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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 13, 2016 23:38:08 GMT -5
Hum... Mosspool ? Would you be interested in this story do you think?
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 13, 2016 23:40:00 GMT -5
Oh, and could you fan me, Pyrocelot? That is, if I haven't asked already. XD
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Post by Jaguar on Aug 14, 2016 1:29:34 GMT -5
Phantomstar- haha that's good to know then! I think I'll check out your story. Mintedstar- Of course!! I'll make a little thing on the first post for fans and stuff!
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 16, 2016 17:11:10 GMT -5
I was going to have the fan art up tomorrow, but was to busy. Looks like today is going to be as well, so sorry if I didn't.
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Post by Mosspool on Aug 16, 2016 18:06:34 GMT -5
This is pretty good so far! I did notice a couple errors but nothing too distracting. Fan me! I'm looking forward to more!
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Post by Jaguar on Aug 16, 2016 22:44:52 GMT -5
If you could list the errors I'd be really grateful for that! And I will! Thank you for liking it so far.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 16, 2016 23:11:22 GMT -5
Yay, more fans!
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Post by Mosspool on Aug 16, 2016 23:15:54 GMT -5
Cedarstar said and flick her tail dismissively. Should be flicked.
she looked like she took that personal. Should be personally.
There were also a few sentences that sounded a bit awkward and were run-on sentences so if you want me to point them out for you I can. But other than that I'm really enjoying it! I love the amount of detail you put in. c:
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Post by Jaguar on Aug 17, 2016 0:52:21 GMT -5
Thank you! And that would be helpful too. If you ever see any errors or anything that doesn't make sense, feel free to say so!
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 17, 2016 17:37:29 GMT -5
Fan art!
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Post by Jaguar on Aug 18, 2016 0:03:00 GMT -5
OH my goodness!!! It looks great!! Thank you so much for this. <3 Spottedpaw appreciates it too. I'll have it on the front page next time im on my laptop
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 18, 2016 13:11:50 GMT -5
I'm glad you like it. I tried to put extra effort into the line art, but I forgot to shade. >.<
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Post by Mosspool on Aug 18, 2016 18:50:30 GMT -5
Thank you! And that would be helpful too. If you ever see any errors or anything that doesn't make sense, feel free to say so! I'm glad to help! I don't have my laptop with me at the moment so it would be harder to copy paste but once I do I'll pont them out. c:
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Post by Jaguar on Aug 18, 2016 22:08:30 GMT -5
Alrighty! Take your time.
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Post by Jaguar on Aug 24, 2016 14:54:49 GMT -5
phantomstar57 Mosspool @mintedstar/fur I got the other chapter up finally! Things will be getting more intense very soon!
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 24, 2016 15:30:32 GMT -5
Thank you. I'll go read it now.
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Post by Jaguar on Aug 24, 2016 15:34:19 GMT -5
You're welcome! And I hope you like it!
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 24, 2016 15:35:45 GMT -5
I think I will.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 24, 2016 19:04:38 GMT -5
Cool! May have time to read tomight or tomorrow nite!
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Post by Jaguar on Aug 24, 2016 19:49:46 GMT -5
Awesome! Read whenever you feel like it!
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 26, 2016 19:54:39 GMT -5
I finished reading it and I think it was awesome.
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Post by Jaguar on Aug 26, 2016 21:27:24 GMT -5
I'm super glad you think so!! Thank you for reading!!
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 29, 2016 17:53:34 GMT -5
No problem at all. Now, which character should I draw next?
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Post by Jaguar on Aug 29, 2016 22:17:19 GMT -5
Hhaha!! That's very nice! Draw whoever you want! Thank you!
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 30, 2016 16:54:29 GMT -5
No problem. I love to do it. Batpaw is who I'll draw next I think...
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Post by Jaguar on Aug 30, 2016 20:42:53 GMT -5
Awesome! I'm sure Batpaw would be very flattered to be drawn!
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Sept 2, 2016 17:04:26 GMT -5
I should have it up soon.
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Post by Jaguar on Sept 3, 2016 7:44:25 GMT -5
Awesome!! Take your time!
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Sept 7, 2016 14:31:20 GMT -5
I got started, but something happened to throw my plans off. I'll try to finish what I started soon.
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Post by Jaguar on Sept 8, 2016 23:27:10 GMT -5
That's perfectly fine! No pressure. Take your time!
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