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Post by Brownie on May 18, 2017 14:41:25 GMT -5
I'm writing for tuesday challenges right and I have a whole cast of characters but I don't know which of them I want to POV from because I love them all <3 Help me choose?
- Ersho: Russet tom with white ears. Serious and uppety. Hunter. I'm the obvious choice to lead, wouldn't you agree?
- Mei: Golden she-cat with white paws and green eyes. Mediator. Hunter . Please stop arguing, everyone can get along just fine.
- Yuka: Dark brown tabby she-cat. Annoying. Likes to prod, especially Ersho. Hunter. Last time we let you lead, Ersho, we almost lost Loki!
- Nino: Large tan tom. Strong. Joker. Sky watcher. I agree with Mei here, why don't you two give it a rest?
- Muni: Grey-and-white patched she-cat. Naive. Gatherer. We have things to do guys, we can't be waiting on your pride.
(I don't want to do it from the rangers' perspective as they wouldn't be with the rest of the group) - Shari: Calico she-cat. Easygoing. Ranger. Let's leave them to it.
- Loki: Black tom. Reserved, but has a booming voice. Ranger. Sure.
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Post by ☾ Cʀᴇsᴄᴇɴᴛ ☽ on May 18, 2017 16:26:18 GMT -5
Ooh, can't wait to see your TC entry! I gotta scope out the completion, of course! XD
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Post by Brownie on May 18, 2017 17:18:38 GMT -5
mwahahaha same tho
it's being slow because I can't write third person I think I just won't it's too ew
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Post by ☾ Cʀᴇsᴄᴇɴᴛ ☽ on May 18, 2017 17:21:51 GMT -5
I'm trying to decide whether to write it in first or third person. It's such a struggle. First flows morensmoothly for me, but I tend to get a little too caught up in the details/voice and can go overboard with cliches and stuff. Third in the other hand takes more thought and can feel impersonal and clunky at times. I don't know what to do. The struggle is real.XD :/
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Post by Brownie on May 18, 2017 22:21:16 GMT -5
^^ SAME like same 100% it's really an issue
also lots of Ersho love <3 fun fact Ersho was the first character created here, Loki was second, Yuka third ;D
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