Post by mintedstar/fur on Jun 10, 2017 14:40:06 GMT -5
I rewrote this story ages ago as Mortality. Both A New Life and Mortality were/are finished. A New Life was my first ever Warriors Fan Fiction and I wrote it back in 2012.
I have not edited any of it (To give you all mercy, I will make sure that I don't randomly have capital letters, as I did in the written version). You all get to appreciate my bad spelling/grammar. As well as lack of plot...
But it did have Whitefire, so I love A New Life for that.
Anyway, read on.
WARRIORS
Holly of the Stars
A New Life
Prologue
I new she was going to die, even before I saw the wound. You see I have the power to breing back the dead. I've ceep it a secrit for sesens. She's was my best friend. Sow I brout her back. Was it the right thing to do. I dident know if it was right intell a StarClan cat came to me and said it was ment to be. So Hollyleaf is back.
Capter 1
I saw stars or maybe the stars ware me. StarClan was more then I could dream of. Suddenly I was folling. What was happening. I was folling vare fast, folling. Then black I could not open my eyes. Ware was I, ware was StarClan. Then I herd a voice. It was Whitefire. She said "How are you Hollyleaf." "I am ok. Ware are we"? I said. "Just out of ThunderClan territory" Whitefire said. "How do you like your new body" she said. "What" I said. "I now you most have alot of qeshtens but they can weight" she said. "You should go to sleep"! I felt so sleepy. Thin I was a sleep.
Capter 2
I woke with a start. Ware was I. Oh yes with Whitefire past ThunderClan territory. Then I realized that I could open my eyes. I locked at my self. I locked a lot like I did win I was a kit. "Good morning, Hollyleaf" Whitefire said. "I now you have must have a lot of qestens. But thare are two things you must know. Ferst you may chose to go back to StarClan or stay here. You stell have a life to live."
I could have a nother life. I could have a nother life. A mate and kits. "I will stay."
Capter 3
"Two, you could keep your memorys or Icould lock your past memorys tell you are a warrior," Whitefire said. "Block my past memorys"!? I said then I thot of all the sad memorys it would be nice for my to forgit them. "I would lick to forget my memory." "As you wish Hollyleaf. Now sleep."
"Hollykit." "Hollykit wake up." Who is that I thought. "Hollykit wake up. Its time to go to ThunderClan." As I opened my eyes I saw a beautiful she-cat. Her fur was white with green eyes. "How do you know my name" I said. "I have known you for a long time. My name is Whitefire."
Capter 4
"Whats is ThunderClan" I asked. "It that way" She said pointing her tail to a bunch of trees. "Why do we have to go there" I asked. "Come on" Whitefire said. Avoiding the qesten. "Lets go. We showed gite their by sun-high."
As Hollykit walked through the fern tunnle. We emerged into a stone hollow. There ware four dead bodys in the middle of the camp. Thare were holls in the thorn barer and most of the dens. Most of the cats had bad wounds. One of the cats looked up. It was a tom with dark colered straps. "Who is this" he said looking at Whitefire. "Bramblestar, this is Hollykit. She has come to gown ThunderClan" Whitefire said.
Capter 5
"I met her mother to day and we talked. She said her mate was in a clan. She did not say wich clan or what her mate's name was. All she said was she wonted her kit to be in a clan and she gave her to me, then I took her here," Whitefire said with a nod to me. I did not no anything about this. I did not even remember my mother. Was it true.
Who was my mother and who was my father. Whitefire was tolking again. "So will you tack her"? The cat she called Bramblestar tilted his head to consider. After a moment he said "Yes, she may gown ThunderClan."
Capter 6
Still being deciphered. xD
Well, I know one thing. I can use a question mark now.
Whoops, I have been 'misspelling' capter as chapter. I will change that now. How in the world could I spell Prologue but not Chapter??? Oh... wait. I think I remember looking it up in the Warrior books...
In total there were 16 'capters'.
I have not edited any of it (To give you all mercy, I will make sure that I don't randomly have capital letters, as I did in the written version). You all get to appreciate my bad spelling/grammar. As well as lack of plot...
But it did have Whitefire, so I love A New Life for that.
Anyway, read on.
WARRIORS
Holly of the Stars
A New Life
Prologue
I new she was going to die, even before I saw the wound. You see I have the power to breing back the dead. I've ceep it a secrit for sesens. She's was my best friend. Sow I brout her back. Was it the right thing to do. I dident know if it was right intell a StarClan cat came to me and said it was ment to be. So Hollyleaf is back.
Capter 1
I saw stars or maybe the stars ware me. StarClan was more then I could dream of. Suddenly I was folling. What was happening. I was folling vare fast, folling. Then black I could not open my eyes. Ware was I, ware was StarClan. Then I herd a voice. It was Whitefire. She said "How are you Hollyleaf." "I am ok. Ware are we"? I said. "Just out of ThunderClan territory" Whitefire said. "How do you like your new body" she said. "What" I said. "I now you most have alot of qeshtens but they can weight" she said. "You should go to sleep"! I felt so sleepy. Thin I was a sleep.
Capter 2
I woke with a start. Ware was I. Oh yes with Whitefire past ThunderClan territory. Then I realized that I could open my eyes. I locked at my self. I locked a lot like I did win I was a kit. "Good morning, Hollyleaf" Whitefire said. "I now you have must have a lot of qestens. But thare are two things you must know. Ferst you may chose to go back to StarClan or stay here. You stell have a life to live."
I could have a nother life. I could have a nother life. A mate and kits. "I will stay."
Capter 3
"Two, you could keep your memorys or Icould lock your past memorys tell you are a warrior," Whitefire said. "Block my past memorys"!? I said then I thot of all the sad memorys it would be nice for my to forgit them. "I would lick to forget my memory." "As you wish Hollyleaf. Now sleep."
"Hollykit." "Hollykit wake up." Who is that I thought. "Hollykit wake up. Its time to go to ThunderClan." As I opened my eyes I saw a beautiful she-cat. Her fur was white with green eyes. "How do you know my name" I said. "I have known you for a long time. My name is Whitefire."
Capter 4
"Whats is ThunderClan" I asked. "It that way" She said pointing her tail to a bunch of trees. "Why do we have to go there" I asked. "Come on" Whitefire said. Avoiding the qesten. "Lets go. We showed gite their by sun-high."
As Hollykit walked through the fern tunnle. We emerged into a stone hollow. There ware four dead bodys in the middle of the camp. Thare were holls in the thorn barer and most of the dens. Most of the cats had bad wounds. One of the cats looked up. It was a tom with dark colered straps. "Who is this" he said looking at Whitefire. "Bramblestar, this is Hollykit. She has come to gown ThunderClan" Whitefire said.
Capter 5
"I met her mother to day and we talked. She said her mate was in a clan. She did not say wich clan or what her mate's name was. All she said was she wonted her kit to be in a clan and she gave her to me, then I took her here," Whitefire said with a nod to me. I did not no anything about this. I did not even remember my mother. Was it true.
Who was my mother and who was my father. Whitefire was tolking again. "So will you tack her"? The cat she called Bramblestar tilted his head to consider. After a moment he said "Yes, she may gown ThunderClan."
Capter 6
Still being deciphered. xD
Well, I know one thing. I can use a question mark now.
Whoops, I have been 'misspelling' capter as chapter. I will change that now. How in the world could I spell Prologue but not Chapter??? Oh... wait. I think I remember looking it up in the Warrior books...
In total there were 16 'capters'.
