Should I use this or not?

I was just curious if you think I should use the story I had in mind. There are four clans, Lakeclan, Nightclan, Meadowclan, and Mountainclan. The main character is Orangeleaf(The color orange, not the fruit). Orangeleaf is a sleek orange tabby tom with a white underbelly, a white muzzle, and yellow eyes. He is a Lakeclan cat. Orangeleaf is usually very nice, though he can be stubborn. While he is smart, he can sometimes be a bit naive and oblivious. He gets annoyed easily, but tries to hide when he does. He is usually calm. Orangeleaf is a warrior, and thinks the life of a medicine cat would be boring. Here are the allegiances of Lakeclan since I don't have the rest all figured out yet:

Leader:Gingerstar- Dark Ginger tabby tom with bold amber eyes
Deputy:Darkwillow- Darl blue-gray she-cat with pale green eyes
Medicine cat:Silverberry- Silvery-gray she-cat with darker flecks and blue eyes
Apreentice, Hollypaw

Warriors:
Forestheart- White she-cat with pale gray patches and forest-green eyes
Boltstorm- Pale ginger tom with darker paws and light-blue eyes
Dapplestrike- Tortoiseshell and white she-cat with amber eyes
Apprentice, Webpaw
Jaysoar- Dark gray tabby tom with white flecks and green eyes
Faithheart- Dark brown tabby she-cat with brilliant green eyes
Orangeleaf- Sleek orange and white tabby tom with yellow eyes
Brightgaze- Silver tabby she-cat with bright amber eyes
Yarrowstem- Red-brown tabby tom with a white muzzle and blue eyes
Apprentice, Wolfpaw
Petalpool- Light brown she-cat with darker brown patches, a white tail tip, and light blue eyes

Apprentices:
Hollypaw- Dark brown tom with white paws and amber eyes
Webpaw- Black tom with white flecks and dark green eyes
Wolfpaw- Pale gray and white she-cat with yellow eyes

Queens:
Smokecloud- Pale gray she-cat with blue eyes; expecting Boltstorm's kits

Elders:
Spottedfern- Tortoiseshell she-cat with yellow eyes
Torrentheart- Light gray tabby tom with amber eyes