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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jun 11, 2017 4:11:21 GMT -5
Oh, yes he has very dark brown straps over his tan far. He also has dark eers, and a long tall. Wouldn't be surprised. Actually, let me check... Nope. Surprisingly, I spelled fur as fur, tail as tail and I think I spelled ear as ear. But just = gust and Mouse = Mowse |
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Jun 11, 2017 4:26:02 GMT -5
Okay, here we go, long list here!
This pre-note: "THIS FANFIC HAS MULTIPLE GRAMMATICAL AND SPELLING ERRORS!"
Clenched=clecnhed
Below=bellow
Toward=tonward
Tortoiseshell=tortishell
Inescapable=unescapable
Panicked=paniced
Where=were
Kits=kis
White=whie
Laid=layed
Their=there
Too=to
Brightstar=Brighstar
Answer=awnser
He=her
Immediately=immediatly
Heard=herd
Memory/Memoriam=memorian
Leaves=Leafs
There's=theirs
Deep=deap
And=mamd
Embarrassed=embaressed
One=onw
Wolves=wolfs
Where=were
Katnisskit=Kattnisskit
Skies=skys
Tiredly=tierdly
Sister's=sisters
She's=shes
Quiet=quite
Our=out
Gruesome=grusome
Heard=heart
Recognized=regognized
Him=hm
That's=thats
Clouds=clouts
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Rує
So many story ideas, and so little time!
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Post by Rує on Jun 11, 2017 6:55:16 GMT -5
Oh gosh. My first fanfic was actually about dogs. I wrote it in 5th/6th grade and miraculously completed it (I feel like I had more motivation to write when I was younger - go figure!). I hardly remember what happened in the plot, and that's probably because there hardly was a plot. It was from the perspective of a male pup growing up in his pack, and at one point I remember him getting captured by "Shadowpack" (the equivalent of Shadowclan) and he had to be rescued. I know I had a second book planned, where the main character went off on some sort of journey or something and ended up meeting a dog in Twolegplace that would eventually become his love interest, but I never actually wrote that story.
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Post by Mosspool on Jun 11, 2017 7:36:43 GMT -5
Mine was called Safe and Sound and some people actually might remember it (Mint maybe) and it was about three cats who saved the clans and became immortal as a reward so that they would always be around to protect them but they became so bitter about living for so long that they decided to destroy the clans so they wouldn't have to protect them anymore. The writing was horrible and there was six points of view so it was all over the place. I had a whole five book series where each book took place during different time periods in the clan's history but they were all connected planned out though that I'd love to revisit one day. I remember it! And still love the idea!I actually kinda want to bring it back |
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Post by kinkajou on Jun 11, 2017 14:51:39 GMT -5
*cough* I spelled chapter as capter, falling as folling, and switched between correctly using were and using ware Lynx, nothing you say can compare to what I've done myself. XP Also, apparently, Bramblestar has dark brown straps. I spelled 'follow' as 'fallow' Also 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 your fic is hilarious (no offense) Like whats so bad about having big paws |
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jun 11, 2017 14:53:20 GMT -5
I did that too. xD
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Jun 11, 2017 16:53:34 GMT -5
*cough* I spelled chapter as capter, falling as folling, and switched between correctly using were and using ware Lynx, nothing you say can compare to what I've done myself. XP Also, apparently, Bramblestar has dark brown straps. I spelled 'follow' as 'fallow' Also 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 your fic is hilarious (no offense) Like whats so bad about having big paws I know! XD. |
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eph 💕
transed my gender 👍
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Post by eph 💕 on Jun 11, 2017 19:53:15 GMT -5
my first fic was a super edition based on tigerstar's youth; this was in the days where fics were posted in the super edition section. my first original fic in the official fan fiction section was called "fury never sleeps," and it followed an apprentice (whose name i no longer remember) whose mentor (lionflame?) was so mean he ran away. he was then captured by a group of religious fanatics who worshipped something called the grieyl. they spliced his soul to a she-cat's, creating a genderless creature called the fury. the fury terrorized the forest, was recruited into an underground fighting ring where it met a she-cat named tempest, and finally was led to a pool deep in a cavern where its souls were separated back into their original bodies. the apprentice went home to the clan along with tempest, and they both became warriors and eventually mates and they had kits. it was the first and only fic i finished until "absence of rain," and it started out as horror and turned into a weird family comedy thing. it was a mess. i wish i still had it.
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Post by ☾ Cʀᴇsᴄᴇɴᴛ ☽ on Jun 11, 2017 20:58:38 GMT -5
My very first was called "Forbidden: A Dark Path." I now cringe at this title and the lack of planning that went into it. I kinda just jumped in randomly. It was about this she-cat Songbreeze with a super overcontrolling mother who was working with the Dark Forest. Songbreeze was the prettiest/most ideal of her two other siblings, so Meadowsong (the mother) basically obsessed over Songbreeze and ignore her other kids and made a deal with evil spirits that I hadn't really fleshed out. I just knew it had to do with hanging control over her daughter. I was going to have Meadowsong die and then come back to drive Songbreeze insane, actually. The concept was pretty cliche and the names were horrible. Like seriously, Songbreeze and Meadowsong? They're just so Mary-sueish. Well, i never finished it and don't plan to xD
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Post by tiger beetle on Jun 12, 2017 0:20:55 GMT -5
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Post by kinkajou on Jun 12, 2017 15:08:26 GMT -5
my first fic was a super edition based on tigerstar's youth; this was in the days where fics were posted in the super edition section. my first original fic in the official fan fiction section was called "fury never sleeps," and it followed an apprentice (whose name i no longer remember) whose mentor (lionflame?) was so mean he ran away. he was then captured by a group of religious fanatics who worshipped something called the grieyl. they spliced his soul to a she-cat's, creating a genderless creature called the fury. the fury terrorized the forest, was recruited into an underground fighting ring where it met a she-cat named tempest, and finally was led to a pool deep in a cavern where its souls were separated back into their original bodies. the apprentice went home to the clan along with tempest, and they both became warriors and eventually mates and they had kits. it was the first and only fic i finished until "absence of rain," and it started out as horror and turned into a weird family comedy thing. it was a mess. i wish i still had it. That sounds...interesting |
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Post by Fresh Sans Genderbend on Jun 14, 2017 5:35:19 GMT -5
I epicly failed at my first fic. Its about 4 kits who were born in RiverClan. Riverkit was born when the river hit the walls, Thunderkit was born on the loudest clap of thunder, Shadowkit was born in a choking blackness, and Windkit was born in a huge gust of wind. They were supposed to stop the barrier between the dark forest and starclan from breaking. They were all going to have powers but I barely got past Riverpaw almost drowning then gave up because I had no power ideas. Lol.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jun 14, 2017 14:40:52 GMT -5
Mine was called The Path Less Traveled. It actually wasn't really cringy, but I definitely could have written it better. That was years ago now, though, so I've improved in my writing since then. I never finished it, however. But I still remember the names of some of the characters, and you'll see little easter Eggs in my other stories sometimes if you read my work. All my stories have Easter Eggs from previous fanfics.
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Jun 14, 2017 14:50:35 GMT -5
I have Easter eggs as well in A Lesson on Empathy(As I call it, ALoE). Many characters actually have names similar, or exactly alike characters from Lost(My first fic). Such as the character Wrenwhisper, though her personality is different.
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