embercloud was a kit when Prismclan found her and her brother, Silverflick. She was raised by the clan and was taught that the Legendary clans were evil and bad; she believes that with all her heart. Feelings towards the Legendary Clans:She thinks that the Legendary clans are evil and will fight to destroy them. Personality: Embercloud is very sharp-witted, she loves to get into debates or even charming conversations. She is stubborn and short-tempered, but is very loyal and warm-hearted. She is very clumsy and will trip over anything you put in front of her. She can often act too fast and finds herself in less than ideal situations. However, whatever her flwas, she is a truly likable cat who can't stand the taste of finch. Crushes: Rowanflame Other:Her brother is Silverflick Code: orange sky
SN: Goldie Cat's Name: Rainfeather Gender: Male Eye color: A light turquoise blue that's clear and steady like water to combat his sister's fiery ones. Pelt color: He is a silver tabby tom with pale gray swirls on his pelt. He has a white fore-paw and a fluffy, white-tipped tail. Rank: Wraith Primary Element: Water Secondary Element: Life Power: Controlling and manipulating water Mark: A water droplet shaped scar on his shoulder What was Lost: N/A How they got to the clan: He was found as a kit with his sister, Embercloud, and was taught that the Legendary clans were bad, though he doesn't really believe it. Feelings toward the Legendary clans: He secretly thinks they were noble and powerful, much to the akin of his sister. Personality: Rainfeather is a very calm and somewhat quiet tom. He is very proactive in stressful situations, which makes him a good wraith. He is determined to do what is right, and gets very nervous around she-cats. He tends to babble whe he's nervous. He is very loving, if not loyal, and will do whatever he can to brighten up someone's day, even if they don't want it. He is not nervous about blood, and is okay with killing cats that attack Prismclan with poisons. Crushes: N/A Other: His sister is Embercloud Code: orange sky
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Sept 9, 2017 8:06:26 GMT -5
Post by darkfeather88 on Sept 9, 2017 8:06:26 GMT -5
(The names do not work for their ranks. -cloud and -feather are not Fighters nor Wraiths' names as they are not seen as strong nor fierce!
Also, if Rain- has a power, he is a Marked. That means that he has to have a lost.)
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Sept 9, 2017 8:17:28 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Sept 9, 2017 8:17:28 GMT -5
Okay, lemme fix that. Embercloud will be changed to Emberleap, Emberfall, or Emberlight, or Embershadow. Whichever sounds best, you can choose. Rainfeather can be changed to Rainfall, Rainleap, Rainstorm, or Rainvenom. Rain's lost is being deathly susceptible to metal. If he even touches metal, he can get an infection that can take over his whole body if not healed quickly and properly. thanks!)
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Sept 9, 2017 19:05:21 GMT -5
Post by darkfeather88 on Sept 9, 2017 19:05:21 GMT -5
(Out of the choices, I like Rainstorm and Embershadow the best. And that lost is okay.. there are still the ruins of cars around and some cats do use metal.
While -shadow isn't fierce nor strong, it is acceptable because it shows that the cat has a different strength... Stealth.
Now accepted and thank you.)
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Sept 12, 2017 16:49:31 GMT -5
Post by Sparrow on Sept 12, 2017 16:49:31 GMT -5
[Darky, I also altered Honeytalon's form to show she has a sister and that she is not clanborn]
SN: Sparrow Cat’s Name: Waspfrost, Wasp Gender: she-cat Eye color: yellow Pelt Color: short and lithe with yellow fur and dark golden paws, ears, and tabby markings Rank: Fighter Primary Element: fire Secondary Element: light Power: Unnatural luck Mark: four black teardrop shapes form a "clover" between her shoulders What was lost: She has a poor long term memory. Legends or stories everyone else should know escape her. The details of her youth are fuzzy at best. Can't remember her own parents. How they got to the clan: Wasp and her sister, Honey, were part of a band of rogues, but after discovering the band's appointed leader was secretly hoarding medicine and prey for himself during leaf bare, Wasp viciously attacked the leader without prompting in front of the group. The leader exiled her and her sister from the group in response. Shortly after, they came across Prismclan and joined voluntarily as an apprentice. Feelings towards the Legendary Clans: They are a faceless enemy that she doesn't give much thought to Personality: A team player, Waspfrost works well in groups and supports her clanmates in their ambitions. She likes tag teaming opponents, and isn't the best at one on one fights (she got lucky during her assessment), despite being an excellent, if creatively awkward, fighter. She's got a good mind for strategy and is a quick thinker. A little sarcastic, but usually upbeat. She has violent and impulsive anger issues, which will surface when she feels betrayed. Her first priority might be her clanmates, but her second is survival, and will put both of these before any of her other beliefs. Crushes: Other: Her relationship with her sister, Honeytalon, is strained, but she doesn't fully understand why Honeytalon's got a grudge with her. She mainly thinks its because of the rank issue. Code: Blue lightning
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Post by darkfeather88 on Sept 12, 2017 18:47:14 GMT -5
(Okay Accepted.)
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Sept 14, 2017 23:27:59 GMT -5
Post by mintedstar/fur on Sept 14, 2017 23:27:59 GMT -5
(I'll post a form tomorrow. ^^ Hope there's no problem with one probably being an Executioner apprentice.)
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Sept 15, 2017 13:48:28 GMT -5
Post by mintedstar/fur on Sept 15, 2017 13:48:28 GMT -5
SN: mintedstar/fur Cat’s Name: Frostpaw Gender: Female Eye color: Honey amber Pelt Color: Black she-cat with gray and white streaks of fur, which mostly clusters around her face, muzzle, and haunches. Her fur is short and usually licked until it's slick against her sides, making her very streamlined. Rank: Executioner apprentice Primary Element: Death Secondary Element: Earth Power: None Mark: (Mother was a Marked, so she Frostpaw received some of those gens.) Frostpaw has a line of white circles running directly down her spine. What was lost: None How they got to the clan: Was born into a the clan. Feelings towards the Legendary Clans: Hates them thanks to what her clan has been telling her all her life. Personality: Greatly loyal to her clan, she will hear nothing good about the clans that PrismClan fights against. But, apart from that, she can be patient Crushes: Pepperpaw (the drama that would cause if she found out about her wanting to join the Legendary Clans? Just something I thought would be interesting...) Other: Both of her parents were Fighters called Starshatter (father) and Quickbite (mother). Both of her parents died young and were mates for power, not love. Code: Green Sky
SN: mintedstar/fur Cat’s Name: Sharpmind, Fox (Darkmind) Gender: Female Eye color: Blue-green Pelt Color: ginger, with darker ginger stripes on her legs, tail, and ears. Has strong legs and broad paws, good for cuffing cats she doesn't like over the head. Scars crisscross her fur, though most blend in with her fur. Rank: Deputy Primary Element: Metal Secondary Element: Spirit Power: Can create up to two doppelgangers of herself, though those two will always have differences from her (like one might be slightly incomplete, missing an eye/ear/leg, devoid of color, ect.) and she can only hold them up as long as she can deal with three sets of memories. Mark: Just above her nose is a set of three tally-marks. What was lost: Her doppelgangers are always more weaker than she is. On top of that, her doppelgangers gain a fragment of her mind to control it. This, when she is using them, makes her very confused about which one of 'her' is the real one. If one of her doppelgangers is killed, then that bit of her mind returns to her actual body, but retains the memories of her her double. This means that she has many memories, if not actual physical damage, of pain and dying inside of her head. (In summery: she receives physiological damage thanks to having the memories of her doubles.) How they got to the clan: Fought against those who captured her when she was a rogue. Killed one of the PrismClan warriors and was offered a position in the clan. Feelings towards the Legendary Clans: If she gets what she wants by defeating them, she will. But if it benefits her or PrismClan to keep them alive and scared, then she will grudgingly allow it. Personality: Considered cunning and smart, she usually will think before striking. She's also strong enough and quick enough to usually execute her own plans. Has no problem with stepping on others to get what she wants. Even though constant mental strain from her powers have worked its way into her head, it has simply made her moody and twisted her in onto herself. She has almost died many times and because of this has no sympathy for whining. Crushes: Would have a mate for power, but not love. Other: Code: Green Sky
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Post by darkfeather88 on Sept 15, 2017 22:23:01 GMT -5
(Accepted mint.)
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Oct 5, 2017 22:26:10 GMT -5
Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 5, 2017 22:26:10 GMT -5
darkfeather88 SN:EthanTheAnnus Cat’s Name: Thunderpaw Gender: she-cat Eye color: light/sky blue Pelt Color: gray with black tabby markings. She has white paws but her left forepaw is brown. Her chest, underbelly, muzzle and tail-tip are white. Her ear tips are brown and have black tufts on them. Rank: Senior Apprentice (soon to become a warrior named Thunderfire) Primary Element: Fire Secondary Element: Shadow Power: Thunderpaw hasn't quite worked it all out yet, but so far she has discovered that if something startles or threatens her, her tail-tip has a tendency to catch alight. She's also very good at sneaking around. She is still yet to discover that she can enlist the shadows help when fighting (but only for a few heartbeats) and can repel spirits using shadows or a mix of shadows and fire. Mark: A weird skull-shaped scar on one shoulder, mostly buried beneath fur. Her mother's mother was Marked, so she is simply a descendant. What was lost: Can only summon shadow soldiers for about half a minute and is very tired the next day (think like Nico's shadow travelling, except the effects hit the next day, not immediately after). Flames, when summoned into a fireball, can easily get out of hand and can burn Thunderpaw herself. How they got to the clan: Was born to a Clan cat and a rogue, so she's got "contaminated blood", but this doesn't really bother her, even the jibes that are shot at her, because she has proven herself over and over. Feelings towards the Legendary Clans: She doesn't feel threatened by them at all, but would be willing to fight them to protect her Clanmates. Personality: Thunderpaw has quite a temper about her, but does love her Clanmates. She never fights any of her Clanmates (o matter how much she wants to, and this is not including the exception of training). Crushes: Duskpaw Other: N/A Code: Wisteria Shadow
SN:EthanTheAnnus Cat’s Name: Lion Gender: tom Eye color: light aqua Pelt Color: dusty yellow tom with brown tabby markings. Black tufted ears and white muzzle, chest, underbelly, tail-tip and paws. Rank: He was a rogue but is part of the clan now, yet he refuses to change his name Primary Element: Sky Secondary Element: Light Power: If Lion falls from a height (within reason; see below) he can float himself gently down. He is also able to harness light. He can will his tail-tip to glow with light in darkness. Mark: A single torn ear. All his ancestors have this, for as long as his family could remember. What was lost: Can only float down to the ground from roughly ten-fifteen fox lengths up. Harnessing light makes him tired and can sometimes make him sick. How they got to the clan: Born as a rogue. Feelings towards the Legendary Clans: He absolutely loathes them, but hides it well. Personality: Lion is generally a patient cat, which is surprising since he is a Sky element, but he can be very nasty if he does snap and start an argument. Crushes: Thunderpaw. Other: N/A Code: Wisteria Shadow
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Post by darkfeather88 on Oct 6, 2017 7:52:13 GMT -5
(I'm sorry but in order to read your characters, I had to change the text.
And... At this time, neither character is accepted.
For Thunderpaw, one, sneaking around isn't a power. Most cats can be sneaky with the right training. Two, you can have powers outside of your element. You are not limited to Fire/Shadow powers. Three, can you be a little more clear on what her powers are? I'm just slightly confused. Does she control fire? Does she control shadows? Four, Marks are visible even on the fur so no cat can truly hide that they are a Marked. Five, her warrior name would only work if she becomes a Fighter.
As for Lion... One, Marks cannot be a torn ear. However, they can be a marking on the ear that looks like it was torn. Two, for this clan, he will have to have clan name. Forestsilver will not accept him otherwise. Three, same as above, powers can be outside your element. Five, while the falling power is okay, how does he control light? And how long does the sickness last?
Also, having rouge blood isn't a crime. No cares about that... The cats only care if you can fight.
Sorry for that and if I came off rude.)
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Oct 6, 2017 23:29:23 GMT -5
Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 6, 2017 23:29:23 GMT -5
(I'm sorry but in order to read your characters, I had to change the text. And... At this time, neither character is accepted. For Thunderpaw, one, sneaking around isn't a power. Most cats can be sneaky with the right training. Two, you can have powers outside of your element. You are not limited to Fire/Shadow powers. Three, can you be a little more clear on what her powers are? I'm just slightly confused. Does she control fire? Does she control shadows? Four, Marks are visible even on the fur so no cat can truly hide that they are a Marked. Five, her warrior name would only work if she becomes a Fighter. As for Lion... One, Marks cannot be a torn ear. However, they can be a marking on the ear that looks like it was torn. Two, for this clan, he will have to have clan name. Forestsilver will not accept him otherwise. Three, same as above, powers can be outside your element. Five, while the falling power is okay, how does he control light? And how long does the sickness last? Also, having rouge blood isn't a crime. No cares about that... The cats only care if you can fight. Sorry for that and if I came off rude.) Np! so, if you want me to explain some stuff...
Thunderpaw can literally melt into the shadows, is what I meant. like, someone could walk right through her. And i'm not too fazed about powers outside of her element, tbh. Yes, she can control fire and, for a short amount of time, shadows. And that's fine, then. Her Mark can be visible. And if she has to become a Fighter to get that Warrior name, it's fine with me.
Lion's marking can be changed to looks like a torn ear, then. and i guess i'll call him lionyowl. and as for controlling light, it's just more that he can make dark rooms lightermbut not for long, plus a glowing tail-tip. and the sickness generally lasts for around 24 hours, with some vomiting included.
I've modified the form, so I hope i fixed it.
darkfeather88 SN:~Thunderfire, Halloween Kion~ Cat’s Name: Thunderpaw Gender: she-cat Eye color: light/sky blue Pelt Color: gray with black tabby markings. She has white paws but her left forepaw is brown. Her chest, underbelly, muzzle and tail-tip are white. Her ear tips are brown and have black tufts on them. Rank: Senior Apprentice (soon to become a fighter named Thunderfire) Primary Element: Fire Secondary Element: Shadow Power: Thunderpaw is able to literally melt into the shadows, meaning anyone could walk straight through her. She can summon up an army of shadow warriors, but they all fade away after about a minute. she can also manipulate fire, usually opting to have her tail-tip ablaze. Mark: A weird skull-shaped scar on one shoulder. Her mother's mother was Marked, so she is simply a descendant. What was lost: Can only summon shadow soldiers for about a minute and is very tired the next day (think like Nico's shadow travelling, except the effects hit the next day, not immediately after). Flames, when summoned into a fireball, can easily get out of hand and can burn Thunderpaw herself. How they got to the clan: Was born to a Clan cat and a rogue. Feelings towards the Legendary Clans: She doesn't feel threatened by them at all, but would be willing to fight them to protect her Clanmates. Personality: Thunderpaw has quite a temper about her, but does love her Clanmates. She never fights any of her Clanmates (o matter how much she wants to, and this is not including the exception of training). Crushes: Duskpaw Other: N/A Code: Wisteria Shadow
SN:~Thunderfire, Halloween Kion~ Cat’s Name: Lionyowl Gender: tom Eye color: light aqua Pelt Color: dusty yellow tom with brown tabby markings. Black tufted ears and white muzzle, chest, underbelly, tail-tip and paws. Rank: He was a rogue but is part of the clan now. Primary Element: Sky Secondary Element: Light Power: If Lion falls from a height (within reason; see below) he can float himself gently down. he is able to make a darker area lighter or have his tail-tip glow. Mark: looks like a torn ear. All his ancestors have this, for as long as his family could remember. What was lost: Can only float down to the ground from roughly ten-fifteen fox lengths up. Harnessing light makes him tired and can sometimes make him sick, usually lasting for 24 hours and he tends to vomit a lot. How they got to the clan: Born as a rogue. Feelings towards the Legendary Clans: He absolutely loathes them, but hides it well. Personality: Lion is generally a patient cat, which is surprising since he is a Sky element, but he can be very nasty if he does snap and start an argument. Crushes: Thunderpaw. Other: N/A Code: Wisteria Shadow
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Oct 7, 2017 8:03:04 GMT -5
Post by darkfeather88 on Oct 7, 2017 8:03:04 GMT -5
(Okay, there are still problems.
What I meant by the elements... it's more of a way to balance out the Marked and the non-Marked. Otherwise, the power cats could overrun everything.
For Thunderpaw...What did she lose to gain the ability to go transparent? For the Marked, each part of the power needs to cause something bad to happen to the cat. For example, a Marked like your could either lose something very major, (like they are blind, can't have kits, or loses all of their claws,) or have something more minor happen for each power. (like for flying cats, many of them have wings that cannot disappear.) Maybe have the weakness of the shadow warriors also happens when she enters the shadows? Also, how many shadow warriors can she summon?
For lionyowl, the question is simple. What rank is he? Is he a Fighter, Sentinel, or Hunter?)
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 7, 2017 23:09:33 GMT -5
(Okay, there are still problems. What I meant by the elements... it's more of a way to balance out the Marked and the non-Marked. Otherwise, the power cats could overrun everything. For Thunderpaw...What did she lose to gain the ability to go transparent? For the Marked, each part of the power needs to cause something bad to happen to the cat. For example, a Marked like your could either lose something very major, (like they are blind, can't have kits, or loses all of their claws,) or have something more minor happen for each power. (like for flying cats, many of them have wings that cannot disappear.) Maybe have the weakness of the shadow warriors also happens when she enters the shadows? Also, how many shadow warriors can she summon? For lionyowl, the question is simple. What rank is he? Is he a Fighter, Sentinel, or Hunter?) ok, so lionyowl will be hunter. and, for thunderpaw, she's unable to phsically attack another cat when she's in the shadows and is a lot weaker than usual. and only about six or seven shadow warriors at the most.
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Oct 8, 2017 7:38:46 GMT -5
Post by darkfeather88 on Oct 8, 2017 7:38:46 GMT -5
(Could Thunderpaw only summon three shadow warriors at a time? She already has several powers and I just feel like six/seven may be too much.
And Lionyowl is a Hunter. You do know that is the lowest rank, and their main duty is to hunt prey for the clan, not fighting. [Sorry, just giving you a chance to change your mind.])
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Oct 31, 2017 0:46:44 GMT -5
Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 31, 2017 0:46:44 GMT -5
(Could Thunderpaw only summon three shadow warriors at a time? She already has several powers and I just feel like six/seven may be too much. And Lionyowl is a Hunter. You do know that is the lowest rank, and their main duty is to hunt prey for the clan, not fighting. [Sorry, just giving you a chance to change your mind.]) That's fine. And yeah, three or four.
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Oct 31, 2017 22:01:56 GMT -5
Post by darkfeather88 on Oct 31, 2017 22:01:56 GMT -5
(Okay accepted. I will add your characters later.)
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