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Post by llavoie -- on Jun 12, 2017 15:49:59 GMT -5
How much time do I have today
cause I'm stalling
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Post by llavoie -- on Jun 12, 2017 15:52:03 GMT -5
Started out great but the ending has become impersonal and I do not like it.
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Post by ☾ Cʀᴇsᴄᴇɴᴛ ☽ on Jun 12, 2017 15:52:28 GMT -5
Um, until eight tonight. you have several hours! I believe in you!
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Post by llavoie -- on Jun 12, 2017 16:54:00 GMT -5
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Jun 12, 2017 18:30:17 GMT -5
Oh, I thought the results would be up already. Lol
Tues must have gotten busy.
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Post by ☾ Cʀᴇsᴄᴇɴᴛ ☽ on Jun 12, 2017 18:40:35 GMT -5
Well the contest ends at 8 right? but yeah, idk. Tues has a lot of stuff going on.
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Post by Dingoleap on Jun 12, 2017 18:46:23 GMT -5
Unfortunately I don't have time to finish my story, so I don't have anything to turn in this week ;-;
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Asexual
ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏ
do you walk in the valley of kings? do you walk in the shadow of men who sold their lives to dream?
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Post by ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏ on Jun 12, 2017 18:46:45 GMT -5
btw, [~Ghost Writer~] please don't quote your post with your entry inside the thread again. the wff moves slow enough that stories stay on the front two pages, and since i've already read it, i need to make sure i get all the other entries, which is easier to do when nothing is repeated. thanks! |
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ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏ
do you walk in the valley of kings? do you walk in the shadow of men who sold their lives to dream?
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Post by ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏ on Jun 12, 2017 18:47:03 GMT -5
Unfortunately I don't have time to finish my story, so I don't have anything to turn in this week ;-; it happens, dingo! you can still finish it for later. |
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Post by Dingoleap on Jun 12, 2017 18:48:29 GMT -5
Unfortunately I don't have time to finish my story, so I don't have anything to turn in this week ;-; it happens, dingo! you can still finish it for later. I know, I know XD My schedule clears up a bit for next week, so I should be able to turn something in for this next prompt! |
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Post by Dingoleap on Jun 12, 2017 18:53:03 GMT -5
Me too. The drafts for my final projects are due on Friday, so it will be a HUGE weight off my shoulders XD
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Post by Dingoleap on Jun 12, 2017 19:01:35 GMT -5
Thanks! I've got some amazing feedback on my English work, and I've been told by a friend who's editing it for me, who has a PHD in English lit, majoring in short stories, that it would make an excellent novel, so there's that XD
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Asexual
ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏ
do you walk in the valley of kings? do you walk in the shadow of men who sold their lives to dream?
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Post by ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏ on Jun 12, 2017 19:32:52 GMT -5
all right, and results are in! remember, folks, if you want a breakdown of your score, let me know before wednesday and i'll get right on that. anyways, without further ado, check out this absurdly tight field! 1st: when to fight and when to let go by llavoie -- - 9 points 2nd: black sea by mintedstar/fur, dwindling flame by FåwnFrøst, and torn by Brownie - 8.5 points 5th: the tidecaller by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ - 8 points 6th: forever shifting by кєѕтяєℓ - 7.5 points 7th: a butterfly's wings by [~Ghost Writer~] - 7 points wonderful work this week, everyone! i was really impressed by every entry, especially since everyone seemed very daunted at the beginning of the week. you rose to meet the challenge very well! lla, if you have other writing you'd like me to feature on the main page, let me know! new prompt will be up tomorrow, and i'll start doling out breakdowns to anyone who requests one tomorrow as well. good night, everyone, and great job! |
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Post by ☾ Cʀᴇsᴄᴇɴᴛ ☽ on Jun 12, 2017 19:34:22 GMT -5
Nice job everyone!!
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Jun 12, 2017 19:41:07 GMT -5
I've never gotten below 3rd.
Clearly I'm rusty.
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Post by Brownie on Jun 12, 2017 19:45:57 GMT -5
then again 8 points is rarely less than third
you still did awesome, especailly with the tension and characters
can I have a breakdown plz and thx?
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jun 12, 2017 19:47:46 GMT -5
Wooh! Nice job everyone.  Could I have a breakdown of my score, Tues? I'm interested to see if I lost 0.5 points on grammar/spelling or 1. |
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Post by ☾ Cʀᴇsᴄᴇɴᴛ ☽ on Jun 12, 2017 19:53:42 GMT -5
The scores were actually all pretty close together. Like the highest was nine and the lowest was only seven? That's not that much of a huge difference.
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Jun 12, 2017 19:53:59 GMT -5
Thanks, Brownie. I'm too hard on myself, honestly.
Congrats to everyone! I'll have to read everyone's who've I've missed.
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Post by Dingoleap on Jun 12, 2017 19:54:41 GMT -5
sweet, that's fantastic! always good to hear that from someone with more experience than you have. It actually felt amazing to be told that XD I'm certainly not ready to shelve this particular story yet, so it's going to become the base for the humanised Return to Dust - which, vybthe way, now has an official working title. |
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Post by Brownie on Jun 12, 2017 20:11:02 GMT -5
is this supposed to be "by the way" because I'm laughing so hard at that autocorrect if so |
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Post by Dingoleap on Jun 12, 2017 20:27:02 GMT -5
is this supposed to be "by the way" because I'm laughing so hard at that autocorrect if so Oh my god XD Yeah, it's stupposed to be 'by the way'. I'm typing really fast on my phone, so there's no telling what's going to come out. |
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Post by llavoie -- on Jun 12, 2017 20:36:10 GMT -5
This is the first time I've sat down and actually written something in years, so I've got nothing more to show, hah
Was not expecting first, so I am pleasantly surprised. Can I have a breakdown of my score?
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Aromantic
Nightsinger
The Escapist on wcf || she/her/hers
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Post by Nightsinger on Jun 12, 2017 20:48:05 GMT -5
well done you guys!!!
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Asexual
ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏ
do you walk in the valley of kings? do you walk in the shadow of men who sold their lives to dream?
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Post by ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏ on Jun 13, 2017 9:57:36 GMT -5
I've never gotten below 3rd. Clearly I'm rusty. nah, look at how tight the field was! besides, you technically were in third. there was just a three-way tie for second is all. don't beat yourself up over it. everyone, i'll be doling out breakdowns while you all take a look at the new prompt! |
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Post by Mosspool on Jun 13, 2017 14:49:27 GMT -5
Hopefully I'll be able to get something in for this prompt.
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