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Post by neb on Jul 17, 2017 13:16:42 GMT -5
All I have currently is a synopsis, and I'm working on a prologue at the moment. I don't know where I'm going where this so give feedback and just a bunch of thoughts and whatnot. Synopsis An ordinary girl. She was yet another girl with the twinkling brown eyes. Yet another girl with the sleek brown hair. She was a grey stroke on the monochrome scene. She lived the life of an ordinary teenager, staying quiet, blending in. She had ordinary friends who led ordinary lives. her dreams were small town and ordinary, just wanting to be successful. She would lead a good nice life, and the only thing to remain of her memory would be sums of inheritance to her children. An extraordinary boy. He was the flash of blue in the sea of brown eyes. A streak of red against the brown. A splash of color in their otherwise bland life. He lived a life of an extraordinary teenager, defying the expectations and rules of those around him. The boy had a single friend, who he believed was extraordinary. His dreams were extraordinary and filled with wonder. he would leave his mark before he left, the boy would make sure his extraordinary life was preserved. Two completely different people, two different stories. An unintentional catfish. Meeting your best friend of three years for the first time in person. 'Extraordinary' weaves the tale of an ordinary girl who meets and extraordinary boy. She is insecure and doubts herself. He is confident and knows its okay to be different. Their meeting is one of chance, though some may call it fate. He values different things than she, but he teaches her something very valuable over the course of their friendship. Something that she held dear for the rest of her life.
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Post by wadevvilson on Jul 18, 2017 3:03:24 GMT -5
I will say that the summary sounds interesting, if anything. And having your main characters be friends is always nice in my opinion, it's refreshing to see a story where everything doesn't revolve around romance.
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Post by Redfleck on Jul 22, 2017 2:09:05 GMT -5
This definitely would be interesting to read to the point that I want to roleplay this with somebody T_TYour writing is really enticing
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