Post by omegahound on Jul 18, 2017 14:47:06 GMT -5
Okay, so on the Cats section of the forum, Basement Cat (hi) made a thread with their AU ideas for how to make The Last Hope better. This reminded me that, a long time ago, I came up with some half-ideas of my own and I finally got inspired to write them down. This is the info that is necessary to any future drabbles on this thread, but these drabbles will be based on what someone requests, so prompt away!
Here we go...
Small tweaks to the story are:
* The Three serve a greater purpose overall. Jayfeather dies instead of Hollyleaf, Lionblaze kills Breezepelt and Dovewing serves as a channel to see where strikes are worst and relays info to Firestar and the other leaders.
* There are more ThunderClan deaths since a lot of the DF (and Breezepelt) has personal vendettas against them.
* StarClan aren’t able to break the gap between their home and reality until Jayfeather uses some bs powers to ‘guide’ them over the line. After all, the DF wasn’t able to influence the real world until enough supporters allowed the barrier to weaken and let them slip through. I dunno, I’m making this up. Anyways, this means reinforcements are later in coming and, upon awakening, Jayfeather is killed by an insane Breezepelt.
* On top of all of this, the fourth cat is Ivypool, who spends a great deal of time getting closer to the Dark Forest leaders and building their trust, which distances her from Dovewing and comes to a head when she turns on Hawkfrost, who is distracted attacking Blossomfall for refusing to hurt her Clan, giving her an epic final confrontation with him that leads to her coming out on top.
--I had a thought on having her catching the other spy, Tigerheart, eavesdropping on her and the leaders, and she is forced to kill him to keep up the ruse but that's dumb so might not--
Anyways, in the end, the battle happens and, instead of Squirrelflight, Brambleclaw makes Lionblaze his deputy. He does start to work to make up his behavior towards her, though.
This is basically what I surmised would be the ThunderClan Allegiances maybe like, a week later, once the dust has settled:
Leader: Bramblestar
Deputy: Lionblaze
M. Cat: Leafpool
Warriors
Greystripe
Sandstorm
Dustpelt
Brightheart
Cloudtail
Squirrelflight
Spiderleg
Whitewing
Birchfall
Berrynose
Mousewhisker
Millie
Poppyfrost
Cinderheart
Hollyleaf
Foxleap (Molepaw)
Icecloud
Toadstep
Rosepetal (Cherrypaw)
Bumblestripe
Ivypool
Dovewing
Apprentices
Molepaw
Cherrypaw
Queens
Daisy
Sorreltail (Lilykit, Seedkit)
Elders
Purdy
Blossomfall (Retired early due to extensive injuries) ((DON’T WORRY, IVYPOOL AND BRIARLIGHT VISIT EVERY DAY))
Killed in the FINAL BATTLE: Firestar (Final fight with Tigerstar), Mousefur (Defending camp), Brackenfur and Thornclaw (Killed in ShadowClan camp defense), Ferncloud (Defending Nursery), Jayfeather (Killed by Breezepelt), and Hazeltail (Killed in WindClan camp defense).
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I have more notes, like Lionblaze struggling with being given the deputy position (he's not really good at leading lol) on top of losing his invincibility--so he relies HEAVILY on Hollyleaf and Squirrelflight.
Thoughts, questions and imput are welcome because I need to talk about this...
Also, I am fully aware that this is full of plot-holes and weak threads of thought, but this is for the entertainment of anyone and everyone. Let's have fun with this!