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Post by perfectlypink♥ on Apr 1, 2017 10:55:30 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Apr 1, 2017 11:03:04 GMT -5
What even is this post
I am quite confused but can I help you guys with this
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Post by Deleted on Apr 1, 2017 11:08:04 GMT -5
I'm gonna go check that out, thanks!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 1, 2017 11:17:35 GMT -5
Yesss it's up!!!
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Post by Moonblazer on Apr 1, 2017 12:39:04 GMT -5
YESSSSS YOU GUYS ARE AMAZING
I'll draw the cover as soon as i can!!! im in Annapolis for the day so i cant make it rn ^^
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Post by Moonblazer on Apr 1, 2017 12:48:12 GMT -5
Ok. So.
The summary is:
"The clans are recovering from the stupid rouges, I mean geez. What a hastle. Sadly, bad luck's not done with em' yet. There is another prophecy, and only 4 (or 5, depending on what Skyclan does, idgaf ) cats, one from each clan, can fulfill this destiny."
So, there are a few things we can do
-Something is blocking the connection to Starclan, and to get it back the group must destroy the cause of the block.
-A leader dissapears and the deputy is told they cannot recieve 9 lives because the leader is still alive and must be found.
any other ideas?
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Post by perfectlypink♥ on Apr 1, 2017 13:18:50 GMT -5
I feel like we should incorporate some romance (besides Humphry and Maybell)
It doesn't necessarily have to be a forbidden relationship, but I want it to be interesting, just not your average romance plot
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Post by perfectlypink♥ on Apr 1, 2017 13:21:08 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Apr 1, 2017 13:22:05 GMT -5
I can post some trashy art if you'd like, but maybe farther into the story.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 1, 2017 13:23:22 GMT -5
I will ship Humphry x Maybell!!!
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Post by perfectlypink♥ on Apr 1, 2017 13:27:00 GMT -5
The fan-art would be great! I agree, Humphry x Maybell is the cutest thing I've seen for a while. Idk when we'll start to write the prologue, we still need to establish the plot, but hopefully we can get started writing soon
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Post by Deleted on Apr 1, 2017 13:28:19 GMT -5
Woohoo!! I'm up to help wherever you need it!
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Post by Moonblazer on Apr 1, 2017 13:56:52 GMT -5
Yes yes.
Maybell and Humphry for sure, and maybe Maybell is an abused rouge who attacks them but the group invites her to be safe with them and yesss.
Shimmerpelt and Heathertail becoming best friends and Heathertail fretting because she misses her kits and then everyone misses their kits lol.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 1, 2017 14:28:05 GMT -5
Yesyesyesyes
Such good ideas
Maybell x Humphrey forever!!!!
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Post by perfectlypink♥ on Apr 1, 2017 14:30:44 GMT -5
Yes yes. Maybell and Humphry for sure, and maybe Maybell is an abused rouge who attacks them but the group invites her to be safe with them and yesss. Shimmerpelt and Heathertail becoming best friends and Heathertail fretting because she misses her kits and then everyone misses their kits lol. ooh, the shimmer and heather friendship would be super cute. i also like the maybell idea. she could be abused, hungry, and weak like you said, and she's shy at first but warms up to humphry and they become mates.
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Post by Moonblazer on Apr 1, 2017 14:32:30 GMT -5
Humphry- Large heavy-weighted grey tom with a white muzzle and friendly green eyes, soft fur and rounded ears.
Maybell- Light brown, ginger, black and white splotched she-cat with a torn ear and sharp blue eyes.
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Post by perfectlypink♥ on Apr 1, 2017 14:37:21 GMT -5
ooh, me like!
i think we need to come up with names and descriptions for the main leader of the rogues and a few sidekicks. here's what i have for the leader:
Hawk: A large muscular brown tabby tom with dark black stripes and emerald green eyes
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Post by Deleted on Apr 1, 2017 14:37:28 GMT -5
Nice!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 1, 2017 14:40:08 GMT -5
Oh, I can make one for the rogue leader's 'deputy'
Stone: A well-built, large she-cat with thin dark brown fur and a stony grey tail ( hence her name ). Her eyes are an intimidating shade of icy blue, and her many scars show a rough lifestyle.
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Post by Moonblazer on Apr 1, 2017 16:02:21 GMT -5
niiiiceeee!
So the plot can be that a leader or two or some cats get taken by twolegs and the clans start blaming eachother and the 4/5 cats must go to a far twolegplace to get them back.
Maybe Bramblestar is taken, which is why Berrynose could be adament to search for him, or a medicine cat could be taken.
Either that or the 4 cats we have are the ones taken by twolegs and must find their way home from the city
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Post by Deleted on Apr 1, 2017 16:17:35 GMT -5
It would be really funny if Jayfeather was taken, in all honesty.
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Post by perfectlypink♥ on Apr 1, 2017 16:40:58 GMT -5
Ooh, Jayfeather getting taken would be funny. Berrynose wouldn't be too desperate to search for him though.
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Post by Moonblazer on Apr 1, 2017 16:45:42 GMT -5
Hmmmmm
Lol Jayfeather could be a choice. Maybe Kestrel, leaving Windclan without a meddy cat? Jay already had a prophecy.
I think the Shadowclan cat should change to a minor charrie, like Yarrowleaf or Strikestone
Strikestone ftw
So Berrynose Heathertail Shimmerpelt Strikestone
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Post by Moonblazer on Apr 1, 2017 16:46:46 GMT -5
I just love how it's gonna be a cracky title, but will have pretty dang good content XD
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Post by perfectlypink♥ on Apr 1, 2017 17:18:43 GMT -5
yeah, but i think the title will definitely get clicks. jayfeather is already involved in his own crap, so i guess not him. i'm fine with a minor character like strikestone. should we have an extra character join along with one of the clans, sort of like how squirrelflight came with bramblestar on the journey?
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Post by Moonblazer on Apr 1, 2017 17:36:28 GMT -5
YES MAYBE THE EXTRA CAN BE ONE OF HEATHER'S KITS OR FINALLY AN APPRENTICE FOR BERRYNOSE HAHA
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Post by Moonblazer on Apr 1, 2017 17:36:54 GMT -5
omg no or Breezepelt can be the extra one
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Post by perfectlypink♥ on Apr 1, 2017 17:38:32 GMT -5
#breezepeltredemptionarc
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Post by Moonblazer on Apr 1, 2017 17:46:10 GMT -5
let's
do
it
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