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Post by Deleted on Aug 11, 2017 1:26:07 GMT -5
[ ye dark is right. with medicinal treatments being outlawed and such, cats are expected to die a lot faster and easier here (at least until the subplots roll in). so having her dead mates would work v well. ]
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Post by December on Aug 17, 2017 0:09:07 GMT -5
Darkηesque Just to double check: is Whitetalon going to be the snubbed preacher whose spot was stolen by the imposter preacher? I'm just asking because I was typing up a plot description for the main page, and I wasn't 100% sure if you were definitely going to take that role. It's yours if you want it, though!
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Aug 25, 2017 1:53:44 GMT -5
>> Ooc << Is this still the joining page? >> RP <<
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Post by December on Aug 25, 2017 7:11:10 GMT -5
>> Ooc << Is this still the joining page? >> RP << Yep! There's a list of open roles we still need filled somewhere around here if you'd like something already part of a major plot, or you can just go ahead and do your own thing! Notably, there's a deputy and a preacher available if you're interested.
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Aug 25, 2017 10:21:38 GMT -5
Citruspetal || Female || 25 Moons || Warrior ➣ This she cat has soft, pearl white fluffy fur. she has a pale ginger face which get's darker along her nose, she has two darker brown vertical lines along her forehead. Her ears, tail and paws are all like this but slightly fade into her glowing white fur. Citruspetal's fur sticks out in a way that give her a glowing appearance, she has bright yellow eyes that grow greener towards the pupil. ➣Just like this she cat's name she can be super sour, when she is not agitated and annoyed she is friendly and energetic. She isn't afraid to speak her mind, but does so with a thoughtful manner. Although she is firm and somewhat lenient, but never makes fast or rash decisions. ➣ Her mother died of Green cough, her father is blank (optional). Relationships || Citrinedream is her brother || Other
Citrinedream || Tom || 24 Moons || Warrior ➣ Citrinedream is as white as snow, except there's a pale ginger hue to it; he has a pale barely visible ginger tabby marking on his face, paws, and tail. His tabby markings on his tail tip are darker than his face and paws, his ears are a solid pale ginger; He has very pale blue eyes which makes him blind. ➣ Even though he is blind that doesn't diminish his confidence, which makes him proud and stubborn. He uses his ears and nose to mostly pin point where a cat is or movement of prey. Despite him being blind, he uses that to his advantage when dealing with intruders. ➣ His mother, Shimmeringrose died of greencough their father is blank. Relationships || Citruspetal is his sister || Other
Lilacdew || Female || 20 Moons || warrior ➣ Lilacdew is a pearl white she cat, her ears, tail stripes, elbows and paws are all a darker blueish grey which fade out into her white coat. She has pale blue eyes with silver patches, she has short-medium length smooth silky fur; with a she has dark blueish grey spots along her lower back resembling a deer. She is quite lengthy with a some what bushy tail, she has pointy lynx like ear tips and cheeks tufts that stick out to the sides. ➣ Lilacdew suffers from depression but has learn over time to be strong and that her clan needs her; but her depression still lurks and only love can give her the confidence and happiness she needs. She portrays Bravery, strength and kindness, she is soft spoken and sometimes cheerful. She usually hides her true feelings with a smile. ➣ History (optional). Relationships || Sister is Chamomilepaw || Other
Lunarmist || Tom || 36 Moons || Warrior ➣ Lunarmist is the dark color of midnight blue that looks black from afar, His legs are very long. His eyes are a kind, greenish-blue, and his pelt is silky and long-haired, but not thick. He has lynx like ears tips with an unusually large build and paws, on his chest rests a medium sized sleek lion's like Maine; along with a feather like tail. ➣Lunarmist is indeed a passionate tom who is normally calm and kind. He loves rain and storms. He greatly respects the rules, however, he believes in following your heart; even if that means going against the rules. He is very full of life and would do anything for his duty to be fulfilled. He is usually very cheerful and optimistic, even in the darkest times, He can become quite serious. He is a peaceful soul, But takes pride in his wisdom and strength; which makes this tom a little hot headed. Lunarmist can also be moody at times, from time to time mostly in the morning; He gets super grumpy and is not a morning person; He tends to become super sarcastic as well. ➣ History (optional). Relationships || Family || Other
Chamomilekit || Female || 5 Moons || kit ➣ Chamomilekit is a light gold she-cat with white fawn spots on her back, along her chest, and flanks. She is a bit on the smaller side and has a slender form. She has short to medium length, silky fur that shines in the sun and a feather like tail, giving her a soft, glowing apprentice which makes her bright blue azure eyes. ➣ She is very energetic and outgoing, and super enthusiastic, she can be a little insecure at times, she can become depresssed. She can be navie at times and a little over dramatic, which annoys everyone. But when she's not being annoying, she can be friendly but very opinionated. ➣ History (optional). Relationships || Mother is Silvernight || Other
Newtpaw || Tom || 12 Moons || Apprentice ➣ Newtpaw is a blue-grey point Siamese, his base coat is a pearly white while his face, paws, tail tips and ear tips are blue grey, he has shiny short fur. He has one black whisker, His eyes are a very pale blue with silver flecks. ➣ ➣ History (optional). Relationships || Family || Other
Elmshadow || Tom || 39 Moons || Warrior ➣ Elmshadowis a pale brown tabby tom with darker brown stripes, he has medium length fur which is quite fluffy and has a hue of red in it near his chest, nose and flanks. He has an angular face with a long slender build. He had a white patch on her chest and has green eyes with amber flecks. ➣ Elmshadow is sweet, but thinks highly of himself, he has very strong opinions and wont back down from any challenge, he works hard to improve himself; he is very insecure. ➣ History (optional). Relationships || Family || Other
Maplefern || Female || 34 Moons || Warrior ➣ Maplefern is a pale ginger tabby she cat with slightly darker stripes. Her large eyes are a clear Bright green, and seem to reflect the sunlight. She is of an average size body considering she is a maine coon, but has a lithle build which is long and lean. Her muzzle is very define with high cheek bones, and she has large rounded ears with lynx like tips and a huge lions like maine; which makes it look like she is always puffing out her chest. She has large fluffy paw pads and a well feathered tail; along with her well feather tail she has long, tamed silky fur. ➣ She is kind-hearted and bright, optimistic and friendly. She flirts more often than most cats, but it's usually light-hearted and playful instead of actual flirting. She is also fiercely protective and loyal, and is a natural leader. She is aware of the rules, but prefers to do what she feels is right regardless of what other people believe. Because of this, she got into quite a bit of trouble as an apprentice; She has an adventurous, rebellious spirit, ➣ History (optional). Relationships || Brother is Elmshadow || Other
Azureblossom || Female || 24 Moons || ➣ Azureblossom is formally known as a Turkisk Angora, she has a Blueish grey coat with medium-long fur which is longer on her ruff, tail, and thighs. She has high cheek bones with wide, tall and pointed ears; with long ear tufts. Her body is long, sleek and slender; She has long lean legs, her back legs are longer than the front. Her tail is straight, narrow, and well feathered,She has bright green eyes with blue flecks. ➣ Azureblosom is more of the shy one, she is content with just being by herself. Although she is shy she is kind-hearted and bright, and only ever has good intentions. She also believes that doing the right thing is of the up most importance regardless if it breaks the rules, Azureblossom is more insecure about herself and doesn't trust anyone with her feelings, she has high walls and it will take a lot for her to open up. Azureblossom had fallen inlove with a loner, even though she knows that it is against the rules. She had quickly learned that loners can not be trusted, this loner had left her for another female in which was a loner and broke Azureblosom heart, ever since then she has not let anyone in but hope her new mate wont be like her ex lover ➣ History (optional). || Family || Other
lilylighting || Female || 28 Moons || Warrior ➣ Lilylighting is a cream colored she-cat with golden brown fawn spots on her lower back chest and flanks. She is a bit on the smaller side but has a lean and well muscled form. She has short, silky fur that shines gold in the sunlight. Giving her a signature soft, beautiful appearance; matching her sky-blue eyes. ➣ Lilylighting has a gentle attitude and calm temperament; Even though her size alone puts her at a disadvantage, she is known or being lighting fast and swift on her paws. Lilylighting is humble and kind, she will help out anyone in need. But she is also brave, and outgoing. Although it seems that her mind is always awake and never sleeps, which makes sleeping hard. ➣ History (optional). Relationships || Not sure who yet. || Other
Grayinglight || Tom || 30 Moons || Preacher ➣ Grayinglight is a pale almost white grey tabby tom, his pelt seems to shine in the sunlight; and his eyes are a deep and clear blue. His tabby markings are faint except for the M on his head, his legs and his tail. His stripes are a faded pale grey which gives him a soft dusty look, he has short soft fur with a rounded face and almond shaped gray eyes. ➣ Grayinglight can seem intimidating at first but behind his large build he is very soft spoken and sweet, always thinking about others before himself, White is seen as awkward and very strange. He is very cold hearted and love to make other suffer, he keeps this hidden with his "soft" personality. ➣ Grayinglight secretly killed his father, who killed his mother. Relationships || No family, Mother is Palesun, father is Dyingember || Other
can i reserve the these prefixes misty and dew
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Post by PatienceTheVirtue on Aug 25, 2017 12:54:12 GMT -5
♡ Bun ♡ Hey! I was looking through your forms over the past two hours or so whenever I had time, and it looks like there's some stuff you might have missed from the main page. Right now everyone is pretty busy, but in an hour or so someone should be able to outline the problems if you haven't replied or found/fixed what was wrong. Thanks a bunch for joining, and with enough enthusiasm to make that many characters, wow! All their names are really unique too, I'm glad we have someone passionate enough to put all that effort in. I'll see you soon with some corrections, hopefully!
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Aug 25, 2017 13:12:57 GMT -5
>> Ooc << I think some of the names might not be allowed, but i was waiting to see if they were okay.
I also wanted to ask if it was okay if Lunarmist was a former kittypet.
The only things that i see are the names and asking permission for the open spots... but i have already asked for that im just watiting on a reply. i did read everything on the main page so if there is more than just those two things then im confused. I really like all those names so i couldn't decide. >> RP <<
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Post by PatienceTheVirtue on Aug 25, 2017 13:27:44 GMT -5
I'm glad you're familiar with what's going on then! Some of the issues I can think of off the top of my head: -Preacher's names end in -light -Preachers aren't allowed relationships/mates, so "love" being what Lilac would need isn't feasible if you're thinking in a romantic sense (not to mention mental illnesses not being known by Clan cats, especially religious ones, and mental illnesses needing more than affection to be dealt with) -The preachers are corrupt liars, so having one portrayed in a positive light doesn't fit well with the plot lines -Mates are assigned to all/most able bodied cats after a certain age, so you should have mates for many of your warriors
If you're worried about the prefixes being taken, I think the rule we're going with is having a 20+ moon gap in the ages. As for the important role thing, I believe we're keeping that down to 1 important role per RPer when possible (so only 1 preacher/preacher apprentice/deputy/leader character). It's especially important to keep some open when the Clan is just opening to attract members, but if too much time goes by we may need the roles filled anyway, so it could be a waiting game.
There may be more but I'm filling out paperwork for college and leaving soon to potentially purchase a vehicle, so I can't go through everything in depth at the moment. I might not be able to respond for a while either, but someone else should be finishing with their own personal life activities and able to weigh in soon. Thanks for being so accommodating <3
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Post by December on Aug 25, 2017 13:51:39 GMT -5
Hey, mod here! I've identified some major issues: - We'd really prefer that everyone keeps it to only one major rank per person. You can have the deputy or a preacher, but we'd really appreciate if you didn't take both. - If you're going to take a preacher, the naming process works similar to that of leaders; they all have the same prefix, -light. Please keep that in mind when naming your preacher. Additionally, all adult preachers are meant to be evil and deceptive, and none of them have contact with StarClan. There's more info about the situation with preachers on the front page if you're still interested. Additionally, you'll probably have to do some plotting with us, because we don't have much planned for the third preacher! - Please remember that all adult cats (over around 18-22 moons) require mates. You can contact us if you need a mate for your character; we'll pair them up with someone as soon as there's a cat available within the proper age range! Alternatively, you can come up with a valid reason - disability or a history disloyalty and disrespect towards StarClan and the preachers - for your cat to be excluded from the process. However, we'd rather you not do this with all of your cats, as producing kits is very important within LightClan culture and the majority of cats are paired off. (Your blind cat would definitely be excluded, though.) - I won't say you can't have that many characters, but take care not to bite off more than you can chew! I commend you if you can handle over ten, lmao. - Please be careful about realism in appearances. Cats do not glow in the literal sense and do not generally have lion manes, for example. - The mods are worried about the way you discussed mental illness in Lilacdew's description. It's important to keep in mind that love does not cure depression, an while believing that love would heal her could always be a character flaw of Lilacdew's - maybe she's waiting for someone to "heal her," not realizing that she must learn to cope on her own as an independent cat an cannot rely on others to fix her problems - please keep in mind that real mental illness doesn't work that way. Thanks.
I know this sounds ridiculously strict, but we're excited to RP with you, promise! New members are great, because we have big plans and many roles to fill.
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Aug 25, 2017 17:06:45 GMT -5
>> Ooc << I might get rid of some of my charries lol i just have to decide which one i want to keep. Hmm let me think about. I know mental illness doesn't work that way, i suffer from depression, by heal her i mean make it possible for her to become happy because she can't do that on her own, im studying mental illness in college. I didnt say love can cure depression, i said love can only heal her because it's what she needs to be happy and not depressed.
I honestly dont appreciate the way you guys assumed that i knew nothing about Mental illness, I wouldn't have put that in there if i didn't understand it, and the way i discussed it was how it happened for me... so that's all real feelings right there, i biased her personality on the hardships in my life.
For one yes there is one breed that has a lion's like maine and that is a maine coon, or long haired cats can have a small one.. like my cat has one. I guess glow isn't the right word but depending on the food you feed your cat, their food should make there fur shine in the sunlight or any sort of light. So no they dont glow but they do shine or have a sheen to their fur.
No it's okay, its not strict at all. But i will say you might want to read up a little more on cats, im not trying to be rude. But the point of cats not generally haveing lion's like manes, not actual lion manes is untrue. >> RP <<
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Post by nem on Aug 25, 2017 18:18:15 GMT -5
>> Ooc << I might get rid of some of my charries lol i just have to decide which one i want to keep. Hmm let me think about. I know mental illness doesn't work that way, i suffer from depression, by heal her i mean make it possible for her to become happy because she can't do that on her own, im studying mental illness in college. I didnt say love can cure depression, i said love can only heal her because it's what she needs to be happy and not depressed.
I honestly dont appreciate the way you guys assumed that i knew nothing about Mental illness, I wouldn't have put that in there if i didn't understand it, and the way i discussed it was how it happened for me... so that's all real feelings right there, i biased her personality on the hardships in my life.
For one yes there is one breed that has a lion's like maine and that is a maine coon, or long haired cats can have a small one.. like my cat has one. I guess glow isn't the right word but depending on the food you feed your cat, their food should make there fur shine in the sunlight or any sort of light. So no they dont glow but they do shine or have a sheen to their fur.
No it's okay, its not strict at all. But i will say you might want to read up a little more on cats, im not trying to be rude. But the point of cats not generally haveing lion's like manes, not actual lion manes is untrue. I high-key suggest that you just make Lilacdew an ordinary warrior. She doesn't really fit the Preacher role. Plus, if you do that, you won't have to change her personality or name. I think that's more of what they're trying to say. Yeah, cats with long fur can look like they have manes but calling it "lion-like" is a bit of an exaggeration. Yet I don't think you should change it.
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Post by December on Aug 25, 2017 18:28:55 GMT -5
♡ Bun ♡ I apologize if my comment seemed to invalidate your mental illness, and I respect your experiences. I was just relaying some of what the mods - many, if not all of whom, are mentally ill as well - had discussed with regard to your form. I also understand where you were going with appearances now that you explained yourself, so thank you for the clarification! I would, however, appreciate it if you would address the issues with your claiming of both a preacher and the deputy, with the mate process, and with your preacher form (should you keep that character). Those were the main "problem areas" we agreed upon. (Also, new info based on something that I just noticed: since all mate pairs are assigned by the preachers, nobody has an unknown father, unless the mother secretly cheated, but even then, the father would be assumed to be her mate, so the Clan as a whole wouldn't consider the parentage of the kits "unknown." Sorry to nitpick.)
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Aug 26, 2017 12:35:05 GMT -5
>> Ooc << I think i'll choose a different preacher.
As for mates who's open to be mates with my kitties. >> RP <<
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Post by December on Aug 26, 2017 14:25:56 GMT -5
Alright, thanks! Does that mean you'll be giving up the deputy position?
As for mates, I don't have any cats open, and you may have to wait until more people join, but we'll get everyone paired up as soon as possible. Do you have any cats you'd like to be considered unfit for a mate?
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Post by nem on Aug 26, 2017 14:32:43 GMT -5
Elmshadow has to have the -light suffix.
That may not be on the first page though, but it is a requirement.
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Aug 26, 2017 14:59:20 GMT -5
>> Ooc << Wait would lighting work? >> RP <<
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Post by December on Aug 26, 2017 15:03:13 GMT -5
-light is the only suffix used for preachers. I would recommend creating a new character for a preacher, anyway, since all adult preachers are corrupt and dishonest at best. If you do use a preexisting character, you'll have to change their suffix and perhaps certain aspects of their personality or backstory. Thanks.
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Post by PatienceTheVirtue on Aug 26, 2017 23:22:14 GMT -5
Darkηesque would you mind if my character Firewhisker were to mentor your apprentice character? One of the coming plot points involves Juniper's apprentice character dying, and her mentor Emberpelt leaning on Firewhisker for support. We were thinking it would be an interesting dynamic for Firewhisker to have an apprentice at the same time (maybe jealousy?) and to RP some scenes of the two mentors training their apprentices together to make it better(/worse) when the death comes. That leaves a good deal of room for your apprentice character to have some personal growth from the death of a could-be friend and things like that, too. If you're interested in that I can make a PM to discuss it better, probably with Juniper so that you two can add some depth to it as well. Oh and one more question, would it be alright for Whitetalon's age to be bumped up to 33+? Aspenlight needs to be older than Hollylight, who needs to older than Grayinglight ( ♡ Bun ♡ ), and for Hollylight to have stolen Whitetalon's place, White needs to be around the same age as Hollylight. Their plot lines are based around the ages, + the specific personalities and ages of the apprentices are based off the mentors, so it's pretty involved. Also, the main page opened! You can add starters whenever you're able; we're all really excited to RP with you soon <3
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Post by Deleted on Aug 26, 2017 23:34:13 GMT -5
[ either whitetalon has to be 38+ moons old, or grayinglight has to be lowered down to about 30 or so and whitetalon up to 33+. sorry for all of the nitpicking, but the ages are actually pretty important, as mentioned. ]
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Post by hollis on Aug 27, 2017 14:04:12 GMT -5
Speckleear || Male || 57 moons|| Warrior ➣ Speckleear looks how his name sounds. He has a tall and slender body. His legs are long and strong. His fur is short, brown, and smooth, with some dark and lighter spots mixed in. Both of his ears have dozens of lighter and darker specks on them. His left ear has a small slice from a skirmish many moons ago. His tail is missing a small spot from its tip from the same skirmish. ➣ Speckleear is best described as tired of everything. His mate doesn't love him, and he doesn't love her. He hates the whole arrangement and he hates her. He views her as rude and manipulative. He always tries to get as far away as possible from her. Many nights he has wasted arguing with her. He cares about his kits, but he's honestly barely attempted to spend time with them. He's sure they're great, but does he really care? Nah. He cares more about his mate than them, and that's saying something. He just never felt much care towards them, or sympathy. He's not sure why. Lately, he's realized he's lost most care for anyone or anything in the world. The strongest emotion he feels for anyone is an undying hate for Foxtail. He just goes through the routine of life. He's more of a go with the flow type of person, and that's what he does. He doesn't really make his presence known, but he still tries to be a good person. He's pretty calm most of the time, but with some people he has a short temper. ➣ History (optional). Mates with Foxtail || Several kits with Foxtail. ||
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Aug 27, 2017 14:14:18 GMT -5
>> Ooc << Okay i got most of my characters done. But i still want to revise and edit them but i dont have the muse to do that right now. >> RP <<
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Post by hollis on Aug 27, 2017 16:04:00 GMT -5
>> Ooc << Okay i got most of my characters done. But i still want to revise and edit them but i dont have the muse to do that right now. >> RP << Sorry to ask, but can you change Grayings personality a bit? He's plotted out to be a corrupt and selfish preacher.
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Post by December on Aug 27, 2017 19:13:18 GMT -5
Hi everyone! We have a plotting PM launched, which should hopefully make it easier for us to plot and work through issues without clogging this page up. Go us.
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Aug 30, 2017 20:13:50 GMT -5
>> Ooc << Okay i got most of my characters done. But i still want to revise and edit them but i dont have the muse to do that right now. >> RP << Sorry to ask, but can you change Grayings personality a bit? He's plotted out to be a corrupt and selfish preacher. >> Ooc << I made him persoanlity that way so no one suspects that he is corrupt and selfish because he hides it, pretending to be nice and kind when in reality he is plotting evil stuff... i might change it. >> RP <<
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Post by Redfleck on Sept 5, 2017 20:02:37 GMT -5
Thornfoot || Tom || 30 moons || Warrior ➣ A muscular tan tom with a white underbelly and paws. Three parallel scars run down his back left leg. His eyes are a dark green and a little bit brown, usually narrowed and focused. The end of his tail is a fluffy poof of white, but more often than not appears brown or gray as a result of spending too much time running around rather than grooming. Despite his name, Thornfoot doesn't have particularly long claws. ➣ He's a playful cat with a competitive streak, adventurous but uncontrollably impulsive under stressful circumstances. He has a bad habit of bossing others around, but his loyalty to Lightclan remains steadfast and strong. He's a confident cat, but at times it may border on arrogance. While playfighting and pranking used to be a fun pastime of his, Thornfoot prefers to battle his wits against someone else, and he takes the most pride in how much he knows rather than how much he can do; after all, what one does can only follow from how much they know. n/a || n/a || Other
I know that Thornfoot would probably have a mate at this point, reading the page, but should I just request a cat to be assigned to him? Or will Billy assign someone for him?
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Post by December on Sept 5, 2017 20:53:38 GMT -5
Welcome! You can request a cat if you have someone within the appropriate age range in mind and the other person is okay with it, or we'll do the math and assign him a mate.
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