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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 8, 2016 18:40:22 GMT -5
@madeofstarstuff gg, m8, gg. lazy penguin yeah, teachers especially hate second Though I love it so too bad I'm doing it. mintedstar/fur Come on in. <33 *Enters* So, what is currently being planned? I'd love to help.  |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 8, 2016 18:40:35 GMT -5
how did i not think that third, second, and first are the ONLY povs
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Post by lazy penguin on Aug 8, 2016 18:44:40 GMT -5
how did i not think that third, second, and first are the ONLY povs Because they're not! Haven't you ever heard of fourth person pov????? It's when you write without addressing your characters at alllllllllllllllll. Aka the worst way to write a story and is totally impossible but shhhhhhhhh. |
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Post by Brownie on Aug 8, 2016 18:46:47 GMT -5
lazy penguin I'm excited to see it too! xD mintedstar/fur Nothing much, we're all doing little shorts here and there. Anything you write in the world will help tons. @madeofstarstuff Because forth person is a thing? Ummm //whispers who knows things about the fourth dimension?
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Post by Brownie on Aug 8, 2016 18:47:41 GMT -5
how did i not think that third, second, and first are the ONLY povs Because they're not! Haven't you ever heard of fourth person pov????? It's when you write without addressing your characters at alllllllllllllllll. Aka the worst way to write a story and is totally impossible but shhhhhhhhh. I've written a story without characters!!! ^^ 100% agreed |
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Post by TheRealDarkstalker on Aug 8, 2016 18:50:14 GMT -5
Hello! *deep breath of fear* Can I join!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 8, 2016 18:57:08 GMT -5
Because they're not! Haven't you ever heard of fourth person pov????? It's when you write without addressing your characters at alllllllllllllllll. Aka the worst way to write a story and is totally impossible but shhhhhhhhh. I've written a story without characters!!! ^^ 100% agreed dang i should try this |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 8, 2016 18:58:13 GMT -5
it's a wip but what do you guys think so far:
tree. grass. some air. the sun. quote en quote. worry.
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Post by lazy penguin on Aug 8, 2016 19:00:00 GMT -5
Hello! *deep breath of fear* Can I join! Hello friend! All writer are welcome here, the popular and inexperienced, the old and young, the first person and third person, feel free to write! This is for everyone! |
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Post by TheRealDarkstalker on Aug 8, 2016 19:01:14 GMT -5
Hello! *deep breath of fear* Can I join! Hello friend! All writer are welcome here, the popular and inexperienced, the old and young, the first person and third person, feel free to write! This is for everyone! Yes! What about the clan thing? |
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Post by lazy penguin on Aug 8, 2016 19:04:31 GMT -5
Hello friend! All writer are welcome here, the popular and inexperienced, the old and young, the first person and third person, feel free to write! This is for everyone! Yes! What about the clan thing? Well, we have five predetermined clans and territories that everyone is free to use and develop. It's a great place to start for new writers because you don't have to worry as much about world building. You can read other stories and either continue an era/storyline that's part of this, or start with fresh characters in the same five clans! |
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Post by TheRealDarkstalker on Aug 8, 2016 19:07:01 GMT -5
Yes! What about the clan thing? Well, we have five predetermined clans and territories that everyone is free to use and develop. It's a great place to start for new writers because you don't have to worry as much about world building. You can read other stories and either continue an era/storyline that's part of this, or start with fresh characters in the same five clans! Oh, that makes sense! Thanks! So where are the stories for this? |
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Post by eph 💕 on Aug 8, 2016 19:08:08 GMT -5
@ nate: the links are on the front page under "stories"
of course, this thread is new, so there's only one so far.
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Post by TheRealDarkstalker on Aug 8, 2016 19:09:08 GMT -5
@ nate: the links are on the front page under "stories" of course, this thread is new, so there's only one so far. *whacks self* Why didn't I look at that? |
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Post by lazy penguin on Aug 8, 2016 19:09:34 GMT -5
Well, we have five predetermined clans and territories that everyone is free to use and develop. It's a great place to start for new writers because you don't have to worry as much about world building. You can read other stories and either continue an era/storyline that's part of this, or start with fresh characters in the same five clans! Oh, that makes sense! Thanks! So where are the stories for this? They'd will be link on the first page, but for right now none have been made/finished. Mine will probably be up later in the week but for now feel free to make your own! |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 8, 2016 19:10:00 GMT -5
so far we don't have much, but we will eventually have more of course!!
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Post by TheRealDarkstalker on Aug 8, 2016 19:14:58 GMT -5
so far we don't have much, but we will eventually have more of course!! Actually, make that two stories. I'm sold on making a lore about the waning and waxing moon effecting where the (medicine?) cats talk to Starclan. |
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Post by Brownie on Aug 8, 2016 19:44:46 GMT -5
Have fun with that!
Me and Twi are creating the lores on how the two were discovered, but I honestly had no idea why they chose the moons for em.
Can't wait to see what it is! I may use it in my own short if I don't finish before you. xD
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Post by TheRealDarkstalker on Aug 8, 2016 19:50:25 GMT -5
Have fun with that! Me and Twi are creating the lores on how the two were discovered, but I honestly had no idea why they chose the moons for em. Can't wait to see what it is! I may use it in my own short if I don't finish before you. xD Okay! By the way, do all the cats gather there, or just the medicine cats? |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 8, 2016 19:51:21 GMT -5
actually that's a good question... do they take the apprentices there like in the original series?
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Post by Brownie on Aug 8, 2016 19:54:01 GMT -5
Tbh I think that was only a plot device to introduce the moonstone/StarClan with a non-warrior PoV. xDDD
It's up to you guys, really.
Maybe later on, but I was thinking this StarClan could be a bit. . .harsher than the OS. They wouldn't like trespassers on their sacred lands. So I don't know.
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Post by TheRealDarkstalker on Aug 8, 2016 20:02:07 GMT -5
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Post by TheRealDarkstalker on Aug 8, 2016 20:03:40 GMT -5
Tbh I think that was only a plot device to introduce the moonstone/StarClan with a non-warrior PoV. xDDD It's up to you guys, really. Maybe later on, but I was thinking this StarClan could be a bit. . .harsher than the OS. They wouldn't like trespassers on their sacred lands. So I don't know. That would be nice! And making them harsh would be helpful! |
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Aug 8, 2016 20:06:07 GMT -5
So we can write anything for this?
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Post by TheRealDarkstalker on Aug 8, 2016 20:08:27 GMT -5
So we can write anything for this? Yes! You can just write a story about it, or write the beginning of a plot, etc. |
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Post by Brownie on Aug 8, 2016 20:11:14 GMT -5
So we can write anything for this? Yepo. It's an open world anyone can do anything with. ;D |
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Aug 8, 2016 20:12:40 GMT -5
Oh boy. What have y'all done.
//cracks knuckles
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Post by Brownie on Aug 8, 2016 20:19:40 GMT -5
Oh boy. What have y'all done. //cracks knuckles mwahahahahahah Glad you could join us. :mellow: |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 8, 2016 21:17:58 GMT -5
oh no... shadowface has joined us.
this is amazing. but also terrible.
because i can't read anything she writes without having lots of feelings.
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Post by Brownie on Aug 9, 2016 9:22:13 GMT -5
I'm like 45% done with the short. Wooooo
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