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Post by Deleted on Jun 5, 2017 11:29:59 GMT -5
The Smallest of DestinysA Lycanroc comic
Characters
RockClan
Jasminestar-white she-cat with blind blue eyes, has a jasmine in her left ear
Cosmicheart-off-white tom with yellow eyes, deputy of clan and Smallkit and Tinykit's father
Gentlebreeze-soft furred brown she-cat, medicine cat
Talonheart-battle scarred black she-cat with yellow eyes, Tinykit's future mentor
Blackeye-black she-cat missing one of her eyes, Smallkit's future mentor
Torrenttail-bluish-gray tom with orange eyes, Rubypaw's mentor
Rubypaw-calico she-cat with a delicate dappled tail, sunset red eyes
Emeraldheart-chimera she-cat with green eyes, Tinykit and Smallkit's mother
NorthClan
Asterstar-long furred tuxedo she-cat with blue eyes
Polarheart-silver she-cat with blue eyes, deputy of NorthClan and mother of Northpaw
Orcafur-black and white she-cat with yellow eyes, very young medicine cat
Timberfoot-tawny she-cat with brown feet, Northpaw's mentor
Bearclaw-black tom with a giant scar across his eye left from an bear attack, father of Northpaw
EmergencyClan
Surgerystar-giant yellow tom missing an leg, mentor to Dalmatianpaw
Latexwind-delicate dappled she-cat with bluish-black eyes, mentor to Policepaw
Asprinsight-white tom with blind amber eyes, medicine cat andmentor to X-raypaw
X-raypaw-tabby she-cat with amber eyes
Policepaw-russian blue she-cat with yellow eyes, needs to wear sunglasses for unknown reasons
Dalmatianpaw-white tom with small black spots and yellow eyes
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Post by Deleted on Jun 6, 2017 10:07:56 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Jun 6, 2017 10:09:35 GMT -5
If your wondering who the cats on the cover is they are Smallstar the main character (centre), his brother Tinytail (left), and X-raywhisker (right)
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Post by nem on Jun 8, 2017 9:07:21 GMT -5
No links work.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 8, 2017 13:29:28 GMT -5
I know there's something wrong. I'm asking around with long-time members like Hawktalon, and Sparrow. |
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Post by Echowind on Jun 9, 2017 18:52:13 GMT -5
YES! I FINALLY FOUND YOUR COMIC!!! I've been searching for ages and I've finally found it! I really love how the names of the cats relate to the name of the clan! Super cool! Also it's a super cute cover, can't wait to see more!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 11, 2017 13:27:18 GMT -5
YES! I FINALLY FOUND YOUR COMIC!!! I've been searching for ages and I've finally found it! I really love how the names of the cats relate to the name of the clan! Super cool! Also it's a super cute cover, can't wait to see more! Thank you! I'll start drawing the comic pages on the 30th because A. I'll be back at my house in San Luis Obispo like at 10:00 p.m on the 28th and B. I'll be jet lagged on the 29th. I might have a sleepover after I come back so maybe the 4th of July. Get it! |
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Post by Deleted on Jun 11, 2017 13:31:54 GMT -5
Okay so clan religions. SnowClan-If a kit is born in a snowstorm their destined to ether be one of the best leaders the clan has seen or the best medicine cats the clan has seen and they're ether named North (see Northpaw) or Orca (see Orcafur). RockClan-if you're named after a gemstone your kit is destined to save the clans or clan. EmergencyClan (I know it's a dumb name but I was in 5th grade)-the leaders, deputies, and medicine cats wear police star necklaces to show they're like the top dog and you have to respect them.
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Post by Echowind on Jun 12, 2017 16:47:51 GMT -5
Hi @rainbowclaw, just a bit of feedback, you should try to make the words darker and larger so that your readers can read them. Also you might consider putting the page number somewhere on your title so readers get an idea of how many pages are up, so to see if any new pages are up, this is more useful when you have more pages. Love the new page though! Can't wait to see more!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 14, 2017 4:34:28 GMT -5
Hi Lana, just a bit of feedback, you should try to make the words darker and larger so that your readers can read them. Also you might consider putting the page number somewhere on your title so readers get an idea of how many pages are up, so to see if any new pages are up, this is more useful when you have more pages. Love the new page though! Can't wait to see more! Thanks for the feedback Echo! This is my first time making a serious comic. The other comics I usually make are little comic strips about stick people. |
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Post by smilii on Jun 17, 2017 10:23:19 GMT -5
Ahh this is cute! ♥ You reminded me to get started on my webcomic too lol
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Post by Deleted on Jun 24, 2017 6:04:21 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Jun 24, 2017 16:42:21 GMT -5
Just to tell you guys I'm sorry I haven't added any new pages yet. I'm really busy. I might redo the first one once I get back to CA.
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Post by Echowind on Jun 27, 2017 22:01:54 GMT -5
Just to tell you guys I'm sorry I haven't added any new pages yet. I'm really busy. I might redo the first one once I get back to CA. Okay, can't wait for the new page! |
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Post by Deleted on Jun 29, 2017 8:21:28 GMT -5
Hey guys I'm back in California. I'm still kinda of jet lagged. We have been traveling for exactly 24 hours yesterday. Me and my BF both agree I need another day of rest. So the comic might not be up until ether tomorrow or Saturday.
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Post by Echowind on Jul 20, 2017 0:53:19 GMT -5
I'm excited for the new page!
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Post by Echowind on Oct 14, 2017 22:23:56 GMT -5
I'm excited for the new page! I can't wait for the next page! I hope you will be able to get it up soon, I now how hard it is to post consistently... |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 26, 2017 16:52:11 GMT -5
I'm excited for the new page! I can't wait for the next page! I hope you will be able to get it up soon, I now how hard it is to post consistently... I SHALL DO IT TODAY AND REMAKE THE FIRST PAGE!!!! |
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Oct 27, 2017 11:41:31 GMT -5
🎃 This looks cute, but I can't see most of word bubbles on page one. Perhaps lean a little closer when taking the picture or write out what the word bubbles say under the comic page. 
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Post by Deleted on Oct 30, 2017 21:02:37 GMT -5
🎃 This looks cute, but I can't see most of word bubbles on page one. Perhaps lean a little closer when taking the picture or write out what the word bubbles say under the comic page.
I'm actually gonna remake that page soon |
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Oct 30, 2017 21:11:54 GMT -5
🎃 Cool! Okay.  Looking forward to it!
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Post by Echowind on Nov 5, 2017 1:18:54 GMT -5
Happy Birthday @rainbowclaw!!! I made some art for you  |
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Looking forward to it!